Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
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Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
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Summary: Clockwork discovers something else that isn't right with the time stream, an evil Lois Lane and Kim Possible are in the future because of being jealous. Danny, Dani, Jazz, Jake, Rose, Hanna, Jason, Ron, and Clark are the only sane ones in the future. Lois, Clark, and Jason go to Amity Park, Illinois to find out why there are so many ghosts attacking there and to get interview with Danny Phantom for a few days. Jake Long, Rose Wilson, Spud, Trixie Carter, Johnathan Long, Susan Long, Fu Dog, and Lao Shi go to Amity Park to figure out why the ghosts are always there. Kim Possible, Hanna, and Ron Stoppable are there to stop Vlad, Chang, and defeat Kim's evil self. Warning: Spoilers from Superman Returns, Phantom Planet, Graduation, and Hong Kong Longs!
Chapter 1 New Problems
Clockwork's Lair in the Ghost Zone:
Clockwork saw Lois Lane on the screen wearing the old Huntsman's uniform and Kim Possible also wearing the same uniform. He said worriedly, "This isn't right. Lois Lane is a good person but is a little clumsy and stupid. Kim Possible supposed to be a world hero not an insane criminal. I set Danny Fenton/Phantom on the right path. The same has to be done for those two."
The Dark Future 7 years:
Dark Mistress Lane said to her partner, "Lord Possible, we already killed the Fentons except for Dani and Jazz, the Possibles, the Stoppables except for Ron and Hanna, Spud, Trixie, and the Longs except for the American Dragon and his girlfriend, Rose. Now we just have to defeat Superboy, Superman, Huntsgirl, Jake Long, Danny Phantom, and Jazz, tonight."
Lord Possible said coldly, "Yes, Dark Mistress. They won't escape this time. The ropes are made of anti-Ghost stuff, Kryptonite, and Sphinx Hair." Phantom, Jake, and Rose were tied up.
The future Superman, Superboy, Ron Stoppable and Hanna Stoppable. Ron asked angrily, "Kim, what happened to you?"
Lord Possible explained darkly, "Everyone else has those neat powers, and I never got any. I'm no hero; heroes have super powers."
Superman asked angrily, "Lois, what on Earth happened to you?"
Dark Mistress Lane replied coldly, "Nobody cares about a loser reporter. Everyone only cares about heroes or villains."
Back in the Present with Clockwork:
Clockwork said annoyed, "I'm going make the future right and make sure Lois and Kim don't get driven to the dark side because of jealousy. Lois and Kim don't need powers to save lives. Perry White will send Lois, Clark, and Jason to Amity Park. Kim, Hanna, and Ron will come to Amity Park on mission. Danny will keep an eye on Lois and Kim."
Daily Planet at noon:
Lois was day dreaming about what would be like if she had powers instead of paying attention to Perry White, her husband, Clark Kent, and her son, Jason. Clark waved a hand in front of her face, "Earth to Lois. Come in, Lois."
Lois snapped out of it and said with a laugh, "Sorry, Mr. White, Clark, and Jason. I was on another planet for minute; I think I was on Mars. I'm back on Earth."
Perry said, "You three are going to Amity Park to see why ghosts are always attacking there and to get an interview with Danny Phantom." He handed them three tickets. Lois, Clark, and Jason walked out of Perry's office.
Clark asked, "Lois, are you okay?"
Lois replied annoyed, "Yeah, I'm fine. We should probably get to the airport." They took a cab to the airport and got on the plane.
Meanwhile at New York City:
The Longs got on their plane. Jake smiled and whispered, "This vacation will be so much better then the last one."
Rose whispered, "This will be the best vacation ever even if we have to deal with ghosts. No Huntsclan and No Dark Dragon."
Middleton, CO at 10 o'clock:
Kim Possible wasn't paying attention to what Wade was saying. Ron Stoppable waved his hand in front of her face and said, "Earth to Kim Possible. Calling Kim Possible. Come in, Kim."
Kim woke up from her trance and said with a laugh, "I'm sorry, Wade, Ron, and Hanna. I was on a different planet for minute; I back on Earth, now. What's the stitch?'
Wade explained, "There is two villains, Chang and Vlad Plasimus going try to bring worse people back by a relocation spell like Luthor, the Huntsclan, Pariah Dark, Dark Dragon, and Dan Phantom in Amity Park. Your ride is here." Kim, Ron, and Hanna got on the Helicopter.
Amity Park at 11 o'clock:
Danny Fenton was sick with a horrible cold from over exhaustion from fighting all the ghosts and said hoarsely, "I'm sick of all those ghosts."
Jazz walked in and asked worriedly, "Danny, how are you feeling?"
Danny said congested, "Tewwible. Swupit Gwows."
Jazz asked, "What did you say?"
Danny blow his nose and repeated it again, "Terrible. Stupid Ghosts."
Jazz said worriedly, "No ghost fighting, today. Stay in bed. I'll fight the ghosts, today."
Danny said tiredly, "Jazz, you can't fight ghosts very good." He coughed a couple times.
Jazz said annoyed, "You are too sick to fight any ghosts. Here's some cold medicine." She handed him two pills and a paper cup of water.
Danny said after taking the pills with the water, "Fine." He fell asleep. Jazz left.
Summary: Clockwork discovers something else that isn't right with the time stream, an evil Lois Lane and Kim Possible are in the future because of being jealous. Danny, Dani, Jazz, Jake, Rose, Hanna, Jason, Ron, and Clark are the only sane ones in the future. Lois, Clark, and Jason go to Amity Park, Illinois to find out why there are so many ghosts attacking there and to get interview with Danny Phantom for a few days. Jake Long, Rose Wilson, Spud, Trixie Carter, Johnathan Long, Susan Long, Fu Dog, and Lao Shi go to Amity Park to figure out why the ghosts are always there. Kim Possible, Hanna, and Ron Stoppable are there to stop Vlad, Chang, and defeat Kim's evil self. Warning: Spoilers from Superman Returns, Phantom Planet, Graduation, and Hong Kong Longs!
Chapter 1 New Problems
Clockwork's Lair in the Ghost Zone:
Clockwork saw Lois Lane on the screen wearing the old Huntsman's uniform and Kim Possible also wearing the same uniform. He said worriedly, "This isn't right. Lois Lane is a good person but is a little clumsy and stupid. Kim Possible supposed to be a world hero not an insane criminal. I set Danny Fenton/Phantom on the right path. The same has to be done for those two."
The Dark Future 7 years:
Dark Mistress Lane said to her partner, "Lord Possible, we already killed the Fentons except for Dani and Jazz, the Possibles, the Stoppables except for Ron and Hanna, Spud, Trixie, and the Longs except for the American Dragon and his girlfriend, Rose. Now we just have to defeat Superboy, Superman, Huntsgirl, Jake Long, Danny Phantom, and Jazz, tonight."
Lord Possible said coldly, "Yes, Dark Mistress. They won't escape this time. The ropes are made of anti-Ghost stuff, Kryptonite, and Sphinx Hair." Phantom, Jake, and Rose were tied up.
The future Superman, Superboy, Ron Stoppable and Hanna Stoppable. Ron asked angrily, "Kim, what happened to you?"
Lord Possible explained darkly, "Everyone else has those neat powers, and I never got any. I'm no hero; heroes have super powers."
Superman asked angrily, "Lois, what on Earth happened to you?"
Dark Mistress Lane replied coldly, "Nobody cares about a loser reporter. Everyone only cares about heroes or villains."
Back in the Present with Clockwork:
Clockwork said annoyed, "I'm going make the future right and make sure Lois and Kim don't get driven to the dark side because of jealousy. Lois and Kim don't need powers to save lives. Perry White will send Lois, Clark, and Jason to Amity Park. Kim, Hanna, and Ron will come to Amity Park on mission. Danny will keep an eye on Lois and Kim."
Daily Planet at noon:
Lois was day dreaming about what would be like if she had powers instead of paying attention to Perry White, her husband, Clark Kent, and her son, Jason. Clark waved a hand in front of her face, "Earth to Lois. Come in, Lois."
Lois snapped out of it and said with a laugh, "Sorry, Mr. White, Clark, and Jason. I was on another planet for minute; I think I was on Mars. I'm back on Earth."
Perry said, "You three are going to Amity Park to see why ghosts are always attacking there and to get an interview with Danny Phantom." He handed them three tickets. Lois, Clark, and Jason walked out of Perry's office.
Clark asked, "Lois, are you okay?"
Lois replied annoyed, "Yeah, I'm fine. We should probably get to the airport." They took a cab to the airport and got on the plane.
Meanwhile at New York City:
The Longs got on their plane. Jake smiled and whispered, "This vacation will be so much better then the last one."
Rose whispered, "This will be the best vacation ever even if we have to deal with ghosts. No Huntsclan and No Dark Dragon."
Middleton, CO at 10 o'clock:
Kim Possible wasn't paying attention to what Wade was saying. Ron Stoppable waved his hand in front of her face and said, "Earth to Kim Possible. Calling Kim Possible. Come in, Kim."
Kim woke up from her trance and said with a laugh, "I'm sorry, Wade, Ron, and Hanna. I was on a different planet for minute; I back on Earth, now. What's the stitch?'
Wade explained, "There is two villains, Chang and Vlad Plasimus going try to bring worse people back by a relocation spell like Luthor, the Huntsclan, Pariah Dark, Dark Dragon, and Dan Phantom in Amity Park. Your ride is here." Kim, Ron, and Hanna got on the Helicopter.
Amity Park at 11 o'clock:
Danny Fenton was sick with a horrible cold from over exhaustion from fighting all the ghosts and said hoarsely, "I'm sick of all those ghosts."
Jazz walked in and asked worriedly, "Danny, how are you feeling?"
Danny said congested, "Tewwible. Swupit Gwows."
Jazz asked, "What did you say?"
Danny blow his nose and repeated it again, "Terrible. Stupid Ghosts."
Jazz said worriedly, "No ghost fighting, today. Stay in bed. I'll fight the ghosts, today."
Danny said tiredly, "Jazz, you can't fight ghosts very good." He coughed a couple times.
Jazz said annoyed, "You are too sick to fight any ghosts. Here's some cold medicine." She handed him two pills and a paper cup of water.
Danny said after taking the pills with the water, "Fine." He fell asleep. Jazz left.
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Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
I like your theme of preventing bad things from happening to Lois and Kim, I think that is cool...
I'm anxious to see where this will go and how Ron and the others will work together to help keep Lois and Kim as good guys!
Nice beginning! 
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Chapter 2 The Meeting
Danny Fenton woke up feeling a lot better four hours later and whispered, "I'm glad that I have faster healing rate then normal humans."
Jazz came into his room exhausted from catching the Box Ghost and asked, "Danny, how are you feeling?"
Danny smiled and replied, "I feel great like I never been sick in the first place. I guess I just needed some sleep. You look awful. You smell like old fish."
Jazz said jokingly, "Thanks, Danny."
Danny said, "Thanks for helping me today, Jazz. What ghost did you fight?"
Jazz replied, "The Box Ghost pelted me with boxes of fish. I took me ten tries to get the Box Ghost into the Fenton Thermos with the help of Kim Possible, Ron Stoppable, a ninja called Huntsgirl, Spud, Trixie, and the American Dragon."
Danny said, "Take a shower and I'll handle the rest of the ghosts."
Jazz said, "Fine." She went to her room and grabbed some clean clothes. She took a quick shower and got dressed.
Danny's ghost sense went off and said, "Goin' Ghost." He turned into Danny Phantom and flew to the airport where Technus was controlling a plane. Kim and Jake were making it worse.
On the plane with Lois, Jason, and Clark, the plane was going to crash into the building. Clark whispered scared, "Oh great, the plane is going to crash. I can't save it this time."
Jason saw Danny Phantom and said excitedly, "Danny Phantom will save us."
Phantom flew underneath the plane turning it intangible through the building. He landed it at Amity Park Baseball Field. He opened the door and asked, "Are you all okay?"
Jason said happily, "I'm fine. Thank you so much, Danny Phantom. You are my favorite superhero. I'm Jason Kent, and these are my mommy, Lois Lane-Kent and my daddy, Clark Kent."
Clark was so used to him doing the rescue as Superman not being the one being the rescue and said, "I'm fine. Gee Thank You, Danny Phantom for saving us." It was nice for a change having someone else save them instead of himself saving Lois and Jason.
Phantom smiled and replied, "No problem, I'm just doing my job to protect the town from evil ghosts." He sucked Technus into the Fenton Thermos.
Lois replied kindly, "I'm fine. My husband and I are reporters for the Daily Planet. When would be a good time to do an interview with you?"
Phantom smiled and replied, "8 o'clock at the park, tonight, Mrs. Kent and Mr. Kent."
Clark asked, "Phantom, do you know of a cheap place to stay here?"
Phantom answered, "My friend, Danny Fenton's parents will let you stay with them at FentonWorks. Forget to book hotel rooms?"
Lois laughed and said, "We've been a little crazy in Metropolis, lately."
Phantom said, "Mrs. Kent, one more thing, avoid any more planes."
Lois said, "Sure."
Phantom said, "See you around!" He flew off.
Lois, Clark, and Jason took a cab to FentonWorks. Lois rung the door and a man wearing an ugly orange jumpsuit answered the door. Lois asked, "Is this FentonWorks?"
Jack replied, "Yes, I'm Jack Fenton. Come in." They came in and sat down on the couch.
Lois said, "I'm Lois Lane-Kent, and these are my husband, Clark and our son, Jason."
He yelled, "MADDIE, DANNY, JAZZ, SAM, TUCKER, AND VALERIE, WE GOT COMPANY!" Everyone came downstairs. He said, "This is my wife, Maddie. These are our children, Jazz and Danny. These are Danny's friends, Sam Manson, Tucker Foley, and Valerie Gray. Guys, these are Lois Lane-Kent, Clark Kent, and their son, Jason."
Maddie offered a plate of cookies and asked, "Cookie, anyone?"
Jason said politely as taken one cookie, "Thank you, Mrs. Fenton."
Maddie smiled and said, "Jason, you are very well mannered for a six year old boy. You remind me of Danny when he was your age."
Jason whispered to Danny, "Danny Phantom, thank you again for saving us."
Danny whispered, "No problem, Jay. Don't tell anyone."
Jason whispered, "I can keep a secret, Danny."
