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Wow! Yvonne is really going to try to get something on Cavitt! And Stephen is going to help! And even though she doesn't know it, Valenti took the challenge... with Wilcox's blessing! I hope they bring Cavitt down, but I'm afraid all of them are more likely to wind up victims than he is to go down.
"Not really," Valenti admitted. "So I gather you have a theory as to who's behind her so-called murder?"

Lieutenant White hesitated a moment. "Yes," she said finally. "Lt. Colonel Sheridan Cavitt."

"Lt. Colonel Cavitt?" Valenti exclaimed, flabbergasted. "Do you mean to tell me they actually promoted that bastard?"

"You know him?" the Lieutenant asked, every bit as surprised as he was. "How?"

Valenti fidgeted in his chair, his fingers tapping on the arm. "I'd rather not say."

The Lieutenant's eyebrows rose. "Now who's 'not saying'?"
"Must have been an interesting encounter if you learned enough to call him a 'bastard' right off the bat," the Lieutenant observed.
:lol Yep!

I enjoyed Wilcox agreeing with Valenti:
"Jim, you know Cavitt wouldn't leave any footprints in a written record. If you want to find out if he had anything to do with this, you're going to have to do what you do best—put the file back in the cabinet and start digging."

"Does that mean I have your permission to dig?"

"Would it matter if I said 'no'?" Wilcox said dryly. "Never mind—rhetorical question. Look, my point is, you're an excellent investigator. Good enough that you were a huge pain in my ass when you were going after the Proctors."

"Because I was right," Valenti said defensively.

"Yes, you were," Wilcox agreed. "And I was right to sit on what I knew. Or so you must have thought, because when the shit hit the fan, you blew my way."

Valenti looked away. "I'm still not happy about that, sir."

"I know. I'm not thrilled about it either. I'm just more used to the compromises we have to make. I've learned the value of balance....and I've learned when to keep my mouth shut," he added pointedly. "And that's where you fall short, Jim. An excellent investigator isn't going to get far if he blunders around like a bull in a china shop. If you go after this, you'll need to be very quiet, and you'll need to keep Cavitt's name out of unless and until you find firm evidence. With someone like Cavitt, you'll not only need your ducks in a row, you'll need them marching in formation."

"Understood," Valenti said as he reached for the report, unsure of whether to glow at the praise or flush at the criticism.

And I like Valenti's determination, which is understandable, though I fear it will lead to great hardships for him very soon.
"Good luck," Wilcox said.

"Thank you, sir," Valenti answered, closing the door behind him as he left. Cavitt's the one who needs the luck, he thought grimly as he headed down the hall to his desk. Because if I have to dig all the way to China, he's going down.
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I enjoyed the conversation between Malik and Stephen. Malik has obviously lost his naivete a long time back, and with good reason.
"And what do you think your superiors will do with this 'evidence' should you find it?" Malik asked.

"Arrest him," Spade said. "Put him on trial for murder."

Malik's eyebrows rose in amusement. "Still trying to right your world's wrongs?"

"Let me guess," Spade said with an ironic smile. "This is the part where you tell me I'm young, or naïve, or something like that."

"Do you really expect your commander's superiors to serve justice even if you do produce the evidence you're looking for?"

"I expect it's worth a try," Spade said. "I admit it might not work, but if I don't try, it's guaranteed to not work."

Spade fully expected Malik to laugh or at least chuckle at that last announcement, but he didn't. "I wish I knew what it's like to have that kind of optimism," Malik said thoughtfully, "that faith that the people in power will actually do the right thing."
But I liked Stephens' assertion that, given the options, the king should be the obvious choice over Khivar.


And I'm really looking forward to the sweat lodge now! I'm glad Quanah asked his son, River Dog, to help him watch for anything that looked normal but wasn't. After all, it was River Dog who put Quanah onto the fact that someone or something was out there that shouldn't be.

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Well, all I can say is AAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHH! Stupid, stupid Itza-chu! I was thinking that now Brivari would never go back and finally get to find out what Valeris needs to tell him. But fortunately Valeris has found Brivari while he is still under the peyote's influence. This should be good! I knew right away that the fake Itza-chu asking for Nasedo's whereabouts was not the real one. He's obviously one of the Covari hunters. Fortunately, Grey Wolf realizes that something's amiss. I just hope he realized it in time. They've already told the hunter way too much, though maybe the desert info will send the Covari looking in the wrong place. And I hope the ancestors straighten Itza-chu out! Or send him to a smoky, smoky place! I knew he was trying to get Brivari to inhale the peyote by throwing so much of it in the fire, but I was dumbfounded when he then callously blew it into Brivari's face that way. He deserves whatever punishment he might get... even if it's to be ostracized by the others... and by the ancestors!

Now I'm off to see what Valeris has to say to Brivari! :thumbsup
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That was a great chapter! I loved Valeris changing the scenery...
The grayness dissolved, and Dimaras Rock materialized beneath them. Overhead was Antar's red sun, smaller and cooler than Earth's blazing yellow variety, and three moons which reflected the light of the sun around the clock. Below was the lake, its lazy waves lapping against the shore just like they had every time the royal family had come here. "This is like a dream," Brivari muttered, less certain now than ever that any of this was real.

"This is no dream," Valeris sighed. "Would that it were. One awakens from dreams. I'm afraid the process of awakening requires a body.....and you no doubt know what happened to mine."

Brivari closed his eyes, trying—and failing—to block out the image of a bullet-ridden body lying in the basement of the human military base. Suddenly he didn't care if this was merely a vivid dream or a hallucination brought on by imminent death. He could think of no better way to spend his final moments than in the company of his oldest friend, be that company supposed or real.
That was touching! But their friendship did get a little rocky when Brivari found out that Valeris knew what Zan and Riall had done and he had not known.

"Urza died not long after you did," Brivari said heavily, "And Jaddo is captive. Still. And well treated, although things have been difficult from time to time. He is currently engaged in the rebuilding of our ship, which delights the humans no end."

"The humans have my sympathy," Valeris said with a faint smile. "You would have made a much more agreeable prisoner. How do they manage to hold him?"
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I have a question. Why did Valeris not know that Urza was dead if they're both in the realm of the ancestors together?


And this was an interesting observation. All very true!
"So now we are back to the difference between 'right' and 'necessary'," Valeris noted. "And if you define them differently, by all means, make your case when the time comes. You will all have a second chance when the hybrids emerge. Zan will know he lost his throne and why, Vilandra will realize that Khivar lied to her—"

"Rath will know that his fiancé betrayed him," Brivari broke in, "and Ava will know she lost a child. Such a pity you won't be there for that wonderful conversation."
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Okay, you had to go and make me feel sorry for Itza-chu, didn't you. Well, kind of. The hunter got to him, but Itza-chu didn't tell him where Brivari was. Now I hope he survives his injuries. River Dog should have heeded his father's advice to be wary of things that appeared normal. He didn't believe his siblings, and they tried to warn him. Now he and Brivari may be in big trouble, I fear. Maybe Quanah will get to finish off another hunter for Brivari, though! One with his own face! That would be a shock for River Dog!


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I love it! Both of the hunters are gone! I gather Brivari cannot change his appearance to look human because of his injuries and he doesn't want River Dog to see him this way. Although he is trained to kill without compunction, it is hard to believe that after everything, he would still kill Quanah or River Dog without at least first giving them a chance to see if they would accept him for what he is. Clearly, he does not believe that they can or will. I loved the shaman explanation, though.
"Or whatever the equivalent is among your people," Quanah said. "There is no other explanation. You know how to defeat this evil; only a powerful shaman could hope to do that. And that explains why all of us have felt your strangeness, why Itza-chu reacts to you the way he does. Both of you wield power, but you are the stronger, and he knows it—and resents it." He pointed to a nearby opening between two trees. "They left through here. If we hurry, we can catch up with them. River Dog will deliberately slow his pace in case someone manages to track him."

Quanah stepped aside deferentially to let Brivari take the lead; he did so, shaking his head in amazement over the sudden turn in events, letting the power he'd been building within himself ebb away. And Quanah fell in step behind him as before, never realizing how very close he had come to dying only moments ago.

And you explained the balance!
"It did not kill me before," River Dog said.

"Your feelings for your father are different than your feelings for me," Nasedo answered. "You must be careful not to give so much to your father that you have nothing left for yourself. You must maintain a balance."

A balance. River Dog was about to ask what that meant when his question was answered for him; the radiant stone in his hand was pulling, pulling something from him, his energy, his very life force. It would probably go on pulling until there was nothing left to take.

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Hope you had a Merry Christmas!

I guess since it's after midnight now, Christmas is officially over. And if I don't give this a break somewhere you won't be able to write for having to read my feedback! :lol

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Gerry: My goodness! Your eyes must be glazing over from staring at the screen that long! *Passes a plate of Christmas cookies and some eggnog*
We don't want your sacrifices to have any meaning ever, not even as a sad and unexpected consequence.
Elegantly summarized in a single sentence. Bravo!

Island Breeze wrote: I have a question. Why did Valeris not know that Urza was dead if they're both in the realm of the ancestors together?
To avoid spilling a minor bean (some don't like spoilers, even little ones), I'll just say that Valeris might be hanging around because he has unfinished business: Things that he never told Brivari, the concern that Dee hadn't escaped or managed to deliver his message, etc. Urza, on the other hand, confessed both his and Vilandra's part in Antar's problems before he died and therefore has no unfinished business. So Urza isn't where Valeris is now, and Valeris could very well not know what happened to him. Of course that begs the question of what Quanah's grandfather is doing still hanging around....maybe he hasn't finished talking? ;)

Okay, you had to go and make me feel sorry for Itza-chu, didn't you.

*chuckle* Itza-chu is no diplomat, but he's also no fool. He's right that "Nasedo" is different, and he's right to be wary of him. The two of them will need to come to terms with each other if Brivari's going to stay there.

About the peyote....I was never comfortable with the explanation that the heat from the sweat is what felled Nasedo. His reaction was systemic and seemed more likely to be caused by a foreign substance, kind of like a severe version of Max's "one little sip". And then there's the question of what River Dog kept throwing by handfuls onto the fire when Michael got sick in the sweat....and that's where the notion of peyote came from.






CHAPTER ONE HUNDRED FIFTEEN


May 27, 1949, 1700 hours

Eagle Rock Military Base




Yvonne gaped at Brivari, absolutely speechless. Quite some time.... It had been so long since she'd seen him here, anywhere, a year and a half almost....and he looked like he'd never left. "What....why...." she stammered, uncertain of where to begin.

"The hunters are dead," Brivari said calmly, as though she'd asked him a question. "Yes, I am sure. The other four still live, but will find apprehending me difficult since I can recognize them on sight."

"But.....how...."

"Entering this building has never been a problem, and still isn't," Brivari continued. "I realize that movement around the compound is more restricted what with your 'x-ray' machines, but your quarters are unguarded and therefore accessible. And there seem to be fewer guards," he noted, folding up the paper and setting it on her beside table. "Has security become that lax?"

"Well...." Yvonne began, still absolutely flabbergasted at his sudden appearance. Where to begin? So much had changed since Brivari had left: John now worked a typical American work week, while she and Stephen and everyone else enjoyed a level of freedom they had only dreamed of before the x-ray's had been installed. Perhaps it was best to start with the question asked.

"There are fewer guards because John's not here, and—"

"Not here?" Brivari said sharply, rising to his feet. "Where is he?"

"No, no," Yvonne said hastily, realizing she should have rephrased that. "I mean he's not here now. Or rather, he will be here later—any minute, in fact. It's almost dinner time. Look," she continued, realizing that none of what she'd just said made any sense as Brivari continued to stare at her with a puzzled and only slightly less alarmed expression, "John is fixing your ship. Every day he goes to the hangar nearby and works on it, and then he comes back here at night to sleep."

" 'Fixing our ship'?" Brivari echoed, his eyes widening. "The one we arrived in?"

"Of course," Yvonne answered. "Is there another one?"

"And Jaddo is allowed out of the compound to....'fix the ship'?"

"Yes. Has been since...oh, last July. Repairing the ship was the next big project after that night vision device he helped us make."

Several seconds passed as Brivari stared at Yvonne in utter amazement...and then he suddenly began to laugh. "What's so funny?" Yvonne asked, bewildered. Just seeing Brivari smile was a rare event; she couldn’t ever remember him laughing, unless one considered the odd chuckle a laugh.

"Repairing our ship," Brivari repeated, shaking his head as he laughed. "Outstanding. And wouldn't you know he finally got the message after I disappeared."

"Who got what message?"

"Jaddo. I've argued all along that he needed to pass along a continuous stream of basically useless information in order to justify his existence, and he fought me every step of the way."

"I wouldn't call that night vision device 'useless'," Yvonne noted. "But he's been working directly with General Ramey, not Pierce, so that might have softened his attitude. I take it you don't think the ship can be fixed?"

"Absolutely not," Brivari said. "That ship was much too badly damaged. But no matter; I'm quite sure everyone is salivating at just the notion of a working ship. So General Ramey is still in charge?"

"Yes, and quite popular from what I hear," Yvonne replied.

"Good," Brivari said approvingly. "And Jaddo...I would imagine this latest turn of events agrees with him?"

"Completely," Yvonne nodded. "He's much calmer now, except on weekends, when he's not allowed out, and he spends those weekends planning the next week's work. Working on the ship kept him sane while you were gone." She paused. "He was relieved to hear you were all right last summer. After he realized you'd managed to kill a hunter all by yourself, I think he finally relaxed."

"You mean as much as he ever relaxes," Brivari said dryly. "But then I suppose that goes with the territory. Jaddo was always driven, never satisfied. Just like Rath."

"Rath?"

"Jaddo's Ward. They are very similar people; they worked well together, and hopefully they will again. Hopefully, this will not have all been for nothing."

Brivari's tone was wistful and relieved at the same time, the only evidence so far that he'd been on the run and out of the loop for over a year. "He's fine," Yvonne assured him. "Thriving, really, as much as anyone could under the circumstances. I can't figure out him not liking coffee anymore, but except for that, I—"

"He doesn't like coffee? Why not?"

"I'm not sure," Yvonne frowned. "This just started a couple of days ago. He said it was 'different'; it was a bit strong, but it's been stronger and he hasn't said anything. I just switched him to tea, and he didn't mind that. I'm sure it's nothing. He can't taste anything anyway....what's wrong?"

"This...'tea' you speak of," Brivari said, a disturbed expression on his face, "is it considered a stronger taste than coffee?"

"Milder, actually. Why?"

But Brivari was staring off into space. "How long has Jaddo been here?" he asked after a moment.

"Almost two years," Yvonne replied, wondering what that had to do with coffee. "Why?"

Brivari glanced at her quickly, then looked away. "Nothing. Don't tell him I mentioned it; that would only upset him. But could you pass along that the hunters are dead and I am now free to visit the base, if not his cell?"

"Stephen's already done a test run," Yvonne answered with a wide smile, "so I'm willing to bet we can do much better than that."



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Copper Summit, Arizona




"This is a bad idea," Amar grumbled.

"Just hurry up," Malik said impatiently, throwing a worried glance at the door. They were alone for now, but there was no telling how long that would last.

"Look, do you know how to access the logs on a communicator?" Amar demanded. "No? Then pipe down. Oh, by the way, did I mention this was a bad idea?"

"Several times. Pipe down yourself, and find that last transmission."

Amar sighed and picked up one of his tools. "You're taking an awful risk, Malik. If Orlon finds out—"

"He's upstairs sulking. And he won't."

"Why not?"

"Because for all that you're a pain in the ass sometimes, you're too good of an engineer to leave tracks," Malik said.

"Flattery will get you everywhere," Amar deadpanned. "But that's not what I meant. He won't track you through here—I'll see to that. But if you mess with his business, he'll find out one way or another, and when that happens, you'd best be on another planet...and I don't mean this one."

"You sound like Marana," Malik said, shaking his head in disbelief. "Since when were you two kindred spirits?"

"Since we both seem to know when to back off....and you don't," Amar said pointedly. "That was really stupid of you to challenge him yesterday and put Marana and me on the spot. I think I convinced him to let it go, but one more stunt like that, and nothing I say will matter."

"Why not?" Malik asked. "Aren't you the golden boy who's going to team up with Brivari's enemies?"

Amar looked away as Malik eyed him closely. Amar had been tight-lipped about his idea of approaching Brivari's enemies; Malik still had no idea who he was talking to, although it was a safe bet that it was someone at the base. And that put Malik in a quandary; should he make a preemptive strike and tell Spade why Antarians had first come to this planet before he learned it somewhere else? Turning the girl and her family against the Warders was one thing; turning their military allies against them would be catastrophic.

"Well?" Malik pressed. "Aren't you going to tell me what happened?"

"It didn't work," Amar said shortly.

"Why not? Who were you talking to?"

"Doesn't matter. Look, my point is that Orlon—"

"Is ambitious," Malik finished. "Yes, you said that. And for me, the point is that someone besides Khivar is holding Orlon's leash. We've seen him speak to Khivar in the past, we know he doesn't want to tell Khivar that he's lost all the hunters, but he's calling someone else to send more? Someone with that kind of authority? Someone like...who?"

"Could be anyone," Amar said. "Wherever there's a vacuum, something rushes in to fill it; when there's a power vacuum, that something is ambitious people, which in this case means dangerous people. There's no shortage of dangerous people at home, and it's not wise to cross dangerous people."

"It's not wise to cross us either," Malik said firmly. "Our agreement is with Khivar...but I get the impression we're not working for Khivar anymore. Maybe that's why Orlon is so disinterested in the emergents. It was Khivar who wanted Covari free of the king; perhaps Orlon's new master doesn't?" He leaned closer, looking Amar squarely in the eye. "The price of our assistance was the production of Covari free of any ties to the crown. And if we're not going to get paid, I'd like to know that. Wouldn't you?"

