Tomorrow's Yet to Come ~ epilogue ~ 11/4/04 - COMPLETE

Roswell Aliens · Post by **Roswell Aliens** » Mon Oct 11, 2004 4:08 pm

you stopped too soon. I need the rest of the story. Isabel isn't dead is she??? Is Zan king??<img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap">

Post by **majiklmoon** » Mon Oct 11, 2004 4:47 pm

muwhahahah i'll never tell <center>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center>

Post by **majiklmoon** » Mon Oct 11, 2004 6:57 pm

Oh Roselle, no sweetie that wasnt' for you <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/lol.gif ALT=":lol"> It was for someone wanting to know whta happened to Isabel <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/wink.gif ALT=";)"> The song is Invincible I'm going to send you the lyrics. I don't want to post them because they will be used in the story later on. <center>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center> Edited by: <A HREF=http://p199.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrea ... iklmoon</A> at: 10/11/04 7:24 pm

Post by **Ti88** » Mon Oct 11, 2004 7:00 pm

you know tracie i don't know if that was for me or not. it was probably for all questions...come on. all i want to know is the words to the song or the title or something. i'm not asking for plot or anything. so i think you should answer my question. Roselle The Techie Connection "'Cause frankly, looking at you looking like me is kinda whacked.'" - Michael from Son of M&M by kLyn "If we don't change, we don't grow. If we don't grow, we aren't really living." -Gail Sheehy Egyptain Dwelling Silly Sister

