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Posted: **Thu Nov 04, 2004 4:25 am**

That was a great scene, I loved that line of picking up a couple of the royal members, that was so funny. And I can finally say it.. LONG LIVE KING ZAN... Long live the Royal House of Antar. The girls sure looked like beautiful royalty didn't they, every last one of them?? I love that Michael is half off the hook with Maria... LOL!! At least she won't kill him. Those two really are a joint piece of work aren't they? Thanks for yet another great part. Rhonda

Posted: **Thu Nov 04, 2004 1:52 pm**

The last chapter is written and the epilogue is half done. Do you know wht this means...I get to watch my DVD's whoo hoo <center>Check out Majiks World of Fan Fic <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=4.topic" target="_new">HOLIDAY CHALLENGE</a> and <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=5.topic" target="_new">Majik's Feedback Challenge</a>.</center>

Posted: **Thu Nov 04, 2004 2:00 pm**

im realy going to miss this story its very good thanks for writing

Posted: **Thu Nov 04, 2004 4:00 pm**

<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> wow great scene. zan's falling right into his new role quite perfectly, i'd say. <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> can't believe this story is over so soon. good thing there is another one on the way. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> <div style="text-align:center">I used to have the longing to hear what was in your heart. But now it seems I'm over the fear of this falling apart.</div>

Posted: **Thu Nov 04, 2004 10:56 pm**

Disclaimer: Roswell, and its characters do not belong to me. Melinda Metz, Jason Katims and 20th Century Fox have that particular pleasure. I’m simply borrowing them until the Season 2 DVD’s get released. Author's Note: Well this is it, the end is in sight. Actually, excpet for the epilogue, this is the end. Thanks to everyone who left the really great feedback, you guys really rock, and thanks to everyone who urged me to write a sequel to Love Changes Everthing. Without you, Tomorrows yet to come never would have happened. Chapter Eighty – One  The Return Home “So, I guess this is it,” Zan said when the night of celebration had ended. “You’re all going to head home now?” He turned and looked out the window, so that Max wouldn’t see the sadness in his eyes. “I think so,” said Max. “It’s time. I mean, hell, Liz and I just left school without a word to anybody. Well, almost anybody,” he amended thinking of Bill, Steve, Chuck and Justin. “We kinda just dumped some money in our friends laps and asked them to ship all of our stuff home. Liz sort of told them what was going on, but I think we owe them a real explanation. And we have someone we need to say goodbye to,” he added sadly, thinking of Fred. “What about Michael and Maria, are they okay?” Zan asked. “I was afraid to ask earlier. I mean, Maria still looked pretty pissed.” “Yeah, they’re going to be okay. Michael won’t tell any of us, including Maria, what happened with his mother, but he seems a lot happier now. Kind of at peace if you know what I mean,” said Max. “Yeah, I think I do,” said Zan, reflectively, thinking about the bond that was developing between him and his parents. “You watch out for Ava for me, will ya?” “Of course I will,” said Max, but with Michael and Kyle, do you really think you need to worry?” “I suppose not, but the Gadori are still a threat, and you have to watch out for them,” said Zan. “So do you,” said Max. “So do you.” “I suppose we ought to go hook up with the others and do the big goodbye thing,” said Zan, his tone implying he’d rather do anything but that. “I don’t think we have to bother,” said Max when the door opened. “Here they come.” “We got sick of waiting for you guys,” said Liz, joining Max and Zan by the window. “Is everything okay?” “We’re good,” said Zan, hugging Liz. “How is Maria, is she okay?” “Actually, she is,” said Liz, grinning. “Apparently, her new mother-in-law doesn’t believe in keeping secrets, and she filled Maria in on some of what went on between her and Michael. But, don’t tell Michael,” she cautioned. “He just thinks Maria is being compassionate and understanding.” The three of them burst into laughter, causing everyone else in the room to look over at them. “So, what’s the joke?” asked Michael. “No joke,” said Zan. “We’re just saying our goodbyes.” “You’re taking it better than I am,” said Isabel, standing next to her mother. “I don’t want to go, but I know I can’t stay.” “It is time for you to return to your home, Isabel,” Kitana said. “But we will never be separated again, because you will always be in my heart.” “And you in mine, Mother,” said Isabel. “But it isn’t the same.” “Perhaps this will help to ease the pain of your departure,” said Drinian, reaching into a bag that sat beside him on the floor. He pulled out eight of the belts that Alex had copied from the Aberjani. “With these, you will be able to travel back and forth to Antar. That way, we will never be truly separated again.” “And,” added Zan. “We have people working on a way for us to communicate with each other, kind of like the telephone or something. I’m not too up with the science guys, but they sound like they know what they’re talking about.” “I too am finding it hard to say goodbye,” said Dijanya. “But I know that you need to go back to the lives that you have on Earth. Just promise me, my children that you won’t stay away forever.” “Never,” said Ava, hugging her mother. “Kyle’s dad is totally great, but I love knowing that I have a Mother that cares about me.” “I agree,” said Michael, blushing at the pronouncement. “Maria’s mother has always been great to me. So have Max and Isabel’s parents, and Kyle’s Dad. But it’s kind of cool knowing that I have someone out there who is mine.” Dijanya held out an arm to Michael who stepped willingly into his mother’s embrace for the first time. Everyone watching could see the tension leave his body as his mother hugged him. “The only thing that really stinks about this whole thing, is leaving Zan here by himself,” said Maria. “Not that he’ll be alone, I mean. I know he has all of you guys,” she pointed to the adults. “But it’s not the same. I mean, I have Michael, and Max and Liz are together and Kyle and Ava and Alex and Isabel. Zan deserves to find someone too.” “There are girls on Antar Maria,” said Zan. “Not that it’s going to be easy for any girl that thinks she’s going to be a part of my life. She’s got a lot to live up to,” he added. “Like what?” asked Max curiously. It sounded to him as if Zan had left someone behind on Earth; someone pretty special. “Well, she’s going to have to be as smart as Liz, as beautiful as Isabel, be as loyal as Ava, and have Maria’s sense of humor and spaghetti making skills,” said Zan. “I don’t know if I’ll ever find anyone who can fill your shoes.” “Oh Zan,” the girls cried, and ran to hug him. “Nice,” Alex whispered to the others. “He gets to stay here after making that nice little speech, and we have to go back and live with them. There is no way we’re ever going to top that.” “I heard that Alex,” said Isabel. “It is time,” interjected Drinian. “I left word with Jim Valenti. He is going to have all of your parents waiting at the CrashDown. That is where the belts have been programmed to take you. I suggest we not waste time on long goodbyes, for we shall see each other again.” Despite Drinian’s request, the goodbyes were long and drawn out, but finally the time had come for them to leave Antar. They strapped on their belts, and at Max’s signal activated them, and in a flash of light, disappeared, leaving Zan to rule Antar, his final warning about the Gadori, ringing in their ears. <center>Check out Majiks World of Fan Fic <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=4.topic" target="_new">HOLIDAY CHALLENGE</a> and <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=5.topic" target="_new">Majik's Feedback Challenge</a>.</center>Edited by: <A HREF=http://p199.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrea ... iklmoon</A> at: 11/4/04 10:54 pm

