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My Life, My Story (teen)

Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2006 6:50 pm
by incognito-sticks
This is just a typical teenager story and i wrote it acidentally it follows the trials and tribulations of a teenage girl and what she goes through in everyday life. It'll make you laugh and it'l make you cry but i hope you enjoy it.
i hope to be a regular updater



Why can’t we be together? Oh yes that’s right he has a girlfriend and she just happens to be a very good friend of mine. But were the perfect couple! Same interests, same sense of style, love the same music. Ahh but there’s that one little problem. HE HAS A GIRLFRIEND. Why can’t I be her? Hmm maybe because your not 5 foot 8 and beautiful, maybe because you 5 foot and a fart and have roots like shakira. Why does life have to be so unfair?

Alexis had been having the worst inner consciences battle with herself, she was contemplating what to do. You see the problem was she was in Love. Oh yes those 4 fatal letters that leads everyone into their final impending death. If a bus of cancer won’t finish you off Love sure as hell will Alexis grandfather use to say, until he died of a heart attack. Thanks gramps give me one piece of advice and don’t even live up to it. Alexis thought to herself.

You see Alexis had a problem. Well not really a problem more of a dilemma. And the dilemma was that she has fallen head over heals in love with her friend Jake. Jake wasn’t particularly that good looking. He didn’t have the type of looks that would stop you in the street and make you go “Hello hot stuff” but he had something about him and he always had. She had secretly crushed on him ever since they meet 8 years ago through mutual friends and since then they have always kept in touch but know since their spending more time together her feelings have developed from a simple crush to something more deeper, something that words cannot describe, something that makes her heart flutter and her belly do various flip flops. This something was love. But he couldn’t see it.

To him Alexis was simply his gal pal, one of the guys, well that’s how he treated her. He saw her as tough, kick-ass, take no shit. But that’s how she wanted him to see her. At First.

So what does she do? Go on and act/pretend that she feels nothing. Acting, she should be good at that by know, she was doing it everyday she deserves an Oscar. And pretending that’s what she’s been doing for the last couple of months while these feelings have been digging themselves soo deep it’s a wonder there not in china. Or does she let down her tough ass walls and stop acting and finally tell him the truth.

Unlikely.

I’m Alexis Bailey and this is MY life


feedback is greatly appreciated thanks
incognit-sticks aka pheobe

Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:43 pm
by Island Breeze
Great start! :clap :thumbsup I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. :D
She had secretly crushed on him ever since they meet 8 years ago through mutual friends and since then they have always kept in touch but know since their spending more time together her feelings have developed from a simple crush to something more deeper, something that words cannot describe, something that makes her heart flutter and her belly do various flip flops. This something was love. But he couldn’t see it.


Yep! Sounds like the age-old story of teen-age love! :wink:

Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 8:32 pm
by majiklmoon
you wrote it accidentally :lol :) great job

update 30 july

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 1:05 pm
by incognito-sticks
Sorry it took me so long to get this out, this is just another short update, i thought that no one was intrested so i nearly gave up, but due to feedback from island breeze and majik i've decide to continue. thanks for the feedback. p.s im changing the story just a bit it won't be as childlike as i thought. it will be a little deeper, it will look at what everyday teenagers go through aswell, and a warning at times it will get dark.
(':twisted:')
thanks for reading incognito-sticks aka pheobe


Chapter 2
"These heels were made for walking"

"Ok tight jeans, tick."

"tight t-shirt, tick"

"not too much make-up. tick"

"big-ass heels which are likely to kill me. tick"

Alexis looked at her self in the mirror and did'nt recognise herself, in the mirror she saw...well she saw a slutty bimbo. And to be quite honest that was definelty not Alexis.

"My god i can't believe im doing this, and for a guy, this is so not me"

"knock knock, Al, are u decent"

At Alexis bedroom door was her best friend, B, her full name was beatrix moore, but Alexis always called her B , or sometimes trixy, to piss her off.

"Hey B, hang on let me throw on a shirt" Alexis shouted, while kicking of her toe crushing slutty high heels, if B saw them she was sure to laugh and tell her to get real, she was a member of a band not a member of the Pussycat Dolls.

"Ok come in" Alexis declared after making sure her "secret heels" were well hid from anyones sight, let alone B's

"Hey girl, you ready to go" B started to say as she opened the door.But she was instantly distracted by Alexis' disheveld look.

"Are you ok Al your looking a little flushed" B asked with worry and confusion

"I'm fine" Alexis answered after blowing a piece of wild hair from infront of her face.

"Perfecto, in-fact, so who's driving me or queen B" Alexis asked with humour in her voice.

"well it seems my dear Al that my dear, dear car is in the shop, after through no fault of my own" Alexis gave a snicker knowing where this was going. But B did'nt hear her or she chose to ignore it and continued "an idiot drove into me last and has made a dent in my dear baby so know we are going to have to flintstone it to school in your chitty chitty bang bang." B threw an arm around her friend and gave her a huge smile.

"Hey watch it or you will be walking" Alexis gave her friend a warning glare that was dripping with humour.

"Ahh Alexis im offended" B put her hand on her heart as a sign of pain and mock horror. "Are you telling me that you are willing to leave your best, most closest friend, the person, who would willingly take a bullet and die for you out in the cold"

"Exactly" Alexis deadpanned.

"And B its 40 degrees outside, noway would you freeze. But if you keep dissing my car trixy you WILL be walking." Alexis finaly answered as she opened the door to her ford transam.


"Yes my dear Al, and thank you for letting me have the gracious honour to ride in your here golden chariot" B said with sarcasm and got in the car.

"Hey at least i don't treat my chariot like a bumper car, how many times have you trashed it now trix" Alexis said with a gleam in her eye, o yes she had her friend.

"What is it 5, 6 times"

"8" B wispered."

"What was that trix i did'nt hear you" Alexis was bursting to laugh.

"8 ok" B answered defeated.

"Oh yes cause its the magic number" Alexis sang the last part and then was hysterical.

"Just drive nerd"

B and Alexis drove to school laughing. This was a regular thing, their play arguing and B dissing Alexis car. they both never got old of it. And they both hoped they never would. They had been friends since they were 4 and they were together all the time and both were to pained to think about next year when they would be seperated and go to different collages.
But they avoided that by not talking or thinking abut it, they were best friends who knew everything about one another.

Or so they thought....

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 3:05 pm
by Island Breeze
Or so they thought, huh? I think there are secrets here. :wink: But you said there would be!
"big-ass heels which are likely to kill me. tick"
:lol

Yep! :thumbsup