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Posted: **Sun Sep 01, 2002 12:24 am**

Sacrifice A Sequel to Quietly into the Night Conventional Couples Rating: PG-13 Chapter Sixteen  Antar – Royal Palace One of the guards passed his hand over the control panel and opened the door to the suite that Liz shared with Kyle and Kam. They unceremoniously dump her body on the floor and leave, securing the door behind them. Liz groaned on the floor and tried to stand up, but the effort sapped what little strength she had and she passed out. Several hours later, she woke and gazed around the room from her vantage point on the floor. When she realized that she was back in her own quarters, Liz pulled her self into a sitting position. The room began to spin and she quickly shut her eyes to block out the sight. She slowly dragged herself into a chair, her eyes still closed. She waited a few minutes and cautiously opened her eyes again. This time, she was rewarded with a room that didn’t spin. She slowly pushed herself up off of the chair into a standing position and looked around. The room seemed so empty without Kyle and Kam, but it was the best alone she had ever felt. Knowing her son was away from that mad man Kivar made everything she went through worthwhile. Slowly she made her way across the room to Kam’s sleeping quarters and looked inside. She smiled when she realized that Balchie and Betchie, the two bears she had tried to make for her children while she was pregnant, were missing. She moved slowly to her own room and went to the place where she hid her journal. It was missing, but in its place was a letter.  Dear Liz, You must realize how much it killed me to leave you here, but I realized that you were right. It was the only way to save Kam, and I also realized that if I didn’t do it, you would kill yourself trying to do it. You know where I’m going to take him Liz, and I’ve told you how to get there. I won’t write it down in case anybody but you finds this. I will protect your son Liz, with my life, and I will be back to get you, you can count on it. You are my best friend, and I can’t lose you. Love Kyle Liz wiped away the tear that slid slowly down her cheek. She passed her hand over the paper, causing it to burst into flames. Smoke eddied up from the ashes and drifted towards the ceiling. Coughing a little, Liz exited the room and stepped out into the main room. As she did, the door slid open to reveal two guards who rushed in and began to look around. “The sensors indicated that there is a fire. Where is it? What is burning?” asked one of the guards, while the other took her by the arm and tried to pull her from the room. “You’ll have to come with me,” he said. “While Krochi looks for the source of the fire.” “I can’t leave this room!” cried Liz. “The security bracelet, it will kill me.” The guard grabbed Liz and pulled her out of the room into the hallway. As they passed through the doorway, Liz braced herself for the feeling of pain, but nothing happened. She looked at the guard questioningly, but said nothing. Noting her puzzlement, the guard looked around furtively and whispered, “Have no fear Your Majesty. The bracelet will only work if you open the door from the inside. If we open the door from the outside to bring you out, you are in no danger. The time will come when you can use this information, but you must wait. Do you understand me Majesty?” Liz nodded her head to show that she understood. The other guard came into the hallway and glared at Liz. “There was no fire in there. What did you do?” “I didn’t do anything,” said Liz innocently. “I was busy being unconscious until right before you came storming into my quarters. I don’t believe that Lord Kivar would want his fiancée to be treated in such a manner, do you?” The guard blanched but said nothing. “You there,” she said pointing at the guard who had told her about the bracelet. “What is your name?” “I am Cadrik, Your Majesty,” he said. “Cadrik, you may tell Lord Kivar that I am thankful for your assistance during this manner. You may also tell him that I never wish to see this buffoon near my quarters again.” She looked at Krochi while she spoke and she noted that his face had gone deathly pale. “Aye Majesty,” said Cadrik, nodding his head. “As you wish.” “No, wait,” Liz said imperiously. “I’ve changed my mind. Krochi, you have displeased me, but I do not believe I shall inform Lord Kivar. I shall keep my silence for a price.” “Yes Your Majesty, I am your willing servant. You only have to ask for what you wish,” groveled Krochi. “I am quite hungry, and feeling very weak. I will need food, and plenty of it to rebuild my strength,” she said. “Can you do this for me?” “Yes, Your Majesty,” Krochi said, bowing. “I will be most pleased to do this for you. Will you want anything else?” “If I do,” she said with a slight smile. “You will be the first to know. Cadrik, will you please escort me into my room now?” Cadrik and Liz walked into the suite of rooms. “Well done Majesty,” Cadrik whispered. “Gather your strength for you will need it.” “Thank you Cadrik, for everything,” she said squeezing his hand. “No, those of us who support the Royal Family thank you, Majesty.” “Cadrik, there is one thing,” Liz said as he prepared to leave. “Is there any way you can tell Kivar I need to see him. I suppose I had better accept his proposal of marriage.” She made a face as she spoke and Cadrik laughed softly. “Aye Majesty,” he said. “It will be done.” Several hours later, the door to the suite slid open and Kivar walked in. “Elizabeth, I understand that you wished to speak with me?” he said. “Yes, I do. I have given your proposal serious thought, and I can see that it has some merits,” she said. “Living, for one,” said Kivar. “Yes, that would be one of them,” Liz answered dryly. “But I do have some questions.” “Of course you do. You are a wise woman Elizabeth, not one to rush foolishly into something with her eyes closed. Please ask your questions, and I will do my best to answer them.” “If I were to marry you, would I still remain a prisoner in the palace, or would I be given my freedom?” ”Not right away Elizabeth. You will have to earn your freedom by proving to me that you are loyal to me and to no other.” “My son. I want his safety, and the safety of Kyle to be guaranteed.” “No, I cannot do that,” said Kivar. “Kyle is a traitor, he took your son from the palace and has disappeared. He must be eliminated.” “Interesting, you call him a traitor Kivar? Why is that?” Kivar walked across the room and looked out the window into the courtyard below. “It is quite simple Elizabeth, he defied me.” “Really, in what way? Did you ever specifically say that Kam could not leave the palace? If you wanted him to remain, why did you not fit him with a security bracelet such as mine?” Kivar started to speak when he realized that what Liz said was true. “It is true that I never stated any such thing. You are clever Elizabeth, very clever. You will make a fine wife.” “I want your promise Kivar, that nothing will happen to them, my son Kam, and my friend Kyle will be allowed to live,” said Liz firmly. “Fine,” said Kivar, not meaning a word of what he said. “Kyle and Kam will be allowed to live, but never within the grounds of the Royal Palace. From here they are banned forever.” “As you wish Kivar,” said Elizabeth, also not meaning a word of what she said. “I will become your wife.” “A wise choice Elizabeth,” said Kivar. “The wedding will take place immediately!” “Excuse me, but where I come from, the bride has some say as to when her wedding will take place. I will need some time to recover from my  ordeal. I will beg your indulgence and ask you for some time to prepare Lord Kivar.” “Fine,” said Kivar. “So be it. You may have one of your Earth months to prepare for our wedding.” “Kivar, there is one other thing,” said Liz. “I would like to spend some time getting to know you. Would that be possible?” “Yes Elizabeth, I believe that would be wise. Perhaps I could have the guards escort you my sitting room occasionally.” ”That would be nice,” said Liz. “And there would be no fear of my escaping as long as I was wearing this,” she said indicating the security bracelet. “Precisely,” said Kivar. “I shall leave you now Elizabeth, but we shall talk again soon. He exited the room and walked down the hallway pleased with himself. By marrying Elizabeth, he would secure his position as ruler of Antar. Those loyal to the Royal family would look favorably upon him. He had Elizabeth firmly under his thumb after just a few short hours of torture. She was so afraid of the bracelet that she would never try to escape. The only other matter he had to attend to was her son. He would track down that brat of hers, and the traitor Kyle and kill them both. Alone in her room, Liz smiled to herself. Kivar was an idiot; there was no doubt about it. He was so sure of himself that he never doubted her swift turn around. As if a few hours of torture would make her agree to marry him. She walked across the room and made her way into Kyle’s bedroom. She looked through his clothing and found a pair of pants and a shirt that came close to fitting her. None of his shoes fit, but she would manage with what she had. Carrying the clothing she selected to her room, she hid them carefully where no one would find them. Feeling exhausted suddenly, she climbed into her bed and drifted off to sleep, secure in the thought that she had a plan for escape. <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a> Edited by: <A HREF=http://pub129.ezboard.com/umajiklmoon.s ... iklmoon</A> <IMG HEIGHT=10 WIDTH=10 SRC="http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/images/moon18.gif" BORDER=0> at: 8/31/02 11:27:39 pm