Posted: **Fri Nov 05, 2004 12:41 am**

Stop it, I don't want to hear the horrible vicious lies you are writing on the update page. This isn't the end, there has to be more. I need more. I don't want it to end. You think the paltry promise of an epilogue is going to make up for you ending this. No, it's never going to happen <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> . I need this story, I love this story, I don't want this story to end, EVER. They went home. They really went home *sniff* that means it's really over. <blockquote>Quote:<hr>“There are girls on Antar Maria,” said Zan. “Not that it’s going to be easy for any girl that thinks she’s going to be a part of my life. She’s got a lot to live up to,” he added. “Like what?” asked Max curiously. It sounded to him as if Zan had left someone behind on Earth; someone pretty special. “Well, she’s going to have to be as smart as Liz, as beautiful as Isabel, be as loyal as Ava, and have Maria’s sense of humor and spaghetti making skills,” said Zan. “I don’t know if I’ll ever find anyone who can fill your shoes.” “Oh Zan,” the girls cried, and ran to hug him.<hr></blockquote> that was beautiful. Zan turned out to be so sweet <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)">

Posted: **Fri Nov 05, 2004 11:10 pm**

Disclaimer: Roswell, and its characters do not belong to me. Melinda Metz, Jason Katims and 20th Century Fox have that particular pleasure. I’m simply borrowing them until the Season 2 DVD’s get released. Author’s Note: Wow, it’s finally over. And like with the end of every story, there is that strange mixture of joy and sorrow. I hadn’t planned on writing this story, it was only written as a gift to thank all the people who enjoyed it’s prequel, and to fill in the time before Season 2 came out on DVD. Well, the DVD’s have been out for a month, and I’m just finishing now. You can pretty much bet I’ll be having a Roswell Marathon this weekend <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/lol.gif ALT=":lol"> . Thanks again to everyone for the fantastic feedback, and the support I needed when I didn’t think I’d ever get it finished. Several people have asked if there is going to be a third installment to this series, and the answer is a tentative yes. A wonderful friend read one part of this story and said “oh, what if….”; and the seeds of an idea were planted. I can only hope that with careful nurturing, they grow and blossom into another story. Thanks again for the wonderful feedback! ~ Majik. Epilogue A burst of light filled the CrashDown, accompanied by the shocked screams of the people in the café. Liz looked around, disoriented by the voyage, and realized she was lying on the floor. She felt hands pulling her up, and she fell into the welcoming arms of her parents. “Lizzie,” her dad cried, tears streaming down his face. “Lizzie, why didn’t you ever tell us.” “Jeff, not now,” said Nancy. “Give her a chance to, oh, I don’t know,” she cried in frustration, “Just give her a chance.” Liz clung to her parents, and surveyed the scene in the CrashDown at the same time. The same scene played out in various parts of the café. She smiled a little as she watched Maria’s mother alternately ranting and raving, and hugging Maria and Michael tightly. Max’s parents openly wept and hugged their children. Liz laughed a little, watching Alex’s parents. Neither had ever been very comfortable showing their feelings, but they seemed to have gotten over that as they hugged their only son. The only parent who reacted calmly was Jim Valenti, but that was because he had several years to adjust to the whole situation, but even he kept hugging Kyle and Ava. “Mom, Dad, I’m sorry I couldn’t tell you,” Liz whispered. “But I, I just couldn’t” “I’d like to say you can always tell us anything, Lizzie,” her dad said, stroking her hair. “But I think I understand why you couldn’t. I’m not saying we liked it very much, but we do understand.” “Thank you,” Liz whispered. “Baby, you’ve been through so much,” her mother said, squeezing her hand. “And you had to deal with it alone.” “No mom, I was never alone,” said Liz, looking at Max. “I was never alone.” “Yes, about that,” said Jeff. “We need to talk about that.” Max saw Liz looking at him, and excused himself from his parents. “I need to go do something,” he said to them. “I’ll be right back.” He crossed the room, went to stand beside Liz, reached down, and took her hand in his. “Mr. and Mrs. Parker,” he said. “I just want you to know, I love your daughter very much, and there isn’t anything I would do for her.” “We have an awful lot to talk about, young man,” said Jeff Parker, looking very solemn. “But the first thing I need to say to you is thank you. Thank you for saving our daughter’s life.” He stuck out his hand but when Max put his hand in his, Jeff pulled him into a hug. “I guess we’re family now,” said Philip Evans who had come to stand beside his son. “As our we,” said Alex’s parents