Burn for Me -TEEN - mostly CC (some UC)Conclusion-Feb. 28cc

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Re: Part 24

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Kath, I've been horrid horrid horrid with the FB, and for that I apologize. A story as wonderful as this deserves to have glowing feedback after every part...TONS of it in fact. <br><br>I can't begin to tell you how thrilled I am that you are sharing your stories here <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START :) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/smile.gif ALT=":)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON END--> <br><br>Tracie <p><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm><img src=http://members.aol.com/majiklmoon/image ... a></center> <center><img border=0 src="http://www.majiksfanfic.com/banners/Kyle.jpg" /></center><center><a href=http://pub84.ezboard.com/bmajiklmoonsrealm></center> </p><i></i>
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Re: Part 24

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I fall deeper in love with this story everytime I read it! Thank you for sharing you beautiful writing here with us. <p><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:white;font-family:georgia;font-size:x-small;">Moral indignation is jealousy with a halo.</span><!--EZCODE FONT END--></strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--><br><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE BOLD START--><strong><!--EZCODE FONT START--><span style="color:white;font-family:verdana;font-size:x-small;">Your fake and it shows.</span><!--EZCODE FONT END--><br></strong><!--EZCODE BOLD END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--> <br><!--EZCODE CENTER START--><div style="text-align:center"><!--EZCODE IMAGE START--><img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v639/ ... <!--EZCODE IMAGE END--></div><!--EZCODE CENTER END--></p><i></i>
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I have to second that kitkat... this story is simply incredible. <br><br> <p></p><i></i>
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Re: Burn for Me -TEEN - mostly CC (some UC)Conclusion-Feb. 2

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I began reading this..... give me some time and i´ll be back with a huge fb post :)

:read :read :read
I live for this stuff !!
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Aw, that was a nice ending! "It's the only reason that matters."
I think this part was great. It really sort of tied it all up right:
"Sam is his own person," Max tells her. "He should have his own name." Rath nods his head in agreement.

Later, they are lying in their bed, their baby asleep between them. Everyone is finally gone again - at least for a little while - and Liz asks Max to elaborate.

"Zan’s entire life was wrapped up in being a duplicate," Max explains quietly. "He wouldn’t want that for his son. The pressure of being the second anything. Even the second Zan."

And, so, Sam becomes his own person and they all watch him grow with awe and wonder.

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