Posted: **Sun Sep 01, 2002 2:35 am**

more soon <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)">

Posted: **Sun Sep 01, 2002 11:11 am**

You rockTracie! <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"> <center>*************<center>And I believe<center> <center>That angels breathe<center> <center>And that love will live on and never leave<center><center>*************<center>************* <center>The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return"

Posted: **Tue Sep 03, 2002 12:21 am**

Sacrifice A Sequel to Quietly into the Night Conventional Couples Rating: PG-13 Chapter Seventeen  Antar – Capitol City Kyle and Saranara rushed back through the tunnel, their mission to retrieve some food all but forgotten. Saranara gasped for breath as she tried to keep up with Kyle. He reached behind him and grabbed her by the hand and pulled her along behind him. ”Kyle, go ahead without me,” she gasped. “I’m slowing you down, you have to get back to them. They need to know about this.” “No,” he said grimly. “I’m not leaving anyone behind, ever again. Especially not you.” Unfortunately, Saranara chose that moment to stumble upon a rough part of the tunnel floor and she missed Kyle’s comment. The two burst through the tunnel into the small cavern where Michael, Max, Jereon and Kam were waiting. Max and Michael jumped up as Saranara and Kyle entered the cavern, they’re arms extended, while Jereon scooped Kam up and started to run down another tunnel. “Wait!” shouted Kyle. “It’s us!” “Jesus, Kyle, we could have killed you,” said Michael. “Next time, let us know it’s you why don’t you?” “Wait a second,” gasped Kyle, trying to catch his breath. He was more winded from the news he was bearing rather than the run. ”Saranara, will you take Kam for a walk please?” he asked, still panting slightly. “Just a second,” said Max, starting to object. “Max, just shut up,” said Kyle. “This is important. You keep saying you’re not the king, well, try not acting like one for a change.” Max stared in shock at the acidic words that spewed from Kyle’s mouth. Kyle hadn’t talked to him like that in years.” “Kam and I are going to go back through the tunnel to the shop to get some food,” said Saranara. “Won’t that be fun Kam? Your Uncle Kyle was in such a hurry to get back here that he forgot the food.” The two started back down the tunnel while Kyle watched until they were out of site. “Kyle, what has happened?” asked Jereon. “Did you find Isabelle and Lexie?” “No, I’m afraid it isn’t good news. Saranara and I were in the marketplace when we heard the news.” ”What news Kyle, just say it!” demanded Max “It’s Liz. She’s agreed to marry Kivar. The notices said the wedding would take place in three days time!”  Antar – Royal Palace “Cadrik, tell me again everything that happened? Does Elizabeth believe that you are a traitor?” “Yes Lord Kivar,” said Cadrik. “I believe I managed to convince her that I am loyal only to the royal family. Queen Elizabeth was quite easy to dupe actually. I believe that she is desperate to have someone on her side.” “That is excellent Cadrik. I want you to go back to her and tell her that the plans for the wedding progress and that it will occur in three days.” “Three days my Lord? Isn’t that a bit sudden?” questioned Cadrik. “Yes, especially when she believes that she has several weeks to prepare for her escape. If she thinks the wedding will happen in three days, she will most likely try and escape the night before. With any luck, we’ll be able to tail her to that brat of hers so I can kill him,” said Kivar. “As you wish My Lord. I shall see to it immediately,” said Cadrik bowing to Kivar. He left the room and made his way to the kitchens and prepared a tray for Liz. The door to her suite slid open and Liz, trying to fit into her persona of happy bride to be, did little but glance up to see who it was. When she saw that it was Cadrik, she smiled and jumped up and moved towards him. He frowned and shook his head slightly and she paused. “Good evening My Lady,” he said respectfully. “I have brought you a meal and some news.” ”Good evening Cadrik,” Liz said. “Thank you, I’m quite hungry tonight.” “You need to eat well My Lady, for you are to wed Lord Kivar in three days.” “Three days?” shouted Liz. “That’s impossible. He promised me a month.” “It is to be three days Queen Elizabeth, and you and Kivar shall wed. Now may I suggest that you eat, for you will need your strength.” He bowed to Liz and walked out of the room, the door sliding shut behind him. Liz watched Cadrik leave, puzzled by his behavior, and frightened by his news. She picked up the tray he had left for her and began to eat. She wasn’t hungry, for his words had chased away her appetite, but she also knew she would need her strength for what was to come. She picked up a dish and began to eat, not noticing the contents. When she was done, she went to return the plate to the tray when she noticed a scrap of paper sticking out from under another dish. She removed it and unfolded it and read: “Your Majesty,” Lord Kivar believes me to be loyal to him. He instructed me to befriend you. I told him that I succeeded and that you trusted me implicitly. He then instructed me to inform you that your wedding has been scheduled for three days from now. He believes you will run, the night before the wedding is to occur. He plans to follow you in the hopes that you lead him to your son. He plans to kill the boy. Your Majesty, I beg you to believe that I am loyal to you and to the Royal House of Antar. It is imperative that you have faith in me, and do not believe what you may hear about me. Do not wait to run, you must leave tonight. It is urgent that you leave as soon as possible. Cadrik. Liz looked at the note and rubbed her head. She didn’t know who or what to believe any longer. Finally, she decided to trust nobody but herself. She finished all the food on the tray, and went into her room. She quickly slipped on the pants and shirt that belonged to Kyle and covered it with one of the Antarian gowns that filled her closet. She made a quick survey of the room to see if there was anything of use to her. Spying nothing, she returned to the main living quarters, as the door again slid open. This time it was Krochi who entered the room. “Queen Elizabeth,” he said. “I have come to remove your tray if you are done eating.” “Thank you Krochi, but where is Cadrik?” she asked. “If it pleases your Majesty, I have some information to share with you,” said Krochi. “Cadrik is not a friend to you. He betrays your confidences to Lord Kivar. You are in great danger. You should beware.” “Danger, from what Krochi?” asked Liz. “Do not believe the words of Cadrik,” said Kochi again. He picked up the tray and quickly stepped from the room.  Antar – Uzshtar City After many failed attempts, Isabelle and Lexie managed to locate the eating establishment belonging to Franchet, and they made their way inside. She sat at a table and looked around the dark room. Franchet was across the room, placing a platter of food in front of a customer. A woman approached Isabelle and asked what they would like anything. Isabelle declined regretfully, for she had no money, but she asked the waitress to send Franchet over. It took him several minutes to arrive at the table. “May I help you?” he asked in Antarian. Isabelle struggled to find the correct words. All of them had learned some of the language when they were here last, but she was far from proficient. After a few moments of internal struggle, she gave up and quickly passed her hand over her hair and face to reveal who she was, and just as quickly disguised herself again. Franchet’s face registered shock for a moment. He quickly left the table and returned with two large platters of food. “Eat Majesty,” he whispered. “I will be back as soon as possible. Where is Naloch?” At the name Naloch, Isabelle glared at Franchet, but said nothing. She passed Lexie some food and made sure that the child was eating before she answered. “We’ll talk of him later. I need to get Lexie someplace safe.” Franchet was about to answer when the door to the tavern opened and two of Kivar’s guardsmen walked in. Isabelle shuddered, but kept her expression smooth. The two walked past her table and took some seats several tables away and began to talk. “I think Lord Kivar is making a mistake,” said one of the guards. “ You may think that, but I’d keep it to yourself if you want to live,” said the other. “You know as well as I Lord Kivar won’t stand for anybody speaking poorly of him or of his decisions.” “Be that as it may, I still think it’s a poor decision. What time is Commander Nicoro supposed to meet us?” “I’m not sure, he just said for us to meet him here, and he’d have something with him that would secure his position with Lord Kivar forever.” Isabelle blanched at his statement, but continued to eat and act as if she’d heard nothing. The door to the tavern opened and three more guardsmen walked in and joined the others. “Have you heard the news?” asked one of the new arrivals. “Do you mean about Lord Kivar marrying the Queen? Yes, we’ve heard it,” said the first guardsman guardedly. “No, that it is to happen in three days!” said one of the new arrivals. Isabelle gasped and dropped her eating utensil. It clattered against the dish, the sound seeming to echo throughout the room. She looked over at the guardsmen, and her stomach clenched when she realized they were all staring at her. <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a>