Amar returned his stare before returning to the communicator. "Of course I'd like to know. I'm here, aren't I? And that's despite the fact I know this is a bad idea. I just want you to be more careful, that's all."

"You want me to be careful?" Malik echoed in amazement. "Sage political advice, agreeing with a bioscientist, concerned for my welfare....who are you, anyway? Should I insist you identify?"

"I'm worried, that's what I am," Amar said, his eyes flashing with an annoyance that, for once, was comfortingly familiar. "At the rate we're going, we'll have to—"

"What?" a strange voice suddenly demanded. "He killed the other two? And just when I thought you couldn't possibly make a bigger mess of things!"

Amar slowly withdrew the tool he'd been using. "Found the logs," he said, rather unnecessarily. "Let me back it up to the beginning of the last entry...."

A second later, Orlon's voice sounded from the communicator, a voice layered with resignation and defiance. "This is Orlon. I'm afraid I have some bad news, but I assure you that I will persevere, and I have everything under control."

"What did you do now?"
the voice they'd heard before demanded.

There was a pause before Orlon answered. "The hunters are dead."

"What? exclaimed the second voice. "He killed the other two? And just when I thought you couldn't possibly make a bigger mess of things!"

"Where's the hologram?" Malik asked.

"There is none," Amar said. "Orlon had the imager turned off, so none was recorded. It's audio only."

"I would hardly refer to four dead hunters as a 'minor setback'," the voice snapped. "Are you sure they're all dead?"

"Brivari can't possibly be more annoying than you! Answer the question!"

"Well, can't you find him? There are four of you and only one of him!"


The recording was pocked with Orlon's responses; Amar listened with interest and Malik with impatience, having already heard that side of the conversation. He mentally filtered out Orlon's voice while trying to identify the other, a miasma of anger, condescension, sarcasm....and completely unfamiliar.

"Who is that?" Malik asked.

"No idea," Amar said, shaking his head. "Without an image, we might be out of luck."

"Then get Jaddo. Even you should be able to locate someone who's locked up! I want those hybrids, Orlon. Sooner or later, Khivar's going to discover that I ordered Zan and Ava killed, on your advice, no less, and even though I told them to leave Vilandra alive, he'll still blame me because they didn't. The only thing that will save my neck is having his precious lover's hybrid in my pocket."

"Good Lord," Malik breathed when the voice paused to listen to Orlon's response. "This is the one who ordered the king's assassination! So Khivar really didn't want them dead."

"I can't send trithium! If I dispatch a ship without authorization, I'm as good as dead!" Pause. "If I can't send a ship, then obviously I can't send hunters or anyone else! What, did you shift your brain cells out of shape?"

The voice was growing angrier, and if Malik remembered correctly, the conversation was drawing to a close. It was unbelievably frustrating to not be able to identify the speaker. Malik tried to remember the various voices he'd heard, but it had been so long, and this wasn't the lackey he'd expected. The speaker was probably someone high up the chain, far from where Malik had been.

"Besides, what good would any of that do? This isn't a lack of resources, it's a lack of leadership! It's your ineptitude! It never ceases to amaze me how you people can't complete even the simplest of tasks. How you kept Zan and his father on the throne for so long, I'll never know. If I were ruler and not merely the second, I swear I'd rid myself of all of you!"

"Athenor!" Amar whispered. "Khivar's top military general. They say he actually stepped out from behind his troops and killed Rath himself."

"Shh—there's more" Malik said as Orlon proceeded to accuse everyone, including Khivar's second in command, of not having any judgment.

"Watch yourself, Covari, Athenor snapped angrily. "No one who's failed as often as you have has any business finding fault with my judgment. And don't expect distance to protect you; the husks have begun to mature, so before long, there won't be a galaxy between us. Rouse your fellow idiots and make certain you have a warder by the time I arrive. And remember, the identities of my team are to remain secret. I will be the one called 'Nicholas'. Don't repeat that to those dogs you work with, or it will be the last thing you say. Do you think you can handle those simple instructions, or do I need to find a more competent operative?"

"Charming," Malik muttered, "and the feeling is mutual."

"Now you listen to me, came Orlon's furious voice. "You put me here because of my knowledge of your quarry; I put you where you are, and I'll get you where you want to be. Either give me the tools to do that job faster, or accept the fact that it will take longer than you would like."

The communicator fell silent; several seconds passed before Amar spoke again. "I think that's the end of it. Does that square with what you heard?"

"Yes," Malik said darkly. "And I seriously doubt that's the end of it."



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Proctor residence



"Dee!" Emily called as the screen door slammed, "don't slam the door! And what about your homework? You know you can't go outside until you've at least started it!"

Dee ignored her, stalking away from the house at a good clip, her hands shoved in her pocket. As far as she was concerned, her mother's banishing of Brivari from their house was absolutely, totally, completely unforgivable, and she never, ever wanted to speak to her again. She had never felt so betrayed in her life; the fact that it was her own mother doing the betraying just made it worse.

"Deanna!" Emily called behind her. "How much longer is this going to go on?"

As long as you make it go on, Mama, Dee thought sourly, heading down the sidewalk toward Anthony's house. All Anthony knew was that she and her mother had had a fight; he'd wisely stopped asking questions after learning that, and she'd been so embarrassed by Emily's behavior that she wouldn't have elaborated even if she'd been free to. What difference did it make if the people who ran Brivari's world had done some awful things? Hadn't the people on Earth done lots of awful things? Hadn't they just had a war because of all the awful things just one man had set in motion? And what about what was happening to Jaddo and what had already happened to Urza and Valeris? As far as Dee was concerned, for every bad alien, there was a bad human, and vice versa. Lumping all aliens together was every bit as wrong as lumping all humans together. Brivari had never done anything to hurt them; he'd saved her life. For that to be discarded because her mother took offense to something someone else had done a long time ago made Dee so mad, she couldn't see straight.

"Evenin', Dee," a voice called.

Dee stopped on the sidewalk. "Hi, Mac."

"Say, could you come over her and give me a hand? I'd sure appreciate it."

Dee walked up the Brazel's green lawn to where Mac was repairing one of the posts on their front porch. "Hold that there for a minute," Mac said, indicating the post, "while I pound these nails in."

Holding the post was hard; every whack of the hammer made it jerk, and Dee braced it with her leg to hold it steady until Mac was done. "That's better," he said approvingly when he'd finished. "Thanks."

"Sure," Dee said.

"So—what's up with you and your mama?" Mac asked, glancing over her shoulder.

Dee looked toward her house, where her mother was still standing in the doorway. "I'm mad at her," she announced.

"Hard to believe, but I figured that out already," Mac said dryly. "What I meant was, what's up with you not answering her?"

"I'm not speaking to her."

"Really?" Mac said casually. "How long do you think you can keep that up?"

"I'm never speaking to her again," Dee announced.

Mac's eyebrows rose. "Never's a long time. I'm not sure that's even doable."

"Watch me," Dee said confidently.

Mac stared at her a moment, then abruptly began laughing. "What's so funny?" Dee asked suspiciously.

"You're the spitting image of your mama," Mac chuckled, reaching for another nail. "Maybe your grandma wished too hard."

" 'Wished too hard'?" Dee echoed. "What does that mean?"

Mac smiled as he pounded the new nail into the porch post, now steady enough to work on without Dee holding it. "It means that all parents hope their kids will grow up and have kids exactly like them so they can see how hard their own parents had to work to raise them. Did you know I used to be a picky eater?"

"No," Dee said doubtfully, not seeing the connection between her mother's horrible behavior, grandparents' wishes, and Mac not eating his vegetables.

"Well, I was. I always left my crusts. Wouldn't touch casseroles because I didn't know what was in them. Only ate about a half dozen different foods at any one time. I drove my own mama crazy, and one day she said, 'Billy—' that's what I went by when I was younger because my name's William—'Billy, I hope that one day, you'll have a kid who doesn't eat just like you won't'."

"So what happened?" Dee asked.

"She wished too hard," Mac said with a twinkle in his eye. "My oldest ate mostly peanut butter and jelly sandwiches for at least six years. One night we told him he couldn't get up from the dinner table until he'd tried two peas—just two peas—and he sat there until ten o'clock at night, when we finally gave up. Another time he tried them, and promptly threw up all over the living room rug. My mama watched all this and said, 'Oh, dear. He's worse than you ever were, Billy. I guess I wished too hard'. So," Mac concluded, with a nod in the direction of Dee's house, "maybe your grandma wished a little too hard that your mama would have a child just like her. Because you're every bit as stubborn and hard-headed as she is."

"I'm not hard-headed," Dee protested. "Mama's wrong, and she knows it."

"She'd probably say the same thing about you," Mac noted.

"Then she'd be wrong," Dee said firmly. "Because I'm not wrong, and I know I'm not wrong."

Mac paused a moment in his hammering. "Has it ever occurred to you that maybe neither of you is wrong?"

"How? We can't both be right."

"Sure you can," Mac said. "There's lots of different ways of looking at things, and sometimes each of those ways is at least partially right."

"I'm not partially right, I'm completely right," Dee said firmly.

"You sure about that?" Mac asked, eyeing her closely. "Your mama's a good person, Dee; so are you. Are you absolutely certain that she doesn't have at least a few very good reasons for feeling the way she does?"

Mac didn't wait for an answer, just went back to his hammering as Dee sulked against the porch railing. She didn't blame every German for Hitler....but that didn't change the fact that Hitler was wrong to do what he did. And she didn't blame every Antarian for kidnapping children...but that didn't mean it was okay to do that. "Okay, maybe she has one good reason," she conceded grudgingly. "But that doesn't mean I agree with her, or that I'm not mad at her."

"Understood," Mac said. "We don't have to agree with everyone. Never will anyway. That's why it's important to learn to agree to disagree."

"You can't 'agree to disagree'," Dee countered. "You either agree, or you don't."

"That's where you're wrong," Mac said. "Like I said, we're never going to agree with everyone. That goes for parents and children, husbands and wives, friends—wherever people get together, they're going to disagree with each other. All those different experiences and opinions out there, it's inevitable. Just imagine what would happen if everyone stopped talking to each other just because they disagreed."

Dee said nothing, not liking where this was going. "Now, you take our government, for example," Mac went on. "The way the founding fathers set it up, they just assumed that everyone wasn't going to agree, a safe assumption if ever there was one. That's partly why we have voting and different houses of Congress, and not all branches of government have the same powers. And whatever the majority decides, that's the law, even for the ones who don't think it should be. They can keep trying to change the law, but they can't ignore it. Otherwise we'd have chaos."

"Are you saying you think we should vote on this?" Dee asked.

Mac set his hammer down. "No. I'm saying that you can't keep ignoring your mama forever just because you think she's wrong. Right or wrong, she's still your mama, and she's not ignoring you, just because she thinks you're wrong. I think you should seriously consider agreeing to disagree."

"How do I do that, exactly?" Dee asked skeptically.

"You just accept the fact that she feels one way and you feel another, and go on with your life," Mac said, shrugging. "Doesn't mean you don't still think she's wrong; it just means that you realize she has a right to her own opinions just like you have a right to yours, and you're both just going to have to live with that. And why be miserable and not speak to each other while you're living with that? Because you're always going to have to live with that, Dee. No matter how old you are, or where you live, or who you live with, you're always going to disagree with somebody. It'll be a nasty life if you don't learn to disagree civilly."

"So, what, I just walk away and act like nothing happened?" Dee protested. "I can't do that! I'm still mad at her, and you can't just stop being mad at someone. Try it some time."

"All the more reason to talk to her," Mac answered. "It's a lot easier to make it clear that you're mad if you're talking to somebody. Just ask Mrs. Brazel," he added with a faint note of amusement.

Dee's eyes widened. "Do you mean you and Mrs. Brazel fight? I've never heard you fight!"

" 'Course we fight," Mac answered. "Everybody on the planet fights at one time or another. And off the planet too, from what I understand." He finished pounding in a nail and reached for another. "Will you at least think it over? For me?"

"Okay," Dee said reluctantly. "Do you need any more help?"

"Nope. That about does it. Thanks a bunch."

"You're welcome," Dee said, resuming her walk to Anthony's house. Mac might have a point that people disagreed about all kinds of things, but she had no intention of letting her mother off the hook by acting like nothing had happened. Maybe she couldn't maintain her silence forever, but she knew she could hold out for a good long while, long enough to make life in their house very uncomfortable indeed. Maybe uncomfortable enough that her mother would reconsider, or her father, who had yet to weigh in with his feelings on the subject, could talk some sense into her.

Dee rang Anthony's doorbell; a moment later, his mother appeared. "Come right in, dear," she said, smiling. "Anthony's upstairs."

"Thank you, Mrs. Evans," Dee said, glancing down at her house and pausing for a moment, her eyes narrowing. Mac and her mama were both clearly visible, the former on his front porch, the latter still standing in their side doorway. And for just a moment, she'd thought she'd seen Mac throw a sympathetic shrug her mother's way.



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May 28, 1949, 0610 hours

Eagle Rock Military Base




Sergeant Brisson hurried down the hallway toward the prisoner's room, medical bag in hand. These early mornings were killers; unfortunately, his efforts to move the administration of the serum to evening had failed, largely because no one wanted to risk either administering two doses on the same day or delaying a dose by several hours. As the prisoner had been leaving for the hangar earlier and earlier, Brisson had been obliged to arrive earlier and earlier, and not being a morning person, that was a royal pain. Evening would be so much better, with the prisoner here for several hours and timing not being an issue. Rounding the corner into the main hallway, he came to a dead stop when he spied Captain Spade coming toward him.

"What?" Brisson exclaimed in disbelief, hastily checking his watch. "Am I late? But I can't be! Honestly, Captain, it's only 0610. If you want to leave this early, you really need to let me know."

"Relax, Sergeant," Spade answered. "The prisoner hasn't even had breakfast yet. You're fine."

"We really should be doing this in the evenings," Brisson grumbled, Spade falling in step beside him as they continued on toward the prisoner's cell. "Then you could leave in the middle of the night if you wanted to."

"Not up to me, Sergeant," Spade said calmly. "Take it up with Dr. Pierce. Good morning, Corporals," he added to the guards outside the alien's cell.

"Good morning, sirs," the guards said.

"I have taken it up with Pierce," Brisson retorted, ignoring the guards' greetings as he stepped on the x-ray. "Fat lot of good that did me. A few extra hours between doses just one time wouldn't mean squat, and he knows it. Are you finished, Corporal, or have you decided I'm an alien?"

Corporal Thompson looked up from the x-ray's viewer. "No, sir. You're human. Corporal LaBella will get the door for you."

"It's about time," Brisson muttered, eager to be done with this daily, distasteful task. The alien was up and dressed as usual, its sleeve already rolled up as it studied a pile of papers on its lap, some of which it covered as he approached. It hated this procedure every bit as much as he did, resulting in silent agreement between them that they get it over with as fast as possible. Brisson certainly didn't mind; he had his bag open and the syringe out before he'd even set the bag down.

"Lieutenant White was not feeling well yesterday," the alien announced suddenly.

Brisson nearly dropped the syringe, he was so startled. The alien hadn't spoken to him since last summer when it had so memorably threatened to kill him if Pierce harmed Lieutenant White in his quest for an alien-human child. "She...she wasn't?" he stammered, syringe poised in midair.

"No," the alien answered, staring at its papers. "I do hope she's not ill."

"She looked okay when I saw her," Brisson said hurriedly. "I'm sure it's nothing."

"Really?" the alien said coldly. "I'm not."

It swung its head around to stare at him, those eyes burning holes in Brisson's as he stood rooted to the spot, terrified. "I'm telling you, she was fine when I saw her," Brisson said, embarrassed to hear his voice quavering. "If something was bothering her, it's not now."

"I should certainly hope not," the alien said in a low voice, its eyes still locked on Brisson's.

"She's fine," Brisson insisted, cold sweat pouring down his back. "I promise."

"Are you going to give that to me, or are you going to stand there gaping like an idiot?"

Brisson glanced toward the observation room window, or rather, where he knew the window was; the guard was no doubt wondering why he was standing there holding a syringe over the prisoner's arm and not doing anything but arguing about Lieutenant White. "I do hope she's feeling better today," the prisoner remarked casually as Brisson gave the injection with shaking hands. "It would be most unfortunate if she were not."

"I tell you, she's fine!" Brisson snapped, fear making his voice climb an octave. "You're not the only one who worries about her, you know!"

Silence. Brisson felt his face flushing as the alien stared at him with raised eyebrows. What on earth was he saying? Was he actually thinking that this...this thing cared for Lieutenant White in any way? That was ridiculous. And besides, there was no need for concern; Pierce had never noticed the switched labels, using the so far unsuccessful alpha cells instead of the beta cells. Hopefully they'd be set for several more months until he decided to switch again. The "not feeling well" that the alien had noticed was likely cramping from the procedure itself, something far less dangerous to the Lieutenant than the alternative and which Brisson could do nothing about.

It's just worried it'll lose its biggest ally, he thought sourly, tossing the syringe in his bag and snapping it shut. Or maybe it wanted Pierce to fail. Maybe that's what this was all about—maybe the alien knew that Pierce was on the right track. This was probably nothing more than fear that Pierce would succeed, not genuine concern for the Lieutenant's welfare. Cursing himself for even briefly entertaining such nonsense, Brisson banged impatiently on the door, stalked out of the room when it opened.....and ran smack into Lieutenant White standing just outside holding a tray of breakfast.

"Sergeant?" she said quizzically.

"I.....you.....sorry. Excuse me," Brisson sputtered, fleeing down the hall and around the corner, knowing full well that if the alien was concerned that Pierce would succeed, he wasn't the only one. So am I, Brisson thought heavily as he headed back to the lab. So am I.