Danny's ghost sense went off and said, "I have to go get some milk." He went behind his house and yelled, "GOIN' GHOST!" He became Danny Phantom.
Clark heard a smoke alarm go off in a apartment nearby and said, "I have go get some soy milk for Jason." He went behind FentonWorks and changed into Superman. He flew and saw Danny Phantom. He said, "Thank you for saving my friends, Danny Phantom."
Phantom said, "No problem, I was just doing my job saving the town from evil ghosts, Superman. You saved the world a from a Kryptonite laced island in October made by Lex Luthor. He is another Fruitloop like my own archenemy, Vlad Masters/Plasimus."
Superman said, "We both have a billionaire archenemy."
Phantom said, "I wish Valerie Gray would get a life and stop hunting me. I caused her dad to lose his job because a stupid ghost dog. I never hurt anyone except for Vlad."
Superman said, "I could talk to her."
Phantom smiled and said, "Thank you so much, Superman." They both flew in different directions.
Danny Fenton woke up feeling a lot better four hours later and whispered, "I'm glad that I have faster healing rate then normal humans."
Jazz came into his room exhausted from catching the Box Ghost and asked, "Danny, how are you feeling?"
Danny smiled and replied, "I feel great like I never been sick in the first place. I guess I just needed some sleep. You look awful. You smell like old fish."
Jazz said jokingly, "Thanks, Danny."
Danny said, "Thanks for helping me today, Jazz. What ghost did you fight?"
Jazz replied, "The Box Ghost pelted me with boxes of fish. I took me ten tries to get the Box Ghost into the Fenton Thermos with the help of Kim Possible, Ron Stoppable, a ninja called Huntsgirl, Spud, Trixie, and the American Dragon."
Danny said, "Take a shower and I'll handle the rest of the ghosts."
Jazz said, "Fine." She went to her room and grabbed some clean clothes. She took a quick shower and got dressed.
Danny's ghost sense went off and said, "Goin' Ghost." He turned into Danny Phantom and flew to the airport where Technus was controlling a plane. Kim and Jake were making it worse.
On the plane with Lois, Jason, and Clark, the plane was going to crash into the building. Clark whispered scared, "Oh great, the plane is going to crash. I can't save it this time."
Jason saw Danny Phantom and said excitedly, "Danny Phantom will save us."
Phantom flew underneath the plane turning it intangible through the building. He landed it at Amity Park Baseball Field. He opened the door and asked, "Are you all okay?"
Jason said happily, "I'm fine. Thank you so much, Danny Phantom. You are my favorite superhero. I'm Jason Kent, and these are my mommy, Lois Lane-Kent and my daddy, Clark Kent."
Clark was so used to him doing the rescue as Superman not being the one being the rescue and said, "I'm fine. Gee Thank You, Danny Phantom for saving us." It was nice for a change having someone else save them instead of himself saving Lois and Jason.
Phantom smiled and replied, "No problem, I'm just doing my job to protect the town from evil ghosts." He sucked Technus into the Fenton Thermos.
Lois replied kindly, "I'm fine. My husband and I are reporters for the Daily Planet. When would be a good time to do an interview with you?"
Phantom smiled and replied, "8 o'clock at the park, tonight, Mrs. Kent and Mr. Kent."
Clark asked, "Phantom, do you know of a cheap place to stay here?"
Phantom answered, "My friend, Danny Fenton's parents will let you stay with them at FentonWorks. Forget to book hotel rooms?"
Lois laughed and said, "We've been a little crazy in Metropolis, lately."
Phantom said, "Mrs. Kent, one more thing, avoid any more planes."
Lois said, "Sure."
Phantom said, "See you around!" He flew off.
Lois, Clark, and Jason took a cab to FentonWorks. Lois rung the door and a man wearing an ugly orange jumpsuit answered the door. Lois asked, "Is this FentonWorks?"
Jack replied, "Yes, I'm Jack Fenton. Come in." They came in and sat down on the couch.
Lois said, "I'm Lois Lane-Kent, and these are my husband, Clark and our son, Jason."
He yelled, "MADDIE, DANNY, JAZZ, SAM, TUCKER, AND VALERIE, WE GOT COMPANY!" Everyone came downstairs. He said, "This is my wife, Maddie. These are our children, Jazz and Danny. These are Danny's friends, Sam Manson, Tucker Foley, and Valerie Gray. Guys, these are Lois Lane-Kent, Clark Kent, and their son, Jason."
Maddie offered a plate of cookies and asked, "Cookie, anyone?"
Jason said politely as taken one cookie, "Thank you, Mrs. Fenton."
Maddie smiled and said, "Jason, you are very well mannered for a six year old boy. You remind me of Danny when he was your age."
Jason whispered to Danny, "Danny Phantom, thank you again for saving us."
Danny whispered, "No problem, Jay. Don't tell anyone."
Jason whispered, "I can keep a secret, Danny."
Danny's ghost sense went off and said, "I have to go get some milk." He went behind his house and yelled, "GOIN' GHOST!" He became Danny Phantom.
Clark heard a smoke alarm go off in a apartment nearby and said, "I have go get some soy milk for Jason." He went behind FentonWorks and changed into Superman. He flew and saw Danny Phantom. He said, "Thank you for saving my friends, Danny Phantom."
Phantom said, "No problem, I was just doing my job saving the town from evil ghosts, Superman. You saved the world a from a Kryptonite laced island in October made by Lex Luthor. He is another Fruitloop like my own archenemy, Vlad Masters/Plasimus."
Superman said, "We both have a billionaire archenemy."
Phantom said, "I wish Valerie Gray would get a life and stop hunting me. I caused her dad to lose his job because a stupid ghost dog. I never hurt anyone except for Vlad."
Superman said, "I could talk to her."
Phantom smiled and said, "Thank you so much, Superman." They both flew in different directions.
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So Danny and Superman are teaming up again to fight the bad guys - cool! I liked how the Fenton's let Clark, Lois, and Jason stay at their place while they conduct their interview and while fighting against the ghosts and mayhem in town! Great update! 
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Chapter 3 Talking with Valerie
Superman flew to Valerie's apartment and saw there smoke coming from the kitchen. Valerie was trying to get it under control. He asked, "Need some help, Valerie?"
Valerie said nervously, "Y-es, I could use some, Superman."
Superman blew out the fire in the kitchen and asked, "Valerie, are you okay?"
Valerie cried and said, "I'm fine, but my dad is going to kill me because I ruined dinner."
Superman said calmly, "Valerie, it was just a silly accident just like what happened to Phantom a few years ago. It wasn't his fault that he destroyed the your father's lab and caused him to lose his job; it was the ghost dog's fault."
Valerie said annoyed, "Superman, ghosts are evil."
Superman said angrily, "Phantom is a hero like me. Not all ghosts are evil, Phantom is pretty nice."
Valerie yelled, "GHOSTS ARE EVIL!"
Superman thought, 'This girl is ten times more stubborn than Lois is. Valerie is a teenager. I can treat her like I do with the villains then she will know how it feels to be treated like a bad guy.' He said angrily, "Valerie, you are the one who cost your father's job not Phantom."
Valerie realized that he was right and said sadly, "I did cost my father his job not Phantom."
Superman said angrily, "You destroyed a few buildings yourself when Phantom was trying stop the evil ghosts."
Valerie cried and said guiltily, "I did destroy buildings, but it was an accident. Phantom was the only one who doing the right thing."
Superman asked kindly, "How do you like being treated like a villain?"
Valerie replied sadly, "I don't like it at all. This must be how Phantom feels like when I treat him that way. I'll stop hunting him. I let my anger get the better of me; I forgot about my common sense."
Superman asked kindly, "Are you okay, Valerie?"
Valerie replied sadly, "No, I miss my mom."
Superman asked, "What happened?"
Valerie said sadly, "She died from gun shot in Boston when I was 10 a couple days after you left. I was yelling for you, but you never came. That is why I didn't trust Phantom because I thought he would disappear like you did, but he never did leave."
Superman said sadly, "Valerie, I'm sorry for leaving Earth; I should been there to save your mother. I'm glad Phantom was there a couple years after I left."
Valerie said with a small smile, "I forgive you, Superman."
Superman said, "I know how you feel. I lost my adoptive dad when I was 18. I still miss him. I think of all the good times that we had."
Valerie said with a big smile, "My mom was the coolest mom ever. We camped out one summer when I was 5; we had the best time. I got scared that a monster was going to eat me. My mom told that monsters aren't really and sung me a lullaby. I still have my dad."
Damon Gray came inside and saw Valerie talking about her mother with Superman. He said kindly, "Hello Valerie and Superman."
Valerie hugged her father and said, "I'm so sorry for costing you your job, Dad. Phantom wasn't the one who cost you your job; it was me."
Damon said, "I knew you would come to your senses, Val. Phantom is a good ghost. Thank you so much for knocking some sense into my daughter for me, Superman."
Superman said kindly, "You're welcome, Mr. Gray. I have to go." He flew back behind the house and changed into Clark's clothes. Clark went inside and saw Danny was also inside.
Maddie called, "Dinner." They sat down and ate spaghetti and meatballs.
Lois was in another one of her day dreams about what would be like if she had powers. Jazz said, "Lois, wake up."
Lois said, "Sorry, guys. Clark and I have to go do an interview with Danny Phantom." They left.
Danny said, "I have to go to the park to look at the stars." He ran outside and yelled, "GOIN' GHOST!" He became Danny Phantom and flew to the park.
Superman flew to Valerie's apartment and saw there smoke coming from the kitchen. Valerie was trying to get it under control. He asked, "Need some help, Valerie?"
Valerie said nervously, "Y-es, I could use some, Superman."
Superman blew out the fire in the kitchen and asked, "Valerie, are you okay?"
Valerie cried and said, "I'm fine, but my dad is going to kill me because I ruined dinner."
Superman said calmly, "Valerie, it was just a silly accident just like what happened to Phantom a few years ago. It wasn't his fault that he destroyed the your father's lab and caused him to lose his job; it was the ghost dog's fault."
Valerie said annoyed, "Superman, ghosts are evil."
Superman said angrily, "Phantom is a hero like me. Not all ghosts are evil, Phantom is pretty nice."
Valerie yelled, "GHOSTS ARE EVIL!"
Superman thought, 'This girl is ten times more stubborn than Lois is. Valerie is a teenager. I can treat her like I do with the villains then she will know how it feels to be treated like a bad guy.' He said angrily, "Valerie, you are the one who cost your father's job not Phantom."
Valerie realized that he was right and said sadly, "I did cost my father his job not Phantom."
Superman said angrily, "You destroyed a few buildings yourself when Phantom was trying stop the evil ghosts."
Valerie cried and said guiltily, "I did destroy buildings, but it was an accident. Phantom was the only one who doing the right thing."
Superman asked kindly, "How do you like being treated like a villain?"
Valerie replied sadly, "I don't like it at all. This must be how Phantom feels like when I treat him that way. I'll stop hunting him. I let my anger get the better of me; I forgot about my common sense."
Superman asked kindly, "Are you okay, Valerie?"
Valerie replied sadly, "No, I miss my mom."
Superman asked, "What happened?"
Valerie said sadly, "She died from gun shot in Boston when I was 10 a couple days after you left. I was yelling for you, but you never came. That is why I didn't trust Phantom because I thought he would disappear like you did, but he never did leave."
Superman said sadly, "Valerie, I'm sorry for leaving Earth; I should been there to save your mother. I'm glad Phantom was there a couple years after I left."
Valerie said with a small smile, "I forgive you, Superman."
Superman said, "I know how you feel. I lost my adoptive dad when I was 18. I still miss him. I think of all the good times that we had."
Valerie said with a big smile, "My mom was the coolest mom ever. We camped out one summer when I was 5; we had the best time. I got scared that a monster was going to eat me. My mom told that monsters aren't really and sung me a lullaby. I still have my dad."
Damon Gray came inside and saw Valerie talking about her mother with Superman. He said kindly, "Hello Valerie and Superman."
Valerie hugged her father and said, "I'm so sorry for costing you your job, Dad. Phantom wasn't the one who cost you your job; it was me."
Damon said, "I knew you would come to your senses, Val. Phantom is a good ghost. Thank you so much for knocking some sense into my daughter for me, Superman."
Superman said kindly, "You're welcome, Mr. Gray. I have to go." He flew back behind the house and changed into Clark's clothes. Clark went inside and saw Danny was also inside.
Maddie called, "Dinner." They sat down and ate spaghetti and meatballs.
Lois was in another one of her day dreams about what would be like if she had powers. Jazz said, "Lois, wake up."
Lois said, "Sorry, guys. Clark and I have to go do an interview with Danny Phantom." They left.
Danny said, "I have to go to the park to look at the stars." He ran outside and yelled, "GOIN' GHOST!" He became Danny Phantom and flew to the park.
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Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
you're trying to get me hooked on the whole danny phontom verse...well its working. I really enjoy your fics. so lois is having graniose ideas and kim as well. oh boy those going bad is just not a good idea...well for the world. somehow I see them as kick but bad guys.
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Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
Chapter 4 Interview with Danny Phantom
Phantom turned visiable and yelled, "Boo!"
Lois said kindly, "Hello Danny Phantom."
Phantom said kindly, "Hi Mrs. Kent and Mr. Kent."
Lois said kindly, "We prefer to be called by our first names, Lois and Clark. Do you prefer Danny or Phantom?"
Phantom replied kindly, "Phantom, please because Danny is a common name."
Lois asked, "How did you die?"
Phantom replied, "I'm not really dead."
Clark asked, "How did you get your powers?"
Phantom explained, "I got them from a lab accident."
Jake was eavesdroping on the interview and said to Rose, Spud, and Trixie, "Phantom is a cool dude."
Kim was watching the interview from a distance and said angrily, "I haven't had an interview in ages. All the reporters care about is super powers which I don't have. The American Dragon has cool powers. Shego and Drakken have powers. Superman has powers. Ron, you have powers. I hate it."
Ron said calmly,"KP, chill out. You don't need super powers; you saved the world a million times without super powers. Let's get back to our hotel." They left.
Lois asked, "Phantom, what are your powers?"
