Fan Fic and More

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 7:58 am**

Uh, ditto everyone else. Not much else to add. I lmao during this part. <img src=http://216.40.201.38/otn/ez/pi_thumbsup.gif ALT=":thumbsup">

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 10:09 am**

<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> Need I say more???? <center> <a href=http://www.fortunecity.com="_blank"> <img src="http://www.fortunecity.com/victorian/st ... mara01.gif" border="0"></a> </center>

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 11:02 am**

<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> a little comic relief. that was great! <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <center>I want to be what I was when I wanted to be what I am now.</center>

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 2:11 pm**

<img src=http://216.40.201.38/contrib/corky/smilies10.gif ALT=":grin"> I nearly ended up with Cherry coke all over my screen when Kyle came out to Michael in pink.......... toodles <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> Great as always Tracie <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> <center>******************************</center><center><img src=http://www.fortunecity.com/victorian/st ... r>THE UK 'ORBIT' HAS LANDED!!!<img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/otn/ ... r>ZARA ISABEL MARCH 8TH 2002</center><center>ZAN IS DA MAN<center>Hoo= PIC!!Blue= Cyber Mum</center><center>If evolution works, why do mums only have two hands???</center>

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 6:31 pm**

That was so excellent!! Kyle in pink...I was lmao. <center>*************<center>Roswell on Sci-Fi in 2003.<center>Got it?<CENTER>Get it?<CENTER>Good!<center><center>I think my muse is broke.<center><a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new"><img src="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/Max.jpg" border=0></a> <a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new">Find your Roswell match </a> at <a href="http://blancadelic.com" target="new">Blancadelic.com</a>

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 9:29 pm**

Part 41

Liz and Max walked down the crowded streets of Roswell. A sign on the UFO center caught Max’s eye.

“I guess Brody must be hosting another UFO convention,” he sai to Liz.

“Well, that will make it easier for us to blend in. Strangers won’t be as noticeable.”

“Yeah, but it will make it harder to keep track of whoever is tailing us too,” said Max. “Are you up for this? We have to make it look good.”

“I’m up for whatever it takes to finally end this,” said Liz.

Max opened the door to the CrashDown and held it open for Liz to enter. The two took seats at the counter. Liz looked into the kitchen and sees her father working the grill. She waited until she caught his eye, and gave him a slight smile and a wink. Geoff smiled back cautiously, hoping that the red head smiling was Liz, but unsure until the order came in for pancakes in the shape of Mickey Mouse. He flashed her a big smile and set out to make Liz her favorite childhood breakfast.

Liz checked out the restaurant and noticed her “friend” Agent Feltcher sitting in a booth with one of the other guys from last night. She pointed him out to Max.

“Well, where’s the other one then?” he whispered. “The one who was here last night?”

“I saw him pulling up by the lake right before we left,” Liz admitted.

“Why the hell didn’t you tell me that then?” Max whispeed in a fierce voice.

“Because I knew there was nothing you could do about it, and if you did know, you’d freak out, like you’re doing now. Besides, I let Kyle know. He and Michael can handle it, you know they can.”

“Damn it Liz, you can’t micromanage our lives like that. Withholding information doesn’t help. I thought you would have learned that last time,” he snapped.

Liz looks down at her plate, the tears pooling in her eyes. “I can’t believe you would even bring that up, you jerk,” she hissed. “Fine, then, if I’ve upset you that much, I’ll just leave.”

Liz slid off her stool and rushed from the restaurant out onto the crowded sidewalk. A concerned Geoff watched from the kitchen and shot Max a concerned look. Max just shook his head and continued to eat. Their plan had been to stage a fight and have Liz leave the restaurant and go around back and climb up the fire escape to her room. Unfortunately, the fight was more real than Max would have liked, but he knew Liz well enough to know she wouldn’t deviate from the plan.