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"What's his problem?" Thompson asked Spade after the disgruntled Brisson had disappeared inside the prisoner's room.

"Don't know, don't care," Spade replied shortly, his eyes drifting down the hall as though expecting someone. "Look, Thompson...." Spade moved between Thompson and LaBella, his back to the latter. "Lieutenant White will be here shortly with the prisoner's breakfast. I need you to let her in."

"Of course, sir," Thompson answered. "Why wouldn't I?"

"Understand me," Spade said, his voice dropping. "I need you to let her in."

Thompson's eyes widened at their code word "need". "Is....anything wrong, sir?"

"Not at all," Spade replied. "I just need you to let her in. No matter what."

"Yes, sir," Thompson answered, completely befuddled. Everyone knew Lieutenant White appeared with the prisoner's meals every morning and evening like clockwork, and he had no idea why today would be any different than any other. He glanced at LaBella, but he was daydreaming as usual, completely unconcerned.

But something was up because Spade didn't leave; he lingered in the hallway, chatting with both of them, and Thompson noticed him tense slightly when Lieutenant White appeared around the corner with the requisite tray of breakfast. "Good morning, Lieutenant," Spade said promptly. "I'll hold that for you while Corporal Thompson checks you out."

"Thank you," Lieutenant White said, handing Spade the tray. She stepped up on the x-ray as Thompson peered in the viewer, more confused than ever as to what was going on. The Lieutenant appeared perfectly normal, didn't look ill, or angry, like Brisson, or different in any way. He waited patiently for her feet to stop moving, for the bones to come into clear view, still wondering what could possibly make Spade think the Lieutenant wouldn't be admitted like she always was.....and froze.

Thompson swallowed hard, pushing his face more firmly into the viewer in the hope that no one would notice he was panicking and that he wasn't really seeing what he thought he was seeing. The feet standing on the x-ray had none of the markers typical of the human foot, just long, thin bones with no joints. It's an alien, Thompson realized, his heart pounding. This is why Spade had been so cryptic—he was letting an alien into the prisoner's room. But which alien? And why? Was this another attack? An escape attempt? "I just need you to let her in. No matter what." Was this the "what", or was there more to come?

Slowly, Thompson straightened up, trying not to look into the Lieutenant's—or rather, the alien's—eyes, only inches away. He failed; those dark brown eyes he'd always secretly found so attractive bored into his own, daring him to say anything. Watchful eyes, eyes that held no malice or hatred, but were merely ready...for anything. These eyes were different than those of the one alien he'd already encountered. This alien had an aura of power the other lacked, of danger, of being accustomed to being obeyed. If Thompson said anything, if he gave it away, this one would kill him and never look back.

"Very good, Lieutenant," Thompson said, struggling to keep his voice steady. "Go right in."

"Thank you, Corporal," the alien said in a perfect imitation of Lieutenant White's voice as it retrieved the tray from Spade. LaBella slid the door open only to have Brisson come flying out of the prisoner's room and nearly collide with Lieutenant White...or rather, what looked like Lieutenant White. He rushed off, gibbering apologies, completely unaware that he'd almost mowed down an alien. The fake Lieutenant had no sooner disappeared inside when a guard appeared at the end of the hall.

"LaBella? Phone call. Says it's urgent."

"Go ahead," Spade said promptly. "I'll take over until you get back."

"Thank you, sir," LaBella said, lumbering off, having no idea that he'd just let an alien into the prisoner's room and leaving Spade and Thompson alone in the hallway. It took a full minute for Thompson to find his voice.

"Timing was a bit off, wasn't it, sir?"

"Yeah," Spade sighed. "Short notice. Sorry about that. I'd hoped to have LaBella out of here before she—he—got here so I could give you a better heads up."

"Is that the one I met before?"

"No," Spade answered. "That's the one that got away."

"The one who guards a king."

"Right."

"I could tell," Thompson whispered, shivering inwardly at the memory of those eyes. "Is he here to break out the prisoner?"

"Nope. Just visiting."

Just visiting? Thompson stifled the urge to laugh; how did anyone "just visit" one of the most secure, top secret places in the country? "Does he....'visit' often, sir?"

"This is the first time since the x-rays were installed that's he's been able to see his friend."

Thompson looked at Spade in surprise. "That long? But that was..."

"A year and a half ago," Spade finished for him. "This is the first time it's been safe for him to come back given what was going on out there."

"So...he was coming here before that?" Thompson said, confused. "I know we didn't have the x-rays then, but...how did he get in?"

"We've never learned how he gets into the building, but he got in to see the prisoner the same way he did this time."

"But...." Thompson stopped, thunderstruck as realization washed over him. Lieutenant White. She'd been letting the alien take her shape and visit the prisoner! And Spade must have known, given how casually he was talking. "How long....when....do you mean that wasn't always her when I was talking to her?"

"Most of the time, it probably was," Spade said calmly. "It started right after he escaped, and it worked on a pretty strict schedule. She had to be herself most of the time, so he had to be careful about when and how often he was her."

Thomson had to repeat that last incredible sentence to himself several times before he could even begin to think that he might at least partially understand it. "He's going to have to be even more careful now," he said, his mind still whirling. "You're not going to be able to pull this off very often, sir."

"I know," Spade said. "I told him that. He can talk to us, pass things along, but actual contact will have to be minimal."

"If you don't mind, sir, I'd rather he didn't 'pass things along' through me," Thompson said, feeling slightly ill.

"Don't worry," Spade said. "He knows Yvonne and me, so he can work through us. I just need you to let him in once in awhile. Visits from his friend are the only thing that kept the prisoner sane."

And working on the ship is keeping him sane now, Thompson thought, suddenly understanding the single-minded ferocity with which the prisoner had attacked the rebuilding of his ship. Abruptly cut off from contact with the only other one of his kind—or the only other friendly one of his kind—he had thrown himself into work on the ship to keep his mind off it. "So what changed, sir?" Thompson asked. "Are the enemy aliens still out there?"

"They're still there, just not as many," Spade answered. "And the most dangerous of them are dead."

"So the scales have tipped in their direction?"

"More like balanced. For the moment, at least."

Thompson said nothing for a moment. "Is this ever going to end, sir?" he whispered.

"God, I hope so, Brian," Spade said quietly. "I hope so."



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Immersed in the diagrams he'd drawn of possible ways to repair the ship, Jaddo didn't look up when his door opened again. He knew it was breakfast, and he intended to make short work of it. Today was Friday, the last day before the humans launched into their endlessly annoying "weekend", that two day period of alleged rest and recreation which meant nothing to him but boring confinement. This particular weekend was more aggravating than most as Jaddo had had a brainstorm last night. Even if Keyser could locate the crystals which controlled power distribution to the ship, it was looking more and more doubtful that the engine itself could ever fully be repaired. But communications....now, that was another matter entirely. Fixing the communications array was child's play compared to fixing the engines. And the communications array inside the ship could be set to transmit on several private frequencies known only to the royal family, unlike the typical portable communicator which cast a wider net. If he could manage to repair communications and contrive to be alone inside the ship for a short period, it was quite possible that he could contact sympathizers at home or their allies on other planets.

Sighing, Jaddo set the pad down on the a table, careful to close the cover. Contriving to be alone would be difficult, but first he would have to repair communications when he was supposed to be working on the engine. His drawings had to be cryptic; while most of these fools wouldn't know what he was doing, keeping Keyser in the dark would be more difficult. Even the nervous Sergeant Brisson had a brain, despite appearances to the contrary, which is why Jaddo had covered his work before issuing a reminder that Jaddo had meant what he'd said about holding Brisson responsible if Pierce succeeded in impregnating the Healer. While that was highly unlikely, she would probably not survive such an incident, and she was much too valuable to lose.

"Good morning," Lieutenant White said, sliding the breakfast tray onto the table.

"I'm glad to see you've brought tea," Jaddo replied, substituting a nod for a greeting. "I can't imagine what's happened to the coffee, but—" He stopped dead as he looked up into those familiar brown eyes...eyes which now bore the telltale infrared signature of a Covari.

*It's me,* Brivari's voice said quietly.

Jaddo just sat there, staring, too stunned to speak. He had imagined Brivari walking through that door so many times, he was ashamed to admit it, but he hadn't dared hope that such a thing would ever happen despite Malik's assurances that Brivari remained at large. All that blather about hope keeping one alive was nonsense. Hope was nothing less than excruciatingly painful.

*I don't have much time,* Brivari continued, throwing a glance toward the door. *I understand you're repairing the ship—a brilliant move, by the way—and you'll be leaving soon. Captain Spade tells me he can manage these meetings only very occasionally, so we shall have to send messages back and forth with our allies, a task made easier because they are no longer confined to this building. And we apparently have another ally, one called 'Thompson'. Spade assured me he'd let me in, but I confess I wondered there for a minute.*

There was a pause during which Jaddo remained both motionless and speechless. *All the hunters are dead,* Brivari continued. *That leaves Orlon, Marana, Malik, and Amar. They are unlikely to capture me, but it is still too dangerous to approach the pod chamber, so I'm afraid I don't know how our Wards fare. The odds of a successful escape are much higher now now that you are allowed outside the compound; once you are free, we can deal with the remaining four together.*

Silence. *For heaven's sake, Jaddo, say something!* Brivari said in exasperation. *Time is short, so I suggest you spend it talking instead of gaping. We have much to catch up on, you and I.*

Brivari's tone pulled Jaddo back to reality. *I....* He stopped, wondering where to start. Where did one begin after such a long absence, after so much had happened? How did one even begin to prioritize such a lengthy list? And Brivari must have an even longer list, meaning they wouldn't be able to say everything that needed to be said. Finally, Jaddo settled on the first thing that had come to mind.

*I am so very glad to see you.*

The Healer's borrowed face softened. *As am I,* Brivari said gently. *As am I.*



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Next week jumps to 1950 and Part 9, the last part in the book, where...

....Pierce's experiments meet with success...

....General Ramey loses his grip on the compound....

....alliances shift, and shift again as the struggle to control Jaddo's fate heats up for both humans and aliens.

I'll post Chapter 116 on Sunday, January 7, 2007. Happy New Year, everyone!
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feedback re chapter 108:


I knew Carver would wind up going to see Valenti! Spade had his number, so to speak. He knew that he needed that push... or kick in the ass, as it were... to get him moving. But Cavitt sure does cover his ass well! Paying the landlord to call in weekly! Harrassing Carver's family when he drops out of sight. And everything he's done to people like Betty Osorio and the others he's killed... or had killed... not to mention what he's doing to Yvonne now... or has done to the aliens. And what an ass Dodie turned out to be!
"No problem," Spade said, accepting the beer and taking a seat on the couch as Yvonne perched near the edge of a chair that had seen better days. He studied Carver closely, wondering why he looked so familiar, but couldn't place the face. "Did you know your landlord is blowing you in to Cavitt on a weekly basis?"

"That asshole?" Carver snorted. " 'Course I do. He probably makes more from ratting me out than from all of us roomers combined." He plopped into the second chair, taking a swig of his beer. "I could get away, you know. Already have—twice. Each time Cavitt harassed my family, tailing my mother, needling my sisters. Now he knows where I am, so he leaves them alone. The moment I go to ground, he'll start after them again.
So Carver smuggled classified documents to Betty... the ones that got her killed!
"You the one who retracted his statement?"

"No. I'm the one who wouldn't."

"Why not?"

"Maybe for the same reasons you smuggled classified military documents off the base and handed them over to a reporter. That's what happened, wasn't it?" Spade added as Yvonne gaped. "You gave Betty proof of really happened to those men for her to publish.

And I have to laugh when I think of Spade kissing Brivari and thinking he was Yvonne! OMG! :lol
"That's because you did kiss me," Yvonne said dryly. "Twice."

Three times, Spade thought, gripping the steering wheel tightly, his face on fire as he remembered the times he'd impulsively kissed Yvonne...and the one time it hadn't been Yvonne he'd kissed, but Brivari in disguise.

River Dog was smart not to mention the stones. I wonder if Brivari is gone for good now. Now that the hunters are dead, he has no reason to stay hidden away in the cave anymore.

Great chapter, Kathy! :thumbsup :heart :heart :heart
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Gerry: I've enjoyed bringing Carver and Dodie back. I loved Summer of '47, so continuing that storyline with Carver and Dodie both coming face to face with what had happened and Yvonne looking into Betty's death, and bringing them all to some kind of resolution (by the end of this book) was very satisfying.








PART NINE—REQUITAL




One year later



CHAPTER ONE HUNDRED SIXTEEN




June 5, 1950, 0815 hours

Eagle Rock Military Base




"God, these are gorgeous," Sergeant Keyser breathed, carefully cradling the box full of control crystals as Jaddo plucked another out of the box. "So many different colors, and they're all faceted—they look like jewels."

" 'Jewels'?"

"Precious stones," Keyser clarified. "Rare stones that are cut and polished to be used in jewelry."

And that would explain the missing key, Jaddo thought as he slid a blue crystal into one of the power distribution panels. He and Keyser were deep in the bowels of the ship, attempting to repair the ship's systems now that they had finished with the hull. Keyser had had a devil of a time rounding up the various control crystals, and now Jaddo knew why: If the humans felt they resembled something of value on their world, many had probably been appropriated by those of sufficient rank to do so with impunity. Many crystals were damaged, most likely in the crash, and many were still missing, most notably the key, a large clear crystal which was essential for the full operation of the ship. But no matter; there were enough here and whole to accomplish his goal of making the communications console on the bridge operational, giving them a secure, non-traceable method of contacting home. Assuming his efforts had been successful, he had only to route enough power to the control room and then contrive to be alone, an easier task now that the repairs had become more technical. Before, there had been a sizeable team of engineers helping to seal the various hull breaches; those repairs were now complete and looking quite good, detectable only upon close examination. The skill needed to repair the power conduits and the engine was beyond virtually every human but Keyser, so Jaddo now found himself either alone with Keyser or simply alone, with only the still stringent security detail outside the ship and a single guard inside. Contacting home now looked like a virtual certainty, and he'd be sure to tell Brivari that this very evening.

Tell Brivari. Jaddo shook his head at the irony of that notion as he slid another crystal, a red one this time, into the power grid. He had actually seen Brivari only twice since that welcome day last spring when he had unexpectedly returned after finishing off the last of the hunters. In between those rare visits, conversation had been managed by Jaddo talking to the Healer and the Healer talking to Brivari on her trips outside the compound, where they could easily meet. The Healer had become so adept at this mode of communication that she had begun to mimic Brivari's tone, an annoying habit if ever there was one. One of the few advantages of this conversation by relay was that he had been spared the brunt of Brivari's usual impatience and tunnel vision, especially in the very beginning when, after recovering from his shock at seeing Brivari again after so long, Jaddo had made one simple request: "Don't rescue me."

Or rather, "don't rescue me yet." The repairs on their ship had gone better than Jaddo could ever have expected, raising the odds of it being genuinely useful to them. As the hull repairs were completed and more and more of the control crystals were found, the prospect of repairing at the least the communications array, if not the engine itself, became entirely possible....assuming he remained captive, that is. Once free, he would lose his access to the ship along with his access to Keyser, who had proven not only helpful at speeding the repairs along but crucial to the necessary task of rounding up the control crystals. With the humans still agog over anything to do with the ship, Jaddo felt it safe to stay until all possible repairs had been completed before making his escape. Brivari had been nothing less than stupefied by this request, having seen the advantage of Jaddo spending most of the day in the still guarded but much more accessible hangar which boasted several avenues for exit as opposed to having to fight one's way out of the basement of the compound. It had taken all of Jaddo's powers of persuasion and a good deal of the Healer's as well to convince Brivari to wait.

"That's the last one," Jaddo said, having fitted a green crystal into the power grid.

"So now it works?" Keyser asked hopefully, caressing the engine with one hand.

"Not yet. First we have to figure out exactly what's wrong with it. Stay here while I go to the control room and see if the diagnostic panel is working."

Jaddo half crouched, half crept through the ship's circular hallway until he reached the control room. Unbeknownst to Keyser, he had routed most of the power to the communications console, and now it glowed encouragingly, appearing fully functional.

"How's it going?" Keyser's voice came over the repaired comm systems.

"I'm checking the engine diagnostics now," Jaddo lied.

"Hurry," Keyser urged. "I would love to see this baby up and running!"

Jaddo shook his head in disbelief as he instructed the communications console to search for available Antarian frequencies. The tendency of humans to refer to their machines as either females or infants had always escaped him, not to mention the fact that getting that "baby" up and running would do no good; one need very long fingers to operate the most critical ship systems. Just as soon as he declared the ship finished, he would be asked to fly it, and even if repairs made that possible, the humans would then have to do the one thing they would never do—stop the serum and allow him to shift. At that point, his usefulness would likely have run out and his life would be in danger. Which is why the timing of this endeavor would be tricky, and why Brivari had been fretting more and more as the months went by, knowing that there would be little leeway between the end of the repairs and the time when escape would become a necessity.

The console blinked, indicating it had finished its search. Quickly Jaddo flipped through the available frequencies and was delighted to find several private to the royal family, along with more belonging to their allies. Now it was just a matter of deciding whom to contact and what to say, as time would be short whenever that happened.

"Mr. Doe?" Keyser called over the comm. "What did you find? Do you think it will work?"

"Oh, yes," Jaddo answered with satisfaction. "I think it will work nicely."



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Copper Summit, Arizona




"Are you absolutely positive?" Malik demanded. "I know I heard Orlon come down here last night."

"I'm telling you, there are no new transmissions," Amar said in exasperation, plopping the communicator down on his workbench in the basement chamber. "I checked, double-checked, and triple-checked."