Posted: **Tue Sep 03, 2002 12:40 am**

omg! <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... ldblue.gif ALT=":blue"> who is liz gonna trust? who's tellin the truth? how the heck is isabelle gonna get out of this one? come back!

Posted: **Tue Sep 03, 2002 1:57 pm**

Oh wow....excellent little twist!! Tracie this story so does NOT suck!!!!! <center>*************<center>And I believe<center> <center>That angels breathe<center> <center>And that love will live on and never leave<center><center>*************<center>************* <center>The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return"

Posted: **Wed Sep 04, 2002 12:30 am**

Sacrifice A Sequel to Quietly into the Night Conventional Couples Rating: PG-13 Chapter Eighteen  Antar – Uzshtar City Isabelle looked over at the guardsmen and flashed a weak smile, and picked up Lexie. She rose and began to cross the room when one of the guardsmen stopped her. “Just a moment,” he said, blocking her path. Isabelle looked at him, but said nothing. “Your daughter,” the guardsman continued. “She is quite beautiful. She reminds me very much of my own daughter far away in Daajakara.” Isabelle smiled and managed to utter a passable thank you in Antarian and began to move passed the guardsman. “Wait!” he commanded. She stopped in her tracks, trying to conceal the fear that consumed her. The guardsman brushed a strand of Lexie’s hair away from her face and smiled. He said something to the child but Isabelle was too nervous to understand his speech. Lexie buried her face in her aunt’s shoulder, and the guardsmen gave a shout of laughter. The guard that stopped her reached into his pocket and pulled out a coin and handed it to Lexie. Isabelle looked over at Franchet who nodded slowly. She nudged Lexie and whispered in her ear that she should take the coil. Lexie lifted her head a bit and smiled at the guard and allowed him to present her with the coin. She quickly hid her head in Isabelle’s shoulder again, much to the amusement of the onlookers. Isabelle smiled again, and made her way over to where Franchet was standing. “Go out the front door and go around to the back of the building and come back in again through the kitchen. I’ll wait for you there.” She nodded and tightened her grip on Lexie and the two stepped outside. In the street, people were congregating to discuss the news of the upcoming wedding. The people were speaking so quickly that Isabelle had difficulty in catching the meaning of the many conversations that surrounded her. Giving up, she stepped around to the back of the building and entered the kitchen. As he promised, Franchet was waiting for her. He quickly escorted her into a small room, which Isabelle surmised was his office. Closing the door behind them he indicated that Isabelle should sit down. Once she was seated, he sat down across from her. “Princess, what has happened? Where is Naloch?” “Naloch, don’t you mean Nicoro?” she said bitterly. “What do you mean Princess? We left you safely with Naloch.” “And I’m telling you it wasn’t Naloch. It was Kivar’s second in command Nicoro. Somebody I don’t know but who certainly knew who I was.” Franchet stood up and began to pace in the small confines of the room. “This is unbelievable. Not that I doubt your word Princess, but I was certain he was Naloch. Please know that I never would have left you in his care had I known.” “Relax Franchet,” said Isabelle. “I know you didn’t know. Right before I killed him, I made a connection with him. I was able to see that you and Malik had no idea of his deception. After I killed him, Lexie and I made our way here to you. I didn’t know what else to do.” “You made a wise decision Princess, especially in light of the news I just heard.” “What news is that?” she asked. “I could hear people on the street talking about something but I wasn’t able to decipher what they were saying.” “There is to be a wedding Princess. In three days time, Lord Kivar will wed Queen Elizabeth, thus securing his position as ruler of Antar.” “What!” shouted Isabelle. “Franchet, you must get me back to Capitol City. I have to do something to stop this.” “Princess, I thought we decided it would be wiser to wait for the others to travel here to meet you. It is safer here.” “Plans change,” said Isabelle crisply. “There is no way in hell that Max will leave that city if he has heard about this farce of a wedding. I have to get back there, and I have to do it now!” “This will take some time to arrange Princess. We must secure safe transport for you and the little one.” Isabelle stood up and crossed the floor to where Franchet stood. “Look, I don’t care what it takes, and I keep telling you, I’m nobody’s princess. What I am is one pissed off woman who needs to go help rescue one of her dearest friends from the hands of a monster. I already lost two people I love to that bastard, I’m not going to lose another. Do you understand me? Because if you don’t, I am perfectly willing to find another way to make you understand,” she said in a deathly quiet voice, raising her hand and placing it on Franchet’s chest. Franchet looked down at the hand Isabelle had placed on his chest and gulped audibly. “Princess. Isabelle,” he amended quickly. “I realize that you have strong feelings about this, and we will get you back there as soon as possible, but your safety is tantamount. We cannot be rushed.” “As