A Thousand Lies have made...(CC, A/I, ADULT)Pt.11 2/12/06

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and that 'good company' would be me, i just know it! :P LOL
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“Lonnie did tell me that I had to learn to close the connection with you a little. See, we missed three years and my body stored up all this energy and love and so it gets a bit overwhelming. I guess that just now I forgot and so I was all wide open and it was too much for you. I’m sorry.” She held her head down as she finished speaking.

“That’s OK, sweetheart, I am very happy to make up for lost time. Just remember that I am only a lowly human and already no match for such a beautiful woman, let alone an alien princess, so go easy on me, OK?” he said as he leaned over to plant a soft kiss on her lips.
Wow! Isabel with all pent up, uh... emotions! It must be Alex's dream... getting to bring her out. :D
And the gang sure got a lot of mileage out of the soap dish incident! Especially Kyle! OMG. He should remember you should never piss Isabel off!
“It’s OK. Maria, no worries. You don’t even have a soap dish in your shower,” Kyle remarked with a chuckle.

“SHUT UP, KYLE!” yelled Max and Michael with simultaneous horror.
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Pooh...i'm scum...I didn't leave you fb for this part. It Kyle was so awesome in it. WTF was I thinking :(

so..Kyle...you need to learn to keep your mouth shut :lol You never know what Isabel may chose to blow off of you :lol
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I loved how Kyle teased them about the soap dish :lol:
Pooh this story is fantastic!

My only word for it is-WOW!
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HI Karen :wave

:welcome to the board, and man oh man, did you pick an awesome author to start reading first
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Thanks Majiklmoon :D

Just my luck I guess that I came across this one along with "Gazer gets the girl",between both my gazer soul is up in heaven :lol:
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Thank you so much for the beautiful FB KarenEvans and a big welcome to the board :)
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Thanks for the welcome Pooh :D
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Pooh when are you going to update,missing this story?
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awww I'm sorry, I lost my beta but I found a new one (thanks Trix you rock) and so I will try to update by the weekend :) Thanks for asking
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Title: A Thousand Lies Have made me Colder
Author: Truelovepooh
Rating: Adult
Category: A/I with a little of everyone CC
Disclaimer: Roswell and the characters in this story are not mine. Just Borrowing them.
Summary: Alex and Isabel never broke up in Season 1 and this story follows through to season 2. All the stuff happens, with the exception of Grant. I can’t really go into much more but as you read you will catch on…I hope!


A/N: This is only part of the next part, I'm still working on it and it's kinda long (well for me) I will try to get it posted within the next few days :)
Thanks to my wonderful and talented Beta Tracie, you rock as always! And KISS MY ASS FRED! (it's been awhile since I did that)






Part 10a


The food came and everyone settles in to eat. Maria cast many dirty looks at Isabel and Alex, finding that they were only smirking at her. She was in all honesty very happy for her friends but she still did not understand the “sex thing.” She and Michael had never been that way, yes they loved to be with each other and maybe when they first started making love they were a bit of what you could call “horn dogs” but never to the extreme like Max and Liz and now Isabel and Alex. Tess and Kyle weren’t like them either; maybe it was an Evans thing? Or a royal thing, whatever the case my be, it was a thing she was glad not to have to deal with.

“So where are we going to start with this?” Maria asks.

“Well since Cal is a famous director I thought we could look online and see what we can dig up.” Alex answers, getting up to grab his laptop.

“Do you really think anything online is true?” Kyle inquires.

“You’d be surprised at what is true and what isn’t,” said Alex.

Everyone crowds around as Alex begins a search. After typing in several different keywords and not coming up with anything, he sits back for a moment.

“Max, what sort of movies is Cal involved in?” he asks.

“Mostly Sci-Fi I think, big surprise there” Max adds.

After some time and some clicking Alex sits back on the couch and chuckles.

“What’s so funny Alex?” Tess questions.

“Yeah I’m not sure anything is funny here,” Michael states.

“No you’re right, this thing with Cal isn’t funny but THIS is.” Alex trails off, turning the laptop slightly so Michael could look at it.

Michael looks at the laptop for a minute then giggles in a very unMichael like way, bringing everyone to gather around the table. Isabel was the first to gasp, followed closely by Maria.

“What the hell is that?” asks Kyle.

“That my dear friend would be what you call fan fiction, written by the fans for the fans,” Alex finishes with a wink

“ Okay why would anyone want to spend all that time writing something that looks a lot like porn…at least to me,” Kyle asks, bewildered. “And believe me when I say I know my porn."

“Yes, he’s telling you the truth….but that’s not porn it just looks like fun,” Tess replies.

