For writers who don’t thrive on rigid systems.

One of the most common pieces of advice about writing first drafts is that you should know exactly where your story is going before you begin. Create an outline. Map every chapter. Plan every character arc. Identify every plot point. Build a scene list. For some writers, that’s fantastic advice.

For others, it’s a fast track to staring at a blinking cursor and wondering why writing suddenly feels like assembling furniture from a 300-page instruction manual. Or worse, one of those instruction booklets that are all pictures and none of those pictures look like any of the pieces you have.

The truth is that not every writer creates in the same way. Some writers need a detailed roadmap before they begin. Others need a vague sense of direction, a cup of tea, and a concerning amount of optimism.

Some writers discover the story as they travel through it. Neither approach is wrong. Neither approach is superior. They’re simply different ways of reaching the same destination.

I’ve come to think of my own process as writing with a compass instead of a map. I know the general direction I’m heading. I know a few landmarks I want to reach. I know the emotional destination I want readers to experience.

The exact route? Not so much. That gets discovered one scene at a time. And that is what makes writing first drafts so much fun for me. I have no clue what’s going to happen other than “And they all lived happily ever after.”

Not Every Writer Needs a Detailed Outline

The writing community often divides authors into two camps: plotters and pantsers. Plotters create detailed outlines before drafting. They know where major events occur, how character arcs unfold, and often how the story ends before they write the first chapter.

Pantsers, a term that comes from “writing by the seat of your pants,” tend to discover the story while drafting. Unfortunately, discussions about these approaches sometimes become oddly competitive. Plotters may view discovery writing as inefficient. Discovery writers may view outlining as restrictive.

The reality is much less dramatic. Different brains solve creative problems differently. Some writers gain confidence from structure. Others gain confidence from exploration.

The mistake happens when we assume the method that works for one writer should work for everyone. If detailed outlines energize you, use them. If they make you want to organize your spice rack instead of writing your novel, it may be time to consider a different approach.

What a Story Compass Looks Like

For many authors, writing first drafts with a compass instead of a map creates more freedom, creativity, and momentum. When I begin a project, I rarely know every detail.

I usually know a few key things:

• Who my main character is
• What central conflict they face
• Several scenes I’m excited to write
• The emotional journey I want readers to experience
• A rough sense of how the story should feel

That’s my compass.

It points me in the right direction without telling me every turn I need to take. Think about a road trip. A map tells you exactly which roads to take, where to stop, and how long every leg of the journey should be. A compass simply points north. You still have to explore. You still have to make choices. You still discover things along the way.

For many intuitive writers, that’s where the magic happens. A side character suddenly becomes important. A conversation reveals something unexpected. A scene unfolds differently than planned and ends up stronger because of it. Those discoveries aren’t mistakes. They’re part of the creative process.

When Too Much Planning Becomes a Problem

Planning isn’t the enemy. Over-planning can be. Some writers spend months outlining every chapter, developing every character, and solving every plot problem before they write a single page. Again, if that works for you, wonderful.

But for intuitive writers, excessive planning can sometimes drain the excitement out of the project. The mystery disappears. The sense of discovery vanishes. The story starts feeling less like an adventure and more like data entry.

I’ve experienced this firsthand. There have been times when I’ve become so focused on figuring everything out beforehand that I lost the enthusiasm that made me want to write the story in the first place.

Instead of wondering what would happen next, I already knew. Instead of exploring, I was executing a plan. For some writers, that’s satisfying. For others, it’s creatively exhausting. A detailed outline can create confidence. It can also create a cage. The challenge is recognizing which effect it has on you.

Learning to Trust the Process

Writing with a compass requires something many writers find uncomfortable: trust.

Trust that you don’t need all the answers today. Trust that not every problem must be solved before Chapter One. Trust that your subconscious is often working on story problems when you don’t even realize it.

Sometimes the best thing you can do is keep writing until you reach the finish line. That’s a lesson I learned firsthand when I finally typed The End on my latest manuscript.

This doesn’t mean writing without direction. It means accepting that uncertainty is part of creativity. Some of the best moments in a first draft happen when a story surprises its own author.

A character says something unexpected. A relationship develops naturally. A plot twist appears that you never planned. These moments often feel less like creating and more like discovering. And while that sounds strange to anyone who has never experienced it, many writers know exactly what I’m talking about. The story begins to reveal itself one piece at a time.

Absolute true story. I was working on my book, I was near the end and things were wrapping up nicely when all of a sudden, a new character walked onto the canvas – well into the school cafeteria if you want to get technical. I wasn’t planning on him, but in he walked and bam! he’s going to be an important part of book 2.

