Quietly into the Night ~ CC ~COMPLETED 7/31/02

[isndbreeze]

Finito!<br><br><!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Bravo! Excelentissimo! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Loved the whole story! Just to sum up a few of the things I liked: the saga of Zeke and Nellie (aw, da fluff be good stuff!), and including the ending, of course, where they send the promised post card. Another point I liked: Taking back their lives... the whole decision to stand up and stop running and take a stand. Oh, and Gay Kyle and Michael <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :pinkie --><img src=http://www.contrabandent.com/cwm/s/otn/blobs/pinkie.gif ALT=":pinkie"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> too much! ROTFLMBO over that one... like to died when Kyle said, "Toodles!" to the guy. And when he said to Michael, "Kiss me and I'll kill you." Hehe! When Isabel flushed the rings down the toilet, I thought, how symbolically appropriate, she's flushing Jesse down the toilet... but then he turned out to be good after all! (Well, you can borrow Kryys from my fic if you want! Send him back through the portal to the time it happened, and he could take care of him! But then again... maybe Jesse out of the picture allows for other connections... hmmm? Okay, Liz and Max reconfirming their vows and Maria and Michael getting married and Liz expecting! Great stuff! And everybody working together! The commando parents I'm still not over! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :eek --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... ns/eek.gif ALT=":eek"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> I'm off to read more of your sequel now! Bye... ::rushes off leaving little puffs of smoke from tennies!:: <br>Amy, Diane, Nancy, Philip, Geof, and Jim: Commando Parents!? <br><!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :jawdrop --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... m/eek2.gif ALT=":jawdrop"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Hehe! Great stuff! <p><center><img src=http://users.aol.com/isndbreeze/skysymb ... r><b><font color=gold>Gerry<Br>- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -<Br>Hopeless Candy-Coated, Stargazing, <u>Dreamer</u>!<Br>- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -</font></b></center></p><i>Edited by: <A HREF=http://pub129.ezboard.com/uisndbreeze.s ... dbreeze</A>  <IMG HEIGHT=10 WIDTH=10 SRC="http://users.aol.com/isndbreeze/aim116b.jpg" BORDER=0> at: 9/9/02 9:45:11 pm<br></i>

[majiklmoon]

gee....all those nice things you said...they sound so familiar...i wonder where i could have read them before <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>glad you liked it <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><I><center>Margo is a Super ORB!</i></center><b><center><center><font color=#FFFFCC>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<font color =#CCCCCC><center><i>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</i></center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<br><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a> </p><i></i>

[Anonymous]

Hey!<br>The story was great! It was weaved quiet well. Some turn of events were very surpising! and you captured Kyle very well! Amazing story!<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> But Jesse dying was so sad! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> but again it was amazing! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>Isabel <p></p><i></i>

[bistyboo1974]

Finally got started reading <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>Quietly</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> and let me say to myself, "What took you so long, Bisty??!" This is great!! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Cannot wait to come back and read more! <p><center><a href="http://pub199.ezboard.com/bfanficformuggles"><img src="http://www.bluerealimage.com/chat/harry ... </p><i></i>

[splatty]

barbie girl, don't forget <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>time passages</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END-->. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br> <p><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em> I want to be what I was when I wanted to be what I am now.</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>

[Anonymous]

<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :love --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>I love this story it is so cool!!!!!!!!!<br>You're a great writer. Im really glad that you wrote this story because i always wanted to know what happened to everybody! This is a great story.<br>Thanks. <p></p><i></i>

[Anonymous]

I was feeling rather glum tonight, and I reread your wonderful story. Words cannot describe how much I love your work! <p></p><i></i>

[MagickFantasy86]

I just finished reading this story. It was wonderful. I laughed so much at the Gay Kyle part. "Commando Parents" that was great. And Valenti getting powers. I had always wondered why they never figured he would get powers since he was healed just like Kyle and Liz. And Yay! I never really liked Jesse, but he came out alright in the end, but I must say that I do like the idea of Kyle and Isabelle much more than Jesse and Isabelle. So anyway I completely agree with everyone else. Sequel PLEASE!!!!! I love all your stories, as usual you are an incredible writer. Please keep writing<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>Alex <p></p><i></i>

[Angelzbabe]

Wow Tracie! Wow!!!

I just read through all of this from where I was on the ER and all I can really say is:

WOW!!!!

You did an amazing job on this! You made me laugh at their interaction with each other and with their parents, and you made me cry when Jesse died to save Isabel. He's not a character I ever liked in the series, but you made me sad to see him die.
The way you brought them all together, and the clever twist of having the Antarian rebels inside Kivar's organisation, shows your amazing talent for writing, and I am wholheartedly joining in the request for a sequel.

Keep up the amazing work Tracie.

[Island Breeze]

Yeah, gay Kyle was too funny! ROTFLMAO! I remember commenting on that, too:

ROTFLMBO over that one... like to died when Kyle said, "Toodles!" to the guy. And when he said to Michael, "Kiss me and I'll kill you."

Your stories have a great combination of humor, warmth, and intrigue, with lots of twists to keep them interesting!


Gerry

[NorafanofMaxandLiz]

Hi Majiklmoon!

I haven't found this story of yours before. I see it was written some time ago but I just read it all the way through. Great story! But then again why would I expect anything less from you.

This would have been a great story arc for Roswell had it been allowed another season. This would have made sense of Jesse and bringing up Kivar again towards the end of it. I like the way you resolved that. I felt bad for Kyle because he obviously had gone from being Isabel's friend to having fallen in love with her. I liked at the end at Max and Liz's wedding that Michael and Maria joined in making it a double wedding that day that Isabel said maybe. I'm sure that thrilled Kyle. I admit I thought at the end of the series that it would've made more sense for Isabel to hook up with Kyle. He knew about her other worldly status and like Alex accepted it. Jesse on the other hand not so much. He couldn't accept her lying to protect their secret not even realizing the magnitude of it Jesse was so black and white about the issue. That always sat wrong with me. Then I hated Alex being killed. I think ultimately I would've like to see Isabel with Alex, but if not him then Kyle. Deep down I think the person that you love should accept you for you and all that you are. I think Alex and Kyle both were very capable of that. Having said all that I do love how you wove Jesse into this plot and storyline and brought Kivar into it. I really enjoyed being on the edge of my seat reading every word.


You had me laughing like crazy with Kyle in that pink golf shirt and scarf completely channeling his feminine side. Michael's reponse about killing him if he kisses him was so great I laughed out loud. I could see Kyle doing something so outrageous just to freak out someone. That was hillarious.

Thanks for sharing another one of your fan fic gems with us.

Your Fan,


NorafanofMaxandLiz

[majiklmoon]

Roninbehr - i'll finish fixing the coding on this today (I hope)