“Tess, that is SO porn, I mean listen to this,” Isabel begins starting to read out loud

She took his aching cock in her mouth, running her tongue from the base, up to the cherub head, pulling it into her mouth.

“AAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! That feels so good, HARDER!” he said putting his hands in her hair

“Do you like that?” She asked sucking him like a Popsicle.

“OH MY GOD YES!” he screamed allowing his seed to explode all over her face


“Ok…Ok...no more please!” groans Max.

Smirking, Isabel stops reading; thoroughly enjoying the fact it was grossing her brother out.

“I can’t believe what some people do with their spare time, why write about it when you could be acting it out,” Kyle states, with a huge grin

Tess leans over smacking him lightly and smiling. Max sits with his hands over his face trying to get the image out of his head and his sister’s voice out of his brain.

“That’s nothing, there’s this one site that has all these really great stories about every TV show person you can think of. It’s called Majik’s World of…” Liz said, her voice trailing off after realizing everyone was staring at her “What?”

Hiding a giggle behind her hand Isabel smirks at Liz “Spend a lot of time reading, hey Liz?”

“What? Umm…No, I just happened to run across it…” Liz stumbles.

Everyone held in laughter watching Liz stumble over her words. Looking down at Max who was trying not to laugh, she leans down to whisper in his ear “ Hey where do you think I get some of my ideas?”

Max’s eyes light up and he let allows the laugh escape, reaching up to kiss her.

“Okay you two, don’t start, we have work to do.” Maria frowns looking at them.

Lonnie sits back watching them all in awe, this was not the group she had seen before and she couldn’t get over how great they all seemed to get along together. Looking over at Isabel and Alex, she watches them stare into each other’s eyes communicating silently to each other. Isabel breaks her heated stare with Alex and looks over at Lonnie. She smiles at her, knowing what she was thinking.

“Well all this sex talk had made me hungry, how about take-out from the Crash?” Michael said

“Michael we just ate an hour ago” Maria exclaims.

“So I’m hungry again, I’ll just run and get some hamburgers and fries. I think Cherie and Michelle are there right now, they won’t mind.” Michael answers matter of factly.
“Come on midget, you and your woman come with me to help get all the stuff together,” he said to Kyle and Tess

“Ok giant, we are here to serve you,” Kyle answers sarcastically, pulling a laughing Tess with him

“Fine! We’re never going to get anything done….HEY! Where do you two think you’re going?” Maria screams as Max and Liz snuck off to the bedroom.

“We have to go look at something we’ll be out when the food gets here…” Liz’s voice trails off as she’s pulled by Max into their bedroom.

“You know you’re going to pay for this!” Maria yells back, stomping her foot while everyone else laughs.

“Yes Maria, we will” Max yells out before shutting the door and pulling Liz close to him. “You feel like doing anything we read about?” Max whispers in the base of her neck, Liz giggles and closes her eyes enjoying the feeling. “Hmm…maybe something I read about the other day…” she trails off pulling his shirt over his head. “Who knew reading could be so much fun….” Liz starts to say as she is pulled into an intense kiss.



Maria sits fuming as she watches Alex, Lonnie and Isabel still searching the Internet on Alex’s laptop. Watching them, she reflects how odd it looks to see Lonnie sitting between Alex and Isabel, when Lonnie interrupts her thoughts.

“HEY! Guys give me a break will you please!!” Lonnie exclaims.

Alex has the forethought to at least blush while Isabel looks very pleased with herself.

“Sorry Lonnie,” Alex mumbles.

“Why don’t you too go find a room? My thoughts are getting crowded, and the images are getting a little hard to handle,” Lonnie said.

Maria looks on with interest, “What do you mean Lonnie? They just look like they’re sitting there.”

“Yeah, they are, but Isabel is sending Alex…interesting thoughts, Alex must be used to it by now but pretty soon I’m going to need a cold shower.” Lonnie states.

Isabel laughs, stands up grabs Alex and starts to pull him down the hall.

“Hey where do you think you’re going? We have work to do….you already got some in the bathroom!” Maria yells.

“You heard Lonnie we have to help her out. If I have my way it won’t take long!” Isabel says as she pulls Alex into Maria and Michael’s room.

“MY ROOM!! Is there no place safe from you people?” Maria yells out down the hall as the door closes “UGH!” she exclaims sitting down on the couch by Lonnie.

“I don’t understand why these Evans people are so damn horny!” Maria exclaims.

Lonnie laughs at the frustrated Maria. “ It’s not that they are horny, it’s a royal thing….the bonding is so intense between royals that they can feel each other constantly. Think about it, you and Michael are bonded, but if you could feel every single thought going through his mind all the time would you all ever leave the bedroom?”

