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Love Changes Everything - M/L -CC-COMPLETE - AGAIN

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This was written in response to the Departure Debacle contest/challenge at Majik’s World of Fan Fic. My submission is just for fun, since I couldn’t pass up the chance to make it all better lol.

Disclaimer: You know the drill…the characters aren’t mine. A lot of stuff in the beginning is taken from End of the World. God knows that's not mine. Anything that makes sense and makes it all better, now that’s mine. Seriously, Roswell and all characters belong to Jason Katims, 20th Century Fox etc. I’m just borrowing them. Thanks to Angel13 for the kick ass banner

Rating: TEEN – possibly to MATURE

Love Changes Everything

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Chapter One – End of the World – Revisited

Tess was worried. Nothing she did made Max look at her the way he looked at Liz. She picked up a photograph of Max and stared at it intently.

“There has got to be something I can do,” she said to her empty bedroom. “Something that will turn him away from her, to me.”
But no matter how hard she thought she couldn’t come up with anything severe enough to make Max fall out of love with Liz.
“She’s such a noble, stupid bitch,” she said. “She never screws up, never does anything wrong. She would do anything for Max.”

She took the picture that was in her hand, and hurled it across the room, watching with satisfaction as the glass shattered into a thousand miniscule pieces. With a sigh, she used her powers to reassemble the bits of glass. She picked up the picture and started to lean over to place it on her nightstand when an idea came to her. The picture fell, unnoticed, out of her hands, shattering once again, as she conceived of the perfect plan to drive a permanent wedge between Max and Liz.



Liz sat in her room, writing in her journal, when a tapping at the window caught her attention. She smiled, and went to the window to open it and Let Max into her room. She covered her mouth to contain the scream that threatened to spill out. It was Max, but it wasn’t. His hair was so much longer, and pulled back from his face. But it was his eyes that frightened her the most. They were so hard, so dark and uncaring.

“Liz, it’s me, its Max,” said the strange apparition before her.

“Max? No, I don’t understand, but you’re not Max,” said Liz.

“I am, it’s me, I came from the future. There are things I have to tell you.”

“No, you’re not from the future, you are some sort of shape shifting alien, but you aren’t Max.”

“If I were a shape shifter, there is no way I could tell the future. In about ten seconds, I am going to show up outside your window, serenading you.”

Much to her amazement, several seconds later, Max appeared on the street below her window, along with a mariachi band and began to serenade her in Spanish. A bouquet of roses flew from his hand up to her window, changing from red to white in mid-air. Liz, with the help of her father, quickly got rid of Max, and turned to the other Max.

“Okay, maybe you are telling the truth, why are you here?”

“I can’t tell you much Liz. This is strictly a limited knowledge thing. The more you know, the more danger you could be in.”

Liz didn’t say anything for a minute, opened her mouth to speak, stopped and then started again.

“Max, don’t you have anything else to say to me? I mean, you come in here, supposedly from the future, tell me you can’t tell me anything else, and I’m just supposed to follow your lead blindly?”

Future Max looked taken aback for a moment, while he paused to regroup and formulate his thoughts.

“No, Liz, that’s not it, exactly. There are things I can tell you, but I may not be able to answer your all your questions. But I can tell you this. Fourteen years in the future, our enemies attack Earth, and we are totally overtaken. I need you to help me change the future. Will you help me?” he asked, holding his hand out to her.

“I don’t know Max, wouldn’t it just make more sense to go get you, I mean, the other you, the younger you, and explain it all to him?”

“NO!” shouted Future Max. “Nobody, especially my younger self can know that I am here. It could put this whole mission in jeopardy.”

Liz took a step back, shocked by his vehemence, and waited for him to continue. Future Max explained about their growing closer and closer, inseparable, allowing nothing to come between them, how badly he treated Tess.

“It eventually drove her out of town, Liz,” he said. “And when she left, we began to fall apart. Michael, Tess, Isabelle and me, we all have different powers. We complimented each other. When Tess left, we weren’t as strong. You have to make me fall out of love with you Liz, it’s the only way.”

I can’t. I can’t do that. Isn’t there some other way?”

“Don’t you think if there was, I’d do it? You’re not the only one who loses if you do this Liz. If you can convince Max that you don’t love him any longer, the man I am, my reality ceases to exist. That means Michael and Isabelle will still have a chance to live!”

“What?” cried Liz.

“Twenty five minutes before I came here, I held Michael in my arms as he died. Isabelle died two weeks before that. If you can convince him to fall out of love with you, and turn to Tess, it will erase all of that.”

Liz hung her head in her hands, her body trembling as she struggled to hold back the tears.

“Is there anything else you can tell me, Max? Anything at all?”
“No, I’ve told you too much already, Liz. I can’t tell you anything else.”

“Max, do you remember the night, you and I went to dinner with Isabelle, Alex, Michael and Maria?” asked Liz.

“What?” asked Max, started by the apparent change of subject.
“You know, the night we used your parent’s membership at the country club. We got all dressed up. I wore that red dress. You know, the one you love so much.”

“That’s right,” said Max. “You looked so beautiful. I love it when you wear red.”

“Right,” said Liz, smiling. “Anyhow, that night, the six of us vowed that we would do whatever it took to keep each other safe. I guess this is the kind of thing that falls into the category of keeping each other safe. Okay,” she said, sitting up. “I’ll do it, I’ll help you. I love Max, the other Max, but he risked everything to save me. I can do the same for him.” Liz stood, and walked away from future Max, missing the feral grin that spread across his face.
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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 2 - 1/23/03

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Chapter TwoA Plan Set in Motion

Liz walked down the halls of West Roswell High, and ignored the shouts that filled the air. She stopped at her locker and changed books. She looked around carefully, to make sure she was unobserved. Once she was certain nobody was watching her, she pulled a sheaf of papers from a folder and slipped them into a notebook.

