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Post by **Angel13** » Thu May 02, 2002 4:08 pm

Before I post the Epilogue...I just wanted to say a few thank yous. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)">  Tracie, A  BIG thank you for encouraging me to write this...and post it. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... iggrin.gif ALT=":grin"> And helping me start it...and running this board...and leaving great feedback...and hosting the ORBfest...and...Well, you get the idea. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)">  Col, Thanks for all your wonderful feedback! Knowing you don't get to a computer during the day anymore and you still took time to read my story gave me the warm fuzzies. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... iggrin.gif ALT=":grin"> Have I told you lately how cool you are?  ironysucs, First, I love your screen name! Second, your fic is great...every time I pop in I anxiously look to see if there's a new part.  Melisa, Thanks you for making me think I was doing a good job. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> You...and your tapping foot. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol">  bookwork, What I told Melisa...you were always there with the great feedback...makin' me feel all cool and stuff. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)">  Tea, you know...I put those NC-17 parts in just for you. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... iggrin.gif ALT=":grin"> Ok...maybe for me, too. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> Shhhh...don't tell anyone. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"> Well, this is it...I'm done with the telling. My first fic...*sigh* This story just popped in my head one day and I couldn't stop writing. I think I typed nonstop for a week. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"> Just call me OCD girl. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"> I have to say, I'm gonna miss it. I wish it didn't have to end...I actually added a couple of chapters in the middle because I didn't want to stop writing <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> ...but it has to. Thanks again, you guys!! </center><center>So come and sit on my box, enjoy the view of this water where my lifeboat is sinking. If you reach out for more, you'll find nothing but sorrow...because knowledge is hollow, and pride is hard to swallow. Col Threadkiller is the coolest!<img src=http://www.roswell-orbs.com/smilies/coo ...

Post by **Angel13** » Thu May 02, 2002 4:09 pm

Epilogue~  May 14, 2014 2am and Max Evans finds himself standing in a familiar place. He stands just inside the bedroom and the first thing he sees is a lump snuggled down under the covers of the bed in the middle of the room. A small smile crosses over his face before he turns to the dresser. Looking at the odd assortment of things, his eyebrows raise as he sees a bra flung carelessly across the top. He walks further and runs his hand over the familiar fabric of Liz’s reading chair before he turns toward the bed. The covers are pulled up over her head, but he knows she’s under there somewhere. Approaching the side of the bed, he gently grabs the covers and pulls them down to just below her chin. Her hair is longer…he can see it fanned out across her pillow. He raises his hand to her lips…hovering his fingers just above them and she sighs. Removing his hand, he looks next to her…at his own sleeping body. He’s startled when he hears himself snore. Looking at Liz, he expects it to wake her up…but she continues to sleep. She never told him he snored. Grimacing, he makes a mental note to do something about that. As he continues to watch her, she turns on her side and scoots her backside into him. He sees himself reach over to her under the covers and she smiles as she moves against him. His eyes fly open, waking up with a start, and he looks around the room suddenly…trying to get oriented. His thoughts are broken by the feel of Liz wiggling her hips back into his arousal. His hand pressing against her lower abdomen…his fingers sneaking in through the front opening of his boxers she’s wearing. He pulls his hand back and looks around again. It happened…he was pulled from his sleep to Liz. He didn’t have far to go. Still feeling disoriented, he’s suddenly hit with the realization that Liz is rubbing up against him. And he’s surprised…happily surprised. They haven’t made love in over three months…much less teased each other like they used to. Bringing his hand back to her abdomen, he thrusts forward…feeling her press back against him in response. When she reaches down and brings his hand inside her boxers, he realizes that she’s awake. “Liz…you’re killing me.” he whispers into her hair. She doesn’t stop her movement as she says, “Maybe that’s the idea.” He freezes. Since the baby arrived…and a couple of months before…, they’ve always been too tired…or the baby would wake up and need fed or changed…or Liz just didn’t want to. “Really?” he asks hopefully. She turns to face him, “Yah…really.” And she pushes him back, stripping her clothes off as she straddles him. He stops her, “What about Philip?” he asks her about the baby. She smiles and says, “I don’t think he cares, Max.” as she places kisses on his chest. “No…I mean…what if he wakes up?” “Then I guess we’ll have to be quick.” She tells him with a suggestive smile. “It happened. I saw you…us…sleeping.” Max tells her as she pulls his boxers off and slides back up his body. She kisses him, thrusting her tongue into his mouth before pulling back and whispering into his ear. “While I’d really love to talk to you, Max…right now I want you inside of me.” “Ok.” He breathes out and eagerly makes love to his wife under the covers of their giant, four poster bed. THE END </center><center>So come and sit on my box, enjoy the view of this water where my lifeboat is sinking. If you reach out for more, you'll find nothing but sorrow...because knowledge is hollow, and pride is hard to swallow. Col Threadkiller is the coolest!<img src=http://www.roswell-orbs.com/smilies/coo ...