long as we understand each other,” she said grimly. “I suggest you start making the arrangements. Franchet left the room and Isabelle walked over to Lexie who had fallen asleep during the exchange with Franchet. “Lexie, sweetie. Can you wake up for me please?” The child opened her eyes and looked at her aunt sleepily. “Lexie, Auntie Isabelle has a big favor to ask you. Can you try and play your game with Kam for me? Tell Kam to tell Daddy that we are coming back to Capitol City. Can you remember that Lexie?” “Capitol City,” the child muttered in a sleepy voice. “Lexie,” said Isabelle a bit more sharply. “This is important. You have to try.” “Ok,” said Lexie, a crystalline tear perched on her eyelashes. “Oh Lexie, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to scare you,” said Isabelle. “It’s just really important that you try hard, ok? Auntie’s not mad at you. I’m just cranky because I’m tired.” “Maybe you should take a nap,” said Lexie in a small solemn voice. “When I get to be a cranky monster, Daddy always makes me take a nap.” “I wish I could Lexie,” said Isabelle, placing a kid on the child’s head. “I wish I could. But I’m going to sit here and watch while you take a nap instead. And remember, if you talk to Kam, what are you going to tell him?” “To tell Daddy we’re going to Capitol City.” Isabelle had just settled down comfortably in a chair with Lexie snuggled in her arms when there was a large crash from the restaurant. She tensed, but tried to remain calm when another large bang reverberated throughout the building. The door burst open and Franchet rushed inside. “Quickly Princess,” he said. There is no time to lose. The guardsmen are tearing the place apart out there. Word has been spread that Commander Nicoro’s transmitter signal has been lost. We must get you out of here now!” Isabelle said nothing; she just hefted Lexie up into her arms and followed Franchet out the door.  Antar – Royal Palace Liz sat quietly, trying to decide what to do. She was unsure of whom she should listen to. She tried to contact first Kam, and then Kyle but with no luck. The door to her chambers slid open and Kivar walked in. “Elizabeth, you look rather pale,” he said gazing down at her. “I have recently learned that I have only three days to plan a wedding Kivar, it tends to take a lot out of the average woman,” she said dryly. “Is that all that is worrying you?” “Well, let me see, you lied to me about the date of our wedding. It leads me to believe that perhaps you have lied about other things as well, like the safety of my son, and my friend.” “Elizabeth, relax. I gave you my word, and I will not go back on it. I only changed the date of our wedding because I am most anxious to make you my bride. Is there anything else you may require at this time Elizabeth?” “No, I think not, I believe I shall just get some rest,” answered Liz. “So be it,” said Kivar walking towards the door. “Kivar, wait!” she cried. “Perhaps you could instruct somebody to bring me a warm drink? Would that be possible?” “A warm drink you wish, a warm drink you shall have Elizabeth. If all your requests are as simple as this, I foresee our married life as being quite enjoyable.” Kivar left the room, the door sliding shut behind him. “I foresee you rotting in hell you stupid bastard,” said Liz. Several minutes later, the door slid open again, and a servant walked in, left a tray on the table and left quickly. Liz picked up the drink and quickly dumped it out. She looked under the napkin on the tray for a note, but there was nothing. “Damn it,” she said. “I wish I had a clue what to do next Several hours later, a guard in the security center sat up and stared at his security screen. “We have an alarm in the Queen’s quarters,” he said. “They had one earlier today, it was false, but we should probably send someone down to make sure everything is safe.” He spoke into a control panel and dispatched several guards to check the suite. When they arrived, opened the door to find the room engulfed in flames. Rushing in they began to make a search of the room. “We must find the queen!” cried one of the guards. He made his way towards the room Liz used for sleeping, while the other began to search the main living quarters. The room was so filled with smoke that he failed to notice Liz hiding in the corner. While his back was turned, she slipped out the open door. Turning around, she passed her hand over the security panel, and the door slid back into place. She knew it wouldn’t hold the guards for long, but she figured it would buy her a few minutes. She had never been this way, but Kyle had described the way to the hidden passage so many times that she could recite it in her sleep. She located the dank room that Kyle had described and pressed the bricks in the wall. She held her breath until the door slid open. Stepping through the doorway quickly, she fumbled for the switch. She heard feet pounding, and the sound of voices coming closer. She searched in the dark until she finally found the switch and flipped it, causing the door to slide shut just as Kivar’s soldiers burst into the room. <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a> Edited by: <A HREF=http://pub129.ezboard.com/umajiklmoon.s ... iklmoon</A> <IMG HEIGHT=10 WIDTH=10 SRC="http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/images/moon18.gif" BORDER=0> at: 9/4/02 8:04:32 am