Phantom replied, "My powers are my Ghost Sense, Intangibility, Invisibility, Ecto-Blasts, Ecto-Shields, Flight, Paranormal Strength, Speed, Agility and Durability, a healing factor, Spectral Manipulation/Ecto-Physical Mass Manipulation/Phase Shifting, Wall Walking, Overshadowing, a Ghostly Wail, and Cyrokinesis."
Lois asked curriously, "What is a Ghostly Wail?"
Phantom explained, "It is a loud scream that hurts ghosts and humans. It also causes destruction. I would prefer if you would leave that out of our article."
Clark asked, "What is the most annoying ghost that you ever fought?"
Phantom replied, "The Box Ghost or Klemper; those two are so annoying."
Clark asked, "What is the worst ghost that you ever fought?"
Phantom replied, "I would say Plasimus or Skulker."
Clark faked an yawn and said, "I'm going head back to FentonWorks, jet lag, you know." He left.
Phantom asked, "What's with Clark?" He could tell that Clark was Superman.
Lois laughed and replied, "He always leaving in middle of things. That's Clark for you. How fast do you fly?"
Phantom said, "I don't really know. Want to find out?"
Lois answered, "Yes."
Phantom held out his hand to her and said kindly, "Take my hand."
Lois took his hand and said, "Your hand is cold."
Phantom laughed and said, "It's part of being a ghost. Are you ready to fly?"
Lois smiled and replied, "Yes, I'm ready."
Phantom and Lois flew into the sky. Phantom asked, "Are you okay, Lois?"
Lois replied, "I'm fine. I love flying."
Phantom said kindly, "Lois, you can touch the coulds."
Lois fingered the clouds and said amazed, "Wow, that was cool. I probably should get back to the Fentons for the night."
Phantom said, "I'll take you there." He sped up and flew Lois to the Fentons.
Lois smiled and said, "Thanks for the flight and the interview, Phantom."
Phantom said, "No problem." He flew behind the FentonWorks and changed into Danny Fenton. He walked to the door and unlocked it for Lois and himself.
Lois said, "Thanks, Danny." They went inside. Lois went up to the guest room and changed into a pink nightgown. Danny went to his room and changed into his pyjammas.
Phantom turned visiable and yelled, "Boo!"
Lois said kindly, "Hello Danny Phantom."
Phantom said kindly, "Hi Mrs. Kent and Mr. Kent."
Lois said kindly, "We prefer to be called by our first names, Lois and Clark. Do you prefer Danny or Phantom?"
Phantom replied kindly, "Phantom, please because Danny is a common name."
Lois asked, "How did you die?"
Phantom replied, "I'm not really dead."
Clark asked, "How did you get your powers?"
Phantom explained, "I got them from a lab accident."
Jake was eavesdroping on the interview and said to Rose, Spud, and Trixie, "Phantom is a cool dude."
Kim was watching the interview from a distance and said angrily, "I haven't had an interview in ages. All the reporters care about is super powers which I don't have. The American Dragon has cool powers. Shego and Drakken have powers. Superman has powers. Ron, you have powers. I hate it."
Ron said calmly,"KP, chill out. You don't need super powers; you saved the world a million times without super powers. Let's get back to our hotel." They left.
Lois asked, "Phantom, what are your powers?"
Phantom replied, "My powers are my Ghost Sense, Intangibility, Invisibility, Ecto-Blasts, Ecto-Shields, Flight, Paranormal Strength, Speed, Agility and Durability, a healing factor, Spectral Manipulation/Ecto-Physical Mass Manipulation/Phase Shifting, Wall Walking, Overshadowing, a Ghostly Wail, and Cyrokinesis."
Lois asked curriously, "What is a Ghostly Wail?"
Phantom explained, "It is a loud scream that hurts ghosts and humans. It also causes destruction. I would prefer if you would leave that out of our article."
Clark asked, "What is the most annoying ghost that you ever fought?"
Phantom replied, "The Box Ghost or Klemper; those two are so annoying."
Clark asked, "What is the worst ghost that you ever fought?"
Phantom replied, "I would say Plasimus or Skulker."
Clark faked an yawn and said, "I'm going head back to FentonWorks, jet lag, you know." He left.
Phantom asked, "What's with Clark?" He could tell that Clark was Superman.
Lois laughed and replied, "He always leaving in middle of things. That's Clark for you. How fast do you fly?"
Phantom said, "I don't really know. Want to find out?"
Lois answered, "Yes."
Phantom held out his hand to her and said kindly, "Take my hand."
Lois took his hand and said, "Your hand is cold."
Phantom laughed and said, "It's part of being a ghost. Are you ready to fly?"
Lois smiled and replied, "Yes, I'm ready."
Phantom and Lois flew into the sky. Phantom asked, "Are you okay, Lois?"
Lois replied, "I'm fine. I love flying."
Phantom said kindly, "Lois, you can touch the coulds."
Lois fingered the clouds and said amazed, "Wow, that was cool. I probably should get back to the Fentons for the night."
Phantom said, "I'll take you there." He sped up and flew Lois to the Fentons.
Lois smiled and said, "Thanks for the flight and the interview, Phantom."
Phantom said, "No problem." He flew behind the FentonWorks and changed into Danny Fenton. He walked to the door and unlocked it for Lois and himself.
Lois said, "Thanks, Danny." They went inside. Lois went up to the guest room and changed into a pink nightgown. Danny went to his room and changed into his pyjammas.
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Angie
Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
First, I have to say I like how Superman/Clark helped Valerie change her way of seeing Danny. Second, I had a fun time imagining Lois and Phantom flying over clouds and touching them - that is so cool! I think it would be awesome to fly like a bird and see all the land below as Superman and Phantom do! I think you did a nice job showing Lois's human side to Phantom in her joy of flying along with her journalistic side in questioning him about his ghost abilities. Great updates!
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Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
Chapter 5 Secrets Out
The next morning, Clark, Lois, and Jason went down to the kitchen where Clark made pancakes with bacon for everyone, orange juice for the children and coffee for the adults. He put two pancakes and two slices of bacon on each plate. Danny, Jazz, Maddie, and Jack came downstairs and sat down. Lois poured two cups of coffee for Maddie and Jack while Clark poured the orange juice for Danny and Jazz. Jazz took a bite of her pancake and said amazed, "This is actually great. Who made the pancakes?"
Clark replied kindly, "I made them from scratch. I grew up on a farm."
Danny said relieved, "Breakfast here is usually consists of Fenton Toast or cereal. It is very rare that we get home cooked meal that doesn't try to eat us alive."
Lois asked curiously, "When did the food try to eat you?"
Jazz explained, "The turkey came alive one Christmas and chased Danny up a tree. There were also monster hot dogs that would bite anyone, and the hot dogs are still in the refrigerator because no one is able to get them out."
Jason said, "My mommy isn't a good cook. One day, she made burnt toast and burnt eggs. I just faked being sick, so I didn't have to eat her cooking."
Lois asked, "You were never allergic to any kind of food, were you, Jason?"
Jason said truthfully, "No, I just didn't like your cooking, Mommy."
Lois said strictly, "Son, next time tell me the truth when you don't like something. Lying is wrong."
Jason said, "I promise, Mommy."
Jack showed them what looked a electronic mixer and said excitedly, "It is the Fenton Ghost Mixer."
Jason asked curiously, "What does it do, Jack?"
Jack explained happily, "It mixes ghosts to liquid ectoplasm. It only hurts the ghosts." Danny looked annoyed at his father.
Jazz said annoyed, "Dad, I don't think they are interested in it. Danny and I will show them around the town with Sam and Tucker."
Danny said, "You three better come with us unless you want to be stuck with my ghost obsessed parents." Danny, Jazz, Lois, Clark, and Jason walked to the arcade where they met Valerie, Sam, and Tucker.
Tucker said, "Hey Danny, Jazz, Lois, Clark, and Jason. I would like you to met my cousin, Trixie and her three friends, Spud, Jake, and Rose."
Sam said, "I would like you to met my cousin, Ron Stoppable and his girlfriend, Kim Possible." Rose and Kim went to play a fighting game and so did Clark and Danny. Jason and Sam went to play a skateboarding game. Lois and Jazz went to playing a dancing game. Trixie and Tucker played another fighting game. Jake and Ron went to playing a football game.
Danny said annoyed, "Clark, you are lousy at the fighting video game."
Clark said, "I'm not very good at this game." He could use his X-Ray vision to see Danny's moves, but he decided to play fair.
Danny said, "It's okay. I'm not good at it either. Let's play a different game." He could also use his own ghost powers to do better, but like Clark, he decided to play fair.
Clark said, "Let's play something that doesn't involve fighting." They played Table Hockey which they were both good at. Clark was lucky that no emergencies happened that needed his attention.
Danny's ghost sense went off and said, "I need to get more quarters which I left at home by mistake." He ran into an abandon alley and yelled, "Goin' Ghost." He flew off to find the ghost followed by his friends and sister. Valerie also became the Red Huntress.
Lois said excitedly, "Let's follow them." They saw two ghosts fighting with the help of Red Huntress, a red dragon, a ninja, and Kim. She recognized one of them was Phantom.
Skulker said coldly, "Ghost child, you are going to make a fine pelt for my collection."
Valerie yelled, "LEAVE HIM ALONE; TAKE ME INSTEAD, SKULKER."
Skulker shot Valerie in her back on the right side and said, "Fine."
Phantom took a hold of Valerie and turned them both intangible; the shot phased through them. Valerie whispered, "Thanks."
Jazz accidentally hit Danny, Valerie, Clark, Lois, Jake, Kim, Ron, Rose, and Jason with the Fenton Grappler causing Danny to change back into human and Clark to loose his glasses in the alley. She apologized as she freed them from the net, "I'm sorry."
Lois said amazed, "Danny, you're Danny Phantom."
Danny smiled and said, "Yes, I am. Clark, you're Superman, and Jake, you're the dragon. Will you all keep my secret?"
Clark said, "Yes, I'm Superman. Will you please keep it a secret? I'll go crazy if I was Superman all the time."
Jake said, "Yes, I'm the American Dragon. Rose is Huntsgirl. Will you keep it a secret?
Ron said, "I have Mystical Monkey Powers."
Kim said, "Ron and I will keep all of them a secret." She handed Clark his glasses.
Clark said, "I'll keep all of them a secret." He put his glasses on.
Sam said, "I'll keep all of them a secret."
Tucker said, "Same here."
Rose said, "Same here."
Jake said, "Sure."
Jason said, "Okay."
Trixie said, "My lips are sealed."
Jazz said kindly, "My lips are zipped shut."
Spud said, "Okay."
Valerie gasped for breath and whispered, "Everyone will keep everyone's secret. I will keep all of them a secret. I'm hurt badly." She went unconscious.
Clark said calmly, "She's suffering from radiation sickness from Skulker's shot and lost a lot of blood. We need to take off her shirt."
Lois took off Valerie's shirt and placed her blazer on her. She said worriedly, "She needs to be taken to the hospital."
Danny yelled, "Goin' Ghost!" He became Danny Phantom and said, "I'll fly her there. I know Clark can fly faster." Danny picked up Valerie and flew to Amity Park General Hospital. Phantom put Valerie down on a gurney and said hurriedly, "Ma'am, Valerie Gray is suffering from radiation sickness and has loss a lot of blood."
The receptionist said, "Phantom, you should probably leave. It's not good idea for people to see a ghost in the hospital."
Phantom said, "Oh right." He flew back to alley where he left everyone. He changed back to Danny. He asked, "Where did everyone else go?"
Lois said, "They went back to their houses for lunch."
Clark said kindly, "I think you tell your parents the truth. I'll have to tell them too." They all walked back to FentonWorks and went inside.
Maddie said, "Hi Danny, Jazz, Lois, Clark, and Jason."
Danny said nervously, "Mom and Dad, I need to tell you something right now."
Jack asked, "Does it involve ghosts?"
Danny replied, "Yes, Dad."
Maddie said kindly, "Go on and tell us, Danny."
Danny replied, "I'm Danny Phantom. Goin' Ghost!" He became Danny Phantom.
Maddie asked curiously, "Danny, how did you become a half-ghost?"
Danny explained, "I turned the Ghost Portal on by pushing the ON button inside, and I became Danny Phantom." He turned back into a human.
Maddie said kindly, "We'll keep it a secret, Danny."
Clark said nervously, "Danny isn't the only one with a secret identity. I need to tell you something, too, Maddie and Jack."
Jack asked, "Does your secret involve ghosts?"
Clark chuckled and replied, "No, but it involves being from another planet."
Maddie said kindly, "Go ahead and tell us, Clark."
Clark took off his glasses and said, "I'm Superman. Jason is my son." He unbuttoned his shirt for them to see the S shield.
Jack said excitedly, "WOW! Danny and Clark are both super heroes." Clark fixed his disguise, and they sat down for lunch which was turkey sandwiches and milk.
Maddie said, "Jack and I won't tell your secret. Danny, are you okay?"
Danny replied sadly, "My friend, Valerie is in a coma from radiation sickness and loss of blood."
Maddie asked, "Clark, does your blood work on humans?"
Clark replied, "I never tried it because no needle can puncture my skin unless it is made of Kryptonite."
Maddie said kindly, "I made a Kryptonite needle once just in case Zod came back; I still have it in the lab."
Clark said kindly, "Let's save Valerie's life." They finished lunch. Maddie and Clark went downstairs to the lab.
The next morning, Clark, Lois, and Jason went down to the kitchen where Clark made pancakes with bacon for everyone, orange juice for the children and coffee for the adults. He put two pancakes and two slices of bacon on each plate. Danny, Jazz, Maddie, and Jack came downstairs and sat down. Lois poured two cups of coffee for Maddie and Jack while Clark poured the orange juice for Danny and Jazz. Jazz took a bite of her pancake and said amazed, "This is actually great. Who made the pancakes?"
Clark replied kindly, "I made them from scratch. I grew up on a farm."
Danny said relieved, "Breakfast here is usually consists of Fenton Toast or cereal. It is very rare that we get home cooked meal that doesn't try to eat us alive."
Lois asked curiously, "When did the food try to eat you?"
Jazz explained, "The turkey came alive one Christmas and chased Danny up a tree. There were also monster hot dogs that would bite anyone, and the hot dogs are still in the refrigerator because no one is able to get them out."
Jason said, "My mommy isn't a good cook. One day, she made burnt toast and burnt eggs. I just faked being sick, so I didn't have to eat her cooking."