“Liz, great, there you are,” said Maria breathlessly. “I lost my English notebook. Did I leave it in your locker?”

“Here it is Maria,” said Liz, shoving it at her. “You left it at my house. I found your homework in it; your essay on Czechoslovakia had a few mistakes in it. You may want to reread it before you hand it in.” She stared intently at Maria and then down at the folder.

“Oh,” said Maria, “The Czechoslovakian essay. Thanks girlfriend, I would have been so screwed if I didn’t turn that in. I was in total freak mode when I couldn’t find it.”

“Well, it’s all found, so why don’t you go proof read it again, I circled your mistakes in green.”

“Thanks again, Liz,” said Maria, as she hugged her friend. “I’ll see you at lunch, okay?”

“Yeah, maybe,” said Liz, distractedly. “Look, I’ve got to go, I don’t want to be late for class.

Liz took off down the hall before Maria could say anything. Maria held onto the notebook tightly, and made her way to the library. She found an empty table in the back of the room, and opened the notebook and pulled out her essay and began to read whatever had Liz so upset.

Maria,

I don’t care if you read this, but you have to get it to Max as soon as possible. Something really weird happened last night, and he needs to know about it right away.

Liz


Maria flipped through the rest of the papers, skimming them quickly. Her face grew white as she read what Liz had written. Slamming the notebook shut, she stood up and walked quickly out of the library. She pulled the hall pass that Isabelle had made for her, courtesy of her powers, just in case she got stopped. She walked swiftly down the hall peering in the different classrooms, looking for Max Evans. When she finally located him, she stood outside the classroom door, gesturing frantically, trying to get his attention. After about five minutes of alien aerobics, Max managed to escape out into the hallway.

“Maria,” he said. “What’s wrong?” he asked.

“A lot is wrong,” she answered. “Liz was in total weird mode, and gave me this to give to you. Max, you need to read this right away. I think we are in serious trouble,” she babbled.

“Maria, calm down. What did it say?”

“What do you mean, what did it say? Are you implying that I would read a personal note from Liz to you?” she asked indignantly.

“Maria?”

“Okay, okay, I read it, but it’s way to weird for me to try and explain. You need to read it for yourself.”

“Come on,” he said, grabbing her by the hand and pulling her down the hallway.

“Where are we going?”

“To the eraser room.”

“Wait a second Max. You may be a space boy, but you aren’t MY Space Boy!”

Max said nothing, but turned and glared at Maria, who quickly shut up and followed Max upstairs and down the hall to the eraser room. Once they were inside, Max used his powers to lock the door behind them.

“Okay, before I start reading, is Liz all right?” he asked Maria.

“Physically, she’s okay, but emotionally, she’s a basket case,” said Maria.

“Tell me everything that happened!” he demanded.

“Well, there isn’t much to tell, I was missing my English notebook. I was looking all over the place for it, but I couldn’t find it anywhere. I saw Liz, so I stopped to ask her about it. Luckily for me she had it. Wait a second,” said Maria, with a frown. “How did she get my notebook? I’m sure it was in my locker. Max, she broke into my locker!”

“Maria, focus here, would you?” asked Max.

“Oh, right, sorry. Well anyhow, Liz was going on about proof reading my English essay on Czechoslovakia, and telling me I needed to read it right away.”

“Maria, you’re losing it again. What does Czechoslovakia have to do with anything?” asked Max in exasperation.

“Everything, nitwit,” she said, slapping his shoulder. “Czechoslovakian was what we call you when we are talking about you and Michael and Isabelle when we are in public,” said Maria, proudly.

“You call us Czechoslovakian?” asked Max weakly. “I’m going to go out on a limb and guess that it was your idea.”

“Yeah, how’d you know?” asked Maria. “Anyhow, I skimmed through my so called essay, and went into panic mode and found you right away.”

“Thanks Maria,” said Max. “You are a good friend.”

Max unfolded the papers Maria had given him and began to read. After several minutes, he put them down and looked at Maria.

“What does it mean, Max?”

“I’m not sure yet, but we need to get everyone together. Maria can you get a hold of Michael and the others and tell them we’ll meet tonight. Damn, where can we meet?”

“How about in the back room of my mom’s store? She’s closing early tonight, anyhow. Inventory starts tomorrow. Just how I wanted to spend my Saturday, counting little alien antenna toppers.”

“Maria, you’re doing it again…don’t you have any cedar oil to sniff or something,” groused Max. I really need you to focus right now.”

“Sorry,” said Maria, fumbling in her pocket for a vial of cedar oil.

“Fine, now tell everyone we’ll meet at your mom’s store around 6:00.”

“Let’s see, I’ll tell Michael next period,” planned Maria. “I can tell Alex at lunch, he can get in touch with Isabelle.” She looked at Max to see if he agreed with her plans. When he nodded she continued. “Tess is going to be the hardest person for me to get a hold of. I don’t have any classes with her. I suppose Isabelle….”

“NO!” shouted Max. “Not Tess. We have to keep Tess out of this, but we can’t let her know something is up. This has to be a secret!”

Maria backed away from Max, shocked by the anger in his voice.
“Okay Max, if you say so.”

“Maria, just how well did you read what Liz wrote?”

“Not very,” she admitted. “I just skimmed it briefly, and then came to find you. There was something about an alien who looked like you coming from the future, and Michael and Isabelle dying. As soon as I saw that, I came looking for you.”

“It’s bad, Maria, really bad. I have to find Liz. We are so screwed right now.”
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A Meeting of the Minds

Max waited outside Liz’s advanced English class unit the bell rang. When she walked out the door, Max grabbed her by the arm and pulled her in the opposite direction.

“We need to talk, Liz,” he whispered. “Are you alright?”

“Relax Max, I’m fine.”

“How long did he stay?”