Post by **majiklmoon** » Mon Oct 11, 2004 9:25 pm

Disclaimer: Roswell, and its characters do not belong to me. Melinda Metz, Jason Katims and 20th Century Fox have that particular pleasure. I’m simply borrowing them until the Season 2 DVD’s get released. Chapter Sixty – Seven – The Battle Part Two “Isabel, Isabel, wake up. Don’t be dead, Isabel.” Isabel, moving upward through the layers of consciousness groaned. “Maria?” she whispered. “See, I kept my promise, I’m not dead. I just wish I was.” “That’s good, but I’m not Maria,” said the voice. Isabel struggled against the fog that clouded her mind and she forced herself to open her eyes. The image in front of her wavered in and out of focus, and Isabel blinked her eyes several times, unwilling to believe what she was seeing. “Sheriff Valenti?” she asked, shocked. “Is that you? What are you doing here? Oh, please, don’t tell me I had an accident and this has all been some type of Dallas shower dream?” “It’s me, Isabel. I’m here, and let me tell you, I was so worried when I saw, hell, what did I see? It looked like you, knocking you unconscious.” Isabel groaned as she pulled herself to a sitting position. “What are you doing here?” she asked. “Never mind that, HOW did you get here?” “Well I’m here because I didn’t like the thought of you kids fighting a war without some back up,” explained Jim. “Jim, we have half the damn world behind us,” said Isabel. “Well, now you have half the damn world plus one behind you,” said Jim. “As for how I got here, that’s a little bit more complicated. We don’t really need to go into it now.” “Yes, we do,” said Isabel, her voice growing suspicious. “As a matter of fact, I think we need to go into a couple of things, right now. First, tell me exactly how you got here.” She held up her hand and pressed it against Jim’s chest. “Or you will be very sorry.” Jim swallowed deeply, trying to calm the fear that rose in his chest. This was an Isabel he had never seen before, a serious and deadly Isabel. He wiped a bead of sweat from his brow and prepared to explain. “I met Che’koth in the pod chamber, and he explained about the belts that Alex had created. I helped him round up the rebels, and we brought them back to the pod chamber to transport out. I didn’t think it made a lot of sense to have people disappearing in downtown Roswell.” At this comment, Isabel smiled recalling Kyle’s reaction when he found out he and his father were thinking the same way. “Anyhow, I told Che’koth I wanted to go back with him to help you, and he disagreed. So I persuaded him that he was wrong,” explained Jim. “Persuaded him, how?” questioned Isabel, not liking the tone of his voice. “With the butt of my service revolver,” Jim admitted. “I whacked him over the head and knocked him out. I grabbed his belt and here I am.” “Che’koth went down to Earth yesterday,” said Isabel suspiciously. “Where have you been since then?” “Lying in a huddled mass in some tunnel,” said Jim. “I guess space travel doesn’t agree with me. I slept for what seemed like forever. I followed some people out of the tunnel today, but I didn’t realize it was all of you until you were out of sight.” “This is all quite well and good,” said Isabel, almost convinced. “But I’m still not sure. Give me one good reason why I should kill you right here.” “Because I never told your parents I caught you and Alex parking out in Millers Woods one night when you were supposed to be at the library,” said Jim. “Sheriff, it really is you!” cried Isabel. She threw herself into the sheriff’s arms and hugged him tightly. “How are our parents? How is everybody?” “Everybody was fine,” said Jim. “Or they were the last time I saw them.” “Look we need to get out of here,” said Isabel. “Follow me.” “Follow you?” Jim asked. “Isabel, you can barely sit up, let alone lead me anywhere. What happened back there anyhow? Who was that other person?” “The guy was Kivar,” said Isabel. “The woman, well she was another me; a plaything he made for himself.” “A plaything he made for himself?” queried Jim. “Yeah, you know, a duplicate, a clone. Kivar wanted Vilondra, and when she wouldn’t bow down to him, he killed her, but he realized that he needed her, so he made himself a new one,” Isabel explained bitterly. “Now help me up, we need to get out of here before he gets back.” Jim stood up and helped Isabel to her feet and helped her down the hallway. “Why did she do that to you?” asked Jim. “Or should I be asking why didn’t she kill you?” “I don’t know,” said Isabel. “She can’t speak, and I heard that she doesn’t really think. She just wanders around after Kivar, like a little puppy dog.” “Were are we heading now?” asked Jim. “Someplace where you can rest, I hope.” “Up here,” said Isabel, pointing to a staircase. “We’re meeting Maria and the rest of our team at the throne room. We’re going to try and seal it off so that Kivar can’t get in there again.” “Can you do that?” Jim asked, helping Isabel up the stairs. “We’ll find out in a second,” said Isabel. “Look there they are.” “Um, Isabel, why do you have someone who looks suspiciously like Sheriff Valenti with you?” Maria asked, her voice trembling. “Possibly because it is Sheriff Valenti,” said Isabel. “Okay, Isabel, why are you practically being carried by Sheriff Valenti?” “Because I tracked down Kivar, and his little Vilondra clone knocked me out.” “I don’t suppose you though to bring any cedar oil with you?” Maria asked Jim who shook his head. “I give up,” said Maria, throwing her hands up in the air. “We had a plan. I specifically remember a plan. But is anybody following the plan? No, I don’t think so.” “Focus Maria, focus,” said Isabel. “I’m here, we’re following the plan now.” “Can you do it?” Maria asked. “I’m going to try. Get the others to guard my back. You watch the sheriff,” she added in an undertone. “I’ll do this as quick as I can, and we’ll get the hell out of here.” Isabel walked up to the throne room door and placed her hand over it. She focused intently on the memories Che’koth had implanted until she found what she needed. A burst of light shot out from her hand, and the door to the throne room disappeared, leaving only the Antarian Seal in its place. “That was too cool,” said Maria, rushing over to Isabel, dragging the sheriff along with her. “Are you okay?” “Surprisingly, I feel better,” said Isabel. “Stronger even. Come on, we need to get outside.” The rebels, along with Isabel, Maria and Jim Valenti rushed down several staircases, and back out the side entrance. The battle raged around them, and Maria led them to a stand of trees that would provide some shelter while the organized themselves. Isabel grabbed one of the rebels and pulled her to one side. “Do you see that man?” she asked, pointing to the sheriff. “Yes, Princess,” said Lynran. “Your job is to guard him with your life. Do whatever you have to do to keep him safe. He must be protected at all costs. Do you understand me?” “Yes Princess,” answered the woman. “Thank you Lynran,” said Isabel. “He is a very special friend to the royal family. People!” she shouted. “We need to make our way around to the front of the palace. Are you with me?” “We are with you, Princess!” shouted the rebels. “We are with you!” _________________________________ Kivar himself led the next wave of Aberjani’s out into the courtyard. He jumped up on a pile of rubble and began to scream directions. As he shouted, his eyes searched the approaching rebel forces until his gaze locked in on his hated enemy. “Give up, Zan!” he shouted at Max. “I killed you once, I’ll kill you again!” “Surrender Kivar!” Max yelled. “Surrender and we’ll let you live.” “Fool!” shouted Kivar. “Haven’t you learned anything? There is no mercy for those weaker than you. You are too softhearted Zan. It has always been your greatest weakness!” A loud explosion filled the air, and bright flash of light blinded everyone temporarily. Panicked shouts filled the air as everyone tried to figure out exactly what had happened. “Shit, Maxwell, look!” Michael shouted pointing to the top of the palace. Max along with the others looked up to where Michael was pointing. There atop the highest part of the castle was the Granolith, and it filled the air around it with a shimmering light. “The Granolith,” people around Max whispered in awe. “The Granolith is back.” “Max, focus!” shouted Liz, pushing to the ground as a bolt of energy passed over his head. “You have to focus, no matter what. Remember what Che’koth said?” “I don’t know what kind of foolish trick this is, Zan!” shouted Kivar. “But it’s too late. The Granolith can’t help you. Kill him!” Several Aberjani hefted their weapons and pointed into the growing crowd of rebels, but more threw their weapons to the ground and ran towards the rebels, their hands raised in the universal sign of surrender. Max reached down and grabbed one of the weapons and pointed it at Kivar. “Go ahead, Zan!” shouted Kivar. “Do it. Nothing would give me greater pleasure!” “As you wish,” said Max. He depressed the firing mechanism and watched with satisfaction as the energy bolt went straight to Kivar’s heart, incinerating him. “No!” came the angry shout, and Max spun around to see General Kobodi battling his way towards him. He ran towards Max, his arm extended as he prepared to shoot a bolt of energy at the king he killed once already. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a figure tackled him and sent him flying to the ground. “You son of a fucking bitch!” shouted Kyle. “I’ve been waiting to do this for to fucking long. He began to beat Kobodi with his fists shouting as he did. “You killed her you bastard. You raped and killed her, and now, I’m going to kill you! You are a worthless piece of shit!” Kyle was so intent on destroying Kobodi that he failed to notice one of the remaining Aberjani sneak up behind him and pull him off of Kobodi and throw him to the ground. “You weak and worthless trash,” Kobodi snapped, through the blood that filled his mouth. “Who is it that you defend so honorably? No matter. I’ll kill you where you stand.” “Kyle, look out!” screamed Ava. “Ah, so that’s it,” said Kobodi, his eyes filled with hate. “Ava, the fair Ava. Yes, I did so enjoy my time with her. It was such a shame that she died so quickly. But fate has brought me another Ava. How kind.” “You mother fucking son of a bitch,” said Kyle, struggling to stand up. “I’m going to kill you if it’s the last thing I do.” “It very well could be,” said Kobodi. He raised his hand and pointed it at Kyle, firing a steady bolt of energy at him. “Kyle look out!” a voice shouted, as someone knocked him to the ground. Dazed, Kyle looked up to see Michael, Zan and Max all fire at Kobodi, causing his body to disintegrate into a pile of ash. He pushed himself up, trying to figure out who had pushed him out of the way. He looked around, and let out a scream filled with pain. Lying on the ground next to him was the body of his father. <center>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center> Edited by: <A HREF=http://p199.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrea ... iklmoon</A> at: 10/13/04 9:32 am