Lois asked, "You were never allergic to any kind of food, were you, Jason?"
Jason said truthfully, "No, I just didn't like your cooking, Mommy."
Lois said strictly, "Son, next time tell me the truth when you don't like something. Lying is wrong."
Jason said, "I promise, Mommy."
Jack showed them what looked a electronic mixer and said excitedly, "It is the Fenton Ghost Mixer."
Jason asked curiously, "What does it do, Jack?"
Jack explained happily, "It mixes ghosts to liquid ectoplasm. It only hurts the ghosts." Danny looked annoyed at his father.
Jazz said annoyed, "Dad, I don't think they are interested in it. Danny and I will show them around the town with Sam and Tucker."
Danny said, "You three better come with us unless you want to be stuck with my ghost obsessed parents." Danny, Jazz, Lois, Clark, and Jason walked to the arcade where they met Valerie, Sam, and Tucker.
Tucker said, "Hey Danny, Jazz, Lois, Clark, and Jason. I would like you to met my cousin, Trixie and her three friends, Spud, Jake, and Rose."
Sam said, "I would like you to met my cousin, Ron Stoppable and his girlfriend, Kim Possible." Rose and Kim went to play a fighting game and so did Clark and Danny. Jason and Sam went to play a skateboarding game. Lois and Jazz went to playing a dancing game. Trixie and Tucker played another fighting game. Jake and Ron went to playing a football game.
Danny said annoyed, "Clark, you are lousy at the fighting video game."
Clark said, "I'm not very good at this game." He could use his X-Ray vision to see Danny's moves, but he decided to play fair.
Danny said, "It's okay. I'm not good at it either. Let's play a different game." He could also use his own ghost powers to do better, but like Clark, he decided to play fair.
Clark said, "Let's play something that doesn't involve fighting." They played Table Hockey which they were both good at. Clark was lucky that no emergencies happened that needed his attention.
Danny's ghost sense went off and said, "I need to get more quarters which I left at home by mistake." He ran into an abandon alley and yelled, "Goin' Ghost." He flew off to find the ghost followed by his friends and sister. Valerie also became the Red Huntress.
Lois said excitedly, "Let's follow them." They saw two ghosts fighting with the help of Red Huntress, a red dragon, a ninja, and Kim. She recognized one of them was Phantom.
Skulker said coldly, "Ghost child, you are going to make a fine pelt for my collection."
Valerie yelled, "LEAVE HIM ALONE; TAKE ME INSTEAD, SKULKER."
Skulker shot Valerie in her back on the right side and said, "Fine."
Phantom took a hold of Valerie and turned them both intangible; the shot phased through them. Valerie whispered, "Thanks."
Jazz accidentally hit Danny, Valerie, Clark, Lois, Jake, Kim, Ron, Rose, and Jason with the Fenton Grappler causing Danny to change back into human and Clark to loose his glasses in the alley. She apologized as she freed them from the net, "I'm sorry."
Lois said amazed, "Danny, you're Danny Phantom."
Danny smiled and said, "Yes, I am. Clark, you're Superman, and Jake, you're the dragon. Will you all keep my secret?"
Clark said, "Yes, I'm Superman. Will you please keep it a secret? I'll go crazy if I was Superman all the time."
Jake said, "Yes, I'm the American Dragon. Rose is Huntsgirl. Will you keep it a secret?
Ron said, "I have Mystical Monkey Powers."
Kim said, "Ron and I will keep all of them a secret." She handed Clark his glasses.
Clark said, "I'll keep all of them a secret." He put his glasses on.
Sam said, "I'll keep all of them a secret."
Tucker said, "Same here."
Rose said, "Same here."
Jake said, "Sure."
Jason said, "Okay."
Trixie said, "My lips are sealed."
Jazz said kindly, "My lips are zipped shut."
Spud said, "Okay."
Valerie gasped for breath and whispered, "Everyone will keep everyone's secret. I will keep all of them a secret. I'm hurt badly." She went unconscious.
Clark said calmly, "She's suffering from radiation sickness from Skulker's shot and lost a lot of blood. We need to take off her shirt."
Lois took off Valerie's shirt and placed her blazer on her. She said worriedly, "She needs to be taken to the hospital."
Danny yelled, "Goin' Ghost!" He became Danny Phantom and said, "I'll fly her there. I know Clark can fly faster." Danny picked up Valerie and flew to Amity Park General Hospital. Phantom put Valerie down on a gurney and said hurriedly, "Ma'am, Valerie Gray is suffering from radiation sickness and has loss a lot of blood."
The receptionist said, "Phantom, you should probably leave. It's not good idea for people to see a ghost in the hospital."
Phantom said, "Oh right." He flew back to alley where he left everyone. He changed back to Danny. He asked, "Where did everyone else go?"
Lois said, "They went back to their houses for lunch."
Clark said kindly, "I think you tell your parents the truth. I'll have to tell them too." They all walked back to FentonWorks and went inside.
Maddie said, "Hi Danny, Jazz, Lois, Clark, and Jason."
Danny said nervously, "Mom and Dad, I need to tell you something right now."
Jack asked, "Does it involve ghosts?"
Danny replied, "Yes, Dad."
Maddie said kindly, "Go on and tell us, Danny."
Danny replied, "I'm Danny Phantom. Goin' Ghost!" He became Danny Phantom.
Maddie asked curiously, "Danny, how did you become a half-ghost?"
Danny explained, "I turned the Ghost Portal on by pushing the ON button inside, and I became Danny Phantom." He turned back into a human.
Maddie said kindly, "We'll keep it a secret, Danny."
Clark said nervously, "Danny isn't the only one with a secret identity. I need to tell you something, too, Maddie and Jack."
Jack asked, "Does your secret involve ghosts?"
Clark chuckled and replied, "No, but it involves being from another planet."
Maddie said kindly, "Go ahead and tell us, Clark."
Clark took off his glasses and said, "I'm Superman. Jason is my son." He unbuttoned his shirt for them to see the S shield.
Jack said excitedly, "WOW! Danny and Clark are both super heroes." Clark fixed his disguise, and they sat down for lunch which was turkey sandwiches and milk.
Maddie said, "Jack and I won't tell your secret. Danny, are you okay?"
Danny replied sadly, "My friend, Valerie is in a coma from radiation sickness and loss of blood."
Maddie asked, "Clark, does your blood work on humans?"
Clark replied, "I never tried it because no needle can puncture my skin unless it is made of Kryptonite."
Maddie said kindly, "I made a Kryptonite needle once just in case Zod came back; I still have it in the lab."
Clark said kindly, "Let's save Valerie's life." They finished lunch. Maddie and Clark went downstairs to the lab.
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Angie
Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
I like that Valerie showed that she had forgiven Danny in her attempt to take his place when Skulker attacked. I hope that she will be okay - I hope that Clark and Danny can help her in the lab!
I also liked that they were honest with Danny's parents about both Danny and Clark's superpowers. Now they can be themselves around their new friends! Great update!
I also liked that they were honest with Danny's parents about both Danny and Clark's superpowers. Now they can be themselves around their new friends! Great update!
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Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
Chapter 6 How to Save a Life
Maddie found the Kryptonite needle and cleaned it with water. She asked Clark after cleaning his small spot on his arm, "Are you ready?"
Clark replied, "Yes."
Maddie poked the needle in his skin and waited for the bag to fill up. Once the bag was filled, she took the needle out. She said, "Clark, go get some sun." They both went upstairs.
Danny asked, "Did you get Clark's blood?"
Maddie replied, "Yes, let's deliver it to the hospital."
Lois asked, "Jazz, can you watch Jason for us?"
Jazz replied, "Sure, Lois."
Maddie said, "Let's go to the hospital." Maddie, Jack, Danny, Clark, and Lois drove to the hospital in the RV.
At the Hospital at 2 o'clock in the afternoon:
They found a parking place and walked inside. Maddie asked Nurse Sally, "Where is Valerie Gray's room?"
Nurse Sally said, "I'll show you." She led them to Valerie's room where a male doctor with brown hair and brown eyes wearing a white lab coat and said, "Dr. Paterson, Mrs. Fenton brought some universal type blood for Ms. Gray."
Maddie gave the bag of blood to the doctor and said, "Here you go."
Dr. Paterson put the bag of blood on the IV stand and said kindly, "We just have to wait. She can hear you." He left.
Danny whispered, "Valerie, everyone thinks Sam is the one for me, but she's not. Sam and I went out for a couple weeks after saving the world. We broke up because we were always meant to be friends who care for each other. Val, I love you." He kissed her lips.
Maddie whispered, "Clark, what did he say?"
Clark replied in a whisper, "I wasn't listening this time."
Valerie moved slightly. Damon said kindly, "Val, please wake up."
At the Fentons at the same time:
Jazz found her new jumpsuit which was blue with a black stripe both sides of the top on the neck down to the waist and all black on the bottom. She asked, "Jason, what do you want to do?"
Jason replied, "Watch a movie or cartoon."
Jazz put in Lilo and Stitch for him. She went into the lab and took off her clothes; she put her jumpsuit on it and tied the black belt on it. She put on a pair of black gloves and a black headband. She went inside the Ghost Portal which was off and pushed the ON button. She felt the electricity shock her causing her to pass out.
At the Hospital at 6:00 PM:
Danny sung softly, " I wish we could go back
To the beginning
'Cause there's something missing
From your eyes.
We lost a lifetime
When I disappeared.
Now I am coming back to you.
I wish I could fly,
I know I can save her somehow.
You thought you were safe and sound
But you need a hero now.
You gotta believe
Even with broken wings,
I'll come to your rescue
And you can rescue me.
Summer's the season
But you're cold and freezing,
If there's a reason
It's a lie.
When did I lose you?
I need you to pull through,
The weight of the world never felt so alive.
I wish I could fly,
I know I can save her somehow.
You thought you were safe and sound
But you need a hero now.
You gotta believe
Even with broken wings,
I'll come to your rescue
And you can rescue me.
I wish I could fly,
I know I can save her somehow.
You thought you were safe and sound
But you need a hero now.
You gotta believe
Even with broken wings,
I'll come to your rescue
And you can rescue me."
Valerie moaned.
Danny whispered, "Val, please wake up. Thank you for saving me. You are a real hero. You don't need superpowers to be a hero. Anyone can be a hero."
Valerie groaned and said hoarsely, "D-a-nny, wa-ter."
Danny saw a pitcher of water and poured the water into the paper cup. He handed the cup to her and said kindly, "Here, you go."
Valerie drank the water and said, "Thanks, Danny."
Danny hugged her and said, "You're alive."
Valerie laughed and replied, "Of course, I'm alive, silly."
Damon said, "I have to go to work. Bye, Val. I got permission for Danny to stay with you until 10 o'clock. I'm sorry, Maddie and Jack for not liking you. Thanks for saving my daughter, Maddie. " He left. Nurse Sally brought dinner for both of them and then left.
Maddie said, "We better relive Jazz of her babysitting duty." Jack, Lois, and Maddie left.
Clark said kindly, "I have some things as You-Know-Who to take care of." He left.
Danny smiled and said, "I guess it is just us for now."
Valerie smiled and said, "I'm sorry for hunting you, Danny. Everything was just a silly accident. I was mad at the wrong hero. You were always there for me, Danny. Superman left me when I needed him when my mom was shot when I was 10. I also forgave him."
Danny smiled and said happily, "Don't worry about it, Val. Everything is the way it's supposed to be."
At the Fentons the same time:
Jazz woke up and found a mirror. She had light green hair and glowing green eyes with green lipstick; she was wearing a orange top with a white stripe on both sides of the neck, a white wrapped around belt, white pants, black boots, and a pair of white gloves. She said amazed, "I look cool." She took fifteen minutes to change back to normal. She put her clothes back on and made grilled cheese sandwiches for everyone when they came in.
Clark said annoyed after taking a bite of his grilled cheese sandwich, "Chang and Vlad are going to free Luthor from the island that he was stranded on with a magic spell also bring back the Dark Dragon, and maybe bring back the Huntsclan. The American Dragon and Kim Possible are just as annoyed as I am."
Maddie said kindly, "We'll find away to stop all of them."
A puff of orange smoke came out of Jazz's mouth which she covered up with her hand and said, "I need to go for a walk for a couple hours." She grabbed a Fenton Thermos and ran outside. She went behind the house and yelled, "GHOST UP!" She became a ghost. She flew by the hospital and saw Skulker and her brother.
Phantom asked, "Who are you?"
The ghost replied kindly, "Ghost Gal, Phantom." She threw two orange Ecto-blasts at Skulker knocking him into the wall and sucked him into the Fenton Thermos. She flew away to behind the house and turned back into a human. She went inside and went to her room for the night after making sure Danny was asleep.
Maddie found the Kryptonite needle and cleaned it with water. She asked Clark after cleaning his small spot on his arm, "Are you ready?"
Clark replied, "Yes."
Maddie poked the needle in his skin and waited for the bag to fill up. Once the bag was filled, she took the needle out. She said, "Clark, go get some sun." They both went upstairs.
Danny asked, "Did you get Clark's blood?"
Maddie replied, "Yes, let's deliver it to the hospital."
Lois asked, "Jazz, can you watch Jason for us?"
Jazz replied, "Sure, Lois."
Maddie said, "Let's go to the hospital." Maddie, Jack, Danny, Clark, and Lois drove to the hospital in the RV.
At the Hospital at 2 o'clock in the afternoon:
They found a parking place and walked inside. Maddie asked Nurse Sally, "Where is Valerie Gray's room?"
Nurse Sally said, "I'll show you." She led them to Valerie's room where a male doctor with brown hair and brown eyes wearing a white lab coat and said, "Dr. Paterson, Mrs. Fenton brought some universal type blood for Ms. Gray."
Maddie gave the bag of blood to the doctor and said, "Here you go."
Dr. Paterson put the bag of blood on the IV stand and said kindly, "We just have to wait. She can hear you." He left.
Danny whispered, "Valerie, everyone thinks Sam is the one for me, but she's not. Sam and I went out for a couple weeks after saving the world. We broke up because we were always meant to be friends who care for each other. Val, I love you." He kissed her lips.
Maddie whispered, "Clark, what did he say?"
Clark replied in a whisper, "I wasn't listening this time."
Valerie moved slightly. Damon said kindly, "Val, please wake up."