Why Writing First Drafts is Allowed to be Messy

One reason intuitive writers sometimes struggle is that we expect the first draft to behave like a finished book.

It will not.

First drafts wander. They contradict themselves. They introduce characters who suddenly matter more than expected. They create plot holes large enough to park a moderately dramatic dragon in. That does not mean the draft is broken. It means the draft is doing its job.

Author Anne Lamott famously championed the idea of messy first drafts in Bird by Bird, reminding writers that early versions are supposed to be imperfect. The goal of a first draft is not perfection. The goal is discovery. You can revise a messy draft. You cannot revise a story you never let yourself write.

The Benefits of Following a Compass

Writing with a compass offers several advantages.

Flexibility

You’re free to follow interesting ideas when they appear instead of forcing everything to fit a predetermined structure.

Authentic Character Growth

Characters can evolve naturally rather than being pushed through an outline that no longer fits who they’ve become.

Creative Energy

The sense of discovery keeps many intuitive writers engaged and excited about their projects.

Unexpected Connections

Sometimes your subconscious plants seeds long before your conscious mind realizes what they’re for. Those moments can create some of the most satisfying developments in a story.

Joy

Perhaps most importantly, writing remains fun.

And despite all the advice, rules, templates, and systems available today, enjoyment still matters.

A lot.

You Don’t Need Permission, But Here It Is Anyway

If you’re struggling with writing first drafts, consider whether you’ve been forcing yourself to use someone else’s process instead of trusting your own. If detailed outlines help you write, keep using them. There is nothing wrong with maps. But if you’ve spent years feeling guilty because you don’t enjoy rigid planning systems, consider this your reminder that there are many ways to write a novel.

You don’t need to know every chapter before you begin. You don’t need a twenty-page outline. You don’t need color-coded spreadsheets. You don’t need to justify your creative process to anyone.

Some writers follow maps. Others follow compasses. Both can reach incredible destinations. The important thing is finding the method that helps you keep moving forward. Because a messy first draft written your way will always beat the perfect outline that never becomes a story.

Next in the series: How to Trust Your Instincts When You Don’t Know the Ending

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Today, I want to talk about recurring details in fiction, and how even the most insignificant thing can become a powerful part of your story. Some of the most powerful moments in fiction are not the dramatic battles, shocking twists, or grand declarations of love. Sometimes they’re a coffee mug, or a song lyric.  It can be a chipped necklace that put in an appearance in chapter three, and then somehow manages to break your readers’ hearts in chapter twenty-eight.

These recurring details are one of the quiet forms of magic that make stories feel alive. They create connections, build emotional resonance, and reward readers for paying attention. Most importantly, they make a story feel intentional.

Writers often use what some call “emotional talismans,” ordinary objects that become deeply connected to a character’s memories, relationships, or identity. According to Writer’s Digest, these objects can trigger powerful emotional responses in both characters and readers, transforming something simple into something unforgettable.

Small Details Create Big Emotional Payoffs

When readers encounter a detail for the first time, they rarely know it matters. A character always orders the same drink. The dad that always hums that particular song, a bracelet that is mentioned in passing, or the family that always orders pizza on Friday nights. The detail slips into the background of the story, becoming part of the world.

Then something changes. The father is gone, but the song remains.  The bracelet is discovered years later.The favorite coffee mug sits untouched on a shelf. Suddenly the object carries emotional weight because readers have history with it. The item itself is not important, the memories that are attached to it are.

Why Readers Love Callbacks

Recurring details work because they mimic real life. People remember moments through objects, sounds, and routines. A scent can trigger a memory, a song can transport someone back twenty years, a random object can remind us of a person we loved.

When fiction uses recurring details, it taps into the way human memory naturally works. Readers don’t simply remember the object. They remember everything connected to it.

Recurring details also help readers form deeper attachments to characters. The more familiar these small habits, objects, and routines become, the more real the characters feel. If you’ve ever wondered why some fictional characters stay with you long after you finish a book, I explored that topic in my post on why readers fall in love with fictional characters.

The Difference Between a Symbol and a Callback

Not every recurring detail needs to be a symbol loaded with deep meaning. Sometimes it is simply a thread connecting different parts of the story. A character’s favorite saying. A running joke between friends. A lucky coin. A particular  bench in the park. The power comes from repetition. Every time the detail appears, readers add another layer of meaning to it. By the end of the story, something ordinary can become emotionally devastating.

Planting Details Early

One reason recurring details work so well is that they rarely draw attention to themselves at first. The best callbacks often feel effortless. Readers don’t think, “This will be important later.” They simply absorb it as part of the story. Then, when it returns, the payoff feels earned rather than manufactured. The author isn’t creating emotion out of nowhere. They’re building on a foundation that has been quietly growing for hundreds of pages.