Velvet Skye · Post by **Velvet Skye** » Mon Oct 11, 2004 11:31 pm

You did not just do that, you did not just leave it there did you!?!? You did, she sighs in resignation. <blockquote>Quote:<hr>Dazed, Kyle looked up to see Michael, Zan and Max all fire at Kobodi, causing his body to disintegrate into a pile of ash. He pushed himself up, trying to figure out who had pushed him out of the way. He looked around, and let out a scream filled with pain. Lying on the ground next to him was the body of his father.<hr></blockquote> I know you won't let Jim die, so I assume that he just pulled Kyle to the ground allowing the others to fire at Kobodi. But I know that he has to be ok. These kids have been through too much . I'm still wondering why the Vilandra clone incinerated herself. I had a feeling it was Jim in the tunnel as well as rescuing Isabel. Now how is the Granolith doing what it is doing? Who activated it and how? Che'Koth when he brought the rebel forces back to Antar or what? <blockquote>Quote:<hr>“I don’t suppose you though to bring any cedar oil with you?” Maria asked Jim who shook his head. “I give up,” said Maria, throwing her hands up in the air. “We had a plan. I specifically remember a plan. But is anybody following the plan? No, I don’t think so.” “Focus Maria, focus,” said Isabel. “I’m here, we’re following the plan now.”<hr></blockquote> This line was hilarious... I love Maria when she is in full form. Sealing the door the throne room was super cool. And I can't wait until the battle ends and all get together as promised. Mt Gazer