"So why was Orlon down here?"

"How should I know?" Amar said irritably. "Could have been any number of different reasons. As far as I can tell, Orlon hasn't had any conversations with Athenor since the one we overheard last year."

"Don't you mean 'Nicholas'?" Malik said sarcastically. "I can't for the life of me figure out why Khivar would send his second in command all the way out here."

"Maybe as punishment?" Amar suggested. "We know Khivar is furious that the Royals were killed. Perhaps he wants 'Nicholas' to correct that mistake."

Malik snorted softly as he heaved himself into a nearby chair. "That was no mistake. He ordered them killed, or all of them but Vilandra, anyway. You did make a copy of that transmission where he admitted that, didn't you?"

"Naturally," Amar said. "That's a tasty little nugget that might come in handy in the future. But right now, nothing's happening: Orlon hasn't made any more incriminating phone calls, the Argilians aren't here yet, Jaddo's locked up, and Brivari's still on the loose. Everything's in a holding pattern, including us, and if we're smart, we'll stay that way."

Malik sighed, staring at the basement ceiling. Amar had a point; given the power plays that were obviously going on, it was best to simply keep quiet, lay low, and not make any moves that would register on the radar of the wrong people....whoever those "wrong people" turned out to be. Even overhearing Orlon's testy communication with Athenor and the latter's damning admission wasn't as clear cut as it had first appeared. Further inspection of the communicator that Orlon had used since his arrival on Earth had yielded nothing of interest, only infrequent calls to Khivar laced with news they'd already heard. Amar had argued that Orlon's plea to Athenor to send more hunters may have just been a case of him trying to secure more from another source because he didn't want to admit to Khivar that the first set of hunters was dead.

But Malik thought otherwise. "I put you where you are, and I'll get you where want to be," Orlon had said. That was every bit as damning a statement as Athenor's announcement that he'd ordered the deaths of the royals, to Malik's way of thinking. "What's Orlon up to?" he said, still fretting. "What's in this for him?"

"Oh, good Lord, not this again," Amar grumbled. "Honestly, you used to call me paranoid—"

"Because you are," Malik said bluntly.

"—and now listen to you. I thought we went over this. We don't know that he's 'up to' anything."

"Then why did he say he didn't work for Khivar?" Malik asked. "And what did he mean about having put Athenor where he was?"

"How should I know?" Amar retorted. "Maybe Orlon got Athenor his post as Khivar's second. We weren't there at the time, so we wouldn't know."

"Or maybe they're planning to kill Khivar and put Athenor on the throne," Malik said.

"Don't even say things like that out loud," Amar warned.

Malik raised an eyebrow. "Since when are you so timid?"

"Since when are you so careless?" Amar countered, lowering his voice. "Look, you already know what's in this for Orlon—the same thing everyone wants: Power. There's always been a power struggle for the throne on our world—"

"Except with Zan," Malik reminded him.

"—and history is probably repeating itself," Amar finished, ignoring him. "I'll bet Orlon is just playing both ends against the middle, making certain he's in good with whoever may win. It would be a smart move....and antagonizing the one who may wind up the new king's warder would be a bad one. Keep that in mind the next time you decide to shoot your mouth off."

"So now you're a political advisor?" Malik said dryly. "You, of all people. I had no idea you were so talented."

"Just don't do anything stupid," Amar said. "See how it falls out and who's left standing, and then we'll decide what to do."

"Assuming we're left standing," Malik grumbled.

"If anyone falls, it won't be us," Amar said firmly. "If Orlon doesn't manage to capture a Warder or find the hybrids, he's the one who will fall out of favor with anyone angling for the throne."

Good, Malik thought privately. Another year had passed with them no closer to apprehending Brivari or "freeing" Jaddo. Amar, Orlon, and Marana had spent a great deal of time at the military base watching for Brivari and trying to establish a pattern for his visits or find out where he was hiding, all without success. Remaining unsuccessful was now more important than ever because a success for Orlon meant success for whoever he supported; if that turned out to be Athenor, that meant success for a ruthless man who hated Covari. Malik could think of no worse hands into which either the hybrids or his own people could fall. They'd be better off with the humans.

"Check again," Malik said, pushing the communicator toward Amar.

Amar's exasperated reply was cut off as the door to the lower basement level opened and Marana entered the room, her face a mask of concern. "I need both of you to come downstairs right away."




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Proctor residence



"More coffee?" Emily asked David.

"No, I'm fine thanks," David answered, refolding his newspaper and setting it down beside his breakfast plate.

"You almost done there?" Emily asked Dee, who was busily shoveling spoonfuls of cereal.

"Yup," Dee nodded after she'd swallowed.

"You know you won't be able to get up this late next year when you're in junior high," Emily said as she buttered her toast.

"I hate getting up early," Dee said, wrinkling her nose.

"Can't say I'm fond of it either," Emily sighed. "But I'm afraid we're stuck with it. Did you finish all those vocabulary words?"

"All thirty of them," Dee said, "with definitions and sentences for each one. And my math," she added with less enthusiasm. "I don't see why I have to know math. Lawyers don't do math."

"What if you decide not to be a lawyer?" David asked. "You might find you need math if you do something else."

"I'm going to be a lawyer," Dee said confidently. "I've decided, and that's that."

David and Emily exchanged glances. Dee's vocal insistence on going to college for something other than her "Mrs." degree had caused chatter in town. Some applauded her career aspirations as a model of modern American womanhood; others found the notion of a woman as a lawyer improper, something which made Dee want it more than ever. So far, David and Emily had refrained from pointing out to her that the price of college was out of their league and had defused the subject with others by noting that, as a sixth-grader, Dee was far too young to pick a career.

"Okay, so you've decided," Emily said lightly. "Anything interesting in the paper?" she asked David.

"Just more about President Truman's hydrogen bomb project."

"Wonderful," Emily deadpanned. "Just what this world needs—more bombs. Honestly, everyone's so afraid of Communists, they're losing their marbles. First the Hollywood Ten, then that Senator McCarthy accusing the State Department of being infiltrated by Communists, and now the President wants a new bomb. What's next?"

"Everyone's really scared now that China has fallen to the Communists," David said.

"What's the 'Hollywood Ten'?" Dee asked, carrying her cereal bowl over to the sink.

"Ten people from the movie industry who were put in jail for being Communists even though no one could prove that," Emily answered in disgust. "And I worry that's only the beginning."

"So how'd they put them in jail if there wasn't any evidence?" Dee asked.

"That depends on what you call 'evidence'," David said. "A government committee decided that if anyone had so much as worked with or spoken to a known Communist, or had any ties at all to a Communist organization, that made them Communists. They didn't have any proof that these people had done anything wrong; many times, all they had was finger-pointing by other people who had been threatened with imprisonment if they didn't name names. It's crazy."

"It's really frightening that can happen here," Emily said, shaking her head. "After all we just went through fighting a war against a tyrant, our own government turns around and throws people in jail just because they talked to a Communist at a party five years ago."

Dee stopped rinsing out her cereal bowl. "And you think that's wrong?"

"Of course it's wrong," Emily answered. "They can't call people guilty just because they have some kind of business relationship with a communist, or even if someone agrees with Communist philosophy. This is a free country, and people are entitled to their opinions."

"If you feel that way, then why did you throw Brivari out?"

Emily's eyebrows rose, her toast halfway to her mouth. Across the table, David closed his eyes and sighed.

"That was different," Emily said firmly.

"Doesn't sound different to me," Dee said with an edge to her voice. "Brivari wasn't the one who decided to come here—that was the king. Brivari was a servant; he couldn't stop it. And don't tell me that he agreed with it, because you said that just agreeing with Communists doesn't make someone guilty. So Brivari agreeing with what the king did doesn't make him guilty either." Dee set her bowl down in the drainer with a plop. "Do you know what one of my vocabulary words was, Mama? It was 'hypocrite'. I had to look it up. Maybe you should too."

David watched Emily lean wearily on her hands as Dee headed upstairs to brush her teeth, not stomping like she used to but walking normally, projecting a wall of iciness as deep as any iceberg. This is what things had been like since last year when Emily had ordered Brivari out of their house. After a couple of weeks of not speaking to her mother, Dee had settled into a pattern of normalcy punctuated by bursts of arctic chill whenever the subject of the aliens arose, her anger less noisy, but colder and more focused. In many ways, the old tantrum-style upsets had been preferable to these biting, more mature altercations where she hammered her mother on one point or another with the skill of the lawyer she wanted to become.

"It's been awhile this time," David said quietly. "A couple of months, at least. I was hoping she'd finally let it go."

" 'Let it go'?" Emily echoed. "Our daughter, let something 'go'? You're kidding, right? I swear, this is some kind of divine retribution for me being so stubborn all my life." She sat back in her chair, arms crossed, fingers tapping on her elbows. "How could she compare people thrown in jail with no evidence to what happened with Brivari? He admitted it! I asked him, and he admitted it, and right in front of her, no less! And admitted to you that he'd do it all over again if he had to."

"And he didn't have to," David said. "He could easily have lied to you. To both of us."

"Good for him," Emily said sharply. "What they did was still wrong."

"I know," David agreed. "I'm just pointing out that he respected us enough not to lie to us."

"You're still willing to write this off, aren't you?" Emily demanded. "All because of that story he told you about the king helping his people."

"I doubt it was a 'story," David said. "It fits what we already know, like their never having been children and their funeral rites. It even fits what Orlon said."

"I don't care what it fits with, they were still wrong!" Emily insisted. "We should never have told Dee that sob story. Now she'll never leave this alone."

"Of course we should have told her," David said evenly. "It's part of the picture, and one can't make a valid judgment with an incomplete picture."

"So you're coming down on Brivari's side," Emily said flatly.

"No. I'm saying that I understand his point of view," David said carefully, having still not rendered an official opinion on the subject and seeing no need to—with his wife and daughter locked in periodic mortal combat over the issue, it helped to have an at least ostensibly neutral referee. "I can understand his viewpoint without agreeing with him, just like those communist sympathizers you mentioned shouldn't be automatically condemned as having committed treason for holding an opinion."

"You sound just like Dee," Emily said sourly. "Or rather, she sounds just like you. At least she comes by it honestly."

David sighed and reached for more coffee. "I'm not trying to argue with you, Em. It's just that we seem to be looking backwards when I think we should be looking forwards. What's done is done; we can't undo it. What we should be concerned about is the future. According to Brivari, the king's experiments are over, but this Khivar who stole the king's throne will begin conducting the exact same kind of experiments if he stays in power. So shouldn't we be working against Khivar by helping his enemies? As in Brivari?"

"How do we know Brivari's telling the truth about that?" Emily asked. "I know, I know—we don't know if Orlon was telling the truth either, and he's unlikely to admit that his boss wants to do exactly the same thing. That's just it—we don't have enough information or any neutral party to consult. So I say we avoid making things worse by helping neither of them."

"But what if we are making things worse by not helping?" David pressed. "I wish I could find Malik and see what he thinks about all of this. He defected, but now he's trying to help the old regime, and that right there should tell us something. I'd love to know what changed his mind."

"There's no guarantee he'd tell us the truth either," Emily said, rising from her chair and taking her plate to the sink, sliding her uneaten toast into the trash on her way there. Boxing matches with Dee always ruined her appetite.

"No," David agreed. "But it's possible that they're all telling the truth, just from different perspectives."

" 'Perspectives'?" Emily echoed. "David, everyone has a 'perspective'. Even Hitler had a 'perspective'. Right now, the only 'perspective' I'm the least bit interested in is the one that says that kidnapping people of any age and experimenting on them against their will is wrong. Period. End of discussion."

"Of course it's wrong," David said patiently. "I just think that the more perspectives we get, the clearer the picture will be."

"I don't need a clearer picture," Emily argued. "Brivari made everything very, very clear, too clear, even. Some things are always wrong no matter what reasons people conjure to excuse them. Even my own daughter."

David set his coffee cup down. "I said I wasn't trying to argue with you, and I meant that," he said gently. "I'm just speculating out loud. And don't worry about Dee—she can't stay mad forever."

"Sure she can," Emily sighed. "She's my daughter."



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Copper Summit, Arizona



"Were you two messing with Orlon's communicator again?" Marana asked as Malik and Amar followed her into the lower chamber. "I don't see what the big deal is. Alliances are shifting so quickly back home that you can never tell who's working with whom."

"Tell that to him," Amar groused, throwing a dark look Malik's way. "He's the one all high and mighty about it."

"Is it so bad that I want to know who's pulling Orlon's strings?" Malik demanded.

"The point is that if I walked in on you, Orlon could too," Marana said. "Besides, we have bigger problems," she added, stopping in front of an empty tank beside which were arrayed her paltry collection of diagnostic materials, most of them human. If only she'd known they would be here so long and have this many problems; this was supposed to have been a simple retrieval mission that had turned into something far different.

"I take it we lost another one?" Amar said quietly.

"Yes," Marana said, "and in the same way."

All three of them stared at the tank dejectedly. Every single emergent Covari had died, most before they'd fully emerged, with the exception of that first one that had tried—and failed—to shift. They'd lost many more in the past several months; only about a third of the original number remained, and no one had much hope for those. As upset as Marana was over this, no one was more upset than Amar. The prospect of Covari not bound to the king was what had made him willing to do business with Khivar in the first place.

"They're all going to die, aren't they?" Malik whispered.

"If they all die, then Khivar will try again," Amar insisted. "That was our price. We did the job we were hired for—hell, we've done a lot more than that—and I promise you, we will be paid."

"This time is different," Marana said. "This time, I know why it died. I still haven't managed to run tests on any of them before they disintegrate because I spend too much of my time hunting someone who can't be caught, so out of sheer frustration, I ran tests on the gestational fluid."

"You already tried that, and didn't find anything," Amar said.

"I found something this time," Marana said grimly. "Look."

"Good Lord," Amar muttered, staring at the primitive human "microscope" she was gesturing toward. "What could you possibly learn from that?"

"Enough. Look."

Sighing, Amar bent his eye to the eyepiece....and immediately dropped his attitude. "Where in hell did that come from?"

"What?" Malik demanded, pushing Amar away and looking himself. "What is this? What am I looking at?"

"It's mercury," Marana said, "or dimethylmercury, to be more precise. Mercury is a neurotoxin in any form, and this form is particularly nasty. I found it in the gestational fluid of this tank."

"Let me guess," Amar said, working up a head of steam. "You've decided this is my fault, haven't you? Look, all of this equipment came from home, but maybe that doesn't help when it's set up on a backward rock that still has lots of toxic substances in their industrial waste, which is dumped just about anywhere it's convenient to dump it. And—"

"You weren't listening," Marana interrupted. "I said I found it in this tank and only this tank. This isn't system wide—it's very specific. I've tested all the other tanks, and they're clean."

"So...how did mercury get into only one tank?" Malik asked.

"We went over this entire system with a fine-toothed comb when the first tank malfunctioned," Amar said in exasperation, "so if you're planning on blaming me for this too, forget it!"

"I'm not blaming you," Marana insisted. "Look, I know we don't get along—we never have. But we both have one thing in common: We want the emergents to live. I've figured out what's killing them; now I need you to figure out how this stuff got into only this tank even though they're all connected by the same filtration system and it should have tripped the sensors. After you do that, we can go right back to loathing each other, but right now, we need to call a truce."

"Okay," Amar said after a moment, wary but calmer. "To answer your question, there is no way for any substance to find its way into only one tank."

"Sure there is," Malik said suddenly.

Marana and Amar stared at him. "How?" Marana asked.

"Someone could have put it there deliberately."

"Deliberately?" Marana echoed.

"Yes," Malik said heavily. "As in someone poisoned them."



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Well, it took me the better part of 2006 to catch up to everybody else....and it was well worth the time... LOVE THIS STORY!! Now, would it be rude of me to say...HURRY THE HELL UP WITH ANOTHER UPDATE?

Now, I know you just gave us one...but I am a VERY demanding fan...MORE than the normal ones you may have....and I MUST get an update soon.... :D :P


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Shiesty23: Hi there! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Here's the next chapter. I've been updating faithfully every week for years now, so you can expect a new chapter every Sunday, except for the occasional holiday or vacation. That's probably going to seem like a glacial pace after being able to go right from one chapter to another, but it allows me to keep the story coming at a steady, predictable rate and means no gaps between books. And I'm already writing Book 4, so the next book is in production and will be ready just as soon as this one ends (at Chapter 151).

I so appreciate you letting me know you like it! {{{Hugs!}}}






CHAPTER ONE HUNDRED SEVENTEEN


June 6, 1950, 2:11 a.m.

Copper Summit, Arizona



Malik sat up in bed, tired of alternately tossing and turning or staring at the ceiling. Sleep eluded him this night after a disturbing afternoon spent trying to figure out how a toxic metal wound up in one of the emergent's tanks. He, Amar, and Marana had spent hours going over the system, paying special attention to the filtration and nutrient lines, and had found....nothing. Everything was patent, clear, and, according to Marana's tests, free of contamination from any form of mercury or anything else. No one had taken him seriously when he had suggested the contamination was deliberate, but by the time they had finished, everyone had reluctantly reached the conclusion that there was no other explanation and begun the process of figuring out who was responsible.

"You said the embryos and this equipment were brought by the Argilian scientist you worked with," Marana had noted. "Could it have been some kind of sabotage by the Argilians themselves?"

"Perhaps," Amar said doubtfully. "But Khivar was awfully set on creating his own Covari that weren't bound to Zan, both to work this planet for him if their efforts to build shells failed and to be used back home."

"Khivar may have been set on it, but Argilians nurse a particular hatred for Covari," Marana had argued. "We're the reason Zan's father gained the throne instead of Khivar's."