joining the group. “You’re just learning something we’ve known for a very long time. We’re all family,” said Max. “It doesn’t matter who is related to who, or how. We’re a family, and we always will be.” “Max is right,” said Liz. “We learned a long time ago that we’re stronger together than apart. We have a bond, and nothing, and nobody can break that bond.” “We don’t want to, kids,” said Diane Evans. “But maybe it’s time to open up your selective little group and let in a few more members. If you’re stronger together than apart, then you’ll be even stronger with us by your side. The strength you’re talking about comes from love, and remember, nobody loves you more than we do.” “I guess none of us expected you to be so understanding,” said Isabel. “Don’t get us wrong,” said Philip, sounding so much like the lawyer that he was, instead of a father. “We’re not at all crazy about the fact that you went off and got married, but we understand why. The other thing is, you were under age when you went on your little jaunt to Vegas, and you lied on your licenses, so they’re really not legal.” “Legal or not, we’re married,” said Michael. “And there isn’t anything you can do about it.” “Well actually, there are a lot of things we could do about it, Michael, but we’re not going to, so I suggest you shut up and just listen,” said the Sheriff. “What we’re suggesting is you get married again, that way there isn’t any question of legalities,” said Amy. “And then we’re going to throw you one heck of a party.” “Wait,” said Diane Evans, suddenly. “Where is he, where is Zan? We so wanted him to come home with you. Is he staying somewhere else?” “Zan wanted me to thank you for your wonderful and generous offer. I don’t think you’ll ever know how much it meant to him,” said Max. “But one of us had to stay on Antar, and he really wanted to do it. Our, our,” he stopped, unsure of how to continue. “Our Antarian parents are alive, Mom and Dad,” said Isabel, taking over for Max. “And Zan, well, Zan never had parents like we did, and he really needed to stay and be with them.” “You’re parents?” whispered Diane Evans. “They’re alive.” “They are,” said Isabel, “And Mom, they’re great, and I hope someday you get the chance to meet them, because I know they want to thank you for loving us so much. Kitana said that had she chosen herself, she couldn’t have found anybody to do a better job watching over us than you and Dad did.” A knock at the door of the café caught everyone’s attention, and Jeff walked over to the door and called through the glass, “We’re closed for a private party.” He looked closer and drew in a resigned voice. “Oh, it’s you,” he said. “Max, Lizzie, there are four guys out here that say they know you from college. They show up at least once a week, looking for you.” Max and Liz walked cautiously towards the door. “You don’t suppose,” said Max. “I don’t know, but if it’s not them, it’s the Gadori,” said Liz. “But we’d better check it out.” She pushed back the shade that covered the door and screamed. Within seconds, she had the door open and was screaming and laughing. “Oh my God, guys, what are you doing here?” she shouted. “Liz, you can’t be sure it’s them,” cautioned Max. “Yeah, I can,” said Liz. “One thing I remembered about Nescado was his total lack of a sense of humor. And if there is one thing these guys have, it’s a sense of humor.” She stepped out of the way to reveal four college students wearing togas over their clothes, and alien masks. “Okay, I’ll concede the point,” said Max. “Hey guys, come on in, I’d like to introduce you to well, everybody. Everybody this is Bill, Steve, Chuck, and Dustin. They were the ones who packed up our stuff and sent it back from school.” “What stuff?” asked Nancy. “We didn’t receive anything.” “Yeah, Max, about that,” said Chuck. “We decided that since most of your classes were lectures, and they don’t take attendance in them, you didn’t really need to leave school.” “Yeah, and thanks so my incredible hacking skills, you both aced your exams for the semester,” added Dustin. “So you can go back whenever you want,” added Steve. “I even remembered to water your plants every week,” added Bill, proudly. “You guys are too much,” said Max. The four boys were quickly assimilated into the group, laughing and talking and sharing stories. Liz watched everyone she cared about relaxing and having fun for a few minutes before she grabbed her backpack and slipped up the stairs to her old room. She climbed out her bedroom window and onto the rooftop patio. She sat on an old lawn chair and reached into her backpack and pulled out her journal. My name is Liz Parker Evans, and today is the start of a whole new life. <center>Check out Majiks World of Fan Fic <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=4.topic" target="_new">HOLIDAY CHALLENGE</a> and <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=5.topic" target="_new">Majik's Feedback Challenge</a>.</center>