Post by **Ti88** » Tue Oct 12, 2004 9:19 pm

tracie you did good to tell me it wasn't for me, the title and the fact you are sending it to me. casue now i can't leave mean emoticons about how you left this part. not cool girl. you know if there is a cliffhanger award i think you would win. great part. kyle has some serious issuses to deal with. is he going ot be ok with not having killed the bad dude? glad isabel is ok. yes i still want to know more about the clone. maria is hysterical. notice i am not even asking about jim and what looks like his death, cause i am going to go and sit in my room in egypt with the puple camals, and have tea and scones with jim and amy. so that is all i have to say concerning that issue. we will be discussing the short vacation you have allowed him and amy to go on until he reappears in the story well rested from his vacation. Roselle The Techie Connection "'Cause frankly, looking at you looking like me is kinda whacked.'" - Michael from Son of M&M by kLyn "If we don't change, we don't grow. If we don't grow, we aren't really living." -Gail Sheehy Egyptain Dwelling Silly Sister

Post by **majiklmoon** » Tue Oct 12, 2004 9:32 pm

sorry Guys, no update tonight. I'm way tired, plus, i'm really enjoying all the email i'm getting about Jim dying <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/lol.gif ALT=":lol"> <center>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center>

Post by **splatty** » Wed Oct 13, 2004 12:38 am

Oh Tracie, that part was simply wonderful. I was quite sure you were going to have Isabel to have somehow mind-suggested to Vilondra clone to pretend to knock her out and then kill herself. That way Isabel could sneak up on an unsuspecting Kivar somehow, but I was way wrong. I can't believe that you killed the Sheriff. I'm quite sure that your love for the Valentis won't let this stay permanent. I'm quite sure that Max and Zan will combine their powers to save his life. Yes, they will. Or the Granolith will. Something will gosh darn it! Lalalalalalalalalalala. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/wink.gif ALT=";)"> Can't wait for the next part. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"> <div style="text-align:center"> I used to have the longing to hear what was in your heart. But now it seems I'm over the fear of this falling apart.</div>