At the Fentons at the same time:
Jazz found her new jumpsuit which was blue with a black stripe both sides of the top on the neck down to the waist and all black on the bottom. She asked, "Jason, what do you want to do?"
Jason replied, "Watch a movie or cartoon."
Jazz put in Lilo and Stitch for him. She went into the lab and took off her clothes; she put her jumpsuit on it and tied the black belt on it. She put on a pair of black gloves and a black headband. She went inside the Ghost Portal which was off and pushed the ON button. She felt the electricity shock her causing her to pass out.
At the Hospital at 6:00 PM:
Danny sung softly, " I wish we could go back
To the beginning
'Cause there's something missing
From your eyes.
We lost a lifetime
When I disappeared.
Now I am coming back to you.
I wish I could fly,
I know I can save her somehow.
You thought you were safe and sound
But you need a hero now.
You gotta believe
Even with broken wings,
I'll come to your rescue
And you can rescue me.
Summer's the season
But you're cold and freezing,
If there's a reason
It's a lie.
When did I lose you?
I need you to pull through,
The weight of the world never felt so alive.
I wish I could fly,
I know I can save her somehow.
You thought you were safe and sound
But you need a hero now.
You gotta believe
Even with broken wings,
I'll come to your rescue
And you can rescue me.
I wish I could fly,
I know I can save her somehow.
You thought you were safe and sound
But you need a hero now.
You gotta believe
Even with broken wings,
I'll come to your rescue
And you can rescue me."
Valerie moaned.
Danny whispered, "Val, please wake up. Thank you for saving me. You are a real hero. You don't need superpowers to be a hero. Anyone can be a hero."
Valerie groaned and said hoarsely, "D-a-nny, wa-ter."
Danny saw a pitcher of water and poured the water into the paper cup. He handed the cup to her and said kindly, "Here, you go."
Valerie drank the water and said, "Thanks, Danny."
Danny hugged her and said, "You're alive."
Valerie laughed and replied, "Of course, I'm alive, silly."
Damon said, "I have to go to work. Bye, Val. I got permission for Danny to stay with you until 10 o'clock. I'm sorry, Maddie and Jack for not liking you. Thanks for saving my daughter, Maddie. " He left. Nurse Sally brought dinner for both of them and then left.
Maddie said, "We better relive Jazz of her babysitting duty." Jack, Lois, and Maddie left.
Clark said kindly, "I have some things as You-Know-Who to take care of." He left.
Danny smiled and said, "I guess it is just us for now."
Valerie smiled and said, "I'm sorry for hunting you, Danny. Everything was just a silly accident. I was mad at the wrong hero. You were always there for me, Danny. Superman left me when I needed him when my mom was shot when I was 10. I also forgave him."
Danny smiled and said happily, "Don't worry about it, Val. Everything is the way it's supposed to be."
At the Fentons the same time:
Jazz woke up and found a mirror. She had light green hair and glowing green eyes with green lipstick; she was wearing a orange top with a white stripe on both sides of the neck, a white wrapped around belt, white pants, black boots, and a pair of white gloves. She said amazed, "I look cool." She took fifteen minutes to change back to normal. She put her clothes back on and made grilled cheese sandwiches for everyone when they came in.
Clark said annoyed after taking a bite of his grilled cheese sandwich, "Chang and Vlad are going to free Luthor from the island that he was stranded on with a magic spell also bring back the Dark Dragon, and maybe bring back the Huntsclan. The American Dragon and Kim Possible are just as annoyed as I am."
Maddie said kindly, "We'll find away to stop all of them."
A puff of orange smoke came out of Jazz's mouth which she covered up with her hand and said, "I need to go for a walk for a couple hours." She grabbed a Fenton Thermos and ran outside. She went behind the house and yelled, "GHOST UP!" She became a ghost. She flew by the hospital and saw Skulker and her brother.
Phantom asked, "Who are you?"
The ghost replied kindly, "Ghost Gal, Phantom." She threw two orange Ecto-blasts at Skulker knocking him into the wall and sucked him into the Fenton Thermos. She flew away to behind the house and turned back into a human. She went inside and went to her room for the night after making sure Danny was asleep.
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I enjoyed reading this update! I liked how both Clark and Jazz got to be heroes - Clark by donating blood and Jazz by turning into a ghost and helping save the day in the end...
I also liked how Danny admitted his feelings to Valerie in a song and then she awoke in the hospital - that was cool!
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Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
Chapter 7 A Dark Future
Jazz woke up underneath her bed and crawled out. She got dressed and went downstairs. She looked in the mirror and was invisible. She screamed, "AAAAAAAAAAAH!"
Danny saw Jazz and said, "Hi Jazz."
Jazz asked, "Danny, can you see me?"
Danny smiled and replied, "Yes, you're right here. Let's get some breakfast." They went into the kitchen.
Jack holding up a large blue Tupperware bowl and lid and explained, "This is the Fenton Creep Catcher. It works insane people and on evil ghosts only, so you are safe, Danny."
Danny said, "I'll test it out." He took the Fenton Creep Catcher.
After breakfast, Lois, Clark, Danny, Jake, Rose, Kim, Ron, Spud, Trixie, Sam, and Tucker were walking to the hospital when Lois and Kim noticed an old abandoned building. Lois said, "Let's go inside."
Danny said annoyed, "It looks like it is about to fall down."
Ron said, "I rather not."
Kim said, "Lois and I are going in. We'll be out in a minute." They went inside.
Lois saw a magic book and a green staff like Rose's and said amazed, "Look at this old magic book. It has a lot of cool magical spells in it. I think we should take it with us."
Kim said, "We should take it."
Lois put them in her purse and said, "Let's get out of her." They went outside and saw Danny fighting Box Lunch.
Danny said annoyed, "Box Lunch, go back to your own time." Box Lunch disappeared dropping the Time Medallion. Jason grabbed the Time Medallion, and they all disappeared to Clockwork's lair. Rose tried to fight Clockwork.
Clockwork said, "Time Out!" Everyone froze except Jason. He said, "Time In."
Danny said, "Rose, no."
Clockwork said, "Time Out."
Jason saw Time Medallions like the one he was wearing and put one on his dad, Danny, Rose, Tucker, Spud, Trixie, Kim, Ron, Sam, Jake, and his mom. They unfroze. Jason smiled and said, "That's better. Are you a good ghost like Danny or a bad one?"
Clockwork turned into an young ghost and replied, "Jason Kent, I'm a good ghost. My name is Clockwork; I'm the Time Master."
Jason said, "That's good because my mom gets into all sorts of trouble."
Clockwork said, "Clark, you also changed time once when Lois was dead, so you can save her."
Clark asked, "Was it okay?"
Clockwork replied, "You did it for a good reason to save the one you love, Kal El. If you didn't, Jason won't of existed."
Danny asked, "Is my future self still in the Fenton Thermos?"
Clockwork replied, "Yes, but you're not the problem this time. Time In. Watch." They watched Dark Mistress Lane and Lord Possible killed with a huge fire except for Jazz, Jake, Rose, Clark,and Valerie and then watched Lord Possible and Dark Mistress Lane kill Jake, Rose, and weakened Superman, Superboy, and Phantom. The Future Superman, Future Superboy, and Phantom fell into a deep sleep.
Danny said amazed, "I thought my evil future self was bad. Lois and Kim are way worse then Dan Phantom was. Why did they become evil?"
Clockwork explained, "Lois's and Kim's change was pretty fast."
Lois whispered, "Jealousy is what caused Kim and I to become monsters in the future." They jumped into the portal.
7 years in the Future:
Lois said nervously, "We're in the future."
Danny replied hoarsely, "Yes, we are."
Dark Mistress Lane chuckled evilly and said, "Well, it is our goody two shoes past selves who never do anything bad." She shot a green light from a magic staff at Lois.
Lois yelled, "YOU ARE A BIG LOSER WHO THINKS YOU ARE BETTER THAN EVERYONE! I WILL NEVER BECOME LIKE YOU." She punched her future self.
Lord Possible said evilly, "We'll killed them before we can do it again." She shot a flame at Kim
Kim yelled, "I WILL NEVER BECOME EVIL! I LOVE SAVING THE WORLD WITHOUT SUPER POWERS." She kicked her future self.
Lord Possible said coldly, "You will become me like Lois will become the Dark Mistress Lane." She shot a jet of fire around all of them.
Danny yelled, "Everyone take off your medallion." Clark, Jason, Jake, Spud, Trixie, Ron, Sam, and Tucker were able to take off their medallions and disappeared back to their own time. Danny, Lois, Kim, and Rose had their medallions stuck to them.
Lord Possible became the young Kim Possible and made the Dark Mistress look like her past self. She said with an evil laugh, "We're going to make sure the things that happened in the past will happen." The Evil Kim and the Evil Lois touch the medallion and were transported into their past.
Danny said, "Oh great! We're trapped in the future."
Lois said, "Valerie, Dani, and Jazz are still alive. Maybe one of them has a working ghost portal."
Rose said, "Valerie probably has working ghost portal. We just need to find it. I think we should wake up your future self."
Danny said nervously, "I don't think it is such a good idea, but it will be faster by asking him."
Rose removed the rope and poured a bottle of water on the future Phantom. She yelled, "WAKE UP, PHANTOM!"
Future Daniel Phantom said shyly, "Thanks, Rose. My name is Daniel. You must my past heroic self, Danny. Those must be the good Kim and Lois."
Danny whispered to Lois, Rose, and Kim, "My future self is a wimp just time."
Lois whispered, "No kidding."
Danny asked, "Daniel, do you know where a working Ghost Portal is?"
Future Daniel replied, "It is at Flying Spirits Boarding School for Troubled Children ran by Jazz and Valerie. Dani is there is a student. I'll show you. I don't really like being in the Ghost Zone." They went into the Ghost Zone and were trapped by the evil ghosts.
In the Present:
Jazz saw something Lois playing with a staff and Kim both looking at book. She walked up to them and asked, "What are you doing?"
Kim laughed evilly and said, "I'm learning fire and shape shifting spells." She shot a small flame at Jazz.
Lois said coldly, "I'm trying to learn how to use this thing." She shot a green light at Jazz.
Jazz ran behind a building and yelled, "GHOST UP!" She became Ghost Gal and flew over to the fight.
Kim shot a beam of fire at Ghost Gal and said evilly, "Ghost Gal, you are a horrible fighter."
Lois said darkly, "You will never beat us." She shot a green light at Ghost Gal.
Ghost Gal saw a picture of the real Kim and Lois with Danny and Rose were in the Ghost Zone in her mind and yelled, "YOU AREN'T THE REAL KIM AND LOIS! KIM AND LOIS WOULD NEVER MAKE FUN OF ME LIKE THAT!" She fired an orange Ecto-blast at them.
Lord Possible revealed her self and the Dark Mistress Lane. Lord Possible said evilly, "That's true."
In the Future:
Lois said annoyed, "None of this would of happened if Kim and I never went into the warehouse."
Rose said sadly, "It was my fault. I should of told you that warehouse was a Huntsclan Lair, and it was dangerous."
Danny yelled, "Enough! Use your future fighting styles. Lois, you have a staff in your purse. Kim, you can make fire."
Kim focused her energy on making a powerful flame blast into the ghosts while Lois shot a blast of green light of the Huntstaff; the ghosts flew off. Kim smiled proudly and said, "We did it."
Lois said happily, "I guess I'm not a loser after all."
Danny phased Lois, Kim, and Rose with him through the Portal into the basement of the school and saw Valerie with Dani and the Huntsboys all looking sad. Danny said, "Hi Val."
Valerie smiled and said, "Hey the brave Danny Phantom not that wimp. You got stuck in the future again because of Lois's and Kim's stupid mistake."
Danny nodded and asked, "Can you get the Time Medallions off us?"
Dani replied, "We'll help you, cousin."
Rose asked, "Huntsboy 88 and Huntsboy 89, what is wrong?"
Huntsboy 88 replied sadly, "No more magical creatures; they are all gone because of Lord Possible and the Dark Mistress Lane."
Huntsboy 89 said sadly, "They did a spell to remove all the magical creatures from Earth."
Rose said amazed, "I thought you hated magical creatures."
Huntsboy 88 explained sadly, "If only we realized the hunting magical creatures was wrong like you did, Rose, maybe we could of stop them. Rose, you're dead in this world. We'll help you." Huntsboy 88, Huntsboy 89, Valerie, and Dani blasted the medallions off of Danny, Rose, Lois, and Kim. Danny, Rose, Lois, and Kim were transported back to their own time.
Jazz woke up underneath her bed and crawled out. She got dressed and went downstairs. She looked in the mirror and was invisible. She screamed, "AAAAAAAAAAAH!"
Danny saw Jazz and said, "Hi Jazz."
Jazz asked, "Danny, can you see me?"
Danny smiled and replied, "Yes, you're right here. Let's get some breakfast." They went into the kitchen.
Jack holding up a large blue Tupperware bowl and lid and explained, "This is the Fenton Creep Catcher. It works insane people and on evil ghosts only, so you are safe, Danny."
Danny said, "I'll test it out." He took the Fenton Creep Catcher.
After breakfast, Lois, Clark, Danny, Jake, Rose, Kim, Ron, Spud, Trixie, Sam, and Tucker were walking to the hospital when Lois and Kim noticed an old abandoned building. Lois said, "Let's go inside."
Danny said annoyed, "It looks like it is about to fall down."
Ron said, "I rather not."
Kim said, "Lois and I are going in. We'll be out in a minute." They went inside.
Lois saw a magic book and a green staff like Rose's and said amazed, "Look at this old magic book. It has a lot of cool magical spells in it. I think we should take it with us."
Kim said, "We should take it."
Lois put them in her purse and said, "Let's get out of her." They went outside and saw Danny fighting Box Lunch.
Danny said annoyed, "Box Lunch, go back to your own time." Box Lunch disappeared dropping the Time Medallion. Jason grabbed the Time Medallion, and they all disappeared to Clockwork's lair. Rose tried to fight Clockwork.
Clockwork said, "Time Out!" Everyone froze except Jason. He said, "Time In."
Danny said, "Rose, no."
Clockwork said, "Time Out."
Jason saw Time Medallions like the one he was wearing and put one on his dad, Danny, Rose, Tucker, Spud, Trixie, Kim, Ron, Sam, Jake, and his mom. They unfroze. Jason smiled and said, "That's better. Are you a good ghost like Danny or a bad one?"
