Seduce My Mind (Lex/Chloe Mature)

[RoswellRocks]

Excellent job

[Island Breeze]

She turned and ran out of the room, dropping something on the floor in her hurry. Lex walked to the spot and picked up the folded piece of paper.

“Seduce my mind and you can have my body. Find my soul, and I’m yours forever.” Lex read aloud. Walking to his desk, Lex pulled out a sheet of paper and began to write.

Be yourself and I’m already yours.

Smiling wider, Chloe opened the box of chocolates and bit into a caramel. It was going to be a good Valentines Day after all.

That was great, Ann! I love it! I was laughing at Chloe trying to follow the directions to get her man and asking Lex to come over because her cricket, José, died! OMG! ROTF! I mean… ahem… *somber face* Rest In Peace, José. Seriously, that was too funny!

[Aissy]

Again, I don't watch this show... : So ignore me if I'm talking rubbish. But I thought this was really good! I like your Cosmo stuff, true to life. It was a brilliant idea to base your story on that, I thought.

“My roommate in boarding school had pet maggots. A cricket isn’t all that odd.”

The main problem when reading fan fic of a fandom you know nothing about - as I am finding out, repeatedly - is knowing what's canon and what's original. In this particular instance, I would comment with if it's canon and you've picked that detail for that moment, and :mrgreen: :mrgreen: if it's original. Either way, it's excellent!

Great job, Ann!!!