Post by **majiklmoon** » Wed Oct 13, 2004 1:56 pm

Disclaimer: Roswell, and its characters do not belong to me. Melinda Metz, Jason Katims and 20th Century Fox have that particular pleasure. I’m simply borrowing them until the Season 2 DVD’s get released. Author’s Note: I have to apologize to everyone. I know that somewhere in this story, I named Zan and Vilondra’s father, but I can’t find it anywhere. If anyone remembers it, or knows what chapter I put it in, please pm or email me so I can fix it. Chapter Sixty – Eight – After the Battle  With the death of Kivar and Kobodi, those still loyal to them laid down their arms and surrendered. Michael directed Radnar to escort the prisoners to a holding area. “If there is any resistance,” he said to Radnar. “Kill them.” “I don’t think there will be, General. Now that the Granolith is back, they can see how wrong they were,” Radnar explained to Michael, but Michael wasn’t standing next to him any longer. He knelt, along with the King over the body of one of the fallen. “Alex!” Isabel shouted, her voice filled with fear. “Please don’t let it be Alex!” She ran across the battlefield towards the small gathering. Liz stepped in front of her and stopped her. “It’s not Alex,” Liz said. “Then why won’t you let me through!” Isabel cried. “Isabel, calm down!” shouted Liz. “Alex is over here. He was wounded slightly, but he’s going to be fine.” “Who’s over there?” asked Isabel, “Zan, Kyle? Oh please don’t let either one of them be hurt.” “Isabel, you need to go see Alex,” said Liz, gently, trying to steer her away from Jim Valenti’s body. “Come with me, okay?” “How badly was Alex hurt?” asked Isabel, some of her panic subsiding. “It’s just a flesh wound,” explained Liz. “He was grazed by an energy bolt, but it’s nothing serious. But he’s really concerned about you, so I promised to find you and bring you over to him.” “Thanks Liz, you’re a good friend,” said Isabel. Liz escorted Isabel to where Alex sat. She gave both her friends a worried smile before rushing back to where the others stood. “Max, can’t you heal him?” Liz whispered slipping up beside her husband. Max turned to Liz, his eyes filled with tears. “I can’t,” he said, his voice thick with unshed tears. “I tried, Zan tried. Hell, we even tried together, nothing worked. He’s dead Liz.” “Where’s Kyle?” Liz choked. “Is anybody with him?” “Ava is with him. They’re over there,” Max said, pointing to where the other couple sat. Liz looked over and saw Kyle sitting on the ground, his arms cushioning his head as he rested it on his knees. Ava sat with her arms around her husband and both sobbed uncontrollably. “Should we go over do you think?” she asked as Zan joined their mournful group. “No, I think they just need to be alone for a while,” said Max. Liz moved in between the two men and put her arms around their waists. She looked over to where Maria stood, wrapped in Michael’s protective embrace. Alex, Isabel supporting him on one side limped over to the saddened group. “Why so glum?” he asked. “We won, right?” “S-someone didn’t make it,” Liz said softly. “What? What are you talking about? We’re all right here?” said Alex. “Kyle and Ava are over there, and here come Michael and Maria. Who didn’t make it?” “Oh God!” whispered Isabel. “No. No, no, no!” she screamed. “Not the Sheriff. It can’t be the Sheriff.” “You knew he was here?” demanded a shocked Max. “Why didn’t you tell anyone?” “Max, stop it!” said Liz. “Give Isabel a chance to explain. Don’t start attacking her like that.” She turned towards her friend and touched her softly on the arm. “Isabel, how did this happen?” Liz asked. “How did he get here?” “I didn’t know he was here,” said Isabel. “It was when Maria and I took our group to the palace. We, well, we got separated,” said Isabel. “I went after Kivar. I wanted to stop him myself. But I couldn’t. He was, well, I don’t know what he was going to do,” she continued. “But my duplicate put her hand out and knocked me out.” “What?” shouted Alex. “I don’t think she was trying to kill me. I think, well, I think she knew what she was doing. She knocked me out to protect me. She wanted Kivar to think she had killed me. The next thing I knew, I was waking up, and Jim was there. Isabel broke down and began to sob. “I didn’t know what to do with him,” she continued. “I mean, I couldn’t drag him into battle, but I needed to be here. I assigned one of the rebels to guard him. I swear I did.” “Isabel, don’t do this to yourself,” said Liz. She stepped out of Max and Zan’s arms and moved over to hug the other girl tightly. “You had no control over what happened. You did the only thing you could.” “Try telling that to Kyle,” Isabel cried. “His father is dead because of me.” “My father is dead because he saved my life,” said Kyle softly. He nodded to Liz, and she stepped aside, and he wrapped his arms around Isabel. “I don’t know how he got here, but he died saving me. Can you honestly think of a better way for him to go out?” “I don’t care,” said Isabel. “I gave a direct order to someone. It was the only time I’ve ever played the princess card, and where did it get me. I need to find Lynran, and I need to find her now.” “Stop, Isabel,” said Che’koth, appearing out of nowhere, with Lynran cradled in his arms. “Kyle, your father fought with me to come here to help you. When I said no, he knocked me out and took my belt.” “How did you get back?” asked Max. “The Granolith,” said Che’koth, simply. “We have a lot to talk about, but first, I need you to heal Lynran.” Che’koth laid the Antarian woman on the ground, and Max and Zan knelt down on either side of her. The placed their hands on her body and focused on her injuries. Within moments, she was sitting up. “Princess, I am sorry,” she said to Isabel. “I failed you.” “You did,” said Isabel, her voice filled with anger. “You allowed the first adult we ever trusted with our secret to die. I think it’s only fair that you die as well.” “Isabel!” shouted Che’koth. “You don’t mean that.” “Don’t I?” Isabel snapped. “Jim was there for us every time we needed him. He put his life in jeopardy for us, and this is how we repaid him, but letting him die.” “So be it,” said Lynran, standing in front of Isabel. “If the Princess feels that I should die, then that is what must happen.’ Isabel raised her hand and pointed it at Lynran, who stood stoically, waiting for the burst of energy that would end her life. An eternity passed in that moment, and Isabel lowered her hand and cried. “I can’t, it’s wrong,” she cried. “I’m not like that, really I’m not. I’m not a monster like Kivar.” “No my precious love, you are not,” said Lynran, moving to take Isabel into her arms. As she spoke, her appearance changed, until she stood before them, looking exactly like the woman who had spoken to them through the communicator so many years before. “Look!” shouted a voice. “There, next to King Zan and Princess Vilondra. It’s King Drinian and Queen Kitana!” Max and the others stared in shocked amazement at the places where Che’koth and Lynran had stood. The two people standing there resembled an older version of Max and Isabel. “Is it?” Max started to ask than stopped. “Come, my son,” said Drinian. We don’t have much time.” <center>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center>