The Secret Ingredient: Consistency

Recurring details only work if writers remember them. If a character always wears a particular necklace, readers notice when it disappears. If a phrase appears throughout the story, its final use carries weight because of the history behind it. Consistency transforms a random detail into something meaningful. It tells readers that every part of the story belongs together.

The Quiet Magic

Readers often talk about plot twists and cliffhangers, but some of the most memorable moments in fiction come from smaller things. Everyday things that you would never really notice, like a mug, or a song, a joke between friends, or a phrase repeated one final time.

These details remind us that stories are built from more than major events. They are built from accumulated moments, memories, and connections. And sometimes the smallest detail can deliver the biggest emotional punch.

What recurring detail from a book has stayed with you long after you finished reading?

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There are few moments in a writer’s life quite like typing the end. I’m not quite there yet. I have a chapter and a half to go, but it’s so close, I can taste it.

If you’ve never finished a manuscript before, you might imagine it feels like fireworks, confetti, and a dramatic standing ovation from the universe. The truth is often much quieter. Sometimes it happens at midnight. Sometimes it happens over a cup of tea. Sometimes you stare at the screen for a few seconds and think, “Wait…that’s it?”

And yet, there is something magical about those two simple words. Because they represent far more than the last sentence of a story. They represent every day you chose to keep going.

The Long Road to Typing the End

Every finished manuscript begins the same way: with an idea. Maybe it arrives fully formed. Maybe it’s nothing more than a single scene, a character, or a question that won’t leave you alone. Whatever the starting point, writing a book is a journey that takes far longer than most people realize.

There are exciting days when the words flow effortlessly and the story seems to write itself. There are also days when every sentence feels like pulling a wagon through mud. There are plot holes to fix, scenes to rewrite, characters who refuse to cooperate, and moments when you’re convinced the entire project belongs in the nearest recycling bin.

Yet somehow, one page becomes ten. Ten pages become one hundred. One chapter becomes twenty. And eventually, almost without realizing it, you find yourself staring at the final page.

More Than Pride

When writers talk about finishing a manuscript, they often focus on excitement. Excitement is certainly part of it, but it isn’t the whole story. Typing the end comes with a surprising mix of emotions. There’s pride because you accomplished something difficult. There’s relief because you’ve been carrying this project for so long. There’s disbelief because the goal that once felt impossibly far away is suddenly sitting in front of you. And sometimes there’s even a little sadness.

For months or years, these characters have lived in your head. Their struggles, victories, and adventures have been part of your daily life. Finishing a story can feel a bit like saying goodbye to old friends. That combination of emotions is part of what makes the moment so special.

The End Isn’t Really the End

Here’s a secret every experienced writer learns. Typing the end doesn’t actually mean the work is finished. Not even close. After the final chapter comes editing. Then more editing. Then line edits. Then beta readers. Then revisions based on feedback. Then cover design. Then formatting. Then ARC readers. Then launch plans. Then publication.

In many ways, typing the end marks the beginning of an entirely new phase of the journey. But none of those things can happen until the manuscript exists. You can’t revise a blank page. You can’t send an unfinished story to beta readers. You can’t create a cover for a book that hasn’t been written. You can’t publish a manuscript that never reached its final chapter. Every step that follows depends on one simple achievement: finishing the draft.

The Real Magic

The real magic of typing the end isn’t found in the words themselves. The magic is in who you became while writing them. When you started, you probably didn’t know every twist your story would take. You didn’t know every challenge you would face. You certainly didn’t know how many times you would question yourself along the way.

Yet you kept showing up. You wrote on the good days. You wrote on the frustrating days. You wrote when inspiration arrived and when it stubbornly refused to appear. Little by little, you built something that didn’t exist before. That’s not just a writing lesson. That’s a life lesson.

Whether you’re writing a novel, earning a degree, improving your health, starting a business, or working toward any meaningful goal, success is rarely the result of one grand moment. It’s the result of hundreds of small decisions to continue. Little by little, you built something that didn’t exist before. That’s not just a writing lesson. That’s a life lesson.

Whether you’re writing a novel, earning a degree, improving your health, starting a business, or working toward any meaningful goal, success is rarely the result of one grand moment. It’s the result of hundreds of small decisions to continue.

Writers often talk about consistency being more important than inspiration, a principle echoed by many professional authors and writing instructors, including resources available through The Write Practice. Progress happens when we keep showing up, even when motivation is nowhere to be found.

A Moment Worth Celebrating

In a world that constantly pushes us toward the next task, the next goal, and the next achievement, it’s easy to rush past our victories. Don’t. When you finally type the end, take a moment to celebrate. Take a breath. Smile. Look back at the path you’ve traveled. The editing may still be ahead of you. Publication may still be ahead of you. The next adventure may already be waiting. But none of that changes what you’ve accomplished.