Posted: **Sat Nov 06, 2004 5:55 pm**

It's over...I can't believe it's over <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> That was totally and completely incredible. Thanks so much for the two wonderful stories, and I am holding out hope that those little seeds of an idea will germinate into a new story. Thanks again for writing, this was great.

Posted: **Sat Nov 06, 2004 5:56 pm**

I'm glad you liked it <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> <center>Check out Majiks World of Fan Fic <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=4.topic" target="_new">HOLIDAY CHALLENGE</a> and <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=5.topic" target="_new">Majik's Feedback Challenge</a>.</center>

Posted: **Sat Nov 06, 2004 6:15 pm**

<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> That was wonderful <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> i can't believe it's over though <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/frown.gif ALT=":("> my heart is broken to know that it has ended. please please please write the sequel <div style="text-align:center">It's all about Roswell!</div>

Posted: **Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:10 pm**

Always knew you were the bomb, Tracie. This story right here just reinforced it! <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/thumpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"> <div style="text-align:center"> When I am out there, in time, I am inverted, changed into a desperate version of myself.</div>

Posted: **Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:19 pm**

Melis <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> <center>Check out Majiks World of Fan Fic <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=4.topic" target="_new">HOLIDAY CHALLENGE</a> and <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=5.topic" target="_new">Majik's Feedback Challenge</a>.</center>