Velvet Skye · Post by **Velvet Skye** » Wed Oct 13, 2004 2:35 pm

That was amazing. And as bad as it is to have a fallen comrade, and even if they can't get him back (still holding out hope you know) It was a fitting scene. He died a hero. Thats more than most of us can say. I wondered if that clone had said she was protecting Isabel. It could have been said to Khivar back in that chapter, but I always wondered. Now I know. She protected Isabel. Then she blew herself up becuase obviously she didn't want to be a part of Khivar's schemes any longer. And that ending, as much as I was expecting it, it still came as a surprise. King Drinian and Queen Kitana... Are Che'Koth and Lynran? huh? I loved how Lynran was more than willing to accept Isabel's deemed punishment and execution of her. And through it, while Lynran stood there valiantly, Isabel came to terms with herself. Very touching scene. She can't do, regardless of how she feels, she can't just take someone's life like that. And I loved how her mother was the one to catch her when she broke. So Beautiful, so Beautiful. And finally I must say, this comment goes back to Love Changes Everything... So when Che'Koth was before them in the Granolith at the Four Squaring, the healing of Alex when he had learned his warping abilites, etc... All that time, Their Dad was a part of everything? I love that he was there to witness the marriages of all the kids. That is so tender. AWWW!! I'm so glad. Amazing stuff really. Can't wait for more Mt Gazer

Post by **majiklmoon** » Wed Oct 13, 2004 2:42 pm

can I confess something. I wrote this part during my kid free time at school and I was practically <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> I looked like a total geek to say the least. Rhonda when I started Love changes everything, I had no idea Che'koth was their father. That just happened somewhere along the line, as did lynran being the mum. I kind of had an indication that mom would be alive. I touched upon it in one of the chapters when Che'koth was telling them how she went into hiding, but I wasn't sure how it was going to play out. I actually thought she was Plash Nevenia, Liz's teacher, but in the end, I developed other plans for her. Guess we'll have to see if I follow through with them. <center>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center>

Velvet Skye · Post by **Velvet Skye** » Wed Oct 13, 2004 6:23 pm

Of course you didn't know he was. You probably didn't know that completely when you started this one. But... Thats what happens with writng, it creates its own life. And you can look back and see how he was a part of it all now in retrospect. I loved it. And I eagerly await whatever you shall do next. I also did wonder if Plash was Che'Koth's wife at least. when I first started to read. I know she was resistance and a large part of it somehow. So can't wait to find her relation to everyone now that Lynran has been determined. Rhonda

Post by **splatty** » Wed Oct 13, 2004 7:17 pm

Lalalalalalala The Sheriff is coming back; I just know it. Lalalalalalala <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/wink.gif ALT=";)"> <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/lol.gif ALT=":lol"> Love that they finally met their parents. Can't wait for the next part. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> <div style="text-align:center"> I used to have the longing to hear what was in your heart. But now it seems I'm over the fear of this falling apart.</div>

Post by **Ti88** » Thu Oct 14, 2004 9:27 pm

wow. great part. very moving. i love kyle's take on his dad and his 'death'...notice the quotes. isabel coming to grips was great too as was liz inbetween zan and max. i am still in egypt. i was starting to accept the inevitable, maybe he didn't make it...would want to be you explaining that to amy. but then you go and write this <blockquote>Quote:<hr>“Come, my son,” said Drinian. We don’t have much time.”<hr></blockquote> and i'm spirling back into egypt. i can't remember their dad's name. i'm pretty bad with names. sorry. Roselle The Techie Connection "'Cause frankly, looking at you looking like me is kinda whacked.'" - Michael from Son of M&M by kLyn "If we don't change, we don't grow. If we don't grow, we aren't really living." -Gail Sheehy Egyptain Dwelling Silly Sister

