Island Breeze/Gerry's Updates
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Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere
Chapter 69 (Family Affairs)
is posted.
Ee-l'wee gets to know her father, and GaBo meets his mother; both deal with unexpected surprises; and they get a small sample of what it's going to be like to be royalty.
Chapter 69 (Family Affairs)
is posted.
Ee-l'wee gets to know her father, and GaBo meets his mother; both deal with unexpected surprises; and they get a small sample of what it's going to be like to be royalty.
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Gerry
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Hopeless Candy-Coated, Stargazing, Dreamer!
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Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere
Chapter 70 (The Thing About A Kiss)
is posted.
GaBo gives his first kingly advice, and plans for the wedding and coronation begin in ernest.
Chapter 70 (The Thing About A Kiss)
is posted.
GaBo gives his first kingly advice, and plans for the wedding and coronation begin in ernest.
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Angie
Re: Island Breeze/Gerry's Updates
I just read this, Gerry, and it was wonderful as always! 
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Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere
Chapter 71 (Two Weddings And A Coronation, Part 1 ~Ahsht'kan~ )
is posted.
As the day of their coronation and wedding arrives, the Wizard reveals the real reason why Aklat and Olievek became two planets. Then, as GaBo and Ee-l'wee get dressed for their coronation and wedding, they each receive guests. Ee-l'wee has an interesting conversation with GaBo's sister, Tish, and GaBo receives a visit and pep talk from Shaqor then has a mysterious and unexpected visitor who puts his loyalties to a test in a serious way.
Chapter 71 (Two Weddings And A Coronation, Part 1 ~Ahsht'kan~ )
is posted.
As the day of their coronation and wedding arrives, the Wizard reveals the real reason why Aklat and Olievek became two planets. Then, as GaBo and Ee-l'wee get dressed for their coronation and wedding, they each receive guests. Ee-l'wee has an interesting conversation with GaBo's sister, Tish, and GaBo receives a visit and pep talk from Shaqor then has a mysterious and unexpected visitor who puts his loyalties to a test in a serious way.
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Angie
Re: Island Breeze/Gerry's Updates
I've just finished reading it, Gerry, and I am stupefied as to who is the bad guy and who isn't! I think that it's Ahst'kan, but as he continued on, I got to thinking back about how Zorolonos acted when he had GaBo and Ee-l'wee hide as he left for a space of time...could he be the deceiver after everything he's said and done? I'm really wondering and hopeful that the Wizard who has become Ee-l'wee's and GaBo's friend is who he says he is and not an imposter! Wonderful update, Gerry! 
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Thanks, Angie! I loved your feedback! It made me smile! You're right. Zorolonos, if he is Zorolonos, has done some things that look suspicious in retrospect, and Ahsht'kan is taking advantage of that, though he could be telling the truth. Anyway, this part will reveal who is lying and who is not.
Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere
Chapter 72 (Two Weddings And A Coronation, Part 2 ~The Choice~ )
is posted.
GaBo and Ee-l'wee are forced to make a difficult choice, and what may be at stake is their own souls as well as Aklat-O'lievek and all its people.
Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere
Chapter 72 (Two Weddings And A Coronation, Part 2 ~The Choice~ )
is posted.
GaBo and Ee-l'wee are forced to make a difficult choice, and what may be at stake is their own souls as well as Aklat-O'lievek and all its people.
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Gerry
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Hopeless Candy-Coated, Stargazing, Dreamer!
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Angie
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Hi Gerry! I just finished reading this wonderfully awesome chapter and gave some feedback as well!
As I said, I was nervous about who was telling the truth, initially, but I was happy that Zorolonos was the real Wizard!
I loved how the ladies (including Ee-l'wee's mom!) came and helped fix her up and how shocked that GaBo was upon seeing her!
I thought it was funny how Ahsht'kan's behind got singed! LOL! And how Yulee got to be the one who took him out to the Great Northern Mountains! That scene was funny to me!
The coronation was really neat as well as the donning of the crowns on King GaBo and Queen Ee-l'wee!
I loved it!

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Thanks, Angie! We will see Ahsht'kan briefly again in the epilogue, but he won't be bothering Ee-l'wee and GaBo anymore. I really enjoyed your feedback! It's always the highlight of my day.
Gerry
Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere
Chapter 72 (Two Weddings And A Coronation, Part 3 ~One Heart - Forever~ )
is posted.
GaBo and Ee-l'wee are finally married.
Gerry
Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere
Chapter 72 (Two Weddings And A Coronation, Part 3 ~One Heart - Forever~ )
is posted.
GaBo and Ee-l'wee are finally married.
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Re: Island Breeze/Gerry's Updates
Memories Of The Blue Planet
Chapter 5 (Tar Pits and Glass Islands)
is posted in Original Works... temporarily.
Chapter 5 (Tar Pits and Glass Islands)
is posted in Original Works... temporarily.
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Angie
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Re: Island Breeze/Gerry's Updates
I just read it Gerry and it was a great update!!! 
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Thanks, Angie!
Memories Of The Blue Planet
Chapter 6 (Mango's Pub & Grill)
is posted in Original Works... temporarily.
Memories Of The Blue Planet
Chapter 6 (Mango's Pub & Grill)
is posted in Original Works... temporarily.
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Re: Island Breeze/Gerry's Updates
I read it earlier Gerry and it rocked!!! 
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Re: requesting email of Ch 47
I would love to read Chapter 47, I have read all the others and patiently wait for the completion of the unfinished ones. Please email me Ch 47. I thank you very much for your time.
Starlescia
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Starlescia
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Island Breeze wrote:I have a new chapter of Ee-l'wee, Ch 47, "The Hour of the Nadinbolas." If anyone is interested, I'll e-mail it to you on request. Or if enough people want it posted here and request it I'll post it here. It's Serwhu and Larna's turn to go home... but do they even know where they live on Yargish? It's a big planet, and they don't have a clue... so what will become of them?
Gerry