Posted: **Wed Sep 04, 2002 8:36 am**

<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... m/eek2.gif ALT=":jawdrop"> Please let her have gotten away...this story has too much suspense Tracie...you are killing me! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /frown.gif ALT=":("> One teeny tiny error...you have a paragraph were Franchet is telling Isabelle that Kivar is going to marry Queen Isabelle...I believe you mean Queen Elizabeth. <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... n_anim.gif ALT=":grin"> <img src=http://216.40.241.68/contrib/fk/flowerkitty.gif ALT=":kitty"> <center>*************<center>And I believe<center> <center>That angels breathe<center> <center>And that love will live on and never leave<center><center>*************<center>************* <center>The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return"

Posted: **Wed Sep 04, 2002 9:15 am**

thanks for the heads up Melisa...i found I fixed <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a>

Posted: **Wed Sep 04, 2002 11:51 am**

Go Isabelle!

Posted: **Wed Sep 04, 2002 12:16 pm**

Wow !! I love the story Hi Majikl !! I am here !! To be honest I must say I love the fanfics similar to S1 , but you really caught me with your writing. I cant wait to your next post. A question : Once you finish your story , there is a way I can download it to my computer ? I want it printed <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> Take care and keep writing !! love Virginia

Posted: **Wed Sep 04, 2002 5:01 pm**

WOW!!! <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... m/eek2.gif ALT=":jawdrop"> I loved the first one, but this one is better!!!!! <center> <a href=http://www.fortunecity.com="_blank"> <img src="http://www.fortunecity.com/victorian/st ... mara01.gif" border="0"></a> </center>

Posted: **Wed Sep 04, 2002 7:18 pm**

omg! my mouth keeps droppin lower and lower. just plain evil <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /devil.gif ALT=":evil"> jk...