Sometimes the finish line is really the starting line for the next adventure. Before you begin that journey, take a moment to look back at how far you’ve come. You took an idea that existed only in your imagination and turned it into something real. That’s the magic of typing the end.

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Writing emotional scenes is one of the most rewarding parts of storytelling, but it can also be one of the most exhausting. Readers may spend a few minutes experiencing a difficult moment in a story. Writers can spend days, weeks, or even months living inside that same scene.

When people think about painful scenes, they often imagine dramatic moments such as deaths, betrayals, or heartbreaking goodbyes. Those scenes can certainly take an emotional toll. However, some of the hardest scenes I have written were not dramatic at all.

Recently, while working on Consanguinity, I realized that some of the scenes affecting me most were not the supernatural mysteries, the strange powers, or the dangerous moments waiting in the wings. They were the little, everyday struggles that we all face. The ones you can look at and say “oh yeah, I get that. I’ve felt that.”

Sometimes the most painful scenes are the quiet ones.

Painful Does Not Always Mean Tragic

As writers, we often associate emotional scenes with major events. A character loses someone they love. A relationship falls apart. A long-held dream slips away. But emotional pain can be much smaller and much more personal.

Aisling spends much of the story struggling with the fear that she does not quite belong. She is the new kid. She is trying to find her place. She is worried about fitting in, making friends, and figuring out where she belongs in a world that suddenly feels unfamiliar.

Nothing explodes. Nobody dies. There are no dramatic speeches.

Yet those scenes can be surprisingly difficult to write because they touch on emotions many of us have experienced ourselves. I don’t think there is anybody in this world that hasn’t felt this way at one point or another.

Most people know what it feels like to walk into a room and wonder if they belong there. Most people know what it feels like to be afraid of rejection. Most people know what it feels like to feel different.

Those emotions may be quiet, but they are powerful, and that’s what makes them so hard to write. You’re facing something that caused you pain at some point in your life, and writing those scenes can bring all that pain to the forefront.

Why Writing Emotional Scenes Can Be So Draining

Good writing is not just about describing emotions. It is about understanding them well enough to make them feel authentic on the page. That often means spending time inside emotions that are not particularly comfortable.

When writing emotional scenes, many authors draw on memories, experiences, fears, hopes, and insecurities from their own lives. The details may be fictional, but the emotional truth is often very real. That is why a writing session can sometimes leave you feeling mentally exhausted. You have spent an hour, two hours, or even an entire afternoon sitting inside a difficult emotional space. The scene may end when you close your laptop, but the feelings do not always disappear quite so quickly.

Writers looking to strengthen emotional authenticity may find resources such as The Emotion Thesaurus by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi particularly helpful for exploring how emotions manifest through thoughts, body language, and behavior.

The Reader Experiences It Once. The Writer Experiences It Repeatedly.

One of the strange realities of writing is that readers experience a scene once. Writers experience it over and over again. We draft the scene. Then we revise it. Then we edit it. Then we reread it. Then we make one more change because we think we can make it stronger.

By the time a book reaches readers, the author may have lived inside that moment dozens of times. A reader might cry over a scene for ten minutes. A writer may have carried that scene around for weeks.

Why Vulnerability Matters

The scenes that affect readers most are often not the biggest scenes in a story. They are the moments when a character reveals something vulnerable. A fear. An insecurity. A secret. A hope they are afraid to admit out loud.

Those moments are what make characters feel real. They are also often the moments that require the most emotional honesty from the writer.

If you have ever wondered why readers become attached to fictional characters, you might enjoy my post on why readers fall in love with fictional people.

The Emotional Cost Is Worth It

Writing emotional scenes can be uncomfortable. Sometimes it can be exhausting. But it is also where some of the most meaningful storytelling happens. Those quiet moments of fear, loneliness, hope, and vulnerability help transform characters from names on a page into people readers genuinely care about.

The emotional cost of writing a painful scene is real. Yet when readers connect with those moments and see a piece of themselves in a character, it is also one of the most rewarding parts of being a writer. And in the end, those are often the scenes readers remember long after they finish the book.

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AI is here to stay and we need to find a way to teach responsible AI use in education. It’s a hot button topic for a lot of people, and there doesn’t seem to be any middle ground. I saw this first hand. A few weeks ago, I sat in a faculty meeting listening to a discussion about artificial intelligence in education.

The conversation started with something simple: posters. Some teachers were frustrated because posters for the school had been made using AI. Others worried that artificial intelligence was becoming a shortcut that would replace creativity, critical thinking, and genuine learning. It is important to note that these posters were not made by students, they were made by adults. This was not a case of kids using AI to do their work.