“Well I would hope he didn’t think about sex every minute of the day…ok wait, this is Michael we are talking about and he’s a man, I see what your saying…but, why only the royals?” Maria asks.

Lonnie was about to answer when they both hear a loud moan coming from the back of the house.

“Ok guys! Give us a break PLEASE!” Maria yells.

Lonnie giggles. “The royals received the gift of the intense bond way back in our history. It’s one reason everyone wants to be with them.”

“So is it like that for you?” Maria asks.

“No, to some degree yes…but more like it is for you and Michael. The bad thing is I can feel the connection with Isabel and Alex, although I think that’s mostly because I interfered with their bond. I’m hoping when this is all over I won’t be able to anymore,” Lonnie answers sadly

Maria leans over and puts her hand on Lonnie’s, patting it lightly “ We will fix this. You made a mistake, the important thing is now you’re trying to fix it.”

Meanwhile in the back of the house

“Max…we have to keep it down” Liz says in between kisses and trying not to moan

Kissing his way down her neck and onto her stomach, Max works his hands along with his mouth, pulling her panties down her legs. He glances up watching Liz try to maintain some semblance of control.

“I want you to lose control,” he says with a grin, moving down the length of her body to show her exactly what he had in mind.






Alex stops what he is doing after he hears Liz moan. He’d been caught up in what was happening between Isabel and him, but Liz’s moan brought reality crashing down around him.

“Oh no you don’t. Forget them,” Isabel say, leaning over to whisper in his ear “ All you need to worry about is me!” she adds sitting up.

Alex looks up at the beautiful and naked Isabel, “thinking about who?” he says, sitting up to capture her lips with his, running his hands over her back as they glide together.

“I love you,” she says.

“ I love you too,” he answers.

Same time at the crash down

“Hello anyone here?” Tess asks as she walks into the CrashDown with Michael and Kyle.

“ I’m here,” a timid voice says from the behind the counter

They watches as Tracie stands up, her gaze holding on Kyle. Tess smiles knowingly.

“Hi Tracie, I didn’t know you where working today?” Kyle says, smiling at her.

“Hi Tess, Michael and….Kyle” the latter coming out in a whisper

“Yea whatever, we need to pick up some food…is anyone else here?” Michael asked

Standing up straighter, Tracie takes notice of how stressed Michael is. He was usually pretty nice, well, as nice as it was possible for Michael to be. “ I’m sure I can whip up something, what did you need?” Tracie answers in a tone of voice that shocked Michael, making Kyle and Tess laugh.

“Well umm if you don’t mind, we would just like some burgers and fries to go…if it’s no trouble?” Michael says clearly not wanting to piss Tracie off anymore then he already has.

Tracie smiled at the small group, letting her smile linger on Kyle the longest and heads to the back.


TBC...







Ok I will TRY to post the rest of this part tomorrow, but since I was asked so nicely I had to post some of it….
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“That’s nothing, there’s this one site that has all these really great stories about every TV show person you can think of. It’s called Majik’s World of…” Liz said, her voice trailing off after realizing everyone was staring at her “What?”

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Part 10B

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Part 2 as promised :)



thanks for ALL the awesome FB! Here’s the next part and I’m working on part 11 already so hopefully the wait won’t be long :)






Part 10-B



Both bedroom doors open at the same time letting out two very happy girls. Isabel and Liz find themselves staring at one another with a smile of understanding.

“We haven’t had a lot of time to talk since this whole thing happened but I want you to know, I’m very happy for you and Alex,” Liz expresses “And I’m sorry for letting it go as long as it did…I wish…”

Walking up to Liz, Isabel puts her hand on her shoulder “Liz you didn’t know, none of us did…I don’t want to regret anything when it comes to Alex, but I feel that I should have known, this is because of me…but instead of regret I plan to spend the rest of my life making it up to him.” She finishes by pulling a shocked Liz into a strong hug. “Thank you for making my brother so happy and bringing Alex into my life.” She said kindly in a whisper

Liz is at a lose for words, yes she knows Isabel isn’t the ‘Ice Queen’ everyone labeled her but, she and Isabel have never really been that close, Liz always assumed it was because when she came into the picture Isabel and Max weren’t as close anymore, also in part Liz felt she and Isabel were so different. Standing there hugging her, she realizes they are a lot alike, and the fact that they both loved these two men so strongly makes them even more so.

“Come on, lets go deal with Maria,” Liz says, finally gaining her voice “and you’re welcome.”

Walking out into the living room Liz and Isabel see Lonnie and Maria sitting on the couch. Looking up Maria smiles at the girls as they enter.