"True," Malik had admitted. "But if they did sabotage the embryos, why didn't the first emergent die this way?"

"Do we know for sure why all the others died?" Amar asked.

"No," Marana had sighed. "After the first emergent failed, I couldn't discover anything useful from the body, the gestational fluid was clear, and we wrote the whole thing off to a faulty tank. After that, I didn't test the fluid again; I spent what little time I had trying to learn everything I could from the bodies before they disintegrated. We may have to wait until another one dies to see if the pattern is repeated."

"Or keep a very close eye on the tanks and watch for contamination," Malik said. "I'm still curious about why only one tank is contaminated. Sabotage from afar wouldn't be so specific."

"If the Argilians didn't do it, then who did?" Amar had asked.

"Obviously someone who has access," Malik answered, "and that's a very short list."

Marana stared at him. "You think one of us did this?"

"No—I think Orlon may have," Malik corrected. "He wanted to abandon them, and Khivar turned him down, remember?"

But Marana had shaken her head. "No. I mean, yes, he wanted to move our base, and I know he's more interested in capturing Brivari than anything else, but I can't see him stooping to murder. Besides, he wasn't advocating total abandonment. I still would have been making regular visits, although certainly something could have gone wrong in our absence. Not that there's much I could do about it anyway," she'd added ruefully.

"Then maybe whoever Orlon's really working for doesn't want them to live," Malik had persisted.

"While we're busy pointing fingers at ourselves, we're forgetting the most obvious answer," Amar said. "Brivari would kill these the moment he laid eyes on them because he'd consider the production of free Covari to be treason. The house is frequently empty, and now that there are no hunters, he could easily get in here."

"And poison them slowly, one by one?" Malik had said skeptically. "I agree he'd probably kill them, but he'd do it all at once and be done with it, not one at a time over a period of years."

And so it had gone, with arguments back and forth for the next hour. The discussion had continued until Orlon returned and they had been obliged to stop, having reached no conclusions, although all continued to privately fret. Nothing made that more obvious than the sudden truce between Amar and Marana. Even Orlon had noted that they weren't bickering they way they usually did, and had asked why they were both so quiet. They found something they both cared about, Malik had thought silently, giving Orlon nothing more than a short shrug by way of reply. And it was noteworthy that even though Amar and Marana had said they didn't believe Orlon responsible, neither let him know what was going on.

Now Malik climbed out of bed, intending to head downstairs to the kitchen for a snack only to tense when he heard the creak of a floor board outside his room. Covari could move almost silently, but that didn't mean that whatever they stepped on didn't make noise. Cracking the door an inch, he only just glimpsed Orlon disappearing down the stairs. After a moment's hesitation, Malik followed him.

Orlon descended the stairs and promptly headed down to the basement. He's going to contact Athenor again, Malik thought. Another conversation might clarify things, and since it was the middle of the night, maybe he wouldn't turn off the imager this time. Once in the basement, Orlon revealed the handprint and pressed his hand to it; Malik whisked inside just seconds after Orlon, narrowly missing the closing door. Malik ducked behind one of the workbenches, expecting Orlon to reach for the communicator, but he walked right past it....and opened the door to the lower level. Malik barely recovered from his astonishment in time to slide past the door before it closed. Why was Orlon going down here? Had Marana or Amar spoken with him about the contamination of the tanks? Did he think he was going to catch Brivari in the act?

Orlon walked silently down the steps, unaware that Malik was following; it was easy to stay hidden now that there were rows of tanks to hide behind. He followed Orlon to the other end of the room, where he stopped before one of the tanks and worked the controls. A red light flashed on, its steady glow a shout in the darkness. He turned off the sensors, Malik realized with a start. Now no alarm would sound if anything went wrong. Then Orlon withdrew what looked like a syringe from his pocket, plunged the needle into one of the tubes that fed nutrients to the emergent, and injected a small amount of a colorless liquid.

I was right! Malik thought, his heart pounding so hard it was difficult to believe it wasn't audible—Orlon was poisoning the emergents. Perhaps he could save it if Marana filtered the mercury out in time? He recalled her saying that dimethylmercury was absorbed quickly and eliminated slowly, meaning speed was of the essence. But he couldn't fetch anyone until Orlon left, so he waited impatiently as Orlon stood in front of the tank, staring at the figure inside with a sad expression as though unhappy he had just dealt it a death sentence. Leave! Malik thought fiercely. Any chance they had of undoing the damage depended on moving quickly. They could deal with Orlon later.

"Amazing, aren't they?" a voice said to Malik's right.

Orlon whirled around and so did Malik, both surprised as Marana stepped out of the shadows. She was waiting, Malik thought, closing his eyes and resisting the urge to bang his head against the nearest tank. Was she crazy, staking out the place all by herself? Amar was out watching the military base for Brivari, but why hadn't she asked Malik to wait with her? What had she thought she was going to do all by herself if she caught the saboteur?

"I've always found it fascinating the way we can take the tiniest cells and grow them into sentient beings," Marana continued as Orlon gaped at her. "I became a bioscientist because of that power, the power to give life. Giving life seems so much better than taking it, don't you think?"

Her words were casual, but there was an edge to her voice Malik had never heard before. Orlon had noticed it too because when he spoke, his tone was soothing. "I know what this looks like," he said, "but contrary to what you think you're seeing, I, too, am giving life."

"Explain to me how you are 'giving life' by committing murder," Marana said in a brittle voice.

"By preventing the deaths of far more of our people," Orlon said. "Think!" he added, as Marana began to protest. "What will Khivar do with the rest of us if this experiment is successful? If you were the king, and you had the option of using Covari bound to your rival or those who were not, which would you choose?"

"Khivar would be foolish to dispose of us," "Marana insisted. "If we find the hybrids and he takes the royal mark, he will own us....and we will be unable to stop him."

" 'If'," Orlon repeated softly. "So even you have guessed the truth. We won't find the hybrids, Marana. We may capture the Warders, but they'll die before they'll tell us where to find them. Barring some happy biologic accident, Zan will live again. And when he does, he will be able to command each and every one of us. That is a risk Khivar cannot afford to take."

"So you're saying Khivar will dispose of us no matter what," Marana said. "I still say that would be short-sighted. Waiting is a small risk to take given what he stands to gain."

Orlon smiled faintly. "I couldn't agree more that Khivar is 'foolish' and 'short-sighted', but the fact remains that he will dispose of us much faster if these emergents survive."

"If you find him foolish, then why do you support him?" Marana demanded.

"You miss the point, my dear," Orlon answered. "I supported him because he was foolish—and impatient, and gullible, and easily led...or so I thought. That was before he 'fell in love' with that disaster of a princess and caused so many of his own people to turn against him. He very nearly ruined everything with that escapade."

"So now you're supporting someone else," Marana said bluntly.

Malik held his breath. "Who told you that?" Orlon asked sharply, his eyes narrowing.

"You did," Marana answered promptly, "when you told us you don't answer to Khivar."

Malik let out a long slow breath. She hadn't implicated Amar; only Amar knew how to access communicator logs, so any mention of Athenor would mean Amar's life would be forfeit. "Who I support or answer to is not your concern," Orlon said. "You answer to me; that is your only concern. And I have decided that the time has come to end this for the good of all Covari. I had been hoping to spare you this conversation by having their deaths appear natural, but your interference has made that impossible."

" 'Appear natural'," Marana echoed. "Is that what you call a neurotoxic element that's where it shouldn't be? Why go to all that trouble when you could just have one tank after another fail like you did the first time?"

"I had not anticipated the vehemence of Amar's reaction," Orlon replied. "It was clear that a second such failure would prompt undue suspicion, not to mention the concern that an emergent might actually survive such an event."

Perish the thought, Malik thought darkly. The dispassionate way Orlon was talking about cold-blooded murder made him want to rush out there and strangle him.

"So you poisoned them instead," Marana whispered, "and contrived to keep me away so I couldn't learn that."

"Your equipment and time were limited," Orlon said. "It is most unfortunate that you stumbled upon this anyway, but then I did speed up the process. With all the hunters gone, it is imperative that we abandon this dangerous experiment and move closer to the human military base. Khivar, in the foolishness you have already noted, would never agree to that unless the emergents were all dead, and he will lack the resources to mount another attempt for some time yet."

" 'Experiment'," Marana repeated in astonishment. "Is that all these are to you? These are people, Orlon! Our people! How could you do this?"

"It's a shame that Amar is not here now to appreciate this irony," Orlon said, shaking his head with mock regret. "He always accuses you of viewing every living thing as a test subject, and here you are, arguing for the lives of these embryos. Oh, I know they've grown far past the strict embryonic stage, but the fact remains that these are not 'people', Marana. They are potential people, blank slates that may become people in the future, and the odds of that are, as you know, quite poor. You can't 'murder' a blank slate. What I am doing is little more than culling a bad harvest, making a business decision that we cannot afford to waste our time and energy training the few of these who might survive only to see our success become not only our downfall, but the downfall of our race."

Culling a bad harvest... Malik shivered involuntarily, realizing that Orlon sounded exactly like all those who had bred Covari over the centuries, whether for their own private use or for sale. That solid species considered Covari to be things was no surprise; that one of his own seemed to hold the same opinion certainly was.

"I won't let you do this," Marana announced.

Uh-oh. Malik's eyes darted around the room. Their options were dismal; this chamber was deep underground, deep enough that Amar would likely miss sounds of struggle even if he were to return right now. Still, there were two of them and only one of Orlon....

"I'm afraid you misunderstand," Orlon said calmly. "You have nothing to say about this."

"Then I'll contact Khivar and see what he has to say about it," Marana said stubbornly.

"What makes you think you'll live long enough to do that?" Orlon asked, sounding genuinely puzzled.

"I'm not an embryo," Marana said flatly, "nor am I a 'blank slate' or an 'experiment'. I take it you have other justifications for murder? What a surprise."

Three pairs of eyes stared at each other in silence, two unaware of the third. Malik had tensed, as had Orlon at the sarcasm in Marana's voice. She had been so hesitant, so timid up until now....but now she was on solid ground, on a subject that just happened to be her life's work. There would be no swaying her on this, and when Orlon figured that out, as he no doubt would any second, things were going to get ugly.

"Out of curiosity," Orlon said slowly, "just exactly how do you intend to stop me? I can easily dispose of you along with every emergent in this room and blame it on Brivari because you're all alone."

"No she isn't," Malik said suddenly, stepping out from behind the tank.

Two startled faces turned toward him. "I don't suppose you'd like to tell me what you're doing here?" Orlon said coldly.

"I was following you," Malik said. "I thought perhaps you were going to contact whatever patron you called for more hunters. You know, the one you told that you 'put him where he is', and you'll 'get him where he wants to be'. You really shouldn't have such conversations where others can overhear....like I did. I wonder if Khivar would know who you were talking to.

Silence. Orlon's eyes were flickering dangerously as Marana gaped at Malik, shaking her head slowly from side to side as though trying to wish him away. "I could tolerate Marana's misguided, but perfectly understandable attachment to these specimens," Orlon said, his voice heavy with menace. "But you....you pose a most vexing problem."

"What's the matter?" Malik said softly, moving sideways so as to get a better shot as Marana backed up in alarm, both knowing exactly where this was heading. "Having trouble justifying this one?"

"No," Orlon answered coldly. "Not at all."



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0700 hours

Eagle Rock Military Base




"C'mon, move along, move along," the server behind the counter said in a bored tone as soldiers moved through the line in the base mess. "There are a lot of guys in line, so load up and move your asses—oh! Sorry, ma'am," he added hastily, coloring as Yvonne came abreast of him. "I didn't see you there."

"Good morning, Private," Yvonne smiled. "So nice to see you again. May I please have a coffee pot? I'm meeting someone, and it will save all the ups and downs for more."

"Of course, ma'am," the blushing Private said, scurrying away to fetch one of the smaller coffee pots that Yvonne had learned were stored and cleaned here for later use in the officer's mess. "There you go. You have yourself a good day, now."

"Thank you," Yvonne said, heading for the coffee urn amidst grumbling in the line about the server never doing any favors for them. While there were certainly a number of downsides to being a woman in this man's army, there were also a few advantages. Of course being polite didn't hurt, something the average soldier had yet to figure out.

After snagging a couple of mugs, Yvonne chose a table near a wall, furthest away from scrutiny and affording a clear view of the rest of the room. She had grown to prefer the Officer's Mess, which Stephen had introduced her to after his meeting with Captain Dodie, but Brivari preferred the base mess for the very reasons she didn't: The crowds and the noise. She'd been meeting him here three times a week since his reappearance last spring, providing a conduit for communication between him and John, not to mention a conduit for headaches. John's insistence on remaining captive until he'd done all he could with their ship had not gone over well with Brivari, and Brivari's insistence on freeing him as fast as possible and the ship be damned had not gone over well with John. Faithfully reporting each viewpoint without inserting her own feelings into the mix had proven challenging, causing Yvonne to develop a sympathy for translators as she attempted to explain to one Warder why the other felt the way he did. It was very stressful being squarely in the middle of two powerful, opinionated men, making her long for the days when they'd met face to face and settled—or not—their own differences, leaving her to while away the hours in her quarters in peace.

"Good morning."

"Good morning," Yvonne replied as Brivari slid onto the bench across from her, his back against the wall, his eyes sweeping the room. He always sat there so he could keep an eye out for enemy aliens, all of whom were now fortunately visible to him. Just in case he missed anyone, however, telepathic speech was out, as she still hadn't mastered the art of speaking privately. Speaking aloud was no problem here, where the general din made it hard to hear even a conversation in which you were trying to participate.

"Coffee?"

"A pot?" Brivari said dryly. "This can't be good."

"We may need a pot this morning," Yvonne said matter-of-factly, having learned the hard way that pussyfooting only delayed the inevitable.

Brivari shook his head wearily. "Let me guess: Now he won't leave until he can paint the ship a bright blue."

Yvonne smiled faintly as she pushed a full mug across the table. Privately, she agreed with Brivari: Whatever advantages John felt could be gained from having their ship functional, assuming that were possible, she was squarely in the get-the-hell-out-of-here-as-fast-as-you-can camp. Things had been stable at the compound for so long now what with John's cooperation and Ramey's largesse that it was easy to forget how very quickly everything could go downhill. "No," she replied. "John got the communication console on your ship working."

Brivari's eyes widened. "Is he certain?"

"Well, he didn't actually contact anyone, and I imagine that would be the acid test. But he routed power to it, and he said that 'several private frequencies used only by the royal family were accessible'."

"Indeed," Brivari murmured. He was quiet for a moment, lost in thought before ultimately shaking his head. "I'm impressed that he managed to repair communications—I honestly never thought he'd get that far—but I'm afraid I still don't see the point. We may learn some interesting details about what is happening at home, assuming we can contact someone we trust, but none of that will change what is happening here, nor is there any way for us to affect what's happening there. We still must wait many years for our king's recovery, and what will matter most is what is happening then, not now."

"I know," Yvonne said. "Nevertheless, he's going to try to contact your home....and he wants you there when he does it."

Yvonne sipped her coffee and waited as a parade of emotions marched across Brivari's features, exasperation and frustration chief among them. Access to the hangar where John was working on the ship was no problem for Brivari despite the x-rays. In the compound they were a serious restriction which prevented him from entering John's room or changing floors, but the hangar afforded more opportunities. With its wide open space and lack of a second floor, the only x-rays were at the doors, and John was more accessible. They had come up with a workable plan to spring him from the hangar shortly after Brivari had reappeared last spring, only to shelve it when John insisted on finishing the ship repairs.

"Look," Yvonne said when a full minute passed without an answer from Brivari, "repairing your ship has kept John sane. He's nearly finished doing whatever he can do under the circumstances, and he's hell bent on contacting your world if he can. You know as well as I do that there's no point in trying to get him out unless he agrees to go, and he won't agree to go until he tries this, so why don't you just humor him and get it over with so we can all move on to the next step? I agree it probably won't serve any practical purpose, but it would be a huge emotional boost for John....and perhaps for you too, if you'd let it be. It might even be a boost for those on your world who support your king if one of them actually spoke with the king's Warder."

"All right," Brivari sighed. "When?"

"Tomorrow at noon. The guards eat lunch in shifts, but Keyser eats at noon. John works through lunch, so that would be a good time to try for some time alone in the ship."

"I can't believe I'm agreeing to this," Brivari grumbled. "I can't believe I actually waited this long in the first place."

"You must have felt there was some value to having the ship at least partially repaired, or you wouldn't have waited," Yvonne pointed out.

"Wrong," Brivari retorted. "Jaddo wouldn't go, and it will be difficult enough to secure his escape with his cooperation, never mind without it. I never thought I'd see the day when he'd be arguing to stay."

"Once we'd worked out a plan to get him out, I think he figured we could execute that plan anytime," Yvonne said. "But I think it's time whether he agrees or not. Things have been calm for quite a while now, and I don't want our luck to run out."

"Is there something I should know?" Brivari asked sharply.

"No. I'm just superstitious. And I—" Yvonne stopped, tracing the rim of her mug with her finger. "I'm worried about him, and I'd like to see him out of here as soon as possible. So for heaven's sake, meet him tomorrow, phone home, and let's get this show on the road."

"Why are you worried?" Brivari asked. "Has something else happened you haven't told me about?"

Yvonne hesitated a moment. "Do you remember when I told you that he wouldn't drink coffee anymore? I never did figure out why," she continued when Brivari nodded. "He switched to tea, and I just forgot about it. But lately he's been refusing other foods. He can't tell me why, exactly; he just says there's 'something wrong with them', but he doesn't seem to know what that means."

"What else is he refusing?"