“All night, which is why I didn’t call you and tell you about him.”

“God, it kills me to think that you could have been in danger.”

“Look Max, I’m a big girl, I can take care of myself,” said Liz, yanking her arm free.

“I know Liz. It’s just that we don’t know what we’re up against yet. I’m can’t help it if I’m worried.”

“I know,” said Liz, slightly mollified. “So what’s the plan?”

“The plan is, we have no plan, but we are meeting at Maria’s mother’s store tonight to come up with one.”

“Okay, but I have to work after school, so I may be a little bit late.”

“I’ll have Michael bring you over. I don’t want you walking around alone until we know what we’re up against.”

Liz started to protest, but changed her mind. She knew Max was right, even though she didn’t like it very much.

“I’ve got to get to class, but instead of Michael, why don’t I have Kyle bring me to Maria’s,” said Liz.

“Oh, shit,” said Max.

“Let me guess, you forgot to include Kyle in all of this,” said Liz.

“I did, but not for the reasons you think,” explained Max. “Can you fill him in on everything and get him to bring you to Maria’s?”

“Yeah, I’ll tell him.”

“Liz, if he can’t bring you to Maria’s, call one of us. I don’t want you walking around alone.”

“Yes father,” said Liz, standing on tiptoe to kiss him passionately.
Max tightened his grasp and pulled Liz to him. The two kissed passionately for several minutes.

“Don’t you have an elsewhere to be, Mr. Evans? Like my class, perhaps?” said a voice behind him. Pulling away from Liz, Max turned around to see his Physics teacher standing behind him with a smile on his face. “I can understand why you may find your current endeavor to be far more entertaining, however, I do insist that you find your way to my classroom, now!”

“Uh, yes sir,” said Max.

“Miss Parker, do you have some place you need to be as well?” asked the teacher.

“Ah, yes, right, I was just leaving,” said Liz. “I’ll see you tonight, Max?”

“Okay, remember, don’t walk over there alone.”

“Mr. Evans, I mean now,” said the Physics teacher who was already halfway down the hall. “If she loves you know, one forty-five minute Physics class won’t destroy it.”

“Bye,” said Liz, as she turned and stated walking in the opposite direction.


“Tell me again why I’m driving you to Maria’s? ”asked Kyle. “I mean you obviously have to perfectly good, and lovely if I might add, legs to walk on?”

“It’s complicated,” said Liz, but Max doesn’t want me to be alone until we figure out what’s going on.”

“And what is going on?” asked Kyle.

“I’m not really sure myself, but last night, I had a visitor,” began Liz.
“Please Liz,” interrupted Kyle. “Spare me the nocturnal wooings of you and Max Evans.”

“Kyle, don’t be such a jerk,” laughed Liz. “This is important. Last night, Max showed up at my window, but it wasn’t the Max Evans we know. He said he came from the future, and that it was up to me to make this Max, our Max, fall out of love with me. The survival of the Earth depended upon it.”

“Oh please,” said Kyle. “What is this, some really bad sci fi television show or something?

“Kyle, shut up, this is serious,” said Liz, still laughing. “It’s true, there was someone who looked like Max, and sounded like Max in my room last night. He looked older, his hair had some gray in it, and it was much longer. He said he came from fourteen years in the future.”

Kyle pulled the red mustang over to the side of the road. “I can’t drive and pay attention to you,” he said. “And this sounds like something I really need pay attention to.”

“Yeah, you do,” said Liz. “Anyhow, this Future Max told me that when he and I grew, um, closer and, ah, cemented our relationship, it kind of drove Tess over the edge, and she left town.”

“Well, I’m not seeing how that could be such a loss, I mean the chic is hot, but she’s kind of whacked,” said Kyle.

“Well, according to Future Max, it was a big deal. Apparently the four of them, Max, Michael, Isabelle and Tess, compliment each other. When Tess left, they weren’t a complete unit any longer. Anyhow, I guess some other aliens attacked, and because Tess wasn’t with them, they weren’t as strong, and both Isabelle and Michael died. He said he came back to convince me to make our Max fall out of love with me. If I could do that, it would change the future.”

“Wow,” said Kyle. “And you believed him?”

“Part of me did, but part of me didn’t, so I decided to test him,” said Liz.
“Test him? Test him how? I’m guessing essay, because those multiple guess tests are just too easy,” said Kyle.

“Will you be serious, for just once,” said Liz, slapping him lightly on the arm. “Do you remember the night all of us went out to eat at that really fancy restaurant? It was such a special night, and I knew Max wouldn’t forget any detail of it.”

“And Future Max did?” said Kyle slowly.

“Not forgot, more like never knew. He agreed with me that we went to the country club that his parents belong to.”

“But his parents only joined the country club last spring, right before Tess,” he stopped. “Right before Tess showed up,” he continued with a grim smile on his face.

“Right,” said Liz. “And he said he remembered that I wore that red dress that he loved so much. Kyle, I don’t own a red dress. And he didn’t know that you were there either. And the big give away was that he remembered how we all vowed to keep each other safe no matter what.”

“And that night, the only thing we vowed was to not discuss anything like that.”

“Exactly,” said Liz. “So I’m pretty sure he’s not who he says he is. I know who I think he is, but I’m not sure how. He stuck around all last night, so I couldn’t call Max, but I got word to him today.”

“Hence the summit tonight,” said Kyle, starting the car and easing it back onto the road. “Well, I agree with what you said, I don’t think that Future Max was our Max, and I also agree with Max. Until we know what we’re up against, I don’t want you left alone.”