Clockwork turned into an young ghost and replied, "Jason Kent, I'm a good ghost. My name is Clockwork; I'm the Time Master."
Jason said, "That's good because my mom gets into all sorts of trouble."
Clockwork said, "Clark, you also changed time once when Lois was dead, so you can save her."
Clark asked, "Was it okay?"
Clockwork replied, "You did it for a good reason to save the one you love, Kal El. If you didn't, Jason won't of existed."
Danny asked, "Is my future self still in the Fenton Thermos?"
Clockwork replied, "Yes, but you're not the problem this time. Time In. Watch." They watched Dark Mistress Lane and Lord Possible killed with a huge fire except for Jazz, Jake, Rose, Clark,and Valerie and then watched Lord Possible and Dark Mistress Lane kill Jake, Rose, and weakened Superman, Superboy, and Phantom. The Future Superman, Future Superboy, and Phantom fell into a deep sleep.
Danny said amazed, "I thought my evil future self was bad. Lois and Kim are way worse then Dan Phantom was. Why did they become evil?"
Clockwork explained, "Lois's and Kim's change was pretty fast."
Lois whispered, "Jealousy is what caused Kim and I to become monsters in the future." They jumped into the portal.
7 years in the Future:
Lois said nervously, "We're in the future."
Danny replied hoarsely, "Yes, we are."
Dark Mistress Lane chuckled evilly and said, "Well, it is our goody two shoes past selves who never do anything bad." She shot a green light from a magic staff at Lois.
Lois yelled, "YOU ARE A BIG LOSER WHO THINKS YOU ARE BETTER THAN EVERYONE! I WILL NEVER BECOME LIKE YOU." She punched her future self.
Lord Possible said evilly, "We'll killed them before we can do it again." She shot a flame at Kim
Kim yelled, "I WILL NEVER BECOME EVIL! I LOVE SAVING THE WORLD WITHOUT SUPER POWERS." She kicked her future self.
Lord Possible said coldly, "You will become me like Lois will become the Dark Mistress Lane." She shot a jet of fire around all of them.
Danny yelled, "Everyone take off your medallion." Clark, Jason, Jake, Spud, Trixie, Ron, Sam, and Tucker were able to take off their medallions and disappeared back to their own time. Danny, Lois, Kim, and Rose had their medallions stuck to them.
Lord Possible became the young Kim Possible and made the Dark Mistress look like her past self. She said with an evil laugh, "We're going to make sure the things that happened in the past will happen." The Evil Kim and the Evil Lois touch the medallion and were transported into their past.
Danny said, "Oh great! We're trapped in the future."
Lois said, "Valerie, Dani, and Jazz are still alive. Maybe one of them has a working ghost portal."
Rose said, "Valerie probably has working ghost portal. We just need to find it. I think we should wake up your future self."
Danny said nervously, "I don't think it is such a good idea, but it will be faster by asking him."
Rose removed the rope and poured a bottle of water on the future Phantom. She yelled, "WAKE UP, PHANTOM!"
Future Daniel Phantom said shyly, "Thanks, Rose. My name is Daniel. You must my past heroic self, Danny. Those must be the good Kim and Lois."
Danny whispered to Lois, Rose, and Kim, "My future self is a wimp just time."
Lois whispered, "No kidding."
Danny asked, "Daniel, do you know where a working Ghost Portal is?"
Future Daniel replied, "It is at Flying Spirits Boarding School for Troubled Children ran by Jazz and Valerie. Dani is there is a student. I'll show you. I don't really like being in the Ghost Zone." They went into the Ghost Zone and were trapped by the evil ghosts.
In the Present:
Jazz saw something Lois playing with a staff and Kim both looking at book. She walked up to them and asked, "What are you doing?"
Kim laughed evilly and said, "I'm learning fire and shape shifting spells." She shot a small flame at Jazz.
Lois said coldly, "I'm trying to learn how to use this thing." She shot a green light at Jazz.
Jazz ran behind a building and yelled, "GHOST UP!" She became Ghost Gal and flew over to the fight.
Kim shot a beam of fire at Ghost Gal and said evilly, "Ghost Gal, you are a horrible fighter."
Lois said darkly, "You will never beat us." She shot a green light at Ghost Gal.
Ghost Gal saw a picture of the real Kim and Lois with Danny and Rose were in the Ghost Zone in her mind and yelled, "YOU AREN'T THE REAL KIM AND LOIS! KIM AND LOIS WOULD NEVER MAKE FUN OF ME LIKE THAT!" She fired an orange Ecto-blast at them.
Lord Possible revealed her self and the Dark Mistress Lane. Lord Possible said evilly, "That's true."
In the Future:
Lois said annoyed, "None of this would of happened if Kim and I never went into the warehouse."
Rose said sadly, "It was my fault. I should of told you that warehouse was a Huntsclan Lair, and it was dangerous."
Danny yelled, "Enough! Use your future fighting styles. Lois, you have a staff in your purse. Kim, you can make fire."
Kim focused her energy on making a powerful flame blast into the ghosts while Lois shot a blast of green light of the Huntstaff; the ghosts flew off. Kim smiled proudly and said, "We did it."
Lois said happily, "I guess I'm not a loser after all."
Danny phased Lois, Kim, and Rose with him through the Portal into the basement of the school and saw Valerie with Dani and the Huntsboys all looking sad. Danny said, "Hi Val."
Valerie smiled and said, "Hey the brave Danny Phantom not that wimp. You got stuck in the future again because of Lois's and Kim's stupid mistake."
Danny nodded and asked, "Can you get the Time Medallions off us?"
Dani replied, "We'll help you, cousin."
Rose asked, "Huntsboy 88 and Huntsboy 89, what is wrong?"
Huntsboy 88 replied sadly, "No more magical creatures; they are all gone because of Lord Possible and the Dark Mistress Lane."
Huntsboy 89 said sadly, "They did a spell to remove all the magical creatures from Earth."
Rose said amazed, "I thought you hated magical creatures."
Huntsboy 88 explained sadly, "If only we realized the hunting magical creatures was wrong like you did, Rose, maybe we could of stop them. Rose, you're dead in this world. We'll help you." Huntsboy 88, Huntsboy 89, Valerie, and Dani blasted the medallions off of Danny, Rose, Lois, and Kim. Danny, Rose, Lois, and Kim were transported back to their own time.
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No! Rose can't be dead! I hope that Huntsboy 88 and 89 can go back and stop Bad Lois and Bad Kim from killing all the magical people in the past! I'm glad though that they realized that there was a purpose for the magical people and that they want to help stop the bad girls. This was another cool chapter, horsecrazygal!
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Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
Chapter 8 Making Things Right
In the Present:
Kim, Rose, Danny, and Lois were in an alley. Danny said, "We're back in our own time, Rose, Kim, and Lois. Going Ghost!" He became Danny Phantom. They walked into the street and saw the Dark Mistress Lane and Lord Possible terrorizing everyone.
Kim yelled, "TIME IS OUT FOR YOU, LORD POSSIBLE AND THE DARK MISTRESS." She did an elaborate black flip and kick to her future self.
Lord Possible shot a flame at Kim and yelled, "No way!"
Lois took out the Huntstaff and fired green blast at the Evil Lois. She yelled, "TIME'S UP FOR BOTH OF YOU!"
Lord Possible said coldly, "You won't defeat us." She sent a powerful fire blast at the building setting it on fire.
Danny grabbed Rose and Jake and turned them intangible with him; he flew them out of the fire. Danny yelled, "GOOD KIM, GOOD LOIS, USE YOUR FUTURE SELF TECHNIQUES! LOIS, THERE A STUN BUTTON ON THE STAFF. SUPERMAN, PUT OUT THE FIRE! I'LL WEAKEN THEM FIRST WITH MY GHOSTLY WAIL! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Evil Lois and Evil Kim were knocked into a wall.
Superman rescued Danny's family, Ron's family, Jake's family, Kim's family, Ron, Spud, Trixie, Sam, and Tucker from the fire, and then he put it out with his Super-breath. He said relieved, "The fire is out."
Kim yelled, "I WOULD NEVER KILL ANYONE PURPOSELY!" She shot a powerful fire blast at Lord Possible knocking her unconscious.
Lois set the Huntstaff on stun and yelled, "YOU DON'T NEED SUPERPOWERS TO BE A HERO! A LOT OF PEOPLE ARE HEROES WITHOUT SUPERPOWERS LIKE FIREFIGHTERS, POLICEMEN, PARAMEDICS, DOCTORS, THE MILITARY, THE COAST GUARD, TEACHERS, WILDLIFE RESCUERS, AND A LOT OF ORDINARY PEOPLE ARE HEROES BECAUSE THEY MAKE THE WORLD A BETTER PLACE!" She shot a powerful blast at Evil Lois knocking her unconscious.
Danny sucking the Evil Lois and Evil Kim into the Fenton Creep Catcher and slammed the lid on. He said relieved, "They won't be getting out any time soon."
Clockwork appeared and said, "Time Out!" The time was frozen. He slipped a medallion each on Danny, Rose, Kim, and Lois.
Danny handed the Fenton Creep Catcher to Clockwork and said, "Lord Possible and the Dark Mistress Lane are in there."
Clockwork said kindly, "I won't let them get out, Danny. Would you like another chance to do things right?"
Lois and Kim said together, "Yes!"
Clockwork said, "Everyone deserves a second chance. Danny and Rose, make sure Lois and Kim don't go into the building. Rose, be more Huntsgirl and less shy Rose. I'll send you back when you saw the building." Rose, Danny, Lois, and Kim vanished. He said, "Time In." He disappeared.
At 9:30 AM on the street by the building:
Lois said, "Let's go into the building."
Danny said angrily, "It looks like it is going to fall down. It's not safe."
Ron said annoyed, "I rather not."
Kim said, "Lois and I will be back in a minute."
Danny yelled, "WAIT, ROSE HAS SOMETHING TO TELL YOU!"
Lois said, "Fine."
Rose explained truthfully but in her Huntsgirl voice, "It is an abandoned Huntslair. It is very dangerous in there. You could become obsessed with power and then go on a killing spree."
Lois said kindly, "I'm not going in there. I don't need powers to be a hero."
Clark said amazed, "Lois, good job for not getting into trouble."
Kim laughed and said, "You have to be crazy to enter that dump."
Danny smiled and said, "Let's go visit Valerie." They started to walk again towards the hospital, but they ran into Huntsboy 88, Huntsboy 89, and Dani all stealing apples.
Lois whispered, "Clark and Danny, I'll handle this." She walked over to them and said strictly, "Stealing is wrong."
Dani replied, "We're orphans."
Huntsboy 88 said sadly, "We don't have any money."
Lois handed them each ten dollars and said kindly, "Meet us at the mall with us at 11 o'clock; I'll buy you some new clothes. Don't steal again."
Dani smiled and said, "We won't. Thanks. Lois, you are a hero." They left.
Lois smiled proudly and said, "I helped some homeless kids. Let's go visit Valerie before anymore distractions occur." They made it to the hospital and went to Valerie's room.
Valerie smiled and said, "Hey Danny, Sam, Tucker, Kim, Ron, Rose, Jake, Spud, Trixie, Lois, Clark, and Jason."
Danny asked, "How are you feeling, Val?"
Valerie replied, "I feel great. I can leave as soon as I get dressed. I can go to the mall with you." She ran into the bathroom faster than she should and put on a pair of jeans, a purple t-shirt, and a pair of white shoes. They all walked to the mall.
In the Present:
Kim, Rose, Danny, and Lois were in an alley. Danny said, "We're back in our own time, Rose, Kim, and Lois. Going Ghost!" He became Danny Phantom. They walked into the street and saw the Dark Mistress Lane and Lord Possible terrorizing everyone.
Kim yelled, "TIME IS OUT FOR YOU, LORD POSSIBLE AND THE DARK MISTRESS." She did an elaborate black flip and kick to her future self.
Lord Possible shot a flame at Kim and yelled, "No way!"
Lois took out the Huntstaff and fired green blast at the Evil Lois. She yelled, "TIME'S UP FOR BOTH OF YOU!"
Lord Possible said coldly, "You won't defeat us." She sent a powerful fire blast at the building setting it on fire.
Danny grabbed Rose and Jake and turned them intangible with him; he flew them out of the fire. Danny yelled, "GOOD KIM, GOOD LOIS, USE YOUR FUTURE SELF TECHNIQUES! LOIS, THERE A STUN BUTTON ON THE STAFF. SUPERMAN, PUT OUT THE FIRE! I'LL WEAKEN THEM FIRST WITH MY GHOSTLY WAIL! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Evil Lois and Evil Kim were knocked into a wall.
Superman rescued Danny's family, Ron's family, Jake's family, Kim's family, Ron, Spud, Trixie, Sam, and Tucker from the fire, and then he put it out with his Super-breath. He said relieved, "The fire is out."
Kim yelled, "I WOULD NEVER KILL ANYONE PURPOSELY!" She shot a powerful fire blast at Lord Possible knocking her unconscious.
Lois set the Huntstaff on stun and yelled, "YOU DON'T NEED SUPERPOWERS TO BE A HERO! A LOT OF PEOPLE ARE HEROES WITHOUT SUPERPOWERS LIKE FIREFIGHTERS, POLICEMEN, PARAMEDICS, DOCTORS, THE MILITARY, THE COAST GUARD, TEACHERS, WILDLIFE RESCUERS, AND A LOT OF ORDINARY PEOPLE ARE HEROES BECAUSE THEY MAKE THE WORLD A BETTER PLACE!" She shot a powerful blast at Evil Lois knocking her unconscious.
Danny sucking the Evil Lois and Evil Kim into the Fenton Creep Catcher and slammed the lid on. He said relieved, "They won't be getting out any time soon."
Clockwork appeared and said, "Time Out!" The time was frozen. He slipped a medallion each on Danny, Rose, Kim, and Lois.
Danny handed the Fenton Creep Catcher to Clockwork and said, "Lord Possible and the Dark Mistress Lane are in there."
Clockwork said kindly, "I won't let them get out, Danny. Would you like another chance to do things right?"
Lois and Kim said together, "Yes!"
