Fan Fic and More

Before I post the Epilogue...I just wanted to say a few thank yous. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><b> Tracie</b><!--EZCODE BOLD END-->, A <!--EZCODE BOLD START--><b> BIG</b><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> thank you for encouraging me to write this...and post it. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :grin --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... iggrin.gif ALT=":grin"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> And helping me start it...and running this board...and leaving great feedback...and hosting the ORBfest...and...Well, you get the idea. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><b> Col</b><!--EZCODE BOLD END-->, Thanks for all your wonderful feedback! Knowing you don't get to a computer during the day anymore and you still took time to read my story gave me the warm fuzzies. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :grin --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... iggrin.gif ALT=":grin"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Have I told you lately how cool you are?<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><b> ironysucs</b><!--EZCODE BOLD END-->, First, I love your screen name! Second, your fic is great...every time I pop in I anxiously look to see if there's a new part.<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><b> Melisa</b><!--EZCODE BOLD END-->, Thanks you for making me think I was doing a good job. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> You...and your tapping foot. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><b> bookwork</b><!--EZCODE BOLD END-->, What I told Melisa...you were always there with the great feedback...makin' me feel all cool and stuff. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><b> Tea</b><!--EZCODE BOLD END-->, you know...I put those NC-17 parts in just for you. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :grin --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... iggrin.gif ALT=":grin"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Ok...maybe for me, too. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Shhhh...don't tell anyone. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>Well, this is it...I'm done with the telling. My first fic...*sigh* This story just popped in my head one day and I couldn't stop writing. I think I typed nonstop for a week. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Just call me OCD girl. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> I have to say, I'm gonna miss it. I wish it didn't have to end...I actually added a couple of chapters in the middle because I didn't want to stop writing <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> ...but it has to. Thanks again, you guys!! <p></center><center><FONT COLOR="B22222"><i>So come and sit on my box, enjoy the view of this water where my lifeboat is sinking. If you reach out for more, you'll find nothing but sorrow...because knowledge is hollow, and pride is hard to swallow.</i><br><font color="B8860B"><b>Col Threadkiller is the <i>coolest!</i></b><img src=http://www.roswell-orbs.com/smilies/coo ... </p><i></i>