“Great,” said Liz under her breath. “In less than twenty four hours, I get another father and a big brother.”
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This was written in response to the <!--EZCODE LINK START--><a href="http://pub129.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsrealmfrm47" target="top">Departure Debacle</a><!--EZCODE LINK END--> contest/challenge at <!--EZCODE LINK START--><a href="http://pub129.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm" target="top">Majik’s World of Fan Fic</a><!--EZCODE LINK END-->. My submission is just for fun, since I couldn’t pass up the chance to make it all better lol.<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Disclaimer:</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> You know the drill…the characters aren’t mine. A lot of stuff in the beginning is taken from <!--EZCODE UNDERLINE START--><span style="text-decoration:underline">End of the World</span><!--EZCODE UNDERLINE END-->. God knows <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>THAT’S</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> not mine. Anything that makes sense and makes it all better, now that’s mine. Seriously, Roswell and all characters belong to Jason Katims, 20th Century Fox etc. I’m just borrowing them.<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Rating:</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> PG-13 – possibly to R<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Love Changes Everything</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--><br><br><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>Chapter Four – Plans, Plans and More Plans</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--><br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Kyle and Liz arrived at Maria’s mother’s shop, and Kyle came around to the passenger side of the car, helped Liz out, and escorted her inside, his hand firmly on her back.<br>“Oh God,” said Maria, opening the door to let them in. “You told him, didn’t you?”<br>“What gave it away,” said Liz, rolling her eyes.<br>“Because he’s hovering over you the same way Max, Michael and Alex want to. Girlfriend, when I start complaining about Michael’s lack of boyfriend skills, remind me of this day. I am so glad that you got a visit from Future Max, instead of me getting a visit from a Future Michael.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp The two girls laughed, and Kyle scowled at them as they walked into the storage part of the store. After everyone got settled with snacks and drinks, Max quickly reviewed everything they knew, and the group began to toss ideas back and forth.<br>“What if you just knock him out the next time he shows up?” asked Michael.<br>“That’s my boyfriend, the master of stealth,” said Maria.<br>“Michael, get serious,” said Isabelle. Can you honestly see tiny little Liz knocking someone the size of Max unconscious?”<br>“She’s right,” said Liz. “I don’t know if I’d have the strength to do that.”<br>“No, she can’t,” said Kyle, “But we can. We can take turns sleeping on Liz’s bathroom floor. That way whoever it is won’t see us, but we can be there to protect Liz. Michael or I could probably take the first night,” Kyle added. <br>“Why you or Michael?” asked Max, jealously.<br>“Think Max, use that kingly brain of yours. Michael doesn’t have any parents to answer to. I have my dad, but he’s already in on the secret. You and Alex need time to come up with a cover story.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “Excuse me,” said Liz. “But did anybody thing about clearing this plan with <!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>ME?</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END-->.”<br>“Well, do you have a better plan?” Maria asked in a reasonable voice.<br>“No.”<br>“Well, there you go then.”<br>“Okay, I’ll take the first shift,” said Michael. “I’m supposed to close at the CrashDown tonight, so it will be easiest for me to slip upstairs.”<br>“Fine,” said Alex. “Now that we have that settled, does anybody have any theories about who is behind all of this?<br>“Tess,” said Maria and Liz at the same time.”<br>“Tess,” said Michael.<br>“Tess,” said Kyle.<br>“Yeah, me too,” said Alex. “Max, Isabelle, what about you?”<br>“I don’t know,” said Isabelle. “I’m having a hard time accepting the fact that it could be Tess. I mean, she is supposed to be my,” she paused.<br>“She was supposed to be your friend,” continued Liz. “Another girl who know exactly what you’ve been going through all these years.”<br>“Exactly,” said Isabelle. “But I have to admit, I think it’s her as well. Max, what about you?”<br>“I’m not sure. I guess I just don’t want to believe that she’d betray us that way.”<br>“Well believe it Maxwell,” said Michael. “Because it looks like she is.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “Okay, now that we’ve got the who, let’s move onto the how,” said Kyle, looking at his friends. They all responded by looking at him blankly.<br>“Well, that was helpful,” said Alex.<br>“Can any of you change your appearance in such a drastic way?” asked Liz.<br>“No,” said Max. “But she has been learning how to use her powers all her life. Damn! If we only knew what was in that book we found last year. I know I should be able to read our language, but I can’t. It’s like it’s right there, on the edge of my memory, but then it slips away again.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “Would you be willing to let me have a look at it?” asked Alex. “Maybe I can work some sort of program up on the computer to help us.”<br>At Max’s skeptical look, he continued. “Come on Max, it’s worth a shot.”<br>“He’s right Max, said Isabelle. “He can’t do any worse than we have.”<br>“Fine,” said Max. “When we leave here, Alex, come back to my house and I’ll show you what we have.<br>“Well, I have to stay here and start inventory,” said Maria. “Does anybody want to help?” she added hopefully.<br>“I’ll help,” said Isabelle, unexpectedly. “What?” she said to the stunned room. “It’s better than the time I helped her wait tables.”<br>“Fine,” said Max, a bit resentful at having everybody else making decisions. “Alex, can you give me a ride back to my house, so I can leave the Jeep with Isabelle? And would you mind if we dropped Liz home too?”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “It’s okay Max,” said Liz. “Kyle can give me a ride home. It won’t look as if I’m trying to convince you to fall out of love with me if you drive me home. That’s what I’m supposed to be doing, remember?”<br>“Well, yeah, but,”<br>“No buts Maxwell,” said Michael. “Liz is right. But it wouldn’t be a bad idea if you and Alex took a swing by the CrashDown and <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>caught</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> them.”<br>“I suppose,” said Max, ungratefully. <br>“Kyle,” said Alex quickly, hoping to head off anymore potential problems. What’s your game plan for tonight?”<br>“Nothing big,” said Kyle, casually. “Drop Liz off, swing home, and then stick to Tess, like glue if I have to.”<br>“Do you think that’s wise, Kyle?” asked Max.<br>“No, but do we have a choice? We all think she’s behind this, this just seems like the best way to find out for sure.”<br>“I don’t like it,” said Max.<br>“That’s okay, since I don’t recall asking if you did,” snapped Kyle.<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “Look, as much as I’m enjoying the testosterone fest,” said Maria, stepping between them. “It’s got to stop, now! You two need to chill out. Max, Kyle is right, we need to know what the witch is up too.”<br>Kyle looked at Max and smirked.<br>“And Kyle, Max is right, it’s too dangerous for you to stick close to her,” Maria continued as Max smirked right back at Kyle. “Oh God! Will you two cut it out before you resort to sticking your tongues out at each other.”<br>“Maria’s right, you two are acting about as mature as kindergarteners. We don’t have time for that crap. I have an idea anyhow. Kyle, instead of sticking to her, why don’t you tail her.”<br>“Tail her?” Kyle asked incredulously. “Who do you think I am? My father?”<br>“Kyle!”<br>“Alright, I’ll do it, but if I’m going to play stakeout, I need to swing by the store and pick up some Ho Ho’s first.”<br> <p><center><font size=2><font color=red><script language="javascript" src="http://members.cox.net/laurensnape/coun ... <center><a href="http://pub129.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsr ... ID=1.topic" target="_new">The Departure Debacle - A Roswell Fanfic contest/challenge</a></center><I><center>Margo is a Super ORB!</i></center><b><center><center><font color=#FFFFCC>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<font color =#CCCCCC><center><i>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</i></center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<br><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a> </p><i></i>
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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 3 - 1/24/03