“Hey girls, where are your better halves, too tired to move?” she asks snickering.

“Nope, Alex is still trying to fix the bed, I think we broke it.” Isabel replies.

“WHAT?!?!” Maria exclaims. “MY BED! UGH! I can’t believe you people, how could you do that? Isabel shouldn’t you be helping him with your powers…I mean…Do you have to go and break everything…GEEZ!” She trails off as the three girls began to laugh “WHAT?”

“Maria, I’m kidding, he fell asleep, I thought I’d let him sleep until Michael gets back with the food, I think everything is catching up with him. We didn’t break anything, I promise.” Isabel says walking over to sit down next to Maria pulling her into a hug.

“Thank you for everything, I don’t know what I would have done if you hadn’t gotten him to come back, I owe you so much” Isabel said with tears in her eyes

Maria, Liz and Lonnie all looked on a little shocked, Isabel was not one to really show her affections to anyone but Alex. What had come over her?

“I’m just happy that my friends are happy, that being said you don’t owe me anything…now where the heck is Space Boy?” Maria asks.



Crash Down

Michael, Tess and Kyle sit patiently waiting for their food to finish. The bell signaling someone entering rings and in walks Michelle and Cherie.

“Hey guys! How’s everyone today?” Michelle asks, looking around for a certain amber-eyed hunk of man meat

“We are fine and he’s not here, he stayed at home with the little woman, we’re on a food run. Maybe now that you’re here it will finally get done…” Michael answers. He hears a throat clear behind him and flinches before turning around slowly, knowing when he does, he’ll find Tracie standing there.

“Your food’s done,” Tracie says walking past Michael and handing it to Kyle, “I’ll put it on your tab,” she says softly

“Ok, Tracie thanks so much!” Kyle says, grabbing the food and giving Tracie a smile and a wink.

A sigh escapes her lips and Tess has to hold back a giggle. “Thanks Tracie we appreciate it.” Tess says.

“Aww you’re leaving so soon, can’t you stay for a little while? I almost miss customers. It will be nice when the Crash opens back up for good.” Michelle says.

“We’ve got business to take care of, but thanks for the food and you all lock the door behind us.” Michael says,

“Michael I never knew you cared, you sweetie!” Cherie says pulling him into a hug,

Michael blushes and tries to return the uncomfortable hug. “ Of course I care. Maria would be very upset if anything happened to you guys and it’s getting dark and well just because…” he stuttered.

Cherie laughs at Michael’s discomfort, “Tell Max ‘Hi’ from us and to come see us more often.”

Michael grumbles and starts to head out the door. Stopping just short of the door, he turns around, “ Sorry about being rude before, and thanks for the food” he states

Tracie smiles at him and nods, a new understanding has passed between them and she is quite pleased with it.

“Ok girls, we will see ya later, bye!” Kyle says walking out the door with Tess saying bye as well.

“Bye Kyle!” Tracie yells a little to loudly, turning around to head back in the kitchen she is met with the knowing stares of Michelle and Cherie.

“WHAT?” Tracie asks.

They smile at her and start to gather things to get started on work.

“Where’s Lucia? She better not be watching Buffy reruns again, I’m telling you we seem to have lost her to another world.” Michelle said chuckling.

“Pfft, that’s nothing my friends Lindsay and Angel are all into this show about this teenage detective, I mean it’s good but you can’t beat what happens in real life right here in Roswell” Tracie says

“I totally agree.” Cherie answers.


Back at the house

Isabel knew Alex was tired but couldn’t resist going and giving him a wake-up call. Walking slowly into the room she stops to watch him sleep, her heart swelling at the sight of him so peaceful. Taking the opportunity she walks over to the bed and sits down. She begins to study him, starting at his face and moving slowly down his body. He really was a handsome man, beautifully shaped eyes, long eye lashes, strong chin, wonderfully shaped nose, broad shoulders, nice filled out chest, flat stomach and nice butt (ok so she can’t see his butt but she KNOWS this.) Isabel is so lost in thought she doesn’t realize Alex had woken up and is watching her study him.

“Do I get to check out all your lovely assets?” he asks.

Jumping at the sound of his voice Isabel blushes, “I was just coming into wake you up but you looked so good laying there I thought I would just let it all soak in…your really here.” She said while a loan tear makes its way down her face.

Sitting up, Alex pulls her into a tight hug; he can feel all her emotions coming thru and is trying to decide if she is happy or upset.

“I’m ok Alex, just feeling a bit emotional today for some reason, I think it’s all hit me at once.” Isabel says into the side of Alex’s neck.

Rubbing her back slowly he comforts her, “Maybe your tired?” He questions.