Epilogue~<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><b> May 14, 2014</b><!--EZCODE BOLD END--><br><br>2am and Max Evans finds himself standing in a familiar place. He stands just inside the bedroom and the first thing he sees is a lump snuggled down under the covers of the bed in the middle of the room. A small smile crosses over his face before he turns to the dresser. Looking at the odd assortment of things, his eyebrows raise as he sees a bra flung carelessly across the top. He walks further and runs his hand over the familiar fabric of Liz’s reading chair before he turns toward the bed. The covers are pulled up over her head, but he knows she’s under there somewhere. Approaching the side of the bed, he gently grabs the covers and pulls them down to just below her chin. Her hair is longer…he can see it fanned out across her pillow. He raises his hand to her lips…hovering his fingers just above them and she sighs. <br><br>Removing his hand, he looks next to her…at his own sleeping body. He’s startled when he hears himself snore. Looking at Liz, he expects it to wake her up…but she continues to sleep. She never told him he snored. Grimacing, he makes a mental note to do something about that. <br><br>As he continues to watch her, she turns on her side and scoots her backside into him. He sees himself reach over to her under the covers and she smiles as she moves against him.<br><br>His eyes fly open, waking up with a start, and he looks around the room suddenly…trying to get oriented. His thoughts are broken by the feel of Liz wiggling her hips back into his arousal. His hand pressing against her lower abdomen…his fingers sneaking in through the front opening of his boxers she’s wearing. He pulls his hand back and looks around again. It happened…he was pulled from his sleep to Liz. He didn’t have far to go. <br><br>Still feeling disoriented, he’s suddenly hit with the realization that Liz is rubbing up against him. And he’s surprised…happily surprised. They haven’t made love in over three months…much less teased each other like they used to. Bringing his hand back to her abdomen, he thrusts forward…feeling her press back against him in response. When she reaches down and brings his hand inside her boxers, he realizes that she’s awake.<br><br>“Liz…you’re killing me.” he whispers into her hair.<br><br>She doesn’t stop her movement as she says, “Maybe that’s the idea.”<br><br>He freezes. Since the baby arrived…and a couple of months before…, they’ve always been too tired…or the baby would wake up and need fed or changed…or Liz just didn’t want to. “Really?” he asks hopefully.<br><br>She turns to face him, “Yah…really.” And she pushes him back, stripping her clothes off as she straddles him. <br><br>He stops her, “What about Philip?” he asks her about the baby.<br><br>She smiles and says, “I don’t think he cares, Max.” as she places kisses on his chest.<br><br>“No…I mean…what if he wakes up?”<br><br>“Then I guess we’ll have to be quick.” She tells him with a suggestive smile.<br><br>“It happened. I saw you…us…sleeping.” Max tells her as she pulls his boxers off and slides back up his body.<br><br>She kisses him, thrusting her tongue into his mouth before pulling back and whispering into his ear. “While I’d really love to talk to you, Max…right now I want you inside of me.”<br><br>“Ok.” He breathes out and eagerly makes love to his wife under the covers of their giant, four poster bed.<br><br><br>THE END <p></center><center><FONT COLOR="B22222"><i>So come and sit on my box, enjoy the view of this water where my lifeboat is sinking. If you reach out for more, you'll find nothing but sorrow...because knowledge is hollow, and pride is hard to swallow.</i><br><font color="B8860B"><b>Col Threadkiller is the <i>coolest!</i></b><img src=http://www.roswell-orbs.com/smilies/coo ... </p><i></i>

Oh Angel...I love it...You did a fantastic job <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><I><center>Margo is a Super ORB!</i></center><b><center><center><font color=#CC66FF>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<font color =#9966FF><center><i>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</i></center></color><center><font color=#FF00FF>"Hey Spike, maybe you should put an ice pack on that muscle cramp!</center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... </p><i></i>

Wonderful job. But, sniff,sniff, does it reallllly have to be over? I mean you did leave it with an ending just screaming -sequel. (or is that just me being hopeful?) Thanks for sharing. <p></p><i></i>

This story had everything I could ever hope for! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><center>*************<center>Roswell on Sci-Fi in 2003.<center>Got it? Get it? Good!<center></p><i></i>

<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> that was beautiful <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p></p><i></i>

<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> I can't believe it's OVER <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>That was so wonderful... not only can I finally admit I liked Jaret and his unusual ways... but Liz gets justice... her way.<br><br>What an awesome epilogue... bringing the story full circle... ya know, with all the ANGST, I'd almost forgotten that this story started with the dreams <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> - and a great last line too... "Ok." Fade out. Cut. Print. <br>I see good fics as a movie in my head... and this one was just... cool <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>I'm gonna miss it. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :( --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /frown.gif ALT=":("><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>{{{HUGS}}} - Col. <p></p><i></i>

<!--EZCODE QUOTE START--><blockquote><b><i>Quote:</i></b><hr> Well, this is it...I'm done with the telling. My first fic...*sigh* This story just popped in my head one day and I couldn't stop writing. I think I typed nonstop for a week. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Just call me OCD girl. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> I have to say, I'm gonna miss it. I wish it didn't have to end...I actually added a couple of chapters in the middle because I didn't want to stop writing <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> ...but it has to. Thanks again, you guys!!<hr></blockquote><!--EZCODE QUOTE END--><br><br>well, and this is just a suggestion mind you, you could always write something else.<br><br>Buffy, Angel, Roswell, Star Wars.....the list is endless <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><I><center>Margo is a Super ORB!</i></center><b><center><center><font color=#CC66FF>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<font color =#9966FF><center><i>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</i></center></color><center><font color=#FF00FF>"Hey Spike, maybe you should put an ice pack on that muscle cramp!</center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... </p><i></i>