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Most excellent Tracie!!! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :clap --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/clap.gif ALT=":clap"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p> <!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:yellow;font-family:verdana;font-size:medium;">"Love doesn't just sit there, like a stone; it has to be made, like <br>bread, remade all the time, made new." --Ursula K. Le Guin, writer<br> </span><!--EZCODE FONT END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>
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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 3 - 1/24/03

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Very interesting! I can't wait to find out if Tess is really responsible or someone else.<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br><br><br> <p><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE IMAGE START--><img src="http://users.aol.com/isndbreeze/skysymb ... <!--EZCODE IMAGE END--><br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong><br><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:gold;">Gerry<br>- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -<br>Hopeless Candy-Coated, Stargazing, <!--EZCODE UNDERLINE START--><span style="text-decoration:underline">Dreamer</span><!--EZCODE UNDERLINE END-->!<br>- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -</span><!--EZCODE FONT END--></strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>
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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 4 - 1/25/03

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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 5 - 1/26/03

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This was written in response to the <!--EZCODE LINK START--><a href="http://pub129.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsr ... ID=1.topic" target="top">Departure Debacle</a><!--EZCODE LINK END--> contest/challenge at <!--EZCODE LINK START--><a href="http://pub129.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm" target="top">Majik’s World of Fan Fic.</a><!--EZCODE LINK END--> My submission is just for fun, since I couldn’t pass up the chance to make it all better lol.<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Disclaimer:</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> You know the drill…the characters aren’t mine. A lot of stuff in the beginning is taken from <!--EZCODE UNDERLINE START--><span style="text-decoration:underline">End of the World</span><!--EZCODE UNDERLINE END-->. God knows <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>THAT’S</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> not mine. Anything that makes sense and makes it all better, now that’s mine. Seriously, Roswell and all characters belong to Jason Katims, 20th Century Fox etc. I’m just borrowing them.<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Rating:</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> PG-13 – possibly to R<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Love Changes Everything</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--><br><br><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>I Spy, With My Little Eye</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--><br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Kyle drove Liz back to the CrashDown, followed by Michael, on his motorcycle.<br>“I feel like a part of a presidential motorcade,” Liz groused.<br>“Stop your bitching, Liz. For some reason, Tess, or whoever it is, has targeted you. We have to keep you safe until we know what’s going on.”<br>“I’m sorry,” said Liz. “I’m being a real jerk. The thing is, if this were happening to Maria, or Isabelle, I’d be the same way towards them.”<br>Kyle parked the car, and the two walked towards the alien themed restaurant owned by Liz’s parents. They walked through the door to be greeted by her very harried father.<br>“Lizzie!” shouted Geoff Parker, over the din of the very crowded restaurant. “Agnes went home sick, can you fill in for her?”<br>“Uh, sure Dad, just give me a minute to run upstairs and change,” she said to her father, as she surveyed the crowded room. “Kyle, why don’t you come upstairs too, and I can give you those chemistry notes.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Kyle and Liz ran up the stairs to the Parker’s apartment. Kyle checked the room, and the rooftop before Liz went in to change. As she dressed, Liz shouted through the door. “Did you see her down there?” <br>“Yeah,” said Kyle. “Sitting in that corner booth.”<br>“How about if you stay here and watch her. I’ll tell dad I was supposed to tutor you tonight, and that’s why you’re hanging around.”<br>“It sounds good,” said Kyle. “But do I really have to study chemistry?”<br>“Well, it might help, come finals time,” laughed Liz as they walked down the stairs to the restaurant.<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Liz walked over to the register where her father was working and found out what tables she should cover. She grabbed a pitcher of water and explained to her father that Kyle was supposed to be tutored by her that night. “Do you mind if I set him up in that back booth, Dad?” she asked. “That way I can help him during the lulls?”<br>“No problem, Lizzie,” said her father. “I’m sorry to cut into your date like that.<br>“Dad, it’s not a date,” said Liz, blushing a little.<br>“I know, I know, your seeing Max Evans.”<br>Liz looked out of the corner of her eye and saw Tess approaching the counter. She took a deep breath and took the plunge. “Actually, Dad, I don’t think I’ll be seeing Max much longer. I don’t want to get too serious at my age.” She turned quickly and moved to a nearby table to fill the water glasses, but not before she caught a glimpse of the slow smile forming on Tess’s face.<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Kyle sat in the back booth, pretending to study, but instead, watching Tess return to her seat. He jumped a little, when a plate full of food was placed on his table, nudging his notes out of the way.<br>“I know why you’re here,” said Geoff.<br>“Y-you do?” stammered Kyle.<br>“Yes, I do,” said Geoff in a rather imperious tone. “Liz told me she was cooling things down with Max. I think it’s great that you are being a friend and trying to keep her mind off of everything.”<br>“Yeah, well, Liz is a good friend,” said Kyle. “Besides, I can use all the help I can get in chemistry.”<br>“Enjoy the food,” said Geoff. “Liz will be over when it slows down.’<br>Kyle watched as Liz’s father made his way back over to the register, and slumped down in his seat. He slipped his cell phone out of his pocket and punched Max’s number into it.<br>“Hey,” he said when Max answered. “Tess is at the CrashDown, so I stayed here. Liz came up with a great cover story about helping me study.”<br><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>Is Liz okay?</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> Max asked.<br>“Yeah, she’s fine,” Kyle said. “She told her dad that she was trying to cool things off with you, though.”<br><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>What!