The Law of Love (Adult) Author's note 10/06/06

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The Law of Love (Adult) Author's note 10/06/06

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The Law of Love
Author: Michelle17
Disclaimer: Not Mine
Rating: Adult
Summary: Challenge 11 of LoveIsForever
Check it out. Here is the link http://www.roswellfanatics.net/viewtopic.php?t=2676
Authors note: This is my first fic and my first time to write adult. So tell me what you think.

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Max Pov


Now that I’m married to my beautiful wife Liz Parker, I am the happiest person in the world, but just thinking about going home to tell my family that we’re married is very scary, but I’m not going to worry about that now. I’m going to spend time with my loving wife.

I have this beautiful night planned. First I’m going to spoil her with a bubble bath, white roses, and from there it’s up to Liz.

Right now I have left Liz at the spa, so she can relax. I want her to relieve some of the stress she's been having lately, because it’s not good for the baby. With Liz and I as lawyers, we work long hours, and lately we haven’t had much time together.


Lately I have been feeling guilty, but it has nothing to do with me being with Liz. When Liz told me she was pregnant with my child, I was out with a friend of Isabel's. Tess was the name of Isabel's friend. But the night I almost lost the baby and Liz I changed.

I changed for the better I think. The thing I’m scared of is Liz finding out I was with Tess from someone else. I want to be the one that tells her, but I have a bad feeling that I’m not going to be the one to do so.

If you're wondering why I said this. It’s just a feeling I have and I can’t escape it. I have tried and just can’t.

Well I know everyone still wants to know how I got to this place where I am now. I will tell you but it won’t be easy. Where should I start? I’ll start off when I first met Liz. I was eight years old and I knew I was in love with her. I didn’t know how I knew that I was in love her, but I did.

I was really shy and I didn’t even talk to her until we got paired up together for our English paper. Mr. Taylor said he wanted us to get to know each other, and to write a paper about what we learned about each other. I was thinking to myself this should be interesting. I don’t know what Liz thought about us working together.

I never really asked her, but it wasn’t because I didn’t want to know. I don’t know why I never asked. Anyway after class was over she left in a different direction then I did, but we said we would meet at the Crashdown later. I went to go find my sister Isabel and my friend Michael before lunch. I found Isabel and Michael at my locker waiting for me.

Michael nodded. “Hey Max”

Isabel spoke up after him, speaking to me. “Hi Max”

I smiled at them. “How were your classes guys? Class was great for me; I get sit with a girl named Liz Parker.”

Isabel watched me. “Math class was good; I met this boy named Alex Whitman. He is really cool Max, plus he told me if I needed help he would help me.”

“Cool Isabel. What about you Michael?” I asked him.

Michael grumbled. “Max nothing really good happened today, but if you consider meeting a girl named Maria that is going to drive me crazy good. Then ok.”

“Wow Michael found someone to challenge you Michael can’t handle it, can you?”

Michael glared “No!”

Isabel spoke up. “Guys can we go to lunch?”

"Yeah," both of them answered.

That’s one of the conversations I remember from elementary school, it sort of just stuck with me.

Then phone suddenly rang.

"Hello Max."

"Maria. "

“What’s up Maria?”

“Where are you right now?”

“Out of town. Why?” I asked Maria.

“ Your Divorce case trial time got moved up.”

I was shocked. “What?!”

“You have to be in court at 9:00 AM. So where ever you are get back to Roswell now!”

“Ok bye.”

“Bye Max.” Maria hung up and I put away the phone.

I feel really guilty now because we won’t get a honeymoon. I also still have to tell everyone we’re married.

TBC

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chapter 2 updated 08/23/05

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Part 2

Max Pov

I have been working on Serena Lyn's divorce case for a couple of months now; she is getting a divorce from Sean Moore. The reason I have to go back to Roswell for the trial is because Serena doesn’t really trust any of the other lawyers expect myself and Liz. Since Maria just called and said we have to be in court tomorrow.


I know Liz is going to say 'why can’t we get someone to cover for us?' Then it’s going to be it’s our honeymoon. But right now I’m going to the spa to tell her that we have to go. I’m at the door and I see that she is getting a massage. I see Ava giving her the massage, and tap her on the shoulder. I quietly ask her to leave, she says 'ok', and then say, "I’ll be out side if you need anything." I don’t say anything for a moment eyeing Liz.

“Liz Baby”

“Max, what’s the matter?”

"Liz promise me you won’t you get mad and put any stress on the baby. "

"I can’t promise you that because I don’t what your going to say yet, but I’ll try."

"Liz we have to go back to Roswell because Serena’s divorce case starts at 9:00 am."