Posted: **Wed Sep 04, 2002 10:50 pm**

Sacrifice A Sequel to Quietly into the Night Conventional Couples Rating: PG-13 Chapter Nineteen  Roswell, New Mexico Maria lay in bed, with little Beth cradled in her arms as she nursed. She traced a finger over the downy head of her little girl, amazed that she and Michael were able to create something so remarkable. Maria closed her eyes and dozed while her daughter fed. As she rested, images filled her mind. Peaceful images at first, dreams of her and Michael and the baby. But just as quickly, the images turned from dreams to flashes of Michael on Antar. She saw the reunion with Kyle and Kam. She felt Michael’s frustration at not being able to locate Isabelle and Lexie, and finally his rage when he heard that Liz was to marry Kivar. Her eyes snapped open, and Beth, sensing the change in her mother began to scream. Maria soothed her baby, and sang her to sleep. Once she had Beth nestled back in her cradle, she reached for the phone and began to dial before she realized that she was the only one left. Everyone else was gone. She got up out of the bed and walked out the French doors leading from the bedroom to the balcony Michael had added to the house. She looked up into the night sky, her heart heavy.  How did Max stand it? She thought to herself.  I don’t know, maybe it was even worse for him. He never knew if Liz was alive or dead. No, that’s not true, she admitted to herself.  Max never doubted that she was alive. That was my job. And now, I’m here while all of them fight to bring my best friend home. The nucleus of a plan began to form in her mind, but she resolutely shoved it aside. Maria walked back into the bedroom and checked on the baby one more time. She turned on the baby monitor and walked down stairs, trying to keep quiet so she didn’t wake her mother and Jim, who were sleeping in the guest bedroom. In the kitchen, she made herself a snack and sat down at the kitchen table. A few minutes later, Jim walked into the kitchen and smiled at her. “Can’t sleep?” he asked. “Kind of,” she mumbled through her peanut butter sandwich. “I was feeding Beth, and I dozed a bit, and I started having these dreams about Michael and Beth and myself, but they changed to flashes. I was getting flashes from Michael on Antar.” “You got flashes? You mean he tried to contact you, right?” asked Jim “No, it wasn’t like that. I think it’s because I was feeding the baby. I mean I have this incredible bond with this wonderful little baby that Michael and I created, and so does he. This baby is a part of him, so of course she has a bond with him too.” As Maria spoke, Jim rummaged through the refrigerator and poured himself a glass of milk. “That makes sense,” he said when she was finished. “Do you think the connection came because you were feeding the baby?” ”Yeah, all the books say it’s the ultimate connection between a mother and her child, so it kind of makes sense.” “Do you want to tell me what you saw?” Jim asked. “I mean if it’s something personal and all, you don’t have to, but I have to admit, I am curious.” “No, it’s ok, I think you need to hear this, I and I have to tell somebody, and I think I need your advice about something too. First off, you should know that Max and Michael are with Kyle and Kam. Kyle is alright Jim, he is safe.” “Oh that is good to hear,” said Jim, the relief visible on his face. But wait. What about the others? Where are Lexie and Liz and Isabelle?” “I’m not sure about Isabelle and Lexie,” said Maria. “Maria, what about Liz? What aren’t you telling me?” Maria tried to speak, but her eyes welled up with tears. She tried to catch her breath, and it was several minutes before she was able to continue. “I got such a feeling of rage and frustration from Michael. Liz is supposed to marry Kivar. I don’t even get that. How can he be alive? I killed him myself. I saw his body on the ground!” she shouted. “Maria, calm down,” said Jim. “You’ll wake your mother and Beth, and right now, I don’t think you are in any shape to handle either of them.” “You’re right,” said Maria taking a deep breath. “I need to calm down. The think is, I don’t know if I should tell Liz’s parents about this. I mean, they should be told, but I don’t think I can do it. I just can’t.” “I don’t think you should tell them,” said Jim decisively. “Not until we have concrete proof.” He held up a warning hand to forestall the outburst he knew was coming from Maria. “Listen Maria, I believe you when you say you got these flashes, but until we get some other type of confirmation, I don’t think we should say anything to get them any more worried than they already are.” Maria stood up and placed her glass in the dishwasher. “You’re probably right Jim,” she said. “Thanks for listening.” “Maria, I should be thanking you. You told me my son was all right. He is healthy, and with friends. You don’t have any idea how that makes me feel.” “Well, I’m glad I could help someone then,” said Maria. “Look, I’m beat, I’m going to head back to bed. Beth is probably getting ready to wake up anyhow, and I don’t want to let her scream the house down.” She leaned over and kissed Jim on the cheek and walked back upstairs, thoughts multiplying in her head at an alarming rate.  