Post by **majiklmoon** » Thu Oct 14, 2004 10:04 pm

Disclaimer: Roswell, and its characters do not belong to me. Melinda Metz, Jason Katims and 20th Century Fox have that particular pleasure. I’m simply borrowing them until the Season 2 DVD’s get released. Chapter Sixty – Nine – The Granolith  “What did you say?” asked a severely shocked Max. “I said we don’t have much time,” said the other man. “You called my your son, and those people are calling you the king. Are you my, our father? You’ve known all this time that you’re our father, and you haven’t said a word? And now you’re telling me we haven’t much time? Well screw you! I’ve made it this far without you. Come on, let’s get out of here,” he said to the others. Max was so caught up in his anger that he didn’t notice the fist that came out from beside him and sent him flying to the ground. “You God damned stupid selfish fucking son of a bitch!” shouted Kyle. “My God, Max. I am sick to death of you’re poor wronged little me attitude. You have a man standing here who has saved your ass on more than one occasion, and he’s your father. So he didn’t tell you, so what? He had his reasons. Why don’t you try acting like an adult instead of a spoiled boy king, and find out why. Now get up of your fucking ass and do what he’s telling you to do.” Max jumped up off the ground and launched himself at Kyle. He raised his fist to strike back when Liz stepped in between the two. “Max, stop it!” she shouted. “You don’t want to do this, you’re just upset because you couldn’t save Jim. Kyle’s right. Che’koth had his reasons why he didn’t tell you. You need to talk to him, and listen to him and found out why.” “You knew, didn’t you?” Max asked, coldly. “You’ve known all along who he was, and you didn’t tell me.” “I figured it out,” admitted Liz. “And you could have too, if you’d paid attention to somebody other than yourself. You know what, Max? Kyle’s right. You’re so wrapped up in your poor little me attitude, that you don’t notice things that are right in front of your face. Grow up, will you, before you lose everything that’s important to you.” Liz turned away from Max and walked over to where Che’koth and Lynran stood. “Drinian, Kitana, what do you need us to do?” she asked. “Liz, don’t,” whispered Drinian. “Don’t put your relationship with Max in jeopardy because of us.” “I’m doing this because I want to,” said Liz, and no other reason. “Bring the body of your friend,” Drinian directed. “We must bring him to the Granolith, quickly.” Everyone except for Max moved quickly and carefully lifted Jim’s body. “Max, you would sacrifice someone you care about because of your pride?” Drinian asked. Max didn’t say anything to Drinian. Instead, he moved into place and next to Alex and offered to take his place. “No, I’m good,” said Alex. “It doesn’t matter how badly I hurt. If Che’koth, I mean Drinian says we need to do this, then I do it.” As they carefully carried Jim’s body off of the battlefield, legions of citizens knelt down before them showing their support. Drinian and Kitana both offered reserved smiles to their subjects. Isabel cried unabashedly, the tears streaming down her face as she helped to carry the body of her friend. Zan looked stoically ahead, hurting more for his friends’ loss rather than feeling the loss himself. Liz blinked rapidly, trying to staunch the stem of tears that streamed down her face. She watched Kyle, who was walking in front of her, carefully, trying to gauge his emotions. She couldn’t even begin to imagine the pain he was feeling right now. As they walked, a voice began to sing out, soft at first, but growing stronger with each passing note. Liz looked over at Maria, unsurprised to see her friend singing, but instead of the pulsing rock beat they had grown used to. She gave the song a mournful beat.  This bloody road remains a mystery This sudden darkness fills the air What are we waiting for? Won't anybody help us? What are we waiting for? We can't afford to be innocent Stand up and face the enemy It's a do or die situation We will be invincible This shattered dream you cannot justify We're gonna scream until we're satisfied What are we running for? We've got the right to be angry What are we running for? When there's no where we can run to anymore We can't afford to be innocent Stand up and face the enemy It's a do or die situation We will be invincible And with the power of conviction There is no sacrifice It's a do or die situation We will be invincible Won't anybody help us? What are we running for? When there's no where, no where we can run to anymore We can't afford to be innocent Stand up and face the enemy It's a do or die situation We will be invincible And with the power of conviction There is no sacrifice It's a do or die situation We will be invincible  As the last notes of the song, echoed across the battlefield, the mournful group entered the palace and carried the body of their fallen comrade up flight after flight of stairs until they reached the portion of the roof that now housed the Granolith. Drinian motioned for the others to lay Jim’s body inside the Granolith. After they did, he moved closer to Max. “You have to do this,” he said to his son. “You’re the king.” “Damn it!” Max shouted, the tears falling freely down his face. “I keep telling you that I’m nobody’s king. I tried to save him, and I couldn’t. He’s dead.” “He’ll do it,” said Zan, stepping forward. “We’ll do it, together.” “You can’t, my Son,” said Drinian. “The Granolith chose Max, first. Don’t be afraid, Max.” “I am afraid,” said Max in wonderment. “How did you know when I didn’t know?” “He’s an empathy too, you idiot,” snapped Kyle. “Why do you think he was able to help me deal with my new powers? You shut yourself off from so much, Max,” Kyle continued in a softer voice. “Because you are afraid. Open yourself up to everything that’s happening. Trust the people around you. Trust us. We’re not going to let you down.” The tears fell so rapidly from Max’s eyes, he could barely see as he moved over to where his parents stood, waiting. “I’m sorry,” he whispered to them both. “What do you want me to do?” “Climb into the Granolith,” instructed Drinian. “And kneel down beside him. Look inside yourself, Max. You know what to do. You have to trust yourself.” Max climbed into the Granolith and knelt beside Jim Valenti’s body. He closed his eyes and concentrated. Liz watched the range of emotions play across his face as he accessed the knowledge that he needed. Suddenly, the Granolith began to hum, very softly, and it’s base turned a rich dark purple color. Suddenly, Zan jumped into the Granolith beside Max. He knelt down and whispered something in his ear. Max smiled at Zan’s pronouncement, and the two stood up and hugged quickly, before Max jumped out of the Granolith chamber. “Quick,” he said to everyone. “Get into position. Come on, we don’t have much time. They all reacted quickly, and assumed the positions they had first taken in the Granolith chamber when it was on Earth. As it did the first time, the color at the base of the Granolith moved slowly upward, lightening in hue as it moved closer to it’s apex. When the light reached it’s pinnacle, it was bright silver white, and it spilled forth from the Granolith, enveloping the room and it’s inhabitance in it’s dazzling light. For several minutes, the room was filled with light, until it slowly began to recede back into the Granolith, growing darker and darker until it only the bottom was filled with a dark but dazzling deep purple color. Max strained to see into the Granolith, but he was unable to make out anything through the darkness. Finally, the light faded away, leaving everyone staring in shocked amazement at what they saw. <center>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center>