"What? Why can’t you just get someone to cover?"

"You know I can’t. Serena doesn’t trust other lawyers like us."

"What you’re telling me is that you would rather be in court than here in Las Vegas, in this beautiful hotel."

"Liz, that’s not what I’m saying at all. I would love to stay here and spoil you, but we can’t. I promise Liz I’ll make it up to you."

"You promise?"

"Yes I promise. "

"Ok." She paused. "Max?"

"Yeah baby?"

"You are going to tell everyone we’re married when we get back right?"

"I was thinking we could wait to do that after Serena's trial."

"No! Max we are not."

"Why are you so scared? Huh?"

"Max, I’m tried of hiding our relationship, and now that we have a baby on the way. I don’t want to hide anything from everyone."

"If you don’t want to tell your family why are we married at all?"

"Liz don’t be like that. You know why we’re married, I love so much. I don’t want you to take this the wrong way, but I’m just really scared to tell them. Telling them after Serena's case is over will give me time to work up the courage to tell them.

So can we go get packed to go back to Roswell now"

"I guess, but this isn’t over. I’m to tried and you’re stressing me out now, so I’ll let it go."

In Roswell....

Michael walks in office. "Maria?"

"Hi Michael. What can I do for you?"

"I was wondering if you got in touch with Max?"

"Yeah. Why?"

"Serena called and asked what time to meet him at the court house?"

" Oh ok. I don’t know what to tell you to tell her."

"Ok. "

"Oh Michael one of you clients is here too."

"Who?"

"Pam Troy"

"What did she do this time?" He grumbled, annoyed. Pam Troy was in his office more than anyone.

"I don’t know."


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TBC
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Post by lissalou72 »

Wow this is a great start.

I can't wait to see what happens after everyone finds out that Max and Liz are married.

I have a question though way was Max with Tess that one night? Was he on a date with her or something?

I have a bad feeling about that I hope Max will be straight with telling Liz what happen that one night because it will be bad if she found out by someone else.

Keep up the great work.

I hope to see you back here soon with an update,

Smooches

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I can't wait to see what happens after everyone finds out that Max and Liz are married.
That was my feeling, too! :lol Great start! Please come back with more! And welcome to the board!

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Author's note


Hi all


I'm sorry Ihaven't updated in a long time. It haven't worked on the story in a while, but I do plan on finishing the story. I have to make some corrections to the other parts I have written.

I will be back soon
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Re: The Law of Love (Adult) Author's note 10/06/06

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Hi all, I have a new screen name and I will be updating with this one. I do have an update for everyone I know it's been a while tooo.

Part 3A

In Roswell

"Ok thanks" Maria spoke.

"Maria send Pam in my office" Michael said.

"Ok, you can go into his office and wait"

"Thanks Maria"Pam said.

Pam walked in Michael's office and sat down. Pam sat thinking how to ask Michael to help her get custody of her son. She hadn't realized that Michael had come into his office a few seconds earlier

"Hi Pam, What can I do for you today?"

"Michael, I don't know how to ask you this, but can you help me get custody on my son Brian? Please? I know I lost custody because I was an alcoholic, but I started going to rehab I have a stable job now; I work at the mall now. Brian isn't doing any better at his father's place; I mean he isn't going to school. That isn't what I want for my son."

"Pam slow down." Michael sighed eyeing her. "Ok I'll help you get your son back. Here's what I'm going to need from you. I'm going to need proof that you're going to AA, and I'm going to need something from your jobs saying how long you've worked there."

"Ok Michael I can arrange that."

"Good and our next meeting will be sometime next week.? Just check with Maria at the front desk."

"Thanks, Michael." Pam walked out of Michael's office, and goes to the front desk. "Maria?"

"Yes Pam?"

"Michael told come and see what does the best time meet him next week?"

Maria checked the schedule for next week, and saw that Michael's Monday at 12:00 was clear. "Monday at 12 do you want that?"

"I can do it on Monday at 12:00"

"Ok we'll see you on Monday"

Pam left the Lawyer office.

Liz POV

I'm in our hotel room packing my things to go back to Roswell. I'm not really happy about it that much because no honeymoon. is possible. My husband doesn't even want to tell his family about us being married. That hurt more than I ever thought it would. I was broke out of my thought's when Max came in the room, and said the car is waiting for us down stairs.

"Ok" I answered." Max can you take the bags downstairs, and I'll be down in a minute."

"Yeah"

"Thank you, baby"

"Welcome"

While Max took the bags down I started thinking again. 'Why won't he tell his family? Well I'm going to teach him at little lesson. He will be one lonely man until he tells his family.' I thought and walked out the hotel room.