Post by **majiklmoon** » Thu May 02, 2002 4:12 pm

Oh Angel...I love it...You did a fantastic job <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color><center>"Hey Spike, maybe you should put an ice pack on that muscle cramp!</center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ...

Anonymous · Post by **Anonymous** » Thu May 02, 2002 4:25 pm

Wonderful job. But, sniff,sniff, does it reallllly have to be over? I mean you did leave it with an ending just screaming -sequel. (or is that just me being hopeful?) Thanks for sharing.

Post by **roswellkitkat** » Thu May 02, 2002 5:49 pm

This story had everything I could ever hope for! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> <center>*************<center>Roswell on Sci-Fi in 2003.<center>Got it? Get it? Good!<center>

Anonymous · Post by **Anonymous** » Thu May 02, 2002 7:16 pm

<img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> that was beautiful <img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry">

Anonymous · Post by **Anonymous** » Fri May 03, 2002 10:22 am

<img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> I can't believe it's OVER <img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> <img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"> That was so wonderful... not only can I finally admit I liked Jaret and his unusual ways... but Liz gets justice... her way. What an awesome epilogue... bringing the story full circle... ya know, with all the ANGST, I'd almost forgotten that this story started with the dreams <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"> <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"> - and a great last line too... "Ok." Fade out. Cut. Print. I see good fics as a movie in my head... and this one was just... cool <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> I'm gonna miss it. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /frown.gif ALT=":("> {{{HUGS}}} - Col.

Post by **majiklmoon** » Fri May 03, 2002 2:57 pm

<blockquote>Quote:<hr> Well, this is it...I'm done with the telling. My first fic...*sigh* This story just popped in my head one day and I couldn't stop writing. I think I typed nonstop for a week. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"> Just call me OCD girl. <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"> I have to say, I'm gonna miss it. I wish it didn't have to end...I actually added a couple of chapters in the middle because I didn't want to stop writing <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> ...but it has to. Thanks again, you guys!!<hr></blockquote> well, and this is just a suggestion mind you, you could always write something else. Buffy, Angel, Roswell, Star Wars.....the list is endless <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> <center>Margo is a Super ORB!</center><center><center>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<center>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</center></color><center>"Hey Spike, maybe you should put an ice pack on that muscle cramp!</center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ...

Post by **roswellkitkat** » Fri May 03, 2002 3:29 pm

Yes...so many other things to write!! <center>*************<center>Roswell on Sci-Fi in 2003.<center>Got it? Get it? Good!<center>

Post by **splatty** » Wed May 15, 2002 7:09 pm

i just started reading this and i wanted to say how awesome it is!!!! i can't tear myself away!!!! but geez, rls keeps calling. loving it angel . . you are amazing!! <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> <center>I want to be what I was when I wanted to be what I am now.</center>

Post by **splatty** » Sun May 19, 2002 4:56 pm

wow! wow! wow! this is the best fic ever! <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> i can't wait to read your next one. thanks angel. this was awesome. i laughed. i cried. my dreamer heart thanks you. <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)">