Antar – Capitol City “Michael, Michael!” called Max. “Michael, snap out of it, will you?” Michael shook his head and looked at his friend. “Sorry, I was a million miles away,” he said. “Yeah, back on earth with a new baby, I bet,” said Max, giving his friend an understanding look. “Yeah, exactly. I just had this moment when I felt incredibly close to Maria and the baby. Like they could read my mind or something. Ok, what are we doing here?” “We’re trying to decide if we should stay here and try and get more information about Liz, or if we should travel on to Uzshtar City and try and find Lexie and Isabelle. What do you think?” ”Well, has Kyle or Kam been able to reach either one of them, or Liz for that matter?” “No, that’s part of the problem. If we could reach any of them, we’d have a better idea of what we should do. As it is, we’re flying blind.” “Kyle, what do you think?” asked Michael. “Do you have any ideas at all?” “Well, the one thing I do know is we shouldn’t split up. Logically, it makes sense for some of us to stay here, while the others go searching for Isabelle and Lexie, but in this case, logic doesn’t play into it.” “I don’t understand Kyle,” said Jereon. “Logic should always be used when making decisions.” “Oh great, now he’s Mr. Spock,” said Michael.” “Mr. Spock?” said Jereon. “I’m afraid I don’t understand.” “Never mind,” said Kyle, shooting Michael a nasty look. “The thing is Jereon. We’ve tried splitting up before, and the one thing we’ve learned that we are strongest as a group.” “Well, if that is the case, then I believe we should remain here and try and gather information regarding the Queen. She is in the greater danger. The Princess and Lexie are with my father. He will keep them safe,” said Jereon.” Saranara and Kam joined the group. “My brother is right,” she said. “If Isabelle and Lexie are with my father, then they are safe. He will protect them.” Michael looked at Max and he nodded slowly. “Ok then, I agree. We stay here and try and find out what’s happening with Liz. The one thing I do know is that she isn’t marrying Kivar willingly. He’s either forcing her to do it, or she’s going along with it to buy herself some time, but she isn’t going to marry that bastard.” “Agreed,” said Michael. “Ok then, why don’t we head back to your shop,” he said looking at Jereon and Saranara. “We can stay in the tunnels as much as possible while you two gather what information you can.” “It is easy to see why you were such a good general,” said Jereon. “You think quickly and act fast. Those are good traits in a leader.” Michael flushed at the compliment, shrugged it off and continued. “We should get moving, the longer we wait, the more information we may miss.” The small band traveled back through the tunnels until the reached the room under the shop. Saranara and Jereon exited the tunnel first and climbed up into the storeroom. Once they were certain that the shop was empty, they signaled the others to come up into the storeroom. While Jereon gathered supplies to make their stay underground more comfortable, Saranara and Kyle went out into the city to gather information. “You look funny to me with your hair that color, and a beard,” said Saranara. “Well, funny isn’t quite the look I was going for, but as long as nobody recognizes me, I’m fine with it,” said Kyle. “Well, I can still tell it’s you,” said the Antarian girl squeezing his hand gently. “I will always know it’s you.” Kyle stopped walking and pulled Saranara into his arms and kissed her passionately. “And I would always know you as well,” he said. He reluctantly released her and the two continued down the road to a well-known eating establishment with strong ties to the rebel faction that opposed Kivar. Kyle opened the door and allowed Saranara to enter the large room first. Once inside, his senses were hit with an avalanche of sights, sounds and smells. The two ordered a large quantity of food to take home. “Saranara,” greeted the owner. “Any word on your father yet?” “No Driden, there isn’t,” said the girl as they waited for their order. “Who’s your friend,” said Driden, nodding at Kyle. “This is Tridoc, a cousin to my father. He came to offer his assistance when he heard that my father was missing,” she said, knowing full well that Driden knew her father had no other family. Driden looked at Kyle and nodded before replying. “Good, good, family is important at a time like this. Have you heard the latest news?” he asked passing them their bundles. ”About the Queen marrying Kivar? Yes, I have.” “Fine state of affairs when the wife of the true king is forced to marry that,” he began, but was interrupted by someone rushing through the door and shouting. “Fire, fire at the royal palace! The palace is on fire!” “Good, and I hope that usurper roasts,” muttered Driden. Kyle looked at Saranara and the two quickly grabbed their packages. “Driden, we must go right away. If you hear anything else,” she paused. “I’ll let you know,” he said. <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a>