“No, I’m ok just a woman thing, I think, “ She responds pulling him closer “Michaels not back with the food yet so there’s no rush to go out there…could you hold me for awhile?”

“I’d be happy to,” he says pulling them down on the bed to cuddle. “Lay on me a little and I’ll scratch your back.”

Isabel relaxes as soon as Alex hands begin to lightly scratch over her back. She lies there enjoying it for a minute. Suddenly, she sits up and pulls her shirt and bra off before lying back down on top of him. “You can reach more this way,” she states.

Of course Alex can reach more but having a topless Isabel laying on him is getting to be difficult. He fell asleep without his shirt and can feel her body began to respond to the touches and knows this was leading to more then cuddling.

“Isabel, if we don’t get up now, we won’t be out there when Michael comes back with the food,” Alex tries to reason.

“Hmmm, so…” Isabel answers moving up so she is at his eye level.

Leaning in she moves her lips over his lightly causing him to shiver, she pulls away to look in his eyes and feels the love radiant thru them. Alex takes his hand and puts it behind her head to pull her into another kiss, this one harder. He nips at her bottom lip then the top making her moan lightly as he suddenly flips them over so he is on top of her. He begins to kiss his way around her neck, shoulder and then down to her breasts, Isabel bucks up slightly, closing her eyes enjoying the sensations Alex is causing her. As Alex begins his assault on her breasts with his tongue his hands begin to unbutton her jeans and move them down her hips, pulling her panties with them. (Realizing now he wishes he had not put his jeans back on before he fell asleep) Pulling away much to the protest of Isabel, Alex quickly sheds the rest of his clothes, stopping for a moment to look at her he hovers over her for a moment then quickly enters her, both of them stopping to enjoy the feeling of being joined. Slowly he begins to move creating the feelings only they can give to one another. After sometime Alex senses Isabel is beginning to come to an end and speeds up his movements, capturing her mouth with his they finish together

“ I honestly didn’t come in here to do more then wake you up,” Isabel says, still trying to get her breath back

“Well I say you wake me up like that all the time.” Alex says leaning into to kiss her flushed forehead “We should get up and go out there now, Maria is going to kill us!” he says laughing and starting to get up

“No she won’t, she’s happy for us, but I better clean up her bed or she might really get mad,” Isabel says sitting up and looking around for her clothes.


Michael walks in just as Alex and Isabel come down the hallway holding hands. He smiles at them and sets the food down on the table. “ Ok peeps we need to eat and then really get down to business here, did any of you find anything while we were gone?” Michael asks

“Lonnie and I found a few things worth looking into after we eat, “ Maria states looking at the group. Liz had gone in to wake up Max who had apparently fallen asleep, Isabel had gone to get Alex along time before Liz went to get Max but she suspected they were up to their usual thing and decided not to harp on it, she was happy…they all were, now all they had to do was fix Cal.

Isabel looks at the group all getting their food and once again has to fight tears from coming down her face.

Lonnie sat back watching Isabel, something was wrong.

Isabel felt Lonnie’s concern; looking over at her she smiles at her dupe with reassurance. “I’m ok Lonnie, just letting everything sink in and feeling happy for the first time in a long time.”

Lonnie was not convinced but smiles back. In the back of her mind she knew it was something more but decides to let it rest…for now.
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Just popped in to tell you how much I love this story, Pooh! :lol:

Wonder what Isabel may be hiding that Lonnie senses from her :shock:

Can't wait for more!

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Loved the update, Pooh. Isabel is so emotional, but I think it's a good side of her to see. Very steamy scene with her and Alex! ;) And I loved the cameos you threw in. :lol
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:lol: Poor Maria...surrounded by horny people who mess up her house.

I am so happy that you updated this story Pooh,missed it alot.

Loved the love scene between Alex and Isabel.Is Isabel pregnant?
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Okay, I read a lot of this before on another board, and I think I may have left a feedback or two there, too, but I'm starting over at the beginning and going to try to quickly catch up. I'll comment on chapters as I go.

Chapter 1
Isabel stops suddenly, she looks at Alex and with a wave of her hand they are both stripped down, him in his boxers and her in her bra and panties.

“ISABEL!” Alex yells out in shock having never seen her so aggressive or willing to use her powers.

Giggling Isabel raises her eyebrows suggestively “What?” she says with a pretend pout.

Alex looks into her eyes knowing she is being playful “What if I wanted to strip you?”
He pouts back playfully.

“Well you can take off the rest” Isabel says seductively a hint of passion in her eyes
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That chapter was great, Pooh! This was my favorite part, I think! I loved it! :heart :love
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