Anonymous · Post by **Anonymous** » Thu Jun 06, 2002 9:28 pm

Oh, wow. I'm sitting here after finishing this story and I am just...speechless! This was such an amazing story, and so freakingly well told! I actually felt like I was watching it, not just reading it. In fact, yesterday as I was editing some Ros tapes and reading your story, I got confused for a second. "Why is Liz playing putt-putt with him?" I wondered. "She's still so mad at him." Wow. Again. I was just so lost in the story, I forgot it wasn't in the "real" Ros-world. A couple of little things I liked-- all the rapport between Michael and Maria. You made Maria back into the character that I loved so much in season 1! The idea of Max thinking of Liz taking a running leap onto her bed--priceless! <img src=http://www.theunholytrinity.org/cracks_ ... laughA.gif ALT=":lol"> The fact that M&Ms VCR blinks 12:00. Such a minor detail, and yet so necessary in making this story out of this world! Angel, you are a superb writer, and you really should do more! <center> What's so great about normal? </center><center><img src=http://pmayhem.com/batgirl/thumbs/th_re ... f></center> <a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new"><img src="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/Alex.jpg" border=0></a> <a href="http://blancadelic.com/quizzes/rosguyquiz.htm" target="new">Find your Roswell match </a> at <a href="http://blancadelic.com" target="new">Blancadelic.com</a>

vecastone · Post by **vecastone** » Thu Sep 19, 2002 10:28 am

OMG !!!!!! You know how to write !!! Like somebody has said before , I was like watching a movie , so well writen with so many details . I feel the characters in his S1 skin ....María was amazing !! I´ve printed the story and read it at night , this past two days I went to sleep at 3:30 ( and because I have to ) I couldn´t unglue myself of the pages. I´ve cried and laugh .......AMAZING !!!! Do you mind if I send it to my friends ?? God !! I am still speachless <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> :<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> :<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap"> :<img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... xhello.gif ALT=":clap">

Post by **bistyboo1974** » Sat Apr 26, 2003 9:46 am

Wow, AtO!! It's only taken me a year to start reading Roswell fic, but what a great discovery!! <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"> This is awesome. I've read parts one through four ... can't wait to find time to read more! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"> <a href="http://pub199.ezboard.com/bfanficformuggles"><img src="http://www.bluerealimage.com/chat/harry ...

Post by **bistyboo1974** » Sat May 03, 2003 7:49 pm

I read some more this evening <img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"> Great stuff, AtO ... you should have written for the show! <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... s/wink.gif ALT=";)"> <center><a href="http://pub199.ezboard.com/bfanficformuggles"><img src="http://www.bluerealimage.com/chat/harry ...

Anonymous · Post by **Anonymous** » Mon May 12, 2003 12:06 pm

OMG! That was so amazing! I can't believe I missed this!! Great job!

Post by **majiklmoon** » Sun Mar 28, 2004 11:25 pm

nice banner Angel <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"> <center>It all started with a boy, a girl, and a silver handprint.</center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center>

Post by **splatty** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 2:50 pm

love the banner <div style="text-align:center"> I used to have the longing to hear what was in your heart. But now it seems I'm over the fear of this falling apart.</div>

Post by **Ti88** » Sat Jul 09, 2005 9:35 pm

i just finished reading the first part. this is great. max only sees her on that day. oh man. and only for 20 mins. i bet she knows he's there. i would tell you to tell us more, but as its already finshed i guess i need to read to find out

Aligewe · Post by **Aligewe** » Tue Aug 16, 2005 6:57 pm

Hi!!!

I just finished reading this fic and it ROCKS!!!!!!!
It is really good!!!!!!!

Just a question, who delivered the baby??? Max, Michael, or Isabel???
I was just thinking if the powers are controled by emotions wouldn't that also includ Max making him a bad choice to deliver their Baby??? Michael wouldn't be good because he can't really control his powres... so that would leave Isabel...
Oh well...
Great Job on the story!!!!!!!

Aligewe

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