Posted: **Sun Nov 07, 2004 12:14 am**

<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> this story was great! <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> and i can't wait for the sequel to start! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> MELIS! We MISS YOU Sooooooo! <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> <div style="text-align:center">I used to have the longing to hear what was in your heart. But now it seems I'm over the fear of this falling apart.</div>

Posted: **Mon Nov 08, 2004 2:34 am**

Over? No, it can't be over! Why do good things always have to end? <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> Well, it was a great run, Tracie! So the granolith chose all nine of them as potential rulers. Interesting. It's logical (to quote Mr. Spock) that Zan stayed and became the king, I guess, in the end. I was so glad that Michael and Ava's mother turned out to be Plash Nevenia (I think that name is right). Anyway, it's great that she survived, too. Too bad Alex and Kyle had to get their nose and jaw broken to get Michael to let out his pent up emotions and warm up to his mother. Now, I started thinking when I read the part where Isabel revealed to the Evanses that their real parents on Antar are still alive... Wouldn't it be cool if the two sets of parents could have met at the end. Of course, I'm sure they will eventually, though. Zan sure laid the sugar on the table when he said that any girl he married would have to measure up to the other girls' qualities, didn't he? Okay, so we know he's going to be a diplomat! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/wink.gif ALT=";)"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/lol.gif ALT=":lol"> Or a politician. <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/lol.gif ALT=":lol"> I liked Jim's answer to Michael about their marriages... <blockquote>Quote:<hr>“Legal or not, we’re married,” said Michael. “And there isn’t anything you can do about it.” “Well actually, there are a lot of things we could do about it, Michael, but we’re not going to, so I suggest you shut up and just listen,” said the Sheriff. “What we’re suggesting is you get married again, that way there isn’t any question of legalities,” said Amy. “And then we’re going to throw you one heck of a party.” <hr></blockquote> Good solution! I can't believe those college dudes hacked into the computers and gave them all final exam grades so they could go back and finish college. Actually, with regard to Nasedo, he had a sort of dry, humorless wit. It was humor in a very dry form. His comment about what he had been doing with Congresswoman Whittaker all summer was one example. Actually, there weren't very many examples. It was hard to determine if he was trying to be funny or was just mad sometimes (in the crazy sense). And so this is the end... <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/pout.gif ALT=":pout"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/frown.gif ALT=":("> I'm voting for a sequel!<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/thumpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/ufo.gif ALT=":ufo"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilie ... smilie.gif ALT=":party"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/handprint.gif ALT=":handprint"> Great story! Great ending! (They might could fine tune those belts just a bit for a softer landing, though. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/wink.gif ALT=";)"> ) Loved it! <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/love.gif ALT=":love"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilie ... smilie.gif ALT=":party"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/thumpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/ufo.gif ALT=":ufo"> <div style="text-align:center"><img src="http://users.aol.com/isndbreeze/skysymb ...   Gerry - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hopeless Candy-Coated, Stargazing, Dreamer! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -</div>Edited by: <A HREF=http://p199.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrea ... dbreeze</A> <IMG HEIGHT=10 WIDTH=10 SRC="http://users.aol.com/isndbreeze/aim116b.jpg" BORDER=0> at: 11/8/04 1:36 am

Posted: **Mon Nov 08, 2004 10:08 am**

over. no no no it can't be over. but wait a promise of a trilogy. and i see something by you posted on the board. ok first things first. let me give props where they are due. those last pars were awesome. i was all misty through it all. zan is the man. totally awesome. standing with max and liz and then offereing to stand with maria. and what he siad about the match he would find. someone finally upstaged alex. perfect. i'm glad they can caome back and forth. and they are going to have an alien cell phone. cool. glad ava and michael have made peace with their mom. the pain ava is feeling...will she come to terms with it? i love michael's decleration they are married and their is nothing anyone can do about it. so our alien club just got real big. the parents are great. and they miss zan oh how sweet. this story totally rocked. i think i will have to reread it. <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilie ... smilie.gif ALT=":party"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/tongue.gif ALT=":p"> arty<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilie ... smilie.gif ALT=":party"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/tongue.gif ALT=":p"> arty<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilie ... smilie.gif ALT=":party"> and the friends from college. togas and alien masks. that was hysterical. so um the bad people are going to come after them right? bummer. Roselle The Techie Connection "'Cause frankly, looking at you looking like me is kinda whacked.'" - Michael from Son of M&M by kLyn "If we don't change, we don't grow. If we don't grow, we aren't really living." -Gail Sheehy Egyptain Dwelling Silly Sister