"Sausage," Yvonne answered, ticking off the list on her fingers, "orange juice, anything with cinnamon, to name a few. I have no idea what the problem is. I'm afraid..." She paused, wondering if she'd be invoking some kind of bad karma by saying this out loud. "I'm afraid the serum might be affecting him in some new way. He's been on it for almost three years now, and we never did understand exactly how it works. So the sooner he gets off it, the better."

Brivari said nothing for a moment, staring into his cup. "There is another explanation," he said quietly.

Yvonne blinked. "There is? What?"

"When Jaddo was first captured, he feared he would die because he could not shift," Brivari said. "Those who lose the ability to shift are typically injured, ill, or very old, which is probably how the inability to shift became associated with death. That inability is also associated with something else. Among my people, there is a...legend? Myth? Belief? I'm not certain what the correct word is, but some believe that if one were to remain in one form long enough, you would begin to acquire senses the rest of us lack. Shifting disrupts many of the body's normal systems. When shifting stops for a long enough period of time, some believe those senses reassert themselves."

"So....you think he's beginning to taste?" Yvonne asked.

"I had never given much credence to those tales," Brivari said, "but yes, I think that's a distinct possibility."

"Well...that's good, right?" Yvonne said. "That's much better than my theory. At least if you're right, it's something natural instead of—"

"It's not the least bit 'natural'," Brivari interrupted. "Not for us. Not if, in order to acquire those senses, we have to give up the one thing that defines us as who we are."

"But...it wouldn't be permanent, would it?" Yvonne asked. "If you're right, then as soon as the serum is stopped and he can change his shape again, that would disrupt everything and he'd be back to....'normal'."

"That is one theory."

Yvonne's eyes widened suddenly. "You think he won't be able to shift after the serum is stopped? That he's stuck in human form forever?"

"I don't know," Brivari said impatiently. "I've never known anyone who acquired additional senses, and those who were said to have done so had already lost their ability to shift, which means their health was already compromised for one reason or another. I doubt there's ever been a young, healthy subject on which to test the theory because none of my people would agree to forgo shifting for the length of time required. What concerns me is the conclusion Jaddo will reach if he realizes what this could mean. One of his greatest fears is that he will survive this ordeal damaged in some way, and if he thinks that has happened, I don't know how he'll take that."

"He's taken an awful lot already," Yvonne pointed out. "Don't sell him short."

"He shouldn't have to take any more," Brivari said firmly. "He's been through enough. And now that I've heard this latest news, enough is definitely enough. Communication or no communication, ship or no ship, we need to get him out of there now."



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7:30 a.m.

Proctor residence




Dee plucked the nearest dress off the rack in her closet and slipped it over her head without looking at it. Much as she enjoyed school, having to wear a dress every single day was one of its downsides; actually spending time ruminating over which dress to wear, as girls like Mary Laura and Rachel seemed to be doing all the time now, was, to Dee's way of thinking, a monumental waste of her time. As far as she was concerned, all dresses were equally distasteful; just grab one and go was her motto.

"Dee," her mother's voice called up the stairs. "I'm making pancakes. Would you like some?"

"No, thank you," Dee called back down.

A pause. "Are you sure?"

"I'm sure I don't want your pancakes," Dee answered, adding just the right emphasis to the word "your" to make to very clear to her mother that this wasn't about pancakes.

After a few seconds silence, Dee heard her mother's footsteps retreating to the kitchen. Emily hated it when Dee spoke to her in that frosty tone of voice, hated it even more than being ignored. Which is precisely what Dee had done for almost two full weeks back when her mother had first thrown Brivari out of the house last year before reaching the conclusion that Mac had been right: Ignoring someone you were living with was downright difficult, not to mention exhausting. Just being angry had turned out to be exhausting in its own right. All she had been able to think about was that anger; it had consumed her, interfering with her appetite, her sleep, her homework, and just about anything else you could think of.

So Dee had given serious thought to Mac's suggestion about agreeing to disagree, ultimately deciding that just wasn't good enough; she was still plenty mad, and as she'd already pointed out to Mac, one didn't just stop being mad. Instead, as time had passed and the event had receded, she'd fallen into a pattern of compartmentalizing her anger, expressing it when the subject came up, ignoring it at other times. Weeks would go by without her thinking of it much at all, and then something would happen which would remind her, like her mother's ridiculous denouncement yesterday of people who had behaved exactly as she had. Then the whole thing would flare again, with Dee adopting a flat, cold tone with her mother while treating her father exactly as she always did. And so it would continue, until enough time had passed that she partially forgot about her mother's outrageous behavior...but only partially. It was always there, always lurking in the background even during dormant periods, always that unspoken wall between them.

"Dee?"

Dee closed her eyes in exasperation as she finished stuffing her book bag, not bothering to turn around. "What?"

"We can't keep doing this," Emily said from the doorway.

"Can't keep doing what?" Dee asked tonelessly.

"You know perfectly well 'what'," Emily answered. "The slightest little thing turns you into an icebox again!"

" 'Slightest little thing'?" Dee echoed. "You call throwing people who need us out of the house the 'slightest little thing'?"

"Brivari didn't need us anymore," Emily insisted. "The hunters were dead and he felt safe enough to come back here—"

"But not safe enough to stay," Dee interrupted, "not that he could have anyway. He's not 'safe' yet, Mama, and Jaddo hasn't been 'safe' for years now."

"If you'd just listen—"

"Don't," Dee broke in, looking her mother in the eye for the first time. "Just don't. I don't need another lecture about all your wonderful reasons for throwing him out."

"Apparently you do," Emily said tersely, her temper obviously rising. "If you understood why I did what I did, maybe you wouldn't be such a—"

Dee's eyebrows rose as Emily looked away, flustered. One of the unwritten rules of these altercations was that no one swore or otherwise lost their temper, and Dee was glad to see that it had been her mother who had almost broken that rule first.

"You don't get it, do you, Mama?" Dee said. "I 'understand' why you did what you did, or why you think you did what you did; I just don't agree with it. I can think you're right without understanding, or understand and still think you're wrong....which happens to be what I think. And I'll go on thinking that no matter how many different ways you try to 'explain', so save your breath."

"You don't want to hear it, do you?" Emily demanded. "Are you afraid I'll actually make a good point that you can't argue with, or are you just convinced that someone died and made you God?"

"I've already heard it, Mama," Dee replied calmly, even as her mother continued to develop a head of steam. "I don't need to hear it again because it never changes. So unless you have something new to say, you're wasting both my time and yours."

"Deanna!" Emily exclaimed as she pushed past her mother, heading for the stairs.

"You know what?" Dee said, spinning around, cutting off whatever Emily had been about to say. "Whenever you go into another one of your 'why I did it' speeches, you always sound like you're really talking to yourself. Like you're trying to convince yourself. Like you don't really buy what you did either. So maybe that's why you keep wanting to say the same thing over and over. Maybe I'm not the one who needs to hear it."

Dee skipped down the stairs, ignoring the inviting smell of pancakes as she headed straight for the front door; the fastest road to indigestion was to stay for breakfast and listen to another of her mother's lectures. There were plenty of kids at school who didn't eat all of their lunch; maybe one of them would give her an apple or a banana to tide her over until lunchtime.

"Leaving early?" her father called to her from the driveway where he was looking at the car.

"I'm not hungry," Dee said, planting a quick kiss on his cheek. " 'Bye, Daddy."

She paused at the end of their front walk, looking hopefully down the street toward Anthony's house. But it was too early for him to be done with his breakfast, so she started for school. She'd wait for him outside Chambers' Grocery, their designated meeting spot whenever one of them got a head start on the other. Or whenever I get a head start, she amended silently. It was invariably Dee who wound up leaving early, which is how the whole "wait for me at Chambers'" had started in the first place. Spats with her mother were now so common they had simply woven themselves into the fabric of her life.



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"Morning, Mr. Proctor," Anthony called. "Something wrong with your car?"

David Proctor poked his head out from beneath the hood of his car. "Morning, Anthony. I thought I heard a funny noise in the engine, so I was just taking a look." He let the hood drop into place with a loud clang. "Dee's not here; she left a few minutes ago. She didn't have breakfast; said she wasn't hungry."

"Oh," Anthony said, recognizing the code phrase "not hungry". "So she had another fight with her mother?"

"The same fight, actually," Mr. Proctor said.

Wow, Anthony thought, shaking his head. Dee and her mother had had a doozy of a fight last year, and everyone was still suffering the fallout. Dee hadn't told him what they were fighting about, which probably meant they were fighting about aliens. Privately, Anthony suspected that Dee wouldn't elaborate because she was afraid he would take her mother's side, which, he had to admit, was a distinct possibility. Dee was smart and brave and loyal to a fault, all of which meant that sometimes she got herself stuck in a rut that she couldn't climb out of.

"She sure stays mad a long time," Anthony said.

"Yes, they do," Mr. Proctor sighed. "They certainly do."

"So what do you do in the meantime?" Anthony asked, unsurprised that Mr. Proctor had spoken in the plural.

"Wait them out, I guess."

"That could be awhile," Anthony said doubtfully.

"Maybe that's why marriage is for life," Mr. Proctor said with a smile. "I need to get to work. Have a good day at school, Anthony."

Anthony headed down the driveway, shaking his head in amazement that Mr. Proctor was so calm while Mrs. Proctor and Dee were virtual hurricanes by comparison. Somehow, Dee's father had mastered the art of standing in the eye of those hurricanes instead of allowing himself to be swept up in their destructive winds—and for some reason, he seemed to feel it worth the effort. Anthony thought he could understand why. He and Mr. Proctor were the type of people who may have led quiet lives of polite boredom if not for the whirling dervishes in their midst. Dealing with Dee could give one a headache, but Anthony had to admit that his life had been humdrum prior to moving here. Dee had brought a spark to his life that had shone light in unexpected places....and sometimes lit things on fire. Still, it was worth the risk of the occasional brushfire just to have a flame like that nearby. Now that he knew what life looked like with such a bright light, it would seem awfully dark without it.

Anthony was halfway through composing a speech that would hopefully convince Dee to tell him what this months-long fight was about when he spied the Proctor's treehouse as he was passing by the Brazel's. For just a moment, he was certain that he'd seen something moving in the window, and he paused, wondering if Dee was up there instead of waiting for him at Chambers' like she usually did on mornings like this. The treehouse was still their designated meeting place for private conversation, but usually after school, not before. Something flashed past the treehouse window again as he watched, and Anthony decided to quickly check it out before heading for school. Casually, he headed toward his own house, down the driveway and the side yard, cutting across the backyards to the Proctor's so as to avoid being seen by Mr. Proctor, who still hadn't left. Hoping Mrs. Proctor wouldn't look out the window and find him in her backyard, Anthony stood behind the tree and called up, "Dee! Are you up there?"

No answer. Anthony called again as loud as he dared; this time he was certain he heard movement in the treehouse. Why wasn't she answering? Was she that upset? Collisions with her mother usually made her angry, not upset. "I'm coming up," Anthony called, dropping his book bag at the base of the tree and scanning the area carefully before mounting the ladder. This time he heard a whimpering noise from the top; this morning's dust-up must have been particularly nasty. A few seconds later, he was poking his head through the opening in the treehouse floor...and was totally unprepared for what he found.

Two figures lay on the floor of the treehouse. Both were short, with gray skin, large heads, and unbelievably large hands. Their huge, almond shaped eyes were closed, but as Anthony gaped at them, one pair fluttered open, and the long fingers twitched.

"Oh, my God," Anthony whispered.

At the sound of his voice, those eyes, those huge, black eyes fastened on him as Anthony froze to the ladder with fear. The long fingers twitched again, pointing, not at Anthony but at the other figure, which still appeared unconscious, if not dead, with a pool of black liquid slowly spreading from underneath them.

"They're hurt," Anthony said, his voice as ragged as his breathing. "You're hurt, aren't you?" he asked the figure with the open eyes as though it could talk through that tiny slit where its mouth should be. "I'll...I'll get help," he added, mentally crossing both police and ambulances off his list as they were unlikely to be "helpful" when they saw the victims. "I'll find something, I'll—"

He stopped as he heard a car engine turning over. Of course! That's why the aliens were here; this was the Proctor's house. The aliens had come to the one place where they might find someone willing to help them...and it was sheer luck that he'd found them now. Otherwise it would have been no earlier than 3:30 this afternoon before anyone would have been up here, and both of them might be dead.

"Stay right there!" Anthony said rather unnecessarily, as neither alien looked able to move very far. Scrambling down the ladder, he pelted toward the driveway, arriving just as Mr. Proctor's car was backing out. "Mr. Proctor!" he shouted at the top of his lungs. "Mr. Proctor, wait!"



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Hello and thank you to everyone reading!







CHAPTER ONE HUNDRED EIGHTEEN


June 6, 1950, 7:50 a.m.

Proctor residence



"Mr. Proctor!" Anthony bellowed, thundering down the Proctor's driveway toward the car that had already backed halfway into the road. "Wait! Stop!" Without thinking, he charged in front of it, planting his hands with a thump on the hood just as Mr. Proctor shifted into gear and looked through the windshield in astonishment.

"Anthony?" he called, rolling down his window. "What's wrong? I thought you'd left for school."

Anthony came around to the window. "I....there's....you've gotta come!" he sputtered, at a loss as to how to explain. "Up in your treehouse....you have to come now!"

Mr. Proctor stared at him for only a moment before nodding. "Okay," he said carefully. "I need you to back away from the car so I can pull into the driveway."

Anthony hesitated a moment before obeying; the notion that Mr. Proctor might just drive off and leave him with two dead or dying aliens was not attractive. The notion of approaching Mrs. Proctor about those dead or dying aliens was even less attractive. But he needn't have worried; the car promptly pulled into the driveway and the engine rumbled to a standstill.

"Back here," Anthony said urgently as Mr. Proctor climbed out. "Hurry!"

Anthony ran all the way back to the treehouse, vaulted up the ladder, and carefully climbed off on the opposite side from the aliens. They were still there, lying in a heap, both appearing dead now. A second later, Mr. Proctor's head poked through the opening in the middle of the treehouse floor and threw a questioning look at Anthony, who pointed.

"Good Lord," Mr. Proctor breathed.

Anthony pressed his back into the wall of the treehouse as he watched Mr. Proctor climb off the ladder and proceed to inspect the aliens the way the ambulance workers had inspected River Dog the day he'd been attacked. Neither alien moved as Mr. Proctor felt their chests and moved arms and legs, ultimately finding whatever was bleeding on one of them. Pulling his handkerchief out of his pocket, he tied a tight bandage around an impossibly thin arm, then turned to look at Anthony.

"Are you okay?" he asked quietly.

"Yeah," Anthony lied. "But they're not."

"No, they're not," Mr. Proctor agreed. "Were they like this when you found them?"

Anthony nodded. "Did they say anything?" Mr. Proctor asked.

"The one who isn't bleeding pointed at the one that is, but it didn't say anything."

"Did it look like they were fighting with each other?"

Anthony paused for a moment, taken aback by this question. "I....I don't know. Maybe they were. It looks like they've been fighting with someone. But I can't tell if they look mad, or sad or....anything."

"What was your reaction when the one pointed at the other?" Mr. Proctor asked. "Did it look like he was pointing at an enemy?"

Anthony thought for a second, then shook his head. "No. It looked like it wanted me to help the other one because it was hurt."

"Okay. I need you to do something for me, if you're willing," Mr. Proctor said. "I need you to go in the house and ask Mrs. Proctor for two blankets."

"Blankets?"

"I want to move them out of the treehouse," Mr. Proctor explained, "and I need to cover them up in order to do that. Can you ask Mrs. Proctor for the blankets?"

"Sure," Anthony said, relieved to have such a mundane task. He scurried down the ladder and was halfway to the back door of house before it occurred to him that Mrs. Proctor might want to know what he wanted the blankets for...and might not approve of the answer. But when he reached the house, Mrs. Proctor was nowhere to be found. "Mrs. Proctor?" he called as he headed through the back porch, looped through the kitchen, and skipped up the stairs. "Mrs. Proctor?" Nothing. Pausing by Dee's bedroom, Anthony hesitated for just a moment before pulling off her bedspread and the blanket beneath it. These might not be the blankets Mr. Proctor had in mind, but under the circumstances, Anthony was sure Dee wouldn't mind.

"I got them," Anthony called breathlessly as he pushed the blankets through the treehouse floor ahead of him, nearly tripping on them in the process. "I couldn't find Mrs. Proctor, so I took these off Dee's bed."

"That's fine," Mr. Proctor said. "She's probably downstairs putting the laundry in. Help me spread these out."

For a few queasy moments, Anthony was afraid Mr. Proctor was going to ask for help lifting the leathery-looking gray bodies onto the blankets. But he did it himself, wrapping first one then the other as Anthony winced at the black stuff that must be blood that was seeping through the handkerchief bandage and getting all over Dee's light blue blanket. Both aliens were wrapped completely when another voice called from below.

"Dave? You okay?"

Anthony and Mr. Proctor peered down through the opening in the floor at Mr. Brazel's puzzled face. "Yeah, I'm fine, Mac," Mr. Proctor answered.

"You sure? Your car's parked all cattywampus in the driveway."

"I know," Mr. Proctor said. "I was....delayed."

"In a treehouse?" Mac's eyebrows rose, his eyes sweeping over Anthony's face. "You don't look so good, Anthony. Neither do you, Dave. You need some help?"

"I don't want you involved in this, Mac," Mr. Proctor said seriously.

That proved to be the wrong thing to say to Mr. Brazel. Anthony moved back from the ladder as Mr. Brazel promptly headed up, poking his head through the opening and looking around suspiciously. "What are those?" he demanded, staring at the two bundles on the floor. "What's going on here?"

Mr. Proctor sighed and pulled back the blanket to reveal one of the alien's faces. "Good God!" Mr. Brazel exclaimed, paling. "What happened?"