Posted: **Thu Sep 05, 2002 12:11 am**

<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... ldblue.gif ALT=":blue"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> chapters get better and better <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... kliam2.gif ALT=":hotpink">

Posted: **Thu Sep 05, 2002 9:35 am**

You amaze and astound me with your talent and ideas!  I am not worthy! <center>*************<center>And I believe<center> <center>That angels breathe<center> <center>And that love will live on and never leave<center><center>*************<center>************* <center>The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return"

Posted: **Thu Sep 05, 2002 9:09 pm**

Okay I'm back and having so much fun reading all the great chapters that you have but up. I am crossing my fingers that Liz got out without a trace. I really don't know who Liz should believe either. Please don't let Maria do something stupid like trying to go to Antar. I really have the feeling that is about to happen. Glad that Michael could feel the connection with Maria and the baby. Well I look forward to reading more so please hurry back. <center>*Denise*

Posted: **Fri Sep 06, 2002 2:57 pm**

Amazing, beautiful !! Tracie , I can´t wait for the next chapter <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> :D Pleaseeeeeee !!!!

Posted: **Sat Sep 07, 2002 10:21 pm**

well guys, i'll be brutally honest....I have a direction in mind for this story, but I don't LIKE it very much. My muse and I are arguing about this point even as we speak..... I just don't know what to do at this point <img src=http://www.contrabandent.com/cwm/s/cont ... m/sad2.gif ALT=":pout"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /frown.gif ALT=":("> <img src=http://www.contrabandent.com/cwm/s/cont ... m/sad2.gif ALT=":pout"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /frown.gif ALT=":("> <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a> Edited by: <A HREF=http://pub129.ezboard.com/umajiklmoon.s ... iklmoon</A> <IMG HEIGHT=10 WIDTH=10 SRC="http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/images/moon18.gif" BORDER=0> at: 9/8/02 4:56:52 pm

Posted: **Sat Sep 07, 2002 10:38 pm**

awww. sorry to hear that. but i'm sure watever u do, it'll be great <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... tongue.gif ALT=":b"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)">

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