As I listened, I realized something important. We are still spending a lot of time debating whether AI belongs in education. Meanwhile, our students have already moved on.

They are using AI at home. They are using it on their phones. They are experimenting with it for homework, hobbies, and creative projects. More importantly, many of the careers they will enter after graduation will expect them to understand how these tools work. Whether we like it or not, artificial intelligence is already part of the world our students live in.

The question is no longer whether students will use AI. The question is whether we will teach them how to use it responsibly.

The Problem Isn’t Artificial Intelligence

As a history teacher, I’ve spent years helping students evaluate sources.

I teach them to ask questions.

• Who created this information?
• Why was it created?
• Can I verify it?
• What evidence supports it?

Those skills matter because not everything we read is accurate. The same principle applies to artificial intelligence.

What concerns me is not that students have access to AI. What concerns me is when students trust information without questioning it. AI can make mistakes. It can present inaccurate information confidently. It can omit important context. It can generate content that sounds convincing but isn’t entirely correct.

I’ve written before about some of the challenges AI can create in the classroom, especially when students rely on tools without understanding their limitations. In my post about Google Slides Beautify problems, I discussed how AI-generated design suggestions can sometimes create unexpected issues. Those experiences reinforce an important lesson: technology is a tool, not a substitute for judgment.

If students are going to use AI, they need the skills to evaluate its output rather than blindly accepting it. That sounds a lot like the information literacy skills educators have been teaching for years.

Teaching Responsible AI Use Instead of Avoidance

Every major technology shift in education has created anxiety. Calculators did. The internet did. Search engines did. Today, artificial intelligence is the latest tool creating concern. Yet students still needed to learn math when calculators arrived. They still needed to learn research skills when Google became available.

Likewise, students still need to learn critical thinking even when AI exists. Responsible AI use in education means understanding that the tool should support learning, not replace it.

Students can use Artificial Intelligence to:

• Brainstorm ideas for writing assignments
• Generate practice questions for studying
• Receive feedback on drafts
• Explore different perspectives on a topic
• Organize information before beginning a project
• Get additional explanations when they are struggling with a concept

What they should not do is use AI as a substitute for learning. The goal isn’t to have artificial intelligence do the thinking for them. The goal is to use technology as a support while they develop their own knowledge and skills.

AI Can Support Differentiation

One of the most promising uses of AI in education is differentiation. Every classroom contains students with different strengths, challenges, reading levels, interests, and learning needs. Teachers work incredibly hard to meet those needs, but there are only so many hours in a day. When used responsibly, AI can help provide additional support.

Students who need extra practice can receive it. Students who need concepts explained in different ways can access alternative explanations. Students who need scaffolds can receive guidance tailored to their learning level.

The teacher remains the expert in the room. The technology simply provides another tool that can help students access learning.

A Tool I Wish More Educators Would Explore

One platform that has impressed me is SchoolAI. Unlike many public AI tools, SchoolAI allows teachers to create customized learning environments called rooms. Teachers can control the instructions. Teachers can control the feedback. Teachers can determine what information students receive and how the AI responds.

Instead of giving students unrestricted access and hoping for the best, educators can create structured experiences designed around specific learning goals. That level of teacher control makes a significant difference. It allows AI to function as an educational support rather than an educational replacement.

The Future Requires AI Literacy

Digital literacy has become an essential life skill. Students need to know how to evaluate websites, identify misinformation, and think critically about what they encounter online. AI literacy is quickly becoming just as important.

Students need to understand:

• How AI generates information
• Why AI can make mistakes
• How to verify claims
• How to use AI ethically
• When human judgment is still necessary

These are not optional skills for the future workforce.nThey are becoming essential skills for modern citizenship.

We Don’t Prepare Students for the Past

Education has never been about preparing students for the world their teachers grew up in. It has always been about preparing students for the world they are entering. Artificial intelligence is part of that world.

We can spend our energy pretending it doesn’t exist, or we can teach students how to use it thoughtfully, ethically, and responsibly. I know which option I believe serves students best. Because the future isn’t AI-free. The future belongs to people who know how to think critically, ask good questions, evaluate information, and use powerful tools wisely.

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What?  I have a boring protagonist? How did that happen? It’s a curse! Has it ever happened to you? Have you ever reached the middle of a manuscript and suddenly realized something uncomfortable?

The worst part is that you probably loved this character when you started writing. They had a compelling backstory, a unique voice, and a clear purpose in the story. Somewhere along the way, though, they began to feel flat. Every scene feels the same. Their reactions become predictable. You find yourself looking forward to writing side characters more than the hero of your own novel.