"Anthony found them up here," Mr. Proctor said. "They're hurt...been in some kind of fight. I'm bringing them into the house."

"Right," Mr. Brazel said, his voice a bit on the shaky side. "I'll help."

"No," Mr. Proctor said firmly. "The Army has a bead on you, and the last thing I want is for anyone to see you carrying one of these around."

"If anyone sees you carrying one of these around, the Army will be on my doorstep anyway," Mr. Brazel argued. "And we'll get them out of sight a lot faster if we each take one. Anthony, you go down first and hold the door for us," Mr. Brazel instructed, climbing all the way off the ladder so Anthony could go down. "Be ready to let us in the minute we get there."

Anthony nodded and headed down the ladder again, grateful that neither adult had wasted precious time fussing about the fact that he'd seen something he wasn't supposed to; a minute later, Mr. Proctor and Mr. Brazel came through the back porch door with their bundles. "They're heavier than I thought," Mr. Brazel muttered. "Where are we going?"

"Upstairs," Mr. Proctor said shortly. "Spare room."

Mrs. Proctor appeared in the kitchen doorway wearing her bathrobe as they all trooped up the stairs. "What's going on?" she asked in astonishment. Anthony, who was bringing up the rear of the procession, moved a little faster; the last thing he wanted was to be the one to tell Mrs. Proctor that a couple of injured aliens were in her house. No one else seemed to want the job either; neither Mr. Proctor nor Mr. Brazel answered her as she trailed after them, demanding an explanation. The aliens were deposited on the bed in the spare room, the twin bed being large enough for both of them, and Mr. Proctor pulled back the blankets just as his wife's voice rose an octave, only to fall silent when she saw what lay on her guest room bed.

"Where did they come from?" she whispered, staring at the two aliens in shock.

"They were up in the treehouse," Mr. Proctor replied. "They're both injured. This one's bleeding. I'll get the healing stone."

Anthony had no idea what a "healing stone" was, but whatever it was, Mrs. Proctor certainly did. "What? No!" she exclaimed. "We don't even know who they are!"

"One of them could be him," Mr. Proctor said.

"Or maybe not be," Mrs. Proctor countered. "We have no way of knowing. I'm not lifting a finger to help either of them until I know who I'm helping."

"I can't believe you just said that," Mr. Proctor said, a thread of anger in his voice that Anthony had never heard before. "Now we have a list of criteria people have to meet before we'll help them, even when their lives are at stake? I—"

"Dave," Mr. Brazel interrupted.

"—never thought I'd see the day when—"

"Dave!

Mr. and Mrs. Proctor looked at Mr. Brazel, then swung their heads toward the bed, following his gaze. Anthony's was already there. He'd been watching the aliens the whole time Dee's parents had been arguing, and the moment Mrs. Proctor had said she wouldn't help until she knew who they were, the non-bleeding alien had begun to...move. For a moment, it had looked like it was just writhing in pain; a second later, it was very clear that something else entirely was going on. The alien was getting longer, taking up more space on the bed, bumping into the bleeding one as its legs lengthened while its head and hands shrank. The gray skin turned flesh-colored, hair sprouted from the head, and the huge eyes dwindled to less than half their size as four people watched, horrified.

When it was all over, a human man lay curled on his side where the alien had been. He was panting as though exhausted, his eyelids were fluttering open and closed like he was drifting in and out of consciousness, and he was absolutely, completely, stark naked. Mr. Brazel's eyes were as round as saucers and Anthony was sweating profusely, the bedroom wall feeling cold behind him. Only Mr. and Mrs. Proctor appeared relatively unsurprised. Mr. Proctor stepped closer to the bed and examined the man's face. "Malik?" he said. "Is that you?"

The eyelids fluttered open, and the human head nodded almost imperceptively. "What happened?" Mr. Proctor pressed. "Who did this to you? Did he do this to you?" he asked, pointing to the injured alien.

No. The alien shook its—his?—head vigorously, triggering a spasm of alarming convulsions. "Okay, okay," Mr. Proctor soothed, pulling the edges of the blanket around the man. "Who is this then? Is it Brivari?" No—another head shake.

"Is it the one who threatened to kill us?" Mrs. Proctor demanded as Mr. Proctor threw her a disapproving look.

No—another head shake, more violent this time. "Is it your leader?" Mr. Proctor asked. No. "Then it's the scientist," Mr. Proctor said, having apparently reached the end of his list. This time the head nodded.

"The scientist?" Mrs. Proctor repeated, her voice rising. "You mean that woman?" The alien nodded again.

"Okay, now we know who they are," Mr. Proctor said. "Satisfied?"

"Absolutely not!" Mrs. Proctor exclaimed. "They can look like anyone, so we still don't know if they're who they say they are. And even if they are, I'm not lifting a finger to help that awful woman. I told her before that if she ever darkened my doorway again, I'd shoot her. She got a reprieve the last time, but she's not getting one this time."

Silence. Mr. Proctor and Mr. Brazel were staring gravely at Mrs. Proctor, who had folded her arms in front of herself as if bracing for a fight. Anthony remained pressed up against the wall, his eyes darting amongst the three grown-ups, fortunately ignored by everyone.

"It really doesn't matter who they are," Mr. Proctor said. "They're injured, and they need help. Right now, that's all that matters. We can sort the rest out later."

"That may be all that matters to you, but not to me," Mrs. Proctor declared, unmoved.

"Do I understand that you have some way of helping these people that doesn't involve calling an ambulance and answering a whole lot of awkward questions?" Mr. Brazel asked.

"No," Mrs. Proctor said firmly.

"Yes," Mr. Proctor said just as firmly. "Or rather, she and Dee can help. I'm afraid I'm not as talented, or we wouldn't be having this conversation."

"We can stop having it any time you like," Mrs. Proctor said coldly.

"We can't just leave them like this, Emily!" Mr. Proctor protested.

"Like hell we can't!" Mrs. Proctor said angrily. "I don't help people who threaten to kill me!"

"These people threatened to kill you?" Mr. Brazel asked.

Mrs. Proctor opened her mouth, then closed it. "Well....no," she allowed, "not these people. Assuming they're who they say they are, that is."

"Like I said, that doesn't matter," Mr. Proctor said in a steely tone. "When we collected the wounded during the war, we collected all the wounded. We didn't stop to ask about anyone's politics then, and I'm not going to start now."

"He's right, Emily," Mr. Brazel agreed. "All the wounded were tended to, and then the enemy wounded were sent to POW camps. But we didn't just leave them there to die. That wouldn't be human."

"Well, what do you know, they're not human," Mrs. Proctor said severely.

"Are you?" Mr. Proctor demanded.

"What is that supposed to mean?" Mrs. Proctor retorted.

"He means you're acting just like Cavitt," Mr. Brazel said.

Anthony froze as Mrs. Proctor flushed, swinging her head from side to side as she glared at each man in turn. "Oh, is that it?" she said furiously. "Now I'm 'inhuman'? What about them? What about what they did?"

"What they did was no where near as bad as what the Nazi's did, but we still rendered aid to German soldiers," Mr. Proctor argued. "If you won't help, I'll get Dee."

"You will not drag her into this!" Mrs. Proctor insisted.

"I won't have to!" Mr. Proctor retorted. "You'll have to drag her away from it, and you know it!"

"David..Em...please..." Mr. Brazel began.

But Anthony didn't hear the rest. No one was paying any attention to him, so no one noticed when he slipped out of the room and took off down the stairs, flying out the front door and hitting the street at a dead run. He didn't understand most of what he'd heard, but one thing had come through loud and clear: Dee could help. And Dee was probably waiting for him at Chambers, a fifteen minute walk at a leisurely pace, five minutes or less at a run.



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Eagle Rock Military Base



"Good morning, Sergeant Keyser," the guard said.

"Good morning, Private," Keyser answered. "Has the prisoner arrived?"

"Yes, sir. He arrived at the usual time and began work immediately with the new crystals that arrived late last night."

"Good," Keyser said, eyeing the boxes stacked beside the ship in the hangar. "If—" He paused, looking around sharply.

"Is something wrong, sir?"

Keyser hesitated a moment, then shook his head. "No. No, I....I just had the feeling....it's nothing. Carry on. I'll be in the ship if you need me."

"Yes, sir."

Watching from behind a tall crate, Brivari drew further back into the shadows as Keyser walked by, still looking this way and that as though he'd sensed he was being watched. Keyser had come a long way from when he'd first met Jaddo; the quivering Corporal had been replaced by a confident Sergeant who had apparently developed the knack of sensing surveillance, adding another caution to the relatively short list of cautions the hangar posed. Unlike the compound, with its two floors, narrow hallways and plethora of guards, the hangar was relatively easy to navigate, its single, wide open space peppered with equipment, machinery, and supplies. And our ship, Brivari added silently, staring at the gleaming saucer just visible through the opening in the protective curtain surrounding it. To see it now, one would never guess that ship had been so badly damaged. Jaddo had truly worked miracles, on the exterior, at least.

Not that he had done so with Brivari's blessing. When Jaddo had first told him that he wanted to remain captive until he'd done all he could with the ship, Brivari had been convinced that his fellow Warder had taken leave of his senses. After all the misfortunes they had only narrowly escaped, not to mention those they hadn't, why would Jaddo even briefly consider remaining captive one minute longer than he had to? His hours spent at the hangar made him much easier to reach and there were still four Covari out there to be dealt with, not to mention the fact that the human military, currently captivated with their prisoner, could change its fickle mind at any moment.

"I am in a very secure position now," Jaddo had argued. "The humans want the ship repaired, and so do we. We may be able to access it after my escape, but we won't have the ability to repair it, or the help I currently have adapting this world's woefully inadequate resources and technology to our own."

"You've been in a supposedly 'very secure' position before, and that position always evaporates for some reason or other," Brivari had countered. "And that can happen so quickly, we might not have time to react. Spade says he needs time to tweak his 'duty roster', or whatever he calls it, to place both himself and the one called 'Thompson' in the right places at the right time so I can replace one of them. I know there are fewer guards at the hangar, but their faces are well known; I can't take a stranger's shape."

"We will have time to react," Jaddo had insisted, "because we know exactly when my position is likely to become insecure again—when the ship is finished and it dawns on the humans that they won't be able to operate it. I will know better than anyone when that time is coming, so you will have plenty of time to warn Spade."

"And what about the others?" Brivari had demanded. "Orlon and his followers aren't likely to attempt apprehending me by themselves, but the opposite is also true: I am unlikely to be able to take all four of them down alone. It's a stalemate."

"Exactly," Jaddo had answered with exaggerated patience. "It's a stalemate, so it's safe to wait for the moment. We both know Orlon will be slow to admit his failure to Khivar, so it's unlikely any reinforcements will be sent in the near future. Our biggest concern is that he may try to turn our allies at the base against us, and even that is highly unlikely given what happened when he tried that with the Proctors."

"He didn't 'try'....he succeeded," Brivari had said heavily.

"He did not," Jaddo said firmly. "They may no longer be allies, but neither are they enemies, which was what Orlon wanted. And he did not succeed in turning the child at all."

"And what good will that do?" Brivari had asked. "She's a child; it's her parents' opinions that count."

"My goodness, but you have a short memory," Jaddo had admonished. "The Proctor's child is no ordinary human child, and she has a profound effect on her parents' viewpoints. I wouldn't dismiss them just yet."

"Perhaps," Brivari had allowed. "But the fact remains that a new set of hunters could arrive or your situation could change at any moment. We can't take that risk!"

"Just a little while longer," Jaddo had pleaded. "Make all the plans you want, but surely we can wait just a little while longer."

So Brivari had made his plans and visited the hangar often, sizing up the place and those who guarded it as "just a little while longer" stretched into months, with Brivari growing more uneasy by the week. He had caught glimpses of Covari in the area, but he'd shaken them off with ease; Orlon was merely conducting surveillance, it seemed, keeping an eye on him while he waited. But waited for what? Why had he hung back so long? The delay suggested that reinforcements were indeed on the way, and the length of time that had elapsed pointed to the one thing Brivari had feared in the back of his mind ever since his odd little chat with the Argilian scientist he had killed in Amar and Malik's dwelling: Khivar's people must be on their way. The scientist had predicted an interval of two or three years before the Warders would have to "face the results of his work". That interval had almost passed, suggesting that their next set of enemies would not be hunters, but Argilians in shells, which would present a whole new set of challenges. And the last thing Brivari wanted was to have either of them captive when that new set of challenges arrived, which is why the Healer's news that Jaddo had reached the end of his repairs and was ready to leave had been welcome, even if he considered this effort to contact home a waste of time. It was time to go.

For so many different reasons, Brivari thought, as he slipped away from the curtained ship, passing a table of food with brimming pots of coffee. He'd been suspicious when the Healer had told him that Jaddo was rejecting coffee, but, preoccupied as he'd been with Jaddo's insistence on staying, he'd pushed the most worrisome cause for that rejection to the back of his mind. The news that Jaddo was now rejecting various foods, all of them strongly flavored by human standards, confirmed Brivari's worst fear: Jaddo was apparently developing senses after being in one form for so long. It had been Emily Proctor who had first suggested that might happen, and Brivari had dismissed the notion as nonsense; the development of senses usually disrupted by shifting was only a myth, and an unhappy one at that. But she had planted a seed of doubt that was now in full bloom because, to the best of Brivari's knowledge, no one had ever tested the theory on a young, healthy specimen. Covari either shifted or died trying, so the idea of voluntarily not shifting for the length of time supposedly required to develop senses was nothing short of preposterous. He could not have foreseen their present circumstances, could not have imagined that so much time would pass with Jaddo still captive and trapped in one form. His abilities had promptly returned the one time they had managed to stop the serum, but that had been only a few months after it had been started. More than two years had passed since then—was it possible that the serum had altered Jaddo's physiology in some way? Was this new sense of taste merely a side effect of being in one form for so long, or did it herald something more sinister, more permanent? Would his abilities return the next time the serum was stopped?

A moot point, Brivari thought as he slipped out of the hangar. They would just have to wait and see what happened, as there would be no opportunity to stop the serum before Jaddo's escape; Sergeant Brisson had checked each dose religiously since his earlier laxity, and Marana, the one person on the planet capable of producing a replacement, would not be willing to do so. And Malik. What of Malik? Many times, Brivari had considered approaching Malik, especially now that he knew Malik's claims against Zan may have been vindicated...."may have been" being the key phrase there. Months later, it was still impossible to tell whether Valeris had been real or the apparition of a fevered brain telling himself what he already knew. He hadn't breathed a word of that to Jaddo, merely saying he'd fallen ill without supplying the fantastic details lest Jaddo think he'd gone mad. But he had often thought of taking Malik up on his offer of assistance, and he thought of it again now that the time for Jaddo's escape had come.

Perhaps I have gone mad, Brivari thought ruefully, shaking his head at his own idiocy. Much as he would love to have another Covari by his side, Malik had already changed allegiances twice; there was no telling what side he would be on at any given moment. No—they would have to make do with their human allies here at the base. Malik had made his choice. Let him live with it....or die with it, as the case may be.



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Proctor residence



Anthony pelted around the corner onto Baldwin street, one hand pressed to his side to relieve the stitch that had been there for some time now. Dee was several yards ahead of him, already approaching her house; no surprise, really, as this was only her first sprint of the morning while he was on his second. He'd been afraid that she'd given up waiting for him and gone on to school, but he'd found her outside Chambers, annoyed and fretting. For the second time that day, he'd skidded to a halt in front of a Proctor and said, "I need you to come now!"

"What's wrong?" Dee had asked, staring at him wide-eyed.

"They're back," he'd answered, leaning forward with his hands on his knees, panting.

He'd been assuming she'd want more information, that he'd have at least a minute to catch his breath. But she'd taken off immediately and he'd followed her, and maybe that was best; Mrs. Chambers was peering out the front window of her store, no doubt wondering why Anthony was in such a state. One sprint had been doable, but the second proved much more difficult, and Anthony tried to distract himself by piecing together what he'd heard this morning with what he already knew. The first conclusion he reached almost made him stop running: The aliens could look human. That was huge, something he'd never considered. All along he'd figured that the humans he'd seen at alien-related events were either chasing or helping the aliens, but this latest information left that theory in the dust. Most disturbing of all was the fact that, if the aliens could look human, virtually anyone could be an alien...and that opened up a whole new can of worms he'd rather not think about.

"Dee!" Anthony called as Dee neared her front door, ready to bolt inside. "Wait! Don't go in yet! I have to tell you something first!"

She waited impatiently as he flew up the front walk and gratefully came to a halt, leaning against the porch post. "Don't just run in," he warned, gasping for air between sentences. "There are two of them, and they're hurt. Your father said there's a way to help them, but only you and your mother can do it, and your mother wouldn't. That's why I got you."

Dee's face twisted at the mention of her mother. "Figures," she said sourly, peeking through the living room window. "I don't see anyone in there." She cracked the front door; voices floated out, angry voices relatively close by; the argument must have moved downstairs. "They're in the kitchen," Dee whispered, putting a finger to her lips before opening the door further and slipping inside, Anthony following. They closed the door noiselessly and padded up the stairs just as noiselessly, Dee motioning to Anthony to avoid one of the steps on the way up. She headed straight for the guest room without him having to tell her to.

They were still there, the human-looking man now covered with a blanket and the gray alien, Mr. Proctor's handkerchief still wrapped around its toothpick of an arm. Both appeared unconscious, and neither moved as Dee bent over them. "That's Malik," she whispered, pointing to the man.

"The other one is a woman...I guess," Anthony added doubtfully, wondering how anyone could tell. "Your mother said something about not lifting a finger to help 'that woman'."

"The scientist," Dee nodded.