Clockwork said, "Everyone deserves a second chance. Danny and Rose, make sure Lois and Kim don't go into the building. Rose, be more Huntsgirl and less shy Rose. I'll send you back when you saw the building." Rose, Danny, Lois, and Kim vanished. He said, "Time In." He disappeared.
At 9:30 AM on the street by the building:
Lois said, "Let's go into the building."
Danny said angrily, "It looks like it is going to fall down. It's not safe."
Ron said annoyed, "I rather not."
Kim said, "Lois and I will be back in a minute."
Danny yelled, "WAIT, ROSE HAS SOMETHING TO TELL YOU!"
Lois said, "Fine."
Rose explained truthfully but in her Huntsgirl voice, "It is an abandoned Huntslair. It is very dangerous in there. You could become obsessed with power and then go on a killing spree."
Lois said kindly, "I'm not going in there. I don't need powers to be a hero."
Clark said amazed, "Lois, good job for not getting into trouble."
Kim laughed and said, "You have to be crazy to enter that dump."
Danny smiled and said, "Let's go visit Valerie." They started to walk again towards the hospital, but they ran into Huntsboy 88, Huntsboy 89, and Dani all stealing apples.
Lois whispered, "Clark and Danny, I'll handle this." She walked over to them and said strictly, "Stealing is wrong."
Dani replied, "We're orphans."
Huntsboy 88 said sadly, "We don't have any money."
Lois handed them each ten dollars and said kindly, "Meet us at the mall with us at 11 o'clock; I'll buy you some new clothes. Don't steal again."
Dani smiled and said, "We won't. Thanks. Lois, you are a hero." They left.
Lois smiled proudly and said, "I helped some homeless kids. Let's go visit Valerie before anymore distractions occur." They made it to the hospital and went to Valerie's room.
Valerie smiled and said, "Hey Danny, Sam, Tucker, Kim, Ron, Rose, Jake, Spud, Trixie, Lois, Clark, and Jason."
Danny asked, "How are you feeling, Val?"
Valerie replied, "I feel great. I can leave as soon as I get dressed. I can go to the mall with you." She ran into the bathroom faster than she should and put on a pair of jeans, a purple t-shirt, and a pair of white shoes. They all walked to the mall.
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Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
this is great. I'm glad lois and kim have seen the error of their ways. hey is valerie got powers as well since she has supes blood in her? ikm glad0dannys parents know the trth and jazz is hysterical. I'm getting warm fuzzy feelings all over
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Cool! I agree with Roselle, I think that it's cool that Lois and Kim saw their mistakes and I agree that they deserved a second chance...
I'm very happy that Rose is okay and that Valerie is well enough to go shopping and I think it's great how Lois was able to be two kids' heroes when she least expected it! Awesome update! 
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Very cool! I love good and evil stories like this! And I had to kind of laugh when I read this:

And then there was the line about heroes:

It's great stuff, but somehow it struck me as funny.I'LL WEAKEN THEM FIRST WITH MY GHOSTLY WAIL! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Evil Lois and Evil Kim were knocked into a wall.
And then there was the line about heroes:
Yay!Lois set the Huntstaff on stun and yelled, "YOU DON'T NEED SUPERPOWERS TO BE A HERO! A LOT OF PEOPLE ARE HEROES WITHOUT SUPERPOWERS LIKE FIREFIGHTERS, POLICEMEN, PARAMEDICS, DOCTORS, THE MILITARY, THE COAST GUARD, TEACHERS, WILDLIFE RESCUERS, AND A LOT OF ORDINARY PEOPLE ARE HEROES BECAUSE THEY MAKE THE WORLD A BETTER PLACE!" She shot a powerful blast at Evil Lois knocking her unconscious.
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Chapter 9 Having Fun
They met Jazz, Jamal AKA Huntsboy 89, Connor AKA Huntsboy 88, and Dani at the mall. Lois said, "Hey. Let's go shopping. Jake, you need to lose the Gangster talk and the half-pants half-shorts thing going on. Sam, you need a little different outfit; you need to drop the Goth thing. Let's go into Hot Topic." They went into Hot Topic.
Sam bought a pair of Tripp Black And Purple Stitch Dark Street Pants, a pair of Chor Purple Skinny Denim Pants, a Tripp Black And Purple Fishnet Sleeved Hoodie, Tripp Purple Floral Brocade Corset, and a pair of Punkrose Black And Silver Chain Kitten Heels. She said, "I got two different outfits. Let's go to a different store." They went into Hollister Co.
Jamal bought a pair of Winfield Vintage Bootcut Jeans, a Bird Flourish Jersey Polo, two pairs of Driggs Slim Bootcut Jeans, a Slub Print Jersey Polo, Blue and White Stripe Jersey Polo, some underwear, a pair of Printed Cargo Shorts, and a pair of Canvas Flip Flops in black. He said, "I got what I need."
Jazz's hand turned intangible phasing through a rack of clothes and said annoyed, "Not here."
Danny asked not noticing his ghost sense go off, "Are you okay, Jazz?"
Jazz said, "Yeah, I'm fine. Let's go to American Eagle Outfitters." They went American Eagle Outfitters.
Connor bought a pair of AE Standard Bootcut Khakis, an AE Intramural T, an Eagle Heritage Full-Zip Fleece, a pair of black AE Old School Sneakers, some underwear, two pairs of AE Bootcut Jeans, and three AE Standout T-shirts. He said, "I got good clothes, now. Let's go get some lunch." They went to the food court and got pizza for lunch with sodas.
Lois said laughing, "I can't believe I was so stupid earlier."
Jazz's hand turned invisible dropping her soda on the floor and said, "Uh oh." She picked up her cup.
Valerie and Jason both crushed the cups and said together, "I'm in trouble."
Clark said, "I'll talk to Jason and Val." They went into an empty storage closet. He explained, "Val, you have super-speed and super-strength. Jason and Val, you need to loosen your grips on your cups."
Valerie and Jason said, "Okay." They went back to the food court.
Clark said, "We got that problem taking care of."
Jazz again dropped her cup on her lap because her hand turned invisible for the second time and said, "I'm just not having a good day."
Danny said, "I need to talk to Ms. Butter Fingers, now." Jazz and Danny went into the same storage closet. He asked, "Jazz, what's going on?"
Jazz replied, "The cup is slippery."
Danny said, "I know you are lying."
Jazz said, "I'm Ghost Gal. How do you stop from turning invisible?"
Danny said, "Just think about not turning invisible and phasing through stuff like your soda cup."
Jazz said, "Okay." They went back to the food court. She said, "Let's finish shopping." They went into K-Mart. Dani bought a pair of Wckd Junior's Logo Bootcut Jeans, a pair of Piper & Blue Junior's Extended Tab Denim Bermuda Shorts, a pair of blue Route 66 Junior's Front Pocket French Terry Active Pant, a blue Piper & Blue Junior's Smocked Top Dress, a Piper & Blue Junior's Patchwork Mini Skirt with bold colors, a black Wckd Junior's Block Print 2-Fer Top, a blue stripped Piper & Blue Junior's Cap Sleeve Baby Doll Top with Pockets, a yellow Route 66 Junior's Fashion 2-fer Top, two Piper & Blue Junior's Puff Sleeve Baby Doll Tops in white and green, and some underwear.
Dani said, "I just need shoes."
Rose said, "You need to be some pants, Jake."
Jake bought two pairs of Wckd Young Men's Sandblast Crosshatch Denim Jeans and said, "I got some pants."
Jason bought a Boy's 2-Piece Sports Navy Muscle Top with Red Dazzle Short Set, a Boy's 2-Piece Lets Rock Yellow Tee with Black Short Set, and a Boy's Short Sleeve Raglan Tee and Athletic Shorts Set. Jason said, "I got some cooler clothes." They walked into the mall after everyone paid.
Lois said, "Let's go into Kohls." She bought in aqua Simply Vera Vera Wang Pleated Dress and a pair of black Simply Vera Vera Wang Incisive Ballet Flats. Dani bought a pair of white Skechers Cali Calies. Jamal got a pair of white/gray Nike View Walking Shoes. Danny bought a pair of white/red/gray Nike Air 'N' Sight III Running Shoes. Jason bought a pair of Tony Hawk® Hype Skate Shoes. Valerie bought a purple SO Lightweight Camisole.
Danny said, "I need to get two more things but it's not here." They went into Guess. He bought a Crystal G Necklace for Jazz and a gold Pave Heart Necklace for Valerie. They went into Old Navy. Jake got two sleeveless versions of his jacket.
Jason said, "I want to go into the toy store." They went into Kay B Toys. Clark bought Jason a Hot Wheels Skateboard - Gothic Green Speedster 28", a VFX Aggressive Protective Knee, Elbow and Wrist Pads set, and a VFX Black Aggressive Helmet.
Lois said, "Now, you need a bike." They went into Sports Authority. She bought Jason a Mongoose Speed Demon 16" Boys' Bicycle. They left the mall. She said, "Let's go to the Japanese restaurant called Samou Restaurant and Karaoke Club for dinner." They went to the restaurant.
The waiter came up to them and asked, "What would you like to drink?"
Lois said, "I'll have Sprite, please."
Jason said, "I'll have the Orange soda, please.
Clark said, "Everyone else will have a glass of water." The waiter left.
Valerie asked in a whisper, "Clark, why did you help me when I was in a coma?"
Clark whispered, "I couldn't leave you to die."
The waiter brought their drinks and asked, "What would you like to order?"
Sam said, "I'll have the Tofu Nabe, please."
Valerie said, "I'll have the Shiozake Donburi, please."
Jason said, "I'll have Gyoza nabe, please."
Dani said, "I'll have the Teriyaki Chicken, please."
Danny said, "I'll have the same thing, please."
Tucker said, "I'll have the Teriyaki Beef, please."
Trixie said, "I'll have the same thing, please."
Rose said, "I'll have the Agedashi Tofu, please."
Connor said, "I'll have the Vegetarian Udon, please."
Jamal said, "I'll have the Vegetarian Soba, please."
Lois said, "I'll have the Daikon Maguro Donburi, please."
Clark said, "I'll have the Chicken Teryiyaki Udon, please."
Jazz said, "I'll have the Shrimp Tempura & Calamari Teryiyaki Soba, please."
Spud said, "I'll have the Sankai Nabe, please."
Kim said, "I'll have the Tofu Cutlet Teriyaki, please."
Ron said, "I'll have the Spicy Maguro Donburi, please." The waiter left.
Kim said, "Ron, Tucker, and Jazz, you're not singing." The waiter brought their dinner.
Jason said, "I'm glad I'm not allergic to anything anymore."
The DJ pointed to Jamal and said, "Come up here and sing."
Jamal went up to the stage and sung, " Mother,
Don't let me down,
I've been away, but I'm here right now.
And mother,
Don't let the past hunt you down,
Cause I've been away,
Well I'm here right now.
I've been away, but I'm here right now.
And I will be here.
So this time,
We won't speak a word.
I'll swallow my pride, oh I know, I know you're hurt,
And this time,
We'll run till the sun begs the night,
To give up the trail that you once left behind,
Oh she'll give up the trail that you once left behind.
I will be here,
And I will not fade.
I will not ever fade.
So come out and trust in the mercy of love,
And drive out the ghosts, that you see when I'm gone.
And reach out,
Rise like the sun in the sky,
Light up the dark nights, light the hard times,
On your way now.
Light up the hard times,
All the way,
Till you see me again.
I will be here.
And I will not fade,
I will not ever fade.
Right or wrong,
Life goes on,
So trust in love...
Always trust in love
I will be here.
And I will not fade,
I will not ever fade."
An African American ran up to the stage, "Jamal, I missed you so much."
Jamal smiled and said, "I missed you too, Mom." They walked back to his table. He said, "This is my mother, Tori Kamburi. We're going home."
Lois smiled and said, "Jamal, that's great."
Tori said kindly, "Thank you for finding my son, Lois. You are a real hero."
Lois blushed and said, "It was no problem. You better go."
Tori said, "Okay." They left.
A man with blond hair and brown eyes named Tom Patcher came up to the stage and sung, " I'm down on my knees again tonight
I'm hoping this prayer will turn out right
See there's a boy that needs your help
I've done all that I can do myself
His mother is tired
I'm sure You can understand
Each night as he sleeps
She goes in and holds his hand
And she tries not to cry
As the tears fill her eyes
Chorus:
Can You hear me?
Am I getting through tonight?
Can You see him?
Can You make him feel alright?
If You can hear me
Let me take his place somehow
You see he's not just anyone
He's My Son.
Sometimes late at night
I watch him sleep
I dream of the boy he'd like to be
I try to be strong and see him through
But God who he needs right now is You.
Let him grow old
Live life without this fear
What would I be
Living without him here
He's so tired and he's so scared
Let me know that You're there
Chorus:
Can You hear me?
Can You see him?
He's My Son."
Connor ran up to his father and said, "Dad, I missed you so much. I'm so sorry for running away."
Tom said, "Connor, I was a little too overprotective of you when you were sick. I'm sorry." They walked back Connor's table. He said, "I'm Tom Patcher, Connor's father. Lois Lane, you are hero for finding my son. Thank you so much."
Lois said, "No problem. It's my turn." She went up to the stage and sung, "No one sits with him, he doesn't fit in
But we feel like we do when we make fun of him
Cause you want to belong, do you go along?
Cause his pain is the price paid for you to belong
It's not like you hate him or want him to die
But maybe he goes home and thinks suicide
Or he comes back to school with a gun at his side
And a kindness from you might have saved his life
Heroes are made when you make a choice.
You could be a hero - heroes do what's right
You could be a hero - you might save a life
You could be a hero- you could join the fight
For what's right, for what's right, for what's right.
No one talks to her, she feels so alone
She's in too much pain to survive on her own
The hurt she can't handle overflows to a knife
She writes on her arm and wants to give up her life
Each day she goes on is a day that she's brave
Fighting the lie that giving up is the way
Each moment of courage her on life she saves
When she throws the pills out a hero is made
Heroes are made when you make a choice.
You could be a hero - heroes do what's right
You could be a hero - you might save a life
You could be a hero- you could join the fight
For what's right, for what's right, for what's right.
No one talks to him about how he lives
He thinks that the choices he makes are just his
Doesn't know he's the leader with the way he behaves
And others will follow the choices he's made
He lives on the edge, he's old enough to decide
His brother who wants to be him is just nine
He can do what he wants because it's his right
The choices he makes change a nine-year-old's life.