If this sounds familiar, don’t panic.

A boring protagonist usually isn’t the problem. The real issue is often hiding somewhere else in the story.

Your Character Has Stopped Making Choices

One of the most common reasons a boring protagonist emerges is because they stop driving the story forward.

Instead of making decisions, they’re simply reacting to events. Things happen around them. Other characters create conflict. The plot drags them from scene to scene. Readers connect with characters who make choices, even flawed ones.

Ask yourself:

• What does my protagonist want right now?
• What choice are they making in this scene?
• How does that choice affect what happens next?

If the answer is “they’re just going along with things,” you’ve found a likely culprit.

The Stakes No Longer Feel Personal

A boring protagonist becomes far more interesting when the conflict matters deeply to them. Saving the world is fine.

Saving the world because it threatens the one person they can’t bear to lose is better. The more personal the stakes become, the more invested readers will be in your character’s journey.

Take a look at your current chapter. Can you clearly identify what your protagonist stands to gain or lose? If not, strengthening those stakes may bring your character back to life.

They’ve Become Too Perfect

Many writers accidentally sand off a character’s rough edges. They stop making mistakes. They stop being wrong. They stop struggling. The result is a protagonist who feels less like a person and more like a tour guide leading readers through the story. Flaws create tension. Mistakes create growth. Internal conflict creates depth.

Don’t be afraid to let your protagonist fail occasionally. Writer’s Digest has a helpful discussion of the “characterless character” problem and why characters need more than a surface role to feel alive: Writing Mistakes Writers Make: The Characterless Character.

The Side Characters Have Taken Over

Sometimes the protagonist isn’t boring. The supporting cast is simply more entertaining. We’ve all encountered stories where the witty best friend, mysterious mentor, or lovable rogue steals every scene.

If this is happening in your manuscript, compare your protagonist’s goals, flaws, and personality to those of the supporting cast. The solution isn’t to make the side characters less interesting. It’s to give your protagonist the same level of complexity.

Another solution is to turn your book into a series and give the supporting characters their own book.

If you’ve ever wondered why some fictional characters live rent-free in readers’ minds while others barely leave a mark, I dug into that more deeply in The Psychology of Character Attachment: Why Readers Fall in Love with Fictional Characters. That emotional connection is often exactly what’s missing when a protagonist starts to feel flat.

They Aren’t Changing

Readers don’t necessarily need a protagonist to become a completely different person. They do need to see movement. A character who thinks, feels, and behaves exactly the same on page 300 as they did on page 1 can begin to feel stagnant. Growth doesn’t have to be dramatic. Sometimes the smallest emotional shifts create the strongest impact.

Ask yourself what your protagonist believes at the beginning of the story and what they believe at the end. The answer may reveal what’s missing.

The Story Has Stopped Challenging Them

Sometimes a boring protagonist is really a bored protagonist. They’re not being pushed hard enough.

They’re not being forced to choose between two difficult options. They’re not facing consequences that scare them. They’re not confronting the part of themselves they would rather avoid.

That doesn’t mean every scene needs disaster, trauma, or chaos. But every important scene should apply some kind of pressure. Pressure reveals character. When your protagonist is too comfortable, readers often feel that comfort as boredom.

A Gentle Next Step

If your protagonist feels boring, don’t start by deleting chapters.

Start by asking better questions.

• What does this character want?
• What are they afraid to lose?
• What choice are they avoiding?
• What flaw keeps getting in their way?
• What would force them to grow?

You may discover that the character isn’t broken at all. They may simply need stronger stakes, sharper choices, or a little more pressure from the story around them.

Final Thoughts on a Boring Protagonist

If your protagonist suddenly feels boring, resist the urge to scrap the manuscript or start over. More often than not, the problem isn’t the character. It’s a missing choice, weak stakes, a lack of growth, or a story that has stopped challenging them.

Characters become interesting when they’re forced to make difficult decisions, confront their flaws, and fight for something that matters. Sometimes all it takes is one good challenge to remind both you and your readers why they were worth following in the first place.

If you’re struggling with a boring protagonist right now, take a step back and look beneath the surface. The answer may not be your character at all. It may be the story asking a little more of them.

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How do you fix a stuck story? You know the drill, you’ve opened your manuscript, stared at the blinking cursor for fifteen minutes, and wondered if your story had simply given up on you?

One day everything is flowing. The characters are talking. The scenes are coming together. The plot is moving. And then suddenly you hit a wall. Every scene feels wrong and every possible direction feels equally confusing. Your story starts looking less like a novel and more like a giant tangled ball of yarn that somehow became your responsibility.