"Is that black stuff blood?" Anthony asked. "Sorry it got all over your blankets. They were up in the treehouse, and your father sent me in for blankets to wrap them in. I couldn't find your mother, so I grabbed yours."

"She probably wouldn't have given you any when she found out what you wanted them for," Dee said. "Which reminds me...."

She headed across the hall to her parents' room and started pulling open dresser drawers. "Help me look," she said to Anthony. "I'm looking for a small rock that's orangey-yellow colored."

"Is that the 'healing stone' your father mentioned?" Anthony asked, glancing nervously around the room. He wouldn't be happy about going through his own parents' drawers, never mind anyone else's.

"Yup. Found it!" she said triumphantly, holding up a small, vaguely egg-shaped rock.

"What does it do?" Anthony asked as she headed back to the guest room.

"You'll see." Standing beside the bed, Dee held the rock in both hands and closed her eyes, and as Anthony watched, the rock began to glow. A moment later, he backed up in alarm as the man on the bed began twitching, his hands opening and closing, his head moving from side to side as though in pain...

"Deanna!"

Startled, Anthony flattened himself against the wall as Dee whirled around to face her valkyrie of a mother, who snatched the no longer glowing rock from her hands. Footsteps behind her announced the arrival of Mr. Proctor and Mr. Brazel, who looked no less upset. Apparently the grown-ups still hadn't reached a consensus.

"What are you doing here?" Mrs. Proctor demanded.

"I live here, remember?" Dee retorted. "Give that back!"

"I will do no such thing," Emily said firmly, "and you should be in school."

"And let them die?" Dee said angrily. "You'd do that, wouldn't you? Brivari didn't do that with me!"

"If they die, that's the fault of whoever attacked them, not me," Emily said severely. "And neither of them is Brivari, so we don't owe them a blessed thing."

"This is just like when I got hurt!" Dee exclaimed furiously. "No one wanted to fix me because they said it wasn't their problem, and Urza talked them into it. Are you sorry he did that, Mama?"

"Enough," Mr. Proctor said firmly before his livid wife could reply. "Emily, give her the stone."

"No!" Mrs. Proctor protested. "She's my daughter, and she's not doing this!"

"She's also my daughter," Mr. Proctor said deliberately. "If you don't want to help, that's your decision, but if Dee feels differently, that's her decision. Give her the stone."

Silence. Anthony remained pressed up against the wall, scarcely daring to breathe as Dee glared at her mother, her parents stared each other down, and Mr. Brazel looked from one angry face to another in consternation. "You did this, didn't you?" Mrs. Proctor said bitterly to Mr. Proctor. "You dragged her into this like you always do—"

"Oh, come on, Emily, you're not making sense," Mr. Brazel interrupted sharply. "Dave's been with us the whole time. You know that."

Anthony watched in dismay as yet another argument ensued, this time about how Dee had happened to find her way back home at such a critical moment. "I got her!" he blurted out.

Every adult head turned Anthony's way, noticing him for the first time. "I went and got her," he repeated in a whisper, quailing under Mrs. Proctor's furious stare.

"You 'went and got her'," Mrs. Proctor repeated coldly. "Why?"

"Because I heard Mr. Proctor say that she could help," Anthony answered, embarrassed at the way his voice quavered. Dee had mastered the art of not caring about what other people thought of her, but he hadn't yet.

"If you heard Mr. Proctor say that, then you also heard me say that I didn't approve," Mrs. Proctor said severely.

"Yes, ma'am," Anthony admitted weakly.

"But you went and got her anyway."

Anthony swallowed. "Yes, ma'am," he whispered.

"Why?" Mrs. Proctor demanded.

"Yes, Anthony," Mr. Proctor added curiously. "Why?"

"I....I wasn't thinking about what you wanted," Anthony admitted, his voice shaking, but stronger now. "I was thinking of what Dee wanted. Because if someone doesn't want to help, they shouldn't have to. But if someone does want to help, then no one should stop them. And I knew Dee would want to help."

"Exactly," Mr. Proctor said. "You made your choice, Emily, and Dee has made hers. Now give me the stone."

"Fine," Mrs. Proctor said angrily, practically flinging the stone at her husband. "It's always nice to know my opinions are held in such high regard," she added, directing icy glares at virtually everyone as she stalked out of the room.

"I'll talk to her," Mr. Brazel sighed after Mrs. Proctor's footsteps had pounded down the staircase.

"Don't bother," Mr. Proctor said. "You won't get anywhere." He handed the "healing stone" back to Dee. "Five minutes," he warned sternly. "I don't want them pulling too much out of you. And then," he said, turning to Anthony, "the three of us are going to have a little talk."



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I'll post Chapter 119 next Sunday. :)
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Carver is a hard guy to drag information out of! :roll:
"I told you that doesn't matter," Carver said. "What matters is that it was classified."

"Okay. What about the key Miss Osorio left you? Who gave it to her?"

"No idea."

"Then where did it lead? I know you said the base, but where on the base? The mess hall? The commissary? The commander's bathroom?"

"I told you, I'm not talking about that."

But I liked Valenti's "dispensation from God" comment. :lol
Carver's eyes softened, his gaze drifting away like it had when Valenti had first asked his name. "Betty asked me that," he said quietly.

"I'm sure she did," Valenti answered. "And what did you say?"

"I said yes."

"So she got to take notes without a dispensation from God?"

"Nothing personal, Valenti, but you're not exactly built like she was," Carver said dryly.
And Walker has some mega ego! I enjoyed seeing him have to face Valenti. Poor Valenti! If he'd only known his "interviews" today were all going to require "special measures." :wink:
The doorbell rang. Thank God, Rosemary thought. It was probably just the landlady, but anyone would do to do get rid of Walker. "You see? That's my next customer. Out!" Rosemary ordered.

"Oh, all right," Walker grumbled, climbing out of bed....only to make a beeline for the door in the altogether. "I want to see who it is, and show'em the competition," he crowed.

"No!" Rosemary exclaimed desperately, lunging for the door. But he was already there, pulling it open to find.....

"Am I....interrupting something?" Jim Valenti asked, eyeing Walker up and down.

"Who's this?" Walker demanded.

Rosemary broke into a dazzling smile. Here she'd been afraid the door would open to reveal her elderly—and very Catholic—landlady. While that would have been amusing, this was even better. "Corporal Walker, this is Jim Valenti," she purred. "Deputy Valenti, actually, of the Sheriff's department."
And another box! Marana has reason to be upset! A lot more reason than she knows! This is a twofer, I'm guessing!
He stopped, having stepped outside....or tried to. A large box lay on the porch floor, a box which bore no address or markings of any kind save for one: The "V" shaped royal mark, burned into the top of the box, the embers still glowing as though it had only recently been lit. Malik and Marana both stared at it in shock.

"Oh, no," Marana whispered.

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"We shall have to play Brivari's game," Orlon replied. "Malik, I will need to be coached on appropriate clothing, customs, and manners. You are most suited for that task."

"Okay," Malik said warily, "but why?"

Orlon gave him a dark smile. "I am going to pay a call."
I knew this meant trouble when I read it, but I didn't guess who he was going to visit!

Silence. The medicine man stared at Brivari across the fire, his eyes a shade less fearful. "And what path will you walk now, Nasedo, that your enemies have been vanquished?"

Not all of them, Brivari thought heavily. As relieved as he was to not have hunters to worry about, their demise would bring more problems. If Orlon was preferable because of his predictability, it was that very predictability that told Brivari what his next move would be now that he'd lost all of his hunters. A move which made it all the more important that Brivari keep his Indian allies, as he may soon be losing others.
That sounds ominous! :shock:

" 'Information'?" David echoed. "What kind of 'information'?"

"The kind that could save your life," the man replied. "Or the lives of your wife, Emily, or your daughter, Deanna."

The hairs on the back of David's neck rose. "Have we met?" he asked warily.

"We have not," the man answered. "But I have decided it is time that we do. Allow me to introduce myself," he continued, removing his hat. "My name is Orlon, and I am here on behalf of my planet, Antar."
Yikes! I can't even guess what Orlon has up his sleeve unless it's to kill them, and somehow I don't think it's that. Well, not immediately anyway. He wants them to get Brivari there for him I'm betting, so he can kill him first.

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"What I think, Mr. Proctor, is that no one has given you a full accounting of the particular interest Brivari's king had in this planet and will continue to have in the future. I think you will find this information quite enlightening, and I wish to provide you with it."

"From your perspective, of course," David said dryly.

"Of course," Orlon answered readily. "Each of us can only speak from our own perspective, and you are certainly free to consult Brivari on his."
Well, I have to say I was surprised a bit by Orlon's tactic. He really is following Malik's lead now. And he's being surprisingly straight forward.

"He's not a 'mister', Mama," Dee said flatly. "He's an alien."



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And things were going so well, Orlon thought sourly as the adult female looked from him to the child and back again in shock. He had wanted to reveal himself only to the male human, and had been delighted when his target had answered the door. The appearance of the mate had proven a distraction which had masked the arrival of the child, who had promptly thrown a telepathic barb obviously calculated to draw a reaction: "Why hasn't Brivari killed you yet?" What was especially maddening was that he'd fallen for it, his momentary hesitation betraying his comprehension.
Oh boy! Leave it to Dee! :lol
"I am grateful," he began, sounding more annoyed than grateful, "that you are willing to listen to what we have to say. And further grateful that you have seen fit to trust us enough to invite us into your dwelling."

Hardly, David thought, feeling the pistol he'd tucked into the back of his belt pressing into his back beneath the sweater he'd thrown on to hide it. Emily's own small pistol was in the pocket of her apron, virtually invisible. David would have insisted on having a weapon in any case, but it was a measure of how much this whole situation had changed her that it had been Emily who had raised the subject.
Emily carrying a pistol in her apron! Now that's a switch from not too long ago! :lol This family's packin'!


"You are an exceptional species!" Marana exclaimed with more vigor than she'd said anything else. "Just look at your daughter! Now that her telepathic capabilities have been awakened, there's no telling what else she could do. None of our operatives ever encountered an evolved human in all our years here. I would absolutely love to get a look at your daughter's brain."
Okay, that was just bound to be the wrong thing to say to Emily! :lol But even though she kicked them out, their mission could be deemed a success. Because now they're bound to bring these accusations up with Brivari, who will have to find some way to reply to them. But David says he has proof. This should be good!

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"I was trying to reassure her that we didn't think they were stupid!" Marana protested.

" 'Reassure her'?" Orlon thundered. " 'I'd love to get a look at your child's brain.' That's your definition of 'reassurance'?"

"You said that?" Amar chuckled, shaking his head. "And they call me stupid."

"It was a compliment!" Marana wailed.
:lol That was hilarious!

"And you?" Emily whispered. "The things you can do....those things come from human brains? Children's brains?"

"Aside from shapeshifting....yes."

Emily sagged back against the doorframe under this avalanche of admission, thunderstruck. Dee moved closer to Brivari as though she feared for his safety while David shook his head in surprise, not at what Brivari had admitted to, but at the fact that he'd admitted it at all.

"Well," Emily said after a moment, her voice shaky. "I guess I got what I asked for. Thank you for your honesty." She straightened up, pulling herself together. "Now....get out of my house."
I knew Brivari would not deny it. But it sounds like there's a big problem brewing now at the base.

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"What if I told you I knew why they were here? They've been coming here for years, experimenting on human brains!"

"Wouldn't surprise me," Walker said darkly. "I've said all along they were up to no good, and we should kill every last one we find on sight. Like I said, catch up with me when it's done rebuilding the ship and maybe it will have outlived its usefulness. Until then, we never had this conversation."

Walker stalked off, leaving Amar wincing as he touched his sore head where it had slammed into the wall. Stupid brute, he thought sourly. Sure, Walker hated aliens, but not when he was profiting from their presence. "Two-faced, opportunistic hypocrite," Amar muttered. "Two years ago, you would've jumped at the chance
Well, that didn't go as Amar had hoped.

Spade eyed Valenti across the table as he finished his beer. Valenti was a mite testy, not to mention nosy, but Spade knew from personal experience how much nerve it took to say "no" to Cavitt. Whatever Valenti had seen, he'd kept his mouth shut at gunpoint to protect it, and that raised him several notches in Spade's eyes. "Look," Spade said, relenting a bit, "I can't tell you what was in those documents that Betty had, and it really doesn't matter anyway. I can tell you that only three people I know of would have had enough information to know which key to send to Betty...and two of them are dead. Want to guess who the third one is?"

Valenti's finger tapped his beer glass. "Lieutenant Colonel Sheridan Cavitt."
I like the way Valenti is putting the pieces of the puzzle together and letting one thing lead to another, but honestly, I can't imagine him interrogating Rosemary while they... well... :lol How does that work? :wink: :lol
"Just the facts, Ma'am. Unh! Just the facts."
I guess being kidnapped by Cavitt and having a gun put to his head really gave him a clarity of perspective. 8)
"And you cannot expect me to willingly return to life as it was before," Brivari said. "I will do anything—anything—to keep the lives my people have won, and in order to do that, I must return the king to the throne. The untapped power of the human brain will elevate the king and his family over their enemies, virtually assuring that his line continues. And if the price of that is one frightened human boy and some stolen brain cells, that is a price I'm willing to pay."
I'm still constantly amazed by all the things that Brivari and the others reveal about Zan and his father and why the covaris were created and what they went through, especially before Zan's father took the throne.

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David caught Emily's frustrated look across the table and stared into his coffee cup. What Dee didn't know is that Emily had heard Brivari out, if in absensia. He'd told her what he'd learned from Brivari last night about the shapeshifters being a manufactured race of slaves who had been freed, after a fashion, by the very king who had decided that the human brain was so interesting, and the fact that the opposition planned to engage in the very same "research". She had listened in silence and gone to bed without rendering a verdict. David had joined her, staring at the ceiling throughout their mutually sleepless night, every bit as torn as his wife. They'd known there was a war on Brivari's planet, of course, but they'd had no idea of the political and social baggage behind it.
War seems to always carry a huge amount of political and social baggage! I guess theirs is no different.

"Healing stones don't work on humans, Mama. They only work on aliens...unless Brivari's holding one. The only reason he could heal me after Denny hurt me was because he had those human brain cells you keep going on and on about. If Brivari's people had never done what they did, then I'd be dead right now. Would that make you happy?"

Dee rose from the table and picked up her now empty cereal bowl. "I have to get ready for school," she said coldly, stalking past her stricken mother to deposit her bowl in the sink before marching upstairs.

Emily did not speak for a full minute after Dee had left. "That's not fair," she finally whispered, her expression one of someone who has just been slapped—hard.
Well, that was a lot of food for thought for Emily, but I don't think she expected to choke on it!

"What's he going to do?" Malik asked. "Fire me?"

"If you're lucky, that's all he'll do."

Malik's eyebrows rose. "Are you saying he'll try to kill me?"

"You don't realize what it's like back home, Malik," Marana said, her voice brittle. "We're all scared. Khivar is paranoid about all Covari, and he's every bit as fanatical about finding the Royal Four as Orlon is about finding Brivari. You can't reason with irrational people; don't even bother trying. Let's just finish what we're here for and go home. I want my life back."

"And you won't get it," Malik said. "That life you want back was courtesy of Zan. In order to have that, Zan has to be returned to the throne."
It was funny how Malik and Marana both had something to hide that was almost revealed at the Proctors'. :lol

Malik's eyes widened. All the hunters are gone. One thing was certain—Orlon wasn't talking to Khivar. There was no way he would so casually admit his failure to Antar's current ruler, no way he would have taken that tone with him either. Communication with home was rare; one near miss after another had made Orlon reluctant to contact home unless absolutely necessary.
Interesting....someone else was pulling Orlon's strings, and it wasn't Khivar. But how to find out who?
Yes, that is definitely the question! I have suspected that the dying emergents are also Orlon's work. He definitely has alternative allegiances.

One hand on her back in a vain attempt to stem the ache, she closed her door behind her, snapped on the light.....and gasped.

"Good evening," Brivari said pleasantly as he looked up from the newspaper he'd been reading in total darkness. "It has been quite some time, hasn't it?"
Well, this should be good! Great chapter, Kathy, as always! :heart :heart :heart :thumbsup :ufo
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I wondered if Nicholas was behind Orlon's betrayal! Makes sense. I enjoyed it as Malik and Amar secretly tapped into the system to find out who was pulling Orlon's strings. So Orlon ordered Zan's killing!

And poor Thompson! :lol A little warning might have helped, but I'm betting seeing Brivari in Yvonne's body was going to be something of a shock no matter what. When he looked through that eyepiece and saw alien bones he must have really got a jolt.
"Thank you," Lieutenant White said, handing Spade the tray. She stepped up on the x-ray as Thompson peered in the viewer, more confused than ever as to what was going on. The Lieutenant appeared perfectly normal, didn't look ill, or angry, like Brisson, or different in any way. He waited patiently for her feet to stop moving, for the bones to come into clear view, still wondering what could possibly make Spade think the Lieutenant wouldn't be admitted like she always was.....and froze.

Thompson swallowed hard, pushing his face more firmly into the viewer in the hope that no one would notice he was panicking and that he wasn't really seeing what he thought he was seeing. The feet standing on the x-ray had none of the markers typical of the human foot, just long, thin bones with no joints. It's an alien, Thompson realized, his heart pounding. This is why Spade had been so cryptic—he was letting an alien into the prisoner's room. But which alien? And why? Was this another attack? An escape attempt? "I just need you to let her in. No matter what." Was this the "what", or was there more to come?

"I could tell," Thompson whispered, shivering inwardly at the memory of those eyes. "Is he here to break out the prisoner?"

"Nope. Just visiting."
Just visiting! :lol It has a surrealistic, almost ridiciulous, ring to it, but truth can be stranger than fiction.

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