</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> Max, yelled through the cell phone.<br>“Relax Evans. Tess came up behind her while she was talking to her father. I think Liz knew she was there, that’s why she did it.”<br><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>What’s Tess doing now?</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--><br>“Looking very much like Sylvester after he just ate Tweety Bird. Hang on a second, here comes Liz.” He passed the phone to Liz and said in a loud voice that it was Maria on the phone.<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “Maria?” Liz said into the phone.<br><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>Liz, it’s me,</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> said Max. <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>Kyle told me what you told your dad about us cooling things off. Are you sure Tess heard you?</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--><br>“Judging from the expression on her face, I’d say yes.”<br><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>Good thinking Liz. Listen, Alex and I are still going over things, so I’m not going to stop in there tonight. You be safe, and keep Michael or Kyle close to you at all times. And Liz, I love you.</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--><br>“Yeah, me too,” said Liz, a goofy grin on her face. “Bye.” She disconnected the call and handed the phone back to Kyle.<br>“My shift’s almost over, if you want to head out,” she said.<br>“Maybe I’ll go see if Tess needs a ride home,” he said. “Not that she’ll accept, but it might give me a chance to see what she has planned.<br>“Be careful, Kyle,” said Liz.<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Kyle walked across the restaurant floor and slid into the seat across from Tess.<br>“Hey, Tess.”<br>“Hey Kyle,” said the blond girl. “What do you want? Can’t you see I’m busy here?”<br>“Uh, yeah, because drinking a cola takes a lot of effort,” said Kyle.<br>“Did you want something Buddha Boy, or are you just here to make my life miserable?”<br>“Actually, I’m just about to head home, and I thought I’d do the polite thing and see if you wanted a ride.”<br>“Now why would I want a ride with you,” she said coolly. “I do have my own car you know.”<br>“Just being neighborly,” he said. “And try to be quiet when you come in tonight. “I gave up my bedroom for you, but I don’t have to give up my sleep too.”<br>“Goodbye Kyle.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Kyle made his way to the door, motioning to Liz to join him. She walked up to him, and he reached out and pulled her a little bit closer. <br>“Make this look semi convincing, will you?” he whispered. “Not too passionate, just like I’m giving you a nice friendly supportive comforting hug.”<br>“You jerk,” Liz giggled. “Is she watching?”<br>“Oh yeah, she’s practically climbing over the booth trying not to miss anything.<br>“Great, lets make sure she sees this.” Liz stood on tiptoe and pressed a gentle kiss on Kyle’s cheek. “Kyle, be careful out there, don’t let her see you.”<br>“I’ll be alright Liz, you watch out too. Keep Michael close. Well, not too close, or Maria will totally freak,” he said as he opened the door and stepped out in to the cool New Mexico night.<br><br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Liz drew all the curtains in her room, isolating it from the outside world until Michael was completely settled. She quickly changed, opened the curtains, and sat down to write in her journal. Fifteen minutes later, she heard a soft rapping at her window. She unlatched it and slid it open, and Future Max slipped into the room.<br>“How did it go, did you make any headway convincing him today?” he asked urgently.<br>“A little, but it’s so hard,” said Liz. “You better move away from the window, in case he comes by tonight and tries to convince me not to break up with him.”<br>“Liz, you have to do more than break up with him,” said Future Max. “You have to make him hate you. He has to totally despise you.”<br>“How will we know if it works?” asked Liz.<br>“If you make Max fall out of love with you, it will change the future I belong to. In essence, I will cease to exist. But I’m willing to make that sacrifice.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “What was our life like together?” asked Liz wistfully.<br>“You know I can’t tell you that,” said Future Max.<br>“Why not. If that future isn’t going to exist anyhow, why not tell me about it.”<br>“We eloped when we were 19,” said Future Max.<br>“But that’s so young.”<br>“That’s what I said, but you said that Romeo and Juliet were younger than we were. So we drove to Vegas and got married in an Elvis chapel.”<br>“So we didn’t even have a real wedding?”<br>“Oh it was a great wedding.” “You called everyone and they met us at some sleazy bar in Phoenix. We danced all night. At the end of the night, <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>I shall Believe</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> came on and we danced once more. After that, it was always our song.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Liz glanced at the clock next to her bed, it read 1:57, she wanted this thing, this apparition out of her room.<br>“I’ll think of something. I gave you my word, and I meant it. But you have to get out of here before my parents come upstairs.”<br>“Alright,” said Future Max. “I’ll be back tomorrow night, you can tell me what you came up with. Liz, I know this is hard. It’s hard for me to. I’ll never love anyone like I love you, but Earth is depending on us.” He paused at the window. “Thank you Liz,” he whispered as he climbed out. Liz waited a few moments to make sure he was gone; the she shut the windows and closed the curtains once again.<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “Michael, come on out, he’s gone.”<br>“What do you mean, he’s gone. He was never here, was he?<br>“What are you talking about Michael? I just talked to him? Didn’t you hear us?”<br>“Us? No, I didn’t hear an us, I heard a you, talking to yourself, but that’s about it. I looked out the door and everything, but Liz, you were in the room by yourself.”<br>“Michael, he was here, I swear it!” said Liz, trembling “He told me about our wedding and everything. Oh God, am I losing my mind?”<br>“Liz, relax, your not losing your mind. Something is going on, and I have no clue what it is, but you are not losing your mind.”<br><br><br><br><br> <p><center><font size=2><font color=red><script language="javascript" src="http://members.cox.net/laurensnape/coun ... <center><a href="http://pub129.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsr ... ID=1.topic" target="_new">The Departure Debacle - A Roswell Fanfic contest/challenge</a></center><I><center>Margo is a Super ORB!</i></center><b><center><center><font color=#FFFFCC>It all started with a boy, a girl and a silver handprint.<font color =#CCCCCC><center><i>Countess Majiklmoon Mistress and keeper of the tunes</i></center></color~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<br><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... 2a.gif></a> </p><i></i>
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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 5 - 1/26/03

