Tomorrow's Yet to Come ~ epilogue ~ 11/4/04 - COMPLETE

[Angelzbabe]

Ok, so I'm finally caught up with this story, and yet again your writing amazes me. Love Changes Everything was an amazing piece of fiction, and this is even better as you continued to explore the reality you created.

I absolutely love Zan, and how he and Max are bonding together. That he stayed behind on Antar to rule is something I thought might happen when you brought him into the story, but the twist of them all being rulers is something I wouldn't have imagined in my wildest dreams. Your ability to create twists and turns in a story is something I could only dream of ever having.

Maria being behind the whole campaign with the song was inspired, and you had me laughing my head off so many times at the classic 'Maria'isms that makes me love her character so much. Pairing her together with Ava, Alex and Kyle - who are also always making me laugh, was comic genuis and just what the story needed to balance up the darker scenes with Kivar and the Isabel clone, as well as the war and fighting the Aberjani.

The death of Jim brought tears to my eyes, which were quickly replaced with a massive smile as he was brought back by the power of the Granolith and IKACC working together.

That Che'koth was their father was yet another twist that amazed me, as did the fact that one of the rebels was thier mother and that Plash was actually Michael and Ava's mother. The introduction of their Antarian parents, and the confict it caused Max, before Jim made him see sense, was heart rendering. The love between all the characters is what makes them so strong together, and you yet again brought tears to my eyes.

Right, now that I am finished telling you what an amazing story this one was, I am off to read the sequel. Keep up the amazing work Tracie.

[Island Breeze]

I absolutely love Zan, and how he and Max are bonding together. That he stayed behind on Antar to rule is something I thought might happen when you brought him into the story, but the twist of them all being rulers is something I wouldn't have imagined in my wildest dreams. Your ability to create twists and turns in a story is something I could only dream of ever having.

I agree. That was great! But you already know I loved it!


Gerry

[Anonymous]

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But i just can't understand it...

[Island Breeze]

Everything will be made clear if you read on. There are some twists and turns, but this story is great, I can guarantee you! I'm assuming you don't mean there is a language difficulty because of not understanding English well enough, so that would be my suggestion... read on and it will all become clear. If you have any questions, though, just ask. Any of those of us who have read it will be glad to explain.