If you’ve ever found yourself wondering how to fix a stuck story, you’re not alone. The good news is that most stories do not get stuck because the idea failed. They get stuck because the writer is trying to hold an entire novel in their head at once.

If you’ve been following this cozy plotting series, we’ve already explored Plotting Without Losing Your Mind, The Breadcrumb Method, The Five Anchors Method, and How to Fix a Sagging Middle Act.

Today we’re ending the series with one simple technique that can help restart momentum when your story feels completely stalled.

I call it the Three-Scene Method.

Why Stories Get Stuck

Before we talk about solutions, let’s talk about why stories get stuck in the first place. Most writers assume a stuck story means something is wrong. Sometimes that’s true. Usually it isn’t.

More often, stories get stuck because of:

• too many possibilities
• perfectionism
• middle-act fog
• emotional overwhelm
• uncertainty about the next step
• trying to solve every problem at the same time
• sometimes your just hungry and your brain can’t think (that’s not part of the blog post. That’s me today.)

The bigger the story becomes, the easier it is to feel overwhelmed by everything that still needs to happen. That overwhelm creates paralysis. Paralysis creates silence. And suddenly the story that felt alive last week feels impossible. It’s a pretty vicious circle.

A stuck story is not necessarily a broken story. Sometimes it is simply a story waiting for a smaller problem to solve.

The Three-Scene Method

When a story feels overwhelming, stop trying to fix the entire novel. Instead, focus on three scenes. That’s it. Three. Not thirty. Not every chapter. Not a complete rewrite. Just three scenes. That it completely and totally doable.

Scene One: The Scene You’re Excited About

This is the easiest scene to identify. It is the scene that still makes you smile when you think about it. The scene that still has energy. The scene that refuses to leave you alone. It doesn’t matter where it belongs in the story. Beginning. Middle. Ending. Write it anyway.

Maybe it’s:

• a confrontation
• a first kiss
• a reveal
• a victory
• a reunion
• a dramatic argument
• a quiet moment of healing

The only requirement is that it still has a heartbeat. Excitement creates momentum. Momentum creates progress. Progress creates confidence.

Scene Two: The Scene That Hurts

This is the emotional scene. The uncomfortable one. The scene that makes your stomach tighten a little when you think about writing it.

Maybe it’s:

• a betrayal
• a confession
• a difficult choice
• a devastating loss
• a fractured friendship
• a painful truth finally coming to light

These scenes often sit at the emotional core of the story.

When writers reconnect with the emotional heart of their manuscript, they often rediscover why they wanted to write the story in the first place. This scene is less about plot and more about meaning.

Scene Three: The Bridge Scene

This is the scene many writers skip. Don’t skip it. The bridge scene connects emotional moments and major events. It allows characters to process, react, regroup, and change.

Examples include:

• a conversation
• a planning session
• a walk home
• a quiet reflection
• emotional fallout after a major event
• characters figuring out what comes next

Bridge scenes are where stories breathe. They are often where clarity returns. And sometimes they quietly solve problems you didn’t even realize you had.

Why This Method Works

The Three-Scene Method works to fix a stuck story because it reduces overwhelm.

Instead of asking:

“How do I fix this entire novel?”

You ask:

“Can I write three scenes?”

Most writers can. Three scenes feel manageable. Manageable feels possible. Possible feels motivating. And motivation often returns once movement begins. Momentum returns through movement, not pressure. The goal is not perfection. The goal is re-entry.

Permission to Write Out of Order

Can we talk about something for a minute? A lot of writers secretly believe they are doing it wrong if they write scenes out of order. I would like to lovingly throw that idea into the nearest swamp. Stories do not always arrive chronologically. Some writers see a roadmap. Others see flashes of light. Some writers discover their endings first. Others discover character moments before they understand the plot.

All of those approaches are valid. Some stories arrive as a roadmap. Others arrive as scattered lanterns in the fog. Both are still stories. If Scene Twenty-Seven is alive and Scene Twelve is not, write Scene Twenty-Seven. Trust the process. Trust the breadcrumbs.

I have to be honest here. This does not work for me, personally. I am a pretty linear person. I have to start at point A and get to Z. Which is why my U.S. History classes start with Colonial America and go forward and I break out into hives when other history teachers discuss teaching thematically.

You Only Need the Next Scene

One of the biggest lessons I’ve learned as both a writer and a teacher is that large projects become manageable when we stop trying to finish them all at once. Stories are no different. You do not need to fix the entire novel tonight. You do not need to solve every plot hole. You do not need to know every chapter. You only need the next meaningful step.

Sometimes stories are built one scene at a time. Sometimes they are rebuilt three scenes at a time. And sometimes the best way to fix a stuck story is to stop looking at the entire road and simply follow the next lantern.