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Hmmmmm... Sounds like a mindwarp to me! Good suspense. I'm still waiting to find out who's doing what, but all roads lead to Rome, as they say, and Tess has "Rome" written all over her right now.<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :hotgreen --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... kliam3.gif ALT=":hotgreen"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :thumbsup --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... humpup.gif ALT=":thumbsup"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br><br><br> <p><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE IMAGE START--><img src="http://users.aol.com/isndbreeze/skysymb ... <!--EZCODE IMAGE END--><br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong><br><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:gold;">Gerry<br>- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -<br>Hopeless Candy-Coated, Stargazing, <!--EZCODE UNDERLINE START--><span style="text-decoration:underline">Dreamer</span><!--EZCODE UNDERLINE END-->!<br>- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -</span><!--EZCODE FONT END--></strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>
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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 5 - 1/26/03

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<!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :hotgreen --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... kliam3.gif ALT=":hotgreen"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> dam* Tracie! This just keeps sucking me in...matter of fact instead of writing <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>my</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> stuff this weekend all I was thinking about was when would you update! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :lol --><img src=http://www.uniquehardware.co.uk/server- ... /cwm27.gif ALT=":lol"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <p> <!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:yellow;font-family:verdana;font-size:medium;">"Love doesn't just sit there, like a stone; it has to be made, like <br>bread, remade all the time, made new." --Ursula K. Le Guin, writer<br> </span><!--EZCODE FONT END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>
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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 5 - 1/26/03

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YES !! YES !! YES !!!!!!! and YES !!!! ..ok I´ll stop or this will look like a porno post jejeje <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>Tracie I really was in <!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>need</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> of fanfic, and yours is always one of the best. <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :love --><img src=http://216.40.249.192/mysmilies/otn/love/yllove.gif ALT=":love"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> Last friday I watched "Heart of mine" and I ended up with a stomachache !! <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :( --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/im ... /frown.gif ALT=":("><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :cry --><img src=http://www.data-techniques.net/cwm/cwm/3dlil/cry.gif ALT=":cry"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>keep going !! I need more jeje !! <br>you´ve been busy I know (3 new parts) but I am insatiable <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :grin --><img src=http://www.majiklmoon.com/ezboardsmilies/Grin_anim.gif ALT=":grin"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br> <p></p><i></i>
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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 5 - 1/26/03

