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Chapter 43 (Crobost & the Haunted Ship)


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Yay!!! :) I will read it tomorrow or the next day for sure! I'm getting things finished up for the semester and I'd stay up and read it tonight, but I need my sleep! loL! So I will read it in the next couple of days. I'm so excited!! :)
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Okay, Gerry, I've read your update and LOVED it!!! :) I've left some fb on your story to show how much I liked it! :)
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Chapter 44 (Disaster in the Sky)


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COOOLLLLL!!! I will get to that tomorrow - need to get my sleep! :)
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Chapter 45 (The Fairy And The King)


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Chapter 46 (The Skyscrapers Of Droufenclar)


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This is the last chapter. See note at end.
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I saw you updated them, Gerry! I will read them asap along with some other stories that I've gotten behind in reading...sadly... But I'm excited about what you've updated so I will be reading them hopefully very soon! :)
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I have a new chapter of Ee-l'wee, Ch 47, "The Hour of the Nadinbolas." If anyone is interested, I'll e-mail it to you on request. Or if enough people want it posted here and request it I'll post it here. It's Serwhu and Larna's turn to go home... but do they even know where they live on Yargish? It's a big planet, and they don't have a clue... so what will become of them?

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hi i know of you bye Gerry's name, from your other storys, which i read over,over, i do like
the way that you write, you are a great writer/story teller,i'm injoying myself greatly,to day
reading the silver sphere its wonderful, my self, ill keep my eyes open for more new storys
be ready to read .have a wonderful day, i can't thank you enough for the laughter and
wonderful storys.
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Aw, thanks, starlescia maxwel! I'm back with another chapter of Ee-l'wee, called "Kjaw'Adar" (Yarich's planet). Yarich faces two new challenges after returning home: getting used to his two little sisters, who aren't so little anymore, and trying to learn to fly (with a little help from Ee-l'wee), as his ancestors once did. We're really getting close to the end of the story now. Just a few more chapters, but they will be packed with action and excitement. :)
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Cool! I will go and look at it now - it sounds awesome, Gerry! :) :dance
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Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 56 (The Butterfly and the Eagles)


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The Kjaw'Adarian authorities question the Triumph's legal status, Ee-l'wee gets to know Yarich's family better and continues helping them with their flying lessons, Arylya presents Ee-l'wee with a poem about a butterfly that teaches eagles to fly again, and Yarich's part of the jewels the crew has accumulated stuns his family, causing some touching moments and confessions.
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I read this update, Gerry, and it was awesome! :blue :clap :clap :dance :dance
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Chapter 57 (Arzuros - Blue On Blue)


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Ee-l'wee says a final goodbye to Yarich and his family with a flyby over their aerie; and Brobar, finally home on Arzuros, says goodbye to the crew and to the ship he loves and piloted. But is there another love waiting for him at home? Surprises are in store.
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Cool! I'm anxious to read it! :)
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Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 58 (The Challenge)


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For such a happy planet, Brobar comes up against a not-so-happy law (at least for guys) that allows any man to challenge another for his fiancee's hand, in a formal court hearing before a judge. Though not common, challenges are usually successful (in almost 9 out of 10 cases), because they always come from someone who is very confident he has the goods to prevail. Can Brobar stand up against what seems to everyone to be the "perfect" man?
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Oh gosh, he has to! I'm really anxious to read this one, Gerry! It sounds great! :)
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Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 59 (A True Blue Wedding)


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Brobar and Calysha tie the knot, and the sphere reveals something incredible to Ee-l'wee
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Chapter 60 (A Tale Of Darkest Antiquity)


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The sphere reveals its true past to Ee-l'wee, GaBo, Brobar, and Calysha
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