As he finished his meal, a waitress walked over to the table where the two agents were sitting. She cleared their plates and began to walk back to the kitchen. Max stood up just as she walked past and bumped into her, causing the dishes she was holding to fall first against her, and then to the ground. Max immediately began to apologize and bent down to help the waitress pick up the mess. Geoff came out from the kitchen with a mop, and saw Max slip two forks and two straws into his jacket pocket.

“Kelly, why don’t you go change, I’ll get this,” Geoff said to the waitress.

“I’m really sorry Miss, that was entirely my fault,” said Max. “I wasn’t watching where I was going.”

“It’s no problem sir,” said the waitress. “I’ll just go grab another uniform out back Mr. Parker, I won’t be a minute, thanks.” The girl hurried off. After he made sure nobody was listening, Geoff whispered to Max, “Where is she?”

“Upstairs, she needs to analyze these,” he said pointing to the items sticking out of his jacket pocket.”

Geoff nodded and finished picking up the last few items on the floor. “Go,” he said. “I’ll make sure those to don’t leave for a bit.”

Max smiled his thanks and walked out the door of the restaurant. He took a quick walk around the block to make sure he isn’t being followed. After he was certain nobody was watching him, or the fire escape, he made short work of climbing up, and entering Liz’s room through the open window.

“Liz,” he said softly to his wife who was lying on her bed. “I’m sorry. What I said was wrong, and I said it strictly to hurt you. Will you forgive me, please?”

“Yes Max, you know I’ll forgive you eventually, but excuse me if right now, I can’t even stand to look at you,” Liz snapped. “I wasn’t trying to keep information from you Max. I mean God, if it was something life threatening, you know I’d let you know. But for crying out loud, it was one agent, or whatever he is, driving up to the lake. I think the others could handle it!”

“You’re right Liz. There isn’t anything else I can say except for you are right. I’m just going crazy right now. There are so many things that could go wrong, and it’s really starting to get to me.”

“Fine, whatever, I can’t deal with you and your insecurities right now. Did you get the stuff?” she asked.

“Yeah, here,” Max said, removing a plastic bag from his pocket. Liz reached into the bag and removed the two forks and the two straws.

“The bag was a good idea Max. We have a better chance of getting a good sample now,” said Liz. She grabbed a swab off of her desk and rubbed it against one of the forks and then onto a microscope slide. She did the same with the other fork, and the two straws. She inserted one of the slides under the microscope and then peered into the eyepiece. She didn’t say anything, but quickly removed the slide and inserted another. ]

She looked up from the microscope, and grabbed another slide and a small needle. After swabbing her finger in alcohol, and sterilizing the needle, she quickly pricked her finger with it and allowed a small drop of blood to fall onto the slide. She motioned to Max and swabbed his finger, and the needle and pricked his finger to get a blood sample.

She looked at the two samples under the microscope. Growing more excited, she took Max’s sample, and another sample from a straw and placed them on one slide, side by side. She looked into the microscope one more time and moved over so Max could look as well. He adjusted the viewfinder and peered into it. The sample on the left he easily identified as his own blood, but the sample on the right is something he’d never seen before. It wasn’t human, and it wasn’t alien.

“Liz, what is it, what are they?” he asked.

“I’m not sure, but they’re not human,” was all she said.

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 9:39 pm**

what? what are they? i need to know NOW! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> <center>I want to be what I was when I wanted to be what I am now.</center>

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 9:42 pm**

Ooh, interesting! Lots of twists and turns! The words between Liz and Max surprised me though; Fighting like that is not something you hear from them often lol. But it's realistic for a couple to fight so I'm glad you added that in there. Can't wait for chapter 42! -Lauren <center><img src="http://www.oddworldz.com/roswell/pic/su ...