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This was written in response to the Departure Debacle contest/challenge at Majik’s World of Fan Fic. My submission is just for fun, since I couldn’t pass up the chance to make it all better lol.<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Disclaimer:</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> You know the drill…the characters aren’t mine. A lot of stuff in the beginning is taken from <!--EZCODE UNDERLINE START--><span style="text-decoration:underline">End of the World</span><!--EZCODE UNDERLINE END-->. God knows <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>THAT’S</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> not mine. Anything that makes sense and makes it all better, now that’s mine. Seriously, Roswell and all characters belong to Jason Katims, 20th Century Fox etc. I’m just borrowing them.<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Rating:</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--> PG-13 – possibly to R<br><br><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong>Love Changes Everything</strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--><br><br><!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>Chapter Six – Come Together, Right Now</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--><br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Michael sat up all night, watching over Liz, but nothing else happened. He woke her as the sun began to rise over the horizon.<br>“Liz, I need to get downstairs, I’m supposed to work the morning shift today. Do you want me to call Kyle, or Alex to come over here and hang with you?”<br>“No Michael,” said Liz, wiping the sleep from her eyes and pushing her sleep-tousled hair from her face. “We don’t know how long Kyle was up, watching Tess, and Max and Alex were working on the book last night. Let them sleep.”<br>“I’m not leaving you alone Liz, we can’t take any chances.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Liz sighed, raised her arms above her head and stretched. “Fine, I’ll get dressed and meet you downstairs and help you open, will that work?”<br>“Okay,” said Michael, settling down on the bed.<br>“Michael, what are you doing?”<br>“Waiting for you to get ready,” said Michael.<br>“Oh, God!” said Liz in exasperation. She jumped off the bed, grabbed some clean clothes from her dresser and stormed into the bathroom. She emerged several minutes later, scraping her wet hair into a ponytail. “The next time you use my bathroom, pick up your soggy towels and put the lid down,” she growled.<br>“I see someone is not a morning person,” said Michael.<br>“Shut up, I’ll meet you downstairs. Go put the coffee on.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Michael climbed down off of the fire escape leading to Liz’s room and walked around to the front of the café, to find Alex, Max and Kyle standing outside the door, waiting for the café to open. Michael jogged down the short stretch of sidewalk to where the other’s stood.<br>“Glad to see I have such a following for my cooking,” he joked.<br>“Oh yeah, like that’s it,” said Alex. “Can Liz come down and cook for us? I so want to keep the lining of my stomach intact.”<br>“Loser,” said Michael, cuffing him lightly as he made his way to the door. “Why are you guys here, anyhow?”<br>“We need to have a meeting of the minds,” said Kyle.<br>“Don’t you mean a meeting of the mindless,” quipped Liz as she walked into the restaurant.<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Max, Kyle and Alex sat down in a booth, while Michael went into the kitchen to get the grill heated. Liz quickly made some coffee and grabbed the first cup for herself. Filling three other cups, she brought them over to the table. She waited until the guys had their first sips before asking, “So why are you here, really? You all can’t have Liz sitting duty, can you?”<br>“Liz, what time did Tess leave here last night?” asked Max.<br>“I’m not sure,” she said. “Shortly after Kyle did, I think. Why?”<br>“Michael!” Max yelled across the still empty restaurant. “Did you see Tess leave last night?”<br>“Yeah, she took off right after Kyle left. Why?”<br><br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Max looked around and motioned to Michael to abandon the grill and join them at the table. Max waited until Michael joined them before telling them what happened.<br>“When Kyle left here, he called Alex and me on his cell, and we took turns talking to him, while he watched the CrashDown. After about two hours, he figured he missed her, so he drove home.”<br>“I talked to Max, all the way home, because I was tired, and didn’t want to fall asleep while I was driving,” continued Kyle. “When I got home, it was about 12:50, Dad was just going to bed, but he asked me if I knew where Tess was. Now this is where it really gets weird. I went to bed, but I never disconnected my call to Max.”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp Liz looked at her three friends. “Is there a point to this?” she asked, because as entertaining as it is, I’m just not in the mood for a bedtime story so early in the morning.”<br>“It gets much more interesting Liz,” said Alex. “Like Kyle said, he forgot to hang up the call. Max’s phone was just sitting on the desk, when I heard Kyle’s voice again. I figured he was just talking in his sleep,”<br>“So of course, you picked up the phone to eavesdrop,” said Liz, laughing.<br>“Well, yeah,” said Alex. “Wouldn’t you? Anyhow, I heard Kyle asking somebody where they had been for so long. Then I heard Tess’s voice saying she’d left right after him, and that they talked in the parking lot. Then she told him that she went over and helped Maria and Isabelle with the inventory at Maria’s mom’s store.”<br>“What!” said Liz? “No way! Kyle, did she leave with you?”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “I don’t know, Liz,” said Kyle, clearly upset. “I remember everything she said, so clearly, yet, Max and Alex said I spoke to them for a few hours on my cell. And Alex said he heard all that stuff on the cell. I don’t know what to think.”<br>“Wait a second, said Liz, her finger’s drumming absently on the side of her coffee cup. “I feel like I’m remembering something. Damn, why can’t I remember? Wait a second!” she yelled and ran out of the restaurant and flew up the stairs leading to her family’s apartment.<br>“Hi Mom, Hi Dad!” they heard her call. “Yeah, Michael’s got the grill going, and it’s pretty dead down there, so why don’t you hang up here. I’ll shout when we get busy.” There was silence for a few minutes, followed by the uncommon sound of Liz Parker thundering down a flight of stairs.<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp “I found it,” she said, excitedly. <br>“What?” said Michael. “What did you find? Don’t tell me you <!--EZCODE ITALIC START--><em>lost</em><!--EZCODE ITALIC END--> your journal again?”<br>“No, but I did find something in it. Do you remember last spring when Pierce caught Max, and took him to the White Room?” She waited while the others nodded. “Well, how did we get him out?” she demanded.<br>“Well, we managed to sneak into the facility,” began Michael, and Nesedo taught me how to manipulate my fingerprint to resemble some other agent, so we could get in.”<br>“Right,” said Liz. “Go on, then what happened?”<br>“I – we, uh, I’m not sure. It all happened so fast, it’s all kind of a blur.”<br><br>“Right, I can’t remember either, and I bet you, neither can anybody else,” said Liz. But when Max and I hid in that old delivery van, I wrote down everything on some paper I found. Max told me about Isabelle dreamwalking him, and how she told him that Nesedo was coming. To get Pierce alone and agree to go along with whatever he wanted. Then Max told me what Pierce wanted; he wanted the orbs to work. Max told him he’d do it. And all of a sudden, they worked. I had hypothesized that Tess made Pierce think the orbs worked. When we got home, and everything settled down, I remembered about the scraps of paper. When I read them over, most of it seemed like a dream, but I transferred them to my journal anyhow.”<br><br>“I don’t get it,” said Kyle. “What does this have to do with anything?”<br>“No, wait,” said Max, drumming his fingers on the table. “I think she’s on to something. I swear, I remember Tess telling me how she made Pierce think that the orbs worked. But it seems like a dream.”<br>“Just suppose,” said Alex, “That Tess does have the ability to make people think they are seeing things that aren’t there, or just messing with their minds in general.”<br>“Right,” said Michael, picking up the thread. “If she can make people think something, why can’t she make people forget something too?”<br><br>&nbsp &nbsp &nbsp &nbsp The teens looked at each other, a growing sense of horror showing on all their faces as they realized the extent of Tess’s deception. They had their who, now they had their how. Now they needed to find out just how far Tess was willing to go to continue her deception.<br> <p><center><font size=2><font color=red><script language="javascript" src="http://members.cox.net/laurensnape/coun ... <center><a href="http://pub129.ezboard.com/fmajiklmoonsr ... 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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 5 - 1/26/03

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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 6 - 1/27/03

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Re: Love Changes Everything - CC - pt 6 - 1/27/03

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