Island Breeze/Gerry's Updates

[Angie]

I've read the update, Gerry and loved it! It was a fantastic update!

[Island Breeze]

Thanks, Angie! :

Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 61 (Olievek)

is posted.

GaBo goes home to his father but can only stay three days or less, and the crew meets a talkative pilot named FelKyon Gryndn.

[Island Breeze]

Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 62 (The Missing Element)

is posted.

Some of GaBo's old school friends are confused by Ee-l'wee. And though Olievans appear to be happy, something is clearly missing in their lives. FelKyon makes good on his promise to certify Brobar.

[Angie]

I just read and replied to this update, Gerry - I enjoyed reading it very much!

[Island Breeze]

Thanks, Angie! I added a small segment at the very end after Brobar says, "Thank you," where GaBo says goodbye to his father, and we see that he has told his father about the Wizard's spell.

[Angie]

I just read it and it was great! I felt for both GaBo and his dad at their parting, but am still hopeful for a happy ending!

[Island Breeze]

Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 63 (Aklat)

is posted.

Ee-l'wee, GaBo, Brobar, Calysha, Mystiel, and Yulee arrive at the coordinates for Aklat, but there's no planet there. Could it mean that Aklat no longer exists and Ee-l'wee can never go home again?

[Angie]

I just read it, Gerry, and as usual loved it!

[Island Breeze]

Thanks, Angie! :

Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 64 (Getting To Know You)

is posted.

Ee-l'wee's mother learns for the first time what really happened to Ee-l'wee, after thinking all this time that Ee-l'wee had run away, because of a lie Ma-ly'sha told. And she is devastated. Ee-l'wee learns that her mom knows some things she never told her about boys.

[Angie]

I just finished reading and replying to it, and was touched by Ee-l'wee's story to her mother and her mom's reactions. I felt for her mom and then for Ee-l'wee having to tell her what she and GaBo must do. That had to be hard on her and I could feel her sadness and her mother's reactions to what the Wizard had done to both planets, robbing them of any memory of their mates, possibly loves. It was a wonderful update!

[Island Breeze]

Thanks again, Angie! Your feedback is always greatly appreciated! :

Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 65 (A Very Dangerous Quest)

is posted.

Ee-l'wee's mother locked in a cage? GaBo and Ee-l'wee hunting the Wizard! The most shocking chapter to date!!!

[Angie]

You're welcome, Gerry! I just read your latest update and now I'm begging that the Wizard proves he's a good guy by helping GaBo and EeWe out! They have to be able to break the spell and save their planets and get married....dang it! LOL! It was an excellent update, Gerry, I just am like I said in my reply, hopeful that it works out... GaBo and Ee-l'wee are like Peanut Butter and Jelly, they need to be together! LOL! I had to borrow that analogy since I think they are a great couple and one just isn't right (imo) without the other! LOL!

[Island Breeze]

Thanks, Angie! :

Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 66 (A Deal With The Devil)

is posted.

The Wizard's proposition is conceivably worse than merely dying, and he has not promised them any continuing immunity from the spell that is killing GaBo and robbing Ee-l'wee of her memory. But it is a proposition that neither of them will refuse even though they are given a choice. They must become, in a sense, a sacrifice to Tozakh, but the reason leads them to accept.

[Angie]

You're welcome Gerry!

I just read it and it was wonderful! I won't go into too much because I don't want to give it away, but I really enjoyed reading about the love that Ee-l'wee felt for GaBo and his love for her - and the part with Mystiel and Yulee and their friends. I liked the aspect you gave of The Wizard and his true reasons for doing what he is about to do. I think it shows he's not so bad and that he really does care about The We and their futures...

[Island Breeze]

Thanks again, Angie! :

Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 67 (The Sacrifice)

is posted.

Resolutions... for better or for worse, I can't say. I don't want to spoil anything. But this is definitely one of the final chapters.

[Island Breeze]

Ee-l'wee and the Silver Sphere

Chapter 68 (The Magic in Castles and Flowers)

is posted.

Ee-l'wee and GaBo meet Mystiel and his parents outside of the spheres, and Zorolonos gives them a grand tour of their castle, including two higher floors that are cloaked in superstition and have not been visited by anyone in over 10,000 years. Ee-l'wee meets her father and finds out something she never ever expected.

[Island Breeze]

I'll probably have the last chapter or two of Ee-l'wee finished before too long. I haven't had time to work on them, but there's a new one that was posted on July 4th, called

The Magic in Castles and Flowers


Ee-l'wee and GaBo meet Mystiel and his parents outside of the spheres, and Zorolonos gives them a grand tour of their castle, including two higher floors that are cloaked in superstition and have not been visited by anyone in over 10,000 years. Ee-l'wee meets her father and finds out something she never ever expected.

[Angie]

I read your update last night and it was awesome! I enjoyed following along as Ee-l'wee and GaBo walked throughout their castle with the Wizard, and I liked how all the We were set free! Like I said it was an awesome update and I look forward to when you're able to come up with the next ones!

[Island Breeze]

My Challenge fic is posted.

Road Trip: Hot On The Trail

What will Michael and Maria do when they discover that their oldest son, Zorel, who is 13, secretly took Liz's sphere in order to visit Earth by himself? And how did Zorel make the sphere work for him, when he doesn't have authorization to use it and the sphere only works for Liz (or Shaqor or Maya) and for those whom they have authorized to use it?

[Angie]

I liked this story a great deal, Gerry! I think the mischief that Zorel put Michael and Maria through in the beginning was funny! I liked how you tied in the latter part of the story with a romantic vacation for Michael and Maria. The entire thing was written well, I think, and I enjoyed reading - especially with your tie ins of the Sphere, the We, and Shaqor!