The next day I knew I was in the car going to the airport, but I had other ideas for Max.

Max was busy staring out the window car that when I ran my hand up is chest he jumped."Baby you startled me."

I thought to myself that seducing him in the car was going to be fun. I continued running my hands over his body until I found the spot that were going to drive him crazy.

Max moaned. "Liz?What are you doing Liz? We don't have time for this."

"Yes we do Max besides the driver will tell us when where at the airport. Now shut up Max, and show me how much you love me."

With that Max did as he was told. Max touched Liz's silky skin; softly caressing her breast, then down her leg. Max thought to him self that he was glad that Liz was wearing a skirt today. Max pulled Liz from sitting next to him to on top of him.He sat her on his lap, and with that he set the speed that got them going.

She said, "You like that baby?"

"Y...Yeah", was all he could get out.

I was about to finish my little seduction game, when the driver yelled to them in the back that they are getting to pull up at the airport.

"We will finish later," and I kissed him.

"Finish now?"

"No! Max we have to get ready to get out the car. Remember you said we have to get back to Roswell."

They walked hand and hand to the gate. Once they gave their tickets to the lady to board, and walked on to the plane. I took the seat next to the window, and Max the one beside me. I took one last look at the beautiful Las Vegas before they took off, sighing.

"What's the matter, Liz?" Max asked

"Nothing Max" I answered laying my head on Max's shoulder and soon after that, went to sleep.

TBC


Part 3B

Roswell

A Couple Hours Later

Maria was busy at the front desk.Michael was out at lunch with Isabel going over stuff.

Isabel was telling Michael about Max going out with her friend Tess. " Michael you should seen them Max and Tess make the perfect couple."

"Ok Isabel, but I think you're wrong"

"Whatever Michael let me finish. He took Tess out to this place in town, I don?t remember name the place he took her. Tess said that she had a great time, and wants to go with him again. Isn't that great Michael?"

"No Isabel. I'm glad Tess had good time, but did Max say he wanted to. I mean I know you're brother hardy dates, but Isabel I don't think he's going on another date with Tess ever"


"Tess isn't Max's type either"

"Why would you say that?"

"I know your brother"

"You don't him "

On the Plane

The flight attendant was making the announcement , they were about to land when Max woke up.Max kissed Liz's head again, and she started to stir from her sleep.

"Hmm Max?"

"Baby time to get up we?re landing now"

"No sleep?"

"We can sleep when we get back home"

"Ok"

Then the plane landed, and they went to go get their bags and put them in the car. Max drove them to his place, but Liz slept the whole ride home.Max arrives at the house, the first thing he does is put Liz in bed.After that Max goes back out to the car to get the bags. He also checks his mail and phone also. Michael left one and said to call him. He made a mental note to do it in a couple hours. He back upstairs to sleep with his wife. They slept about four hours, then the phones started ringing and ringing, but neither go up at first. Liz was getting mad, but she got up and answered the phone.

"Hello?"

"Hey Liz its Michael"

"What can I do for you Michael?"

"Is Max around?Can you ask him what time he wants to meet Serena?"

"Yeah sure hold on"

"Max?"Liz said and kissed him, to wake him

"Hmm? What's the matter?"

"Michael is on the phone, and wants to know what you want meet Serena at the court house?"

"Oh ok"

"Let me talk to him."

"Hey Michael"

"Hi Max"

"Can you tell Serena meet me outside the court house at 8:30 AM?"

"Yeah"

"So where you the last couple of days?Why was Liz answering your phone? Huh?"

"Michael can't tell you. I'll answer all your questions after Serena's court case. Michael I'll see you in the office tomorrow.

Max hangs up the phone and calls out Liz. Liz was in the shower so she couldn't hear him. Max starts to walk towards the bathroom, and hears the shower going, so he walks in the bathroom. She doesn't answer him. All she does is turn off the shower and wraps a towel around her.

Then goes into their room and gets dressed for bed. "We have an early morning and all I feel like doing is sleeping."

"Liz why are you mad all sudden?"

"Max I heard what Michael asked you.Why couldn't you just be honest with him? I told you I was tired of being your secret."

"Liz I--"

"You know never mind. I don't want to hear it until you tell your family about us. Goodnight Max."

" 'Night Liz"

Max didn't go to bed after that. He went downstairs, and started looking over his files for tomorrow case. While doing that he couldn't help but think about what Liz had said to him upstairs. He knew it was wrong for him to want keep his relationship with Liz a secret from everyone else, but it was special and private. After thought about what he was going to do he went to bed.

TBC
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