Yes...so many other things to write!! <p><center>*************<center>Roswell on Sci-Fi in 2003.<center>Got it? Get it? Good!<center></p><i></i>

i just started reading this and i wanted to say how awesome it is!!!! i can't tear myself away!!!! but geez, rls keeps calling.<br><br>loving it angel . . you are amazing!! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><center><i>I want to be what I was when I wanted to be what I am now.</i></center></p><i></i>

wow! wow! wow!<br><br>this is the best fic ever! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>i can't wait to read your next one.<br><br>thanks angel. this was awesome. i laughed. i cried. my dreamer heart thanks you. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br> <p></p><i></i>

Oh, wow. I'm sitting here after finishing this story and I am just...speechless! This was such an amazing story, and so freakingly well told! I actually felt like I was watching it, not just reading it. In fact, yesterday as I was editing some Ros tapes and reading your story, I got confused for a second. "Why is Liz playing putt-putt with him?" I wondered. "She's still so mad at him." Wow. Again. I was just so lost in the story, I forgot it wasn't in the "real" Ros-world.<br><br>A couple of little things I liked-- all the rapport between Michael and Maria. You made Maria back into the character that I loved so much in season 1! <br>The idea of Max thinking of Liz taking a running leap onto her bed--priceless! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br>The fact that M&Ms VCR blinks 12:00. Such a minor detail, and yet so necessary in making this story out of this world! Angel, you are a superb writer, and you really should do more! <p><center> What's so great about normal? </center><center><img src=http://pmayhem.com/batgirl/thumbs/th_re ... f></center> <a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new"><img src="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/Alex.jpg" border=0></a><br><a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new">Find your Roswell match </a> at <a href="http://blancadelic.com" target="new">Blancadelic.com</a></p><i></i>

OMG !!!!!! You know how to write !!! <br><br>Like somebody has said before , I was like watching a movie , so well writen with so many details .<br>I feel the characters in his S1 skin ....María was amazing !! <br>I´ve printed the story and read it at night , this past two days I went to sleep at 3:30 ( and because I have to ) I couldn´t unglue myself of the pages.<br><br>I´ve cried and laugh .......AMAZING !!!! Do you mind if I send it to my friends ??<br><br>God !! I am still speachless <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> :<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> :<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> :<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br> <p></p><i></i>

Wow, <!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>AtO</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END-->!! It's only taken me a year to start reading Roswell fic, but what a great discovery!! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> This is awesome.<br><br>I've read parts one through four ... can't wait to find time to read more! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><a href="http://pub199.ezboard.com/bfanficformuggles"><img src="http://www.bluerealimage.com/chat/harry ... </p><i></i>

I read some more this evening <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Great stuff, <!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>AtO</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> ... <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>you</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> should have written for the show! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><center><a href="http://pub199.ezboard.com/bfanficformuggles"><img src="http://www.bluerealimage.com/chat/harry ... </p><i></i>

OMG! That was so amazing! I can't believe I missed this!! Great job! <p></p><i></i>

nice banner Angel <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p><center><i>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</i></center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center> </p><i></i>

love the banner<br> <p><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em> I used to have the longing to hear what was in your heart.<br>But now it seems I'm over the fear of this falling apart.</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>

i just finished reading the first part. this is great. max only sees her on that day. oh man. and only for 20 mins. i bet she knows he's there. i would tell you to tell us more, but as its already finshed i guess i need to read to find out

Hi!!!

I just finished reading this fic and it ROCKS!!!!!!!
It is really good!!!!!!!

Just a question, who delivered the baby??? Max, Michael, or Isabel???
I was just thinking if the powers are controled by emotions wouldn't that also includ Max making him a bad choice to deliver their Baby??? Michael wouldn't be good because he can't really control his powres... so that would leave Isabel...
Oh well...
Great Job on the story!!!!!!!

Aligewe