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:D Pressing Forward - (M/L, All, TEEN/MATURE) Pt. 5, 8/11/05
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Island Breeze
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I'm wondering why Michael? Well, I mean, besides the M&M factor. You've given us some real mysteries here: Why didn't Maria ask Max to do something? Just what IS affecting Liz? And when is this going to be updated :?: 
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Hey Everyone sorry it took me so long to add more to this story. College has really taken it's toll on my writing time, but I promise not to give up on this story if yall don't give up on me.
<center>Chapter Six</center>
Chapter Six
Maria scrambled around the room looking for her purse, which contained her cell phone inside. She then spotted it in Liz’s desk chair and rushed over, ripped it open, and pulled out her sliver colored cell phone. She then pressed the number five and put the phone up to her ear.
“Come on Michael please pick up the phone.” She said mainly to herself as the phone began to ring. Maria was fidgeting around with an extremely worried look on her face as she waited impatiently for Michael to answer his phone.
She was getting more and more upset as the seconds past. “Why in the hell isn’t he…” Maria thought to herself, and then was interrupted by a boy’s voice saying hello.
“MICHAEL! Thank god. It’s Maria….”
“Where in the hell have you been… are you playing hooky or something?” Michael interrupted.
“Michael it doesn’t matter where I’ve been! I need you right now.” Maria said franticly.
When Michael realized how frightened and upset Maria’s voice was he immediately took the anger out of his voice and made it more calming.
“Okay what happened?” He said trying his best to calm down his frantic girlfriend over the phone.
“It’s Liz. She’s really really sick Michael… She has a 104 fever and I have no freakin’ clue what to do!” Maria gasped out as tears began to run down her face, making her black mascara run down her face.
“Okay… ummmm… how about I go and get Max? He’ll most likely know what to do.”
“NO!” Maria screamed into the phone.
“And why not?” Michael asked which a hint of anger in his voice.
“Because I promised Liz that I wouldn’t tell him.” Maria answered in a stern voice.
“And why in the hell did you do that?” Michael asked.
“I don’t know, but you’ve got to promise me that you will not tell him!”
“I’ll see what I can do.” Michael said while he rolled his eyes. He loved his girlfriend to death, but sometimes she just didn’t think. Telling Max would make everyone’s life so much easier.
“So are you coming?” He heard Maria say over the phone as he rushed back into reality.
“Oh… yea I’ll be there in about ten minutes. Leave the back door unlocked for me.” Michael said then he snapped his cell phone shut.
Maria then heard the sound of the dial tone, looked at her phone, and growled angrily.
“He hung up on me!” Maria said aloud.
“What?” Maria heard someone whisper then moan.
She turned around to see Liz looking straight at her with her glassed over chocolate brown eyes.
“Oh it’s nothing honey” Maria said sweetly as she walked back over to Liz’s bed and sat down softly, “Michael coming over and he’s going to help try to figure out what’s doing on with you.”
“Okay…” Liz whispered as her eyes began to get heavy again, “Is Max coming with him?”
“No sweetie you said earlier that you didn’t want Max here.”
“I want my Max… Maria get me Max.” Liz whispered right before she lost her fight with trying to keep her eyes open. But right as her eyes were closing Maria saw a single tear run down Liz’s face.
<center>Chapter Six</center>
Chapter Six
Maria scrambled around the room looking for her purse, which contained her cell phone inside. She then spotted it in Liz’s desk chair and rushed over, ripped it open, and pulled out her sliver colored cell phone. She then pressed the number five and put the phone up to her ear.
“Come on Michael please pick up the phone.” She said mainly to herself as the phone began to ring. Maria was fidgeting around with an extremely worried look on her face as she waited impatiently for Michael to answer his phone.
She was getting more and more upset as the seconds past. “Why in the hell isn’t he…” Maria thought to herself, and then was interrupted by a boy’s voice saying hello.
“MICHAEL! Thank god. It’s Maria….”
“Where in the hell have you been… are you playing hooky or something?” Michael interrupted.
“Michael it doesn’t matter where I’ve been! I need you right now.” Maria said franticly.
When Michael realized how frightened and upset Maria’s voice was he immediately took the anger out of his voice and made it more calming.
“Okay what happened?” He said trying his best to calm down his frantic girlfriend over the phone.
“It’s Liz. She’s really really sick Michael… She has a 104 fever and I have no freakin’ clue what to do!” Maria gasped out as tears began to run down her face, making her black mascara run down her face.
“Okay… ummmm… how about I go and get Max? He’ll most likely know what to do.”
“NO!” Maria screamed into the phone.
“And why not?” Michael asked which a hint of anger in his voice.
“Because I promised Liz that I wouldn’t tell him.” Maria answered in a stern voice.
“And why in the hell did you do that?” Michael asked.
“I don’t know, but you’ve got to promise me that you will not tell him!”
“I’ll see what I can do.” Michael said while he rolled his eyes. He loved his girlfriend to death, but sometimes she just didn’t think. Telling Max would make everyone’s life so much easier.
“So are you coming?” He heard Maria say over the phone as he rushed back into reality.
“Oh… yea I’ll be there in about ten minutes. Leave the back door unlocked for me.” Michael said then he snapped his cell phone shut.
Maria then heard the sound of the dial tone, looked at her phone, and growled angrily.
“He hung up on me!” Maria said aloud.
“What?” Maria heard someone whisper then moan.
She turned around to see Liz looking straight at her with her glassed over chocolate brown eyes.
“Oh it’s nothing honey” Maria said sweetly as she walked back over to Liz’s bed and sat down softly, “Michael coming over and he’s going to help try to figure out what’s doing on with you.”
“Okay…” Liz whispered as her eyes began to get heavy again, “Is Max coming with him?”
“No sweetie you said earlier that you didn’t want Max here.”
“I want my Max… Maria get me Max.” Liz whispered right before she lost her fight with trying to keep her eyes open. But right as her eyes were closing Maria saw a single tear run down Liz’s face.
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Island Breeze
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Oh my! That's so angsty. Now she wants Max there. I hope Michael can figure out something or Maria can get Max there fast. Please post more soon. I'm sorry I missed this update when you posted it. 
I promise I'll do better. :D
Great part!
I promise I'll do better. :D Great part!
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