You could be a hero - heroes do what's right
You could be a hero - you might save a life
You could be a hero- you could join the fight
For what's right, for what's right, for what's right." Everyone clapped loudly.
Danny and Valerie went up. Valerie sung, "In a perfect world
One we've never known
We would never need to face the world alone
They can have the world
We'll create our own
I may not be brave or strong or smart
But somewhere in my secret heart
I know
Love will find a way
Anywhere I go
I'm home
If you are there beside me
Like dark turning into day
Somehow we'll come through
Now that I've found you
Love will find a way."
Danny sung, "I was so afraid
Now I realize
Love is never wrong
And so it never dies
There's a perfect world
Shining in your eyes,"
They both sung, "And if only they could feel it too
The happiness I feel with you
They'd know
Love will find a way
Anywhere we go
We're home
If we are there together
Like dark turning into day
Somehow we'll come through
Now that I've found you
Love will find a way
I know love will find a way." Everyone clapped.
The DJ said, "The winner is Lois Lane-Kent." Lois walked onto the stage and got her trophy.
Danny kissed Valerie and said, "I'll see you tomorrow." Valerie, Sam, Tucker, Kim, Ron, Jake, Rose, Spud, and Trixie went their homes. Danny, Clark, Lois, Jazz, Jason, and Dani went to the Fentons for the night.
Maddie asked, "Who is this young girl?"
Danny said, "This is my clone that Vlad made, Dani. Can she stay here?"
Jack said, "Of course. Dani, you share a room with Jazz." They went to their rooms for the night.
They met Jazz, Jamal AKA Huntsboy 89, Connor AKA Huntsboy 88, and Dani at the mall. Lois said, "Hey. Let's go shopping. Jake, you need to lose the Gangster talk and the half-pants half-shorts thing going on. Sam, you need a little different outfit; you need to drop the Goth thing. Let's go into Hot Topic." They went into Hot Topic.
Sam bought a pair of Tripp Black And Purple Stitch Dark Street Pants, a pair of Chor Purple Skinny Denim Pants, a Tripp Black And Purple Fishnet Sleeved Hoodie, Tripp Purple Floral Brocade Corset, and a pair of Punkrose Black And Silver Chain Kitten Heels. She said, "I got two different outfits. Let's go to a different store." They went into Hollister Co.
Jamal bought a pair of Winfield Vintage Bootcut Jeans, a Bird Flourish Jersey Polo, two pairs of Driggs Slim Bootcut Jeans, a Slub Print Jersey Polo, Blue and White Stripe Jersey Polo, some underwear, a pair of Printed Cargo Shorts, and a pair of Canvas Flip Flops in black. He said, "I got what I need."
Jazz's hand turned intangible phasing through a rack of clothes and said annoyed, "Not here."
Danny asked not noticing his ghost sense go off, "Are you okay, Jazz?"
Jazz said, "Yeah, I'm fine. Let's go to American Eagle Outfitters." They went American Eagle Outfitters.
Connor bought a pair of AE Standard Bootcut Khakis, an AE Intramural T, an Eagle Heritage Full-Zip Fleece, a pair of black AE Old School Sneakers, some underwear, two pairs of AE Bootcut Jeans, and three AE Standout T-shirts. He said, "I got good clothes, now. Let's go get some lunch." They went to the food court and got pizza for lunch with sodas.
Lois said laughing, "I can't believe I was so stupid earlier."
Jazz's hand turned invisible dropping her soda on the floor and said, "Uh oh." She picked up her cup.
Valerie and Jason both crushed the cups and said together, "I'm in trouble."
Clark said, "I'll talk to Jason and Val." They went into an empty storage closet. He explained, "Val, you have super-speed and super-strength. Jason and Val, you need to loosen your grips on your cups."
Valerie and Jason said, "Okay." They went back to the food court.
Clark said, "We got that problem taking care of."
Jazz again dropped her cup on her lap because her hand turned invisible for the second time and said, "I'm just not having a good day."
Danny said, "I need to talk to Ms. Butter Fingers, now." Jazz and Danny went into the same storage closet. He asked, "Jazz, what's going on?"
Jazz replied, "The cup is slippery."
Danny said, "I know you are lying."
Jazz said, "I'm Ghost Gal. How do you stop from turning invisible?"
Danny said, "Just think about not turning invisible and phasing through stuff like your soda cup."
Jazz said, "Okay." They went back to the food court. She said, "Let's finish shopping." They went into K-Mart. Dani bought a pair of Wckd Junior's Logo Bootcut Jeans, a pair of Piper & Blue Junior's Extended Tab Denim Bermuda Shorts, a pair of blue Route 66 Junior's Front Pocket French Terry Active Pant, a blue Piper & Blue Junior's Smocked Top Dress, a Piper & Blue Junior's Patchwork Mini Skirt with bold colors, a black Wckd Junior's Block Print 2-Fer Top, a blue stripped Piper & Blue Junior's Cap Sleeve Baby Doll Top with Pockets, a yellow Route 66 Junior's Fashion 2-fer Top, two Piper & Blue Junior's Puff Sleeve Baby Doll Tops in white and green, and some underwear.
Dani said, "I just need shoes."
Rose said, "You need to be some pants, Jake."
Jake bought two pairs of Wckd Young Men's Sandblast Crosshatch Denim Jeans and said, "I got some pants."
Jason bought a Boy's 2-Piece Sports Navy Muscle Top with Red Dazzle Short Set, a Boy's 2-Piece Lets Rock Yellow Tee with Black Short Set, and a Boy's Short Sleeve Raglan Tee and Athletic Shorts Set. Jason said, "I got some cooler clothes." They walked into the mall after everyone paid.
Lois said, "Let's go into Kohls." She bought in aqua Simply Vera Vera Wang Pleated Dress and a pair of black Simply Vera Vera Wang Incisive Ballet Flats. Dani bought a pair of white Skechers Cali Calies. Jamal got a pair of white/gray Nike View Walking Shoes. Danny bought a pair of white/red/gray Nike Air 'N' Sight III Running Shoes. Jason bought a pair of Tony Hawk® Hype Skate Shoes. Valerie bought a purple SO Lightweight Camisole.
Danny said, "I need to get two more things but it's not here." They went into Guess. He bought a Crystal G Necklace for Jazz and a gold Pave Heart Necklace for Valerie. They went into Old Navy. Jake got two sleeveless versions of his jacket.
Jason said, "I want to go into the toy store." They went into Kay B Toys. Clark bought Jason a Hot Wheels Skateboard - Gothic Green Speedster 28", a VFX Aggressive Protective Knee, Elbow and Wrist Pads set, and a VFX Black Aggressive Helmet.
Lois said, "Now, you need a bike." They went into Sports Authority. She bought Jason a Mongoose Speed Demon 16" Boys' Bicycle. They left the mall. She said, "Let's go to the Japanese restaurant called Samou Restaurant and Karaoke Club for dinner." They went to the restaurant.
The waiter came up to them and asked, "What would you like to drink?"
Lois said, "I'll have Sprite, please."
Jason said, "I'll have the Orange soda, please.
Clark said, "Everyone else will have a glass of water." The waiter left.
Valerie asked in a whisper, "Clark, why did you help me when I was in a coma?"
Clark whispered, "I couldn't leave you to die."
The waiter brought their drinks and asked, "What would you like to order?"
Sam said, "I'll have the Tofu Nabe, please."
Valerie said, "I'll have the Shiozake Donburi, please."
Jason said, "I'll have Gyoza nabe, please."
Dani said, "I'll have the Teriyaki Chicken, please."
Danny said, "I'll have the same thing, please."
Tucker said, "I'll have the Teriyaki Beef, please."
Trixie said, "I'll have the same thing, please."
Rose said, "I'll have the Agedashi Tofu, please."
Connor said, "I'll have the Vegetarian Udon, please."
Jamal said, "I'll have the Vegetarian Soba, please."
Lois said, "I'll have the Daikon Maguro Donburi, please."
Clark said, "I'll have the Chicken Teryiyaki Udon, please."
Jazz said, "I'll have the Shrimp Tempura & Calamari Teryiyaki Soba, please."
Spud said, "I'll have the Sankai Nabe, please."
Kim said, "I'll have the Tofu Cutlet Teriyaki, please."
Ron said, "I'll have the Spicy Maguro Donburi, please." The waiter left.
Kim said, "Ron, Tucker, and Jazz, you're not singing." The waiter brought their dinner.
Jason said, "I'm glad I'm not allergic to anything anymore."
The DJ pointed to Jamal and said, "Come up here and sing."
Jamal went up to the stage and sung, " Mother,
Don't let me down,
I've been away, but I'm here right now.
And mother,
Don't let the past hunt you down,
Cause I've been away,
Well I'm here right now.
I've been away, but I'm here right now.
And I will be here.
So this time,
We won't speak a word.
I'll swallow my pride, oh I know, I know you're hurt,
And this time,
We'll run till the sun begs the night,
To give up the trail that you once left behind,
Oh she'll give up the trail that you once left behind.
I will be here,
And I will not fade.
I will not ever fade.
So come out and trust in the mercy of love,
And drive out the ghosts, that you see when I'm gone.
And reach out,
Rise like the sun in the sky,
Light up the dark nights, light the hard times,
On your way now.
Light up the hard times,
All the way,
Till you see me again.
I will be here.
And I will not fade,
I will not ever fade.
Right or wrong,
Life goes on,
So trust in love...
Always trust in love
I will be here.
And I will not fade,
I will not ever fade."
An African American ran up to the stage, "Jamal, I missed you so much."
Jamal smiled and said, "I missed you too, Mom." They walked back to his table. He said, "This is my mother, Tori Kamburi. We're going home."
Lois smiled and said, "Jamal, that's great."
Tori said kindly, "Thank you for finding my son, Lois. You are a real hero."
Lois blushed and said, "It was no problem. You better go."
Tori said, "Okay." They left.
A man with blond hair and brown eyes named Tom Patcher came up to the stage and sung, " I'm down on my knees again tonight
I'm hoping this prayer will turn out right
See there's a boy that needs your help
I've done all that I can do myself
His mother is tired
I'm sure You can understand
Each night as he sleeps
She goes in and holds his hand
And she tries not to cry
As the tears fill her eyes
Chorus:
Can You hear me?
Am I getting through tonight?
Can You see him?
Can You make him feel alright?
If You can hear me
Let me take his place somehow
You see he's not just anyone
He's My Son.
Sometimes late at night
I watch him sleep
I dream of the boy he'd like to be
I try to be strong and see him through
But God who he needs right now is You.
Let him grow old
Live life without this fear
What would I be
Living without him here
He's so tired and he's so scared
Let me know that You're there
Chorus:
Can You hear me?
Can You see him?
He's My Son."
Connor ran up to his father and said, "Dad, I missed you so much. I'm so sorry for running away."
Tom said, "Connor, I was a little too overprotective of you when you were sick. I'm sorry." They walked back Connor's table. He said, "I'm Tom Patcher, Connor's father. Lois Lane, you are hero for finding my son. Thank you so much."
Lois said, "No problem. It's my turn." She went up to the stage and sung, "No one sits with him, he doesn't fit in
But we feel like we do when we make fun of him
Cause you want to belong, do you go along?
Cause his pain is the price paid for you to belong
It's not like you hate him or want him to die
But maybe he goes home and thinks suicide
Or he comes back to school with a gun at his side
And a kindness from you might have saved his life
Heroes are made when you make a choice.
You could be a hero - heroes do what's right
You could be a hero - you might save a life
You could be a hero- you could join the fight
For what's right, for what's right, for what's right.
No one talks to her, she feels so alone
She's in too much pain to survive on her own
The hurt she can't handle overflows to a knife
She writes on her arm and wants to give up her life
Each day she goes on is a day that she's brave
Fighting the lie that giving up is the way
Each moment of courage her on life she saves
When she throws the pills out a hero is made
Heroes are made when you make a choice.
You could be a hero - heroes do what's right
You could be a hero - you might save a life
You could be a hero- you could join the fight
For what's right, for what's right, for what's right.
No one talks to him about how he lives
He thinks that the choices he makes are just his
Doesn't know he's the leader with the way he behaves
And others will follow the choices he's made
He lives on the edge, he's old enough to decide
His brother who wants to be him is just nine
He can do what he wants because it's his right
The choices he makes change a nine-year-old's life.
You could be a hero - heroes do what's right
You could be a hero - you might save a life
You could be a hero- you could join the fight
For what's right, for what's right, for what's right." Everyone clapped loudly.
Danny and Valerie went up. Valerie sung, "In a perfect world
One we've never known
We would never need to face the world alone
They can have the world
We'll create our own
I may not be brave or strong or smart
But somewhere in my secret heart
I know
Love will find a way
Anywhere I go
I'm home
If you are there beside me
Like dark turning into day
Somehow we'll come through
Now that I've found you
Love will find a way."
Danny sung, "I was so afraid
Now I realize
Love is never wrong
And so it never dies
There's a perfect world
Shining in your eyes,"
They both sung, "And if only they could feel it too
The happiness I feel with you
They'd know
Love will find a way
Anywhere we go
We're home
If we are there together
Like dark turning into day
Somehow we'll come through
Now that I've found you
Love will find a way
I know love will find a way." Everyone clapped.
The DJ said, "The winner is Lois Lane-Kent." Lois walked onto the stage and got her trophy.
Danny kissed Valerie and said, "I'll see you tomorrow." Valerie, Sam, Tucker, Kim, Ron, Jake, Rose, Spud, and Trixie went their homes. Danny, Clark, Lois, Jazz, Jason, and Dani went to the Fentons for the night.
Maddie asked, "Who is this young girl?"
Danny said, "This is my clone that Vlad made, Dani. Can she stay here?"
Jack said, "Of course. Dani, you share a room with Jazz." They went to their rooms for the night.
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Angie
Re: Four Heroes and a New Halfa Ghost (DP/AD:JL/KP/SR) TEEN
I have to say like this update as well. I really like the hero poem by Lois - I think it is very inspiring in showing how we can be heroes in ways we don't realize by helping others in need..
I also like the song sung by Jamal!
I was happy that they all went shopping and got some new clothes and shoes and that Jazz told her "Ghost Gal" secret to Danny. Nice update! 