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 9:43 pm**

<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> I don't know what they are yet either...hmmm chapter 42? I wonder what that will be about <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a>

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 9:58 pm**

Your writing it how can you not know. <center>*Denise* <img src=http://ffspirits.finalfantasy.gamigo.de ... f> <img src=http://ubb.fanasylum.com/smiles/partygirl.gif><img src=http://ubb.fanasylum.com/smiles/angel2.gif> <img src=http://www.nirvana2.com/smilies/bounce.gif><img src=http://ubb.fanasylum.com/smiles/hearts.gif><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... f> <img src=http://ubb.fanasylum.com/smiles/rainbow.gif><img src=http://www.nirvana2.com/smilies/cool.gif> <img src=http://www.wearenow.com/smilies/headbanger.gif<img src=http://ffspirits.finalfantasy.gamigo.de ... 7.gif><img src=http://www.clicksmilies.com/sammlung/mu ... 3.gif><img src=http://www.cheshire2000.com/boxhauler/i ... A.gif><img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... 2.gif><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ...

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 10:06 pm**

<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> , it's very easy Denise...i honestly don't have a clue. I make it up as I go along <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a>

Posted: **Thu Jun 27, 2002 10:48 pm**

Okay.... this is gooood!!! So they aren't human and they aren't alien that only leaves one thing that they can be .... A different kind of alien! I mean Michael, Max and Isabel are Hybreds and Liz is changed into a type of Alien that is neither. But any way I loved the fight and Liz is right that Max didn't need to get so upset about the fact that she didn't tell him because of the fact that she did inform Kyle about it and what is Michael ? chopped liver? I mean the boy has gotten control over his powers so he knows how to take care of himself. Plus he is not as hot headed as he used to be. But any way please continue I can't wait for the next post so I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for it.

Posted: **Fri Jun 28, 2002 8:09 am**

Tracie, I think this is one of your most well written parts. You just keep getting better and better.

Posted: **Fri Jun 28, 2002 8:19 am**

<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> , really, thanks <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... rassed.gif ALT=":o"> <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a>

Posted: **Fri Jun 28, 2002 12:55 pm**

<img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> Yeah Tracie what are they!!! <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> <center>******************************</center><center><img src=http://www.fortunecity.com/victorian/st ... r>THE UK 'ORBIT' HAS LANDED!!!<img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/otn/ ... r>ZARA ISABEL MARCH 8TH 2002</center><center>ZAN IS DA MAN<center>Hoo= PIC!!Blue= Cyber Mum</center><center>If evolution works, why do mums only have two hands???</center>

Posted: **Fri Jun 28, 2002 1:39 pm**

What a nice plot twist! Wait..you make it up as you go along? <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... m/eek2.gif ALT=":jawdrop"> No way...<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> I do the samething! <img src=http://216.40.201.38/contrib/corky/smilies10.gif ALT=":grin"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> <center>*************<center>Roswell on Sci-Fi in 2003.<center>Got it?<CENTER>Get it?<CENTER>Good!<center><center>I think my muse is broke.<center><a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new"><img src="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/Max.jpg" border=0></a> <a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new">Find your Roswell match </a> at <a href="http://blancadelic.com" target="new">Blancadelic.com</a>

Posted: **Fri Jun 28, 2002 10:58 pm**

Hi, I really like the story and the pseudonyms chosen for the characters, can't wait for the next part.Well, I'm also hoping for some alien power fighting action. Also, with the whole adding Kivar into the mix, well let's just say it brought some life back into the sto because for a while there the story seemed to be lacking in the idea section. Bie, until next time <img src="http://<a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new"> <img src="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/Michael.jpg" border=0></a> <a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new"> Find your Roswell match </a> at <a href="http://blancadelic.com" target="new">Blancadelic">

Posted: **Sat Jun 29, 2002 10:14 pm**

Oh Tracieeeeee! Where are you? Please come out and play! Please write more soon. This is getting really really good and I can't wait! so I guess that you could call this a BUMP!

Posted: **Sat Jun 29, 2002 11:40 pm**

I'm sulking because apparently, my story is lacking in the idea section <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"> no, i hung with the kids today...we'll see what tomorrow brings... Just a :ufo to say Hi to everyone, I'm off to bed! Night <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a>

Posted: **Sat Jun 29, 2002 11:51 pm**

Your story is great! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> ((HUGS))

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Quietly into the Night ~ CC ~COMPLETED 7/31/02

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