Free Writing Resources

If you’ve enjoyed this cozy plotting series, you can explore my growing collection of free writing resources here:

29 Free Writing Resources To be absolutely honest, it’s well past 29 resources yet. I just haven’t updated the title.

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If you’d like to explore additional writing craft resources, the Reedsy Blog offers excellent articles on plotting, structure, and storytelling.

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There is nothing worse than a saggy anything, but a sagging middle act, it’s a problem. The swamp where many good stories go to nap.

Most novels do not completely collapse in the beginning. Beginnings are exciting. They are shiny. They are full of possibility, dramatic entrances, mysterious strangers, emotional wounds, and plot bunnies sprinting through your imagination at dangerous speeds. And endings? Endings have momentum because the finish line is finally visible.

But the middle?

The middle is where writers often find themselves staring at the screen wondering why the story suddenly feels like it is wandering through the woods eating trail mix instead of progressing. They are suffereing from what I call sagging middle act syndrome. But relax, there is a cure.

If you missed the earlier posts in this cozy plotting series, you can start with Plotting Without Losing Your Mind, continue with The Breadcrumb Method for Writing, and explore The Five Anchors Method.

Because honestly? A sagging middle act is usually not a sign that your entire book is doomed. It is usually a sign that something in the story’s momentum has weakened.

Why Middle Acts Sag

A sagging middle act almost always comes back to one of three problems:

• The character stops wanting something specific.
• The stakes stop escalating.
• The midpoint changes nothing.

Now listen. As you get older, sometimes different pieces and parts can start to sag. Good foundation garments can help with that. Stories are no different. There are absolutely ways to lift and support your sagging middle act. The good news? All three problems are fixable.

Problem #1 — The Character Stops Wanting Something Specific

Momentum requires movement toward something. When stories start losing energy in the middle, it is often because the protagonist’s goal becomes vague.

Suddenly the story turns into:

• “they need to figure things out”
• “they need to learn more”
• “they are training”
• “they are preparing”

Those are not goals. Those are waiting rooms. Strong middle acts usually involve concrete movement toward something specific.

Examples:

• win the qualifying match
• stop the ritual before the solstice
• find the missing person
• break into the archive
• protect the secret
• repair the fractured relationship

The clearer the goal becomes, the easier momentum becomes. Because readers instinctively understand forward motion.

Problem #2 — Nothing Gets Worse

This sounds mean, but stories need escalation. If nothing becomes harder, riskier, more emotionally expensive, or more complicated, the story naturally starts flattening out. A sagging middle act often happens because the story stops changing. You need pressure. You need movement. You need consequences.

Some easy ways to escalate the middle:

• add time pressure
• introduce a betrayal
• reveal hidden information
• increase emotional stakes
• remove a source of safety
• force a difficult choice
• complicate relationships
• make success more costly

The middle of the story should feel like tightening tension, not narrative coasting.

Problem #3 — The Midpoint Changes Nothing

This is one of the biggest causes of wandering drafts. The midpoint is not just “something cool happens around the center of the book.”

The midpoint changes the meaning of the story.

Before the midpoint, the protagonist believes the story is about one thing. After the midpoint, they begin realizing the truth is deeper, more personal, or more dangerous than they originally understood.

A strong midpoint often includes:

• a revelation
• a reversal
• a shift in power
• a major emotional realization
• a point of no return
• a truth finally coming into focus

If your midpoint changes nothing emotionally or structurally, the middle of the story often loses momentum because there is no transformation pulling it forward.

The Emotional Truth About Middle Acts

Here is the part writers do not talk about enough:

Middle acts are emotionally hard to write. At the beginning, everything feels exciting and full of possibility. At the ending, the story’s shape finally becomes visible. But the middle is uncertainty territory. The novelty fades. The ending still feels far away. You start doubting scenes that worked perfectly fine yesterday. You become convinced the entire manuscript is terrible and should probably be launched directly into the sun.

That emotional wobble is incredibly common. And honestly? It does not necessarily mean the story is failing. Sometimes it simply means the story has entered its deeper work. The middle of a novel is where characters stop reacting and start becoming. That transformation takes emotional pressure.

Quick Fixes for a Sagging Middle Act

If your middle act currently feels like a wandering fog swamp of uncertainty, here are a few practical fixes:

• sharpen the protagonist’s goal
• raise the emotional stakes
• introduce consequences
• force an impossible choice
• reveal hidden information
• break a relationship
• remove emotional safety
• add time pressure
• rework the midpoint shift
• ask what the character still refuses to face

You usually do not need to rewrite the entire book. You just need to identify where the momentum weakened.

Stories Need Movement, Not