Posted: **Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:27 pm**

That was a great story!<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilie ... smilie.gif ALT=":party"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/tongue.gif ALT=":p"> arty I really enjoyed it and hope to see more stories from you<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/ufo.gif ALT=":ufo"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/ufo.gif ALT=":ufo"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilie ... smilie.gif ALT=":party">

Posted: **Tue Nov 09, 2004 4:03 pm**

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. The third part of the series has been started, it's called the enemy unknown, the enemy unseen. <center>Check out Majiks World of Fan Fic <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=4.topic" target="_new">HOLIDAY CHALLENGE</a> and <a href="http://p199.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrea ... ID=5.topic" target="_new">Majik's Feedback Challenge</a>.</center>

Posted: **Mon Dec 13, 2004 8:10 pm**

What you were waiting for..... an order of feedback fix <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> so TYTC and I know there´s a sequel to this one also so I hurry up to read this story. Ch 15 - I always enjoyed the way you change their appearances, mainly because it was the easiest way to deceive the rest of the world and they never used in the show. What a surprise !! agggg !! Finally they will meet with the others, let´s see how this go. Ch 16 - ajjjjjjjjjjjaaaaaaaaa Zan is in Roswell. The Sheriff should be more careful, how come he just grab the first "Look_like_Max" man and brought him right to his home. Haven´t he learnt anything in all this time??? jejejeje !!! Michael´s and Ava´s moment was so sweet and real. loved it. Ch 17 - Yes, let´s be careful. Don´t open to him right away. I have my doubts about Zan also. However, let´s give him a chance to prove his loyalty. ch 18,19,20 - OUch poor Jose <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/frown.gif ALT=":("> And what happened in the granolith? Was it Glenarra the one who entered? This is getting better and better. Now they are in a different planet and what´s going to happen? I can´t wait for this evening where I will keep on reading. Great work !!

Posted: **Thu Dec 16, 2004 12:55 pm**

Ch 21 - <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> Well said Ava. You´re more than right. What´s happening to Max? Why on earth is he acting as if he were on a race? Calm down and think about it man <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> ch 22 - *****sigh**** Max and Liz are so adorable when they share this kind of moments together. They still think the same way and Max being so protective of Liz, and amazed by her laugh was lovely. Ch 23 - *****sigh again*** I wish we have the same way of learning some things on earth. It sure would came in handy some times <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> uoohoho !! Atlantis !! that was a shock, and it explains lots jejeje !! wow !!! ch 25 - I feel so sad for Kyle. Seeing your wife being raped and killed isn´t the best thing in the world for a husband. Wonderful backgrounds, you should be a fiction writer LOL LOL <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> so, where´s Liz? ... I bet she´s amazed with everything she has learnt on Antar. Trapped in the lab was my first guess. ch 26 - I told you, I told you before. Liz was and always will be a science geek jejeje LOL

Posted: **Tue Dec 28, 2004 6:08 pm**

<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/read.gif ALT=":read"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/read.gif ALT=":read"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/read.gif ALT=":read"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/read.gif ALT=":read"> Oh well... I should admit I was too absorbed by the reading that I didn´t noticed that I owe like 20 chapters of feedback now <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> That´s what happen when the reading is that good. Ch 76 - It´s good to see Zan is welcomed by everyone, not only their partners on Antar but also by the people on Earth. Finally he would have a "home" <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> I had my doubts at first, cause he appeared surrounded by lies and intrigue. However,he is completely trustworthy now. Ch 78 - Yesss I agree with your decision. If nobody wants to stay and rule, Zan is the best choice to rule Antar. I hope he has the qualities the other Zan lacked to succesfully rule Antar. So Ava and Michael´s mother is alive yeayyyy !!! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> Ch 79 till the end - I can understand Michael´s reaction. Poor kid. I feel sad for him but he has everything he always wished in his life. A family. I loved that Michael finally punched Alex and Kyle jejejejej That was hilarious. jejeje LOL <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> poor Zan he´s going to be alone on Antar <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> I know is not true but I can´t help being sad. On the other hand the kids are coming home again yeayyyy Beautiful ending !!! <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> !!! beautiful !!! ... ... ... ... running to find the sequel !!!! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)">

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