Velvet Skye · Post by **Velvet Skye** » Thu Oct 14, 2004 11:22 pm

That was beautiful again. I told you I was holding out hope for Jim, didn't I? and I loved Maria's dirge, how you turned the words into the funeral procession. I cannot believe that Max would almost not do the right thing because of his fear and his pride. Thats just stupid. But I knew that if they, Drinian and Lynran said there was little time that they most definitely knew more than Max. Max who has spent his life unknowledgeable about this one, Max who just sort of arrived here and needfully took over, Max who is shall I say compared to his parents, ABSOLUTELY CLUELESS. I'm glad Kyle decked him, and Liz stood up to him. He needed it. The Granolith scene was exquisite. The colors and everything. I only wish I could write like that. So this line leaves me in wonderment. I know Zan took Max's place, and Max and the others joined back into the Four-Square formation they were in as they "married." <blockquote>Quote:<hr>Max strained to see into the Granolith, but he was unable to make out anything through the darkness. Finally, the light faded away, leaving everyone staring in shocked amazement at what they saw.<hr></blockquote> But what happened in the Granolith? Shocked amazement leads me to believe more than just the "resurrection" of Jim Valenti. Did Zan just become King and Rightful heir? Can't wait for that answer. Mt Gazer Edited by: <A HREF=http://p199.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrea ... mtgazer>Mt Gazer</A> at: 10/15/04 12:33 am

Anonymous · Post by **Anonymous** » Fri Oct 15, 2004 12:51 pm

Why do you do this to us??? What's in the Granolith. Come on, don't leave it this way Edited by: <A HREF=http://p199.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrea ... yrosfan</A> at: 10/16/04 1:32 pm

Post by **Ti88** » Sat Oct 16, 2004 9:42 pm

awesome part. its about time someone called max on his attitude problem...cause he's got a major one. loved maria singging the song the way she it was awesome. <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> i just can't believe you did it the way you did. i'm guessing jim is in the granolith. and is zan king now...cause i would let max lead someone across the street. Roselle The Techie Connection "'Cause frankly, looking at you looking like me is kinda whacked.'" - Michael from Son of M&M by kLyn "If we don't change, we don't grow. If we don't grow, we aren't really living." -Gail Sheehy Egyptain Dwelling Silly Sister

Post by **roswellkitkat** » Sat Oct 16, 2004 10:16 pm

You are amazing me with all your updates and how powerful they all are! I bow down to you! <img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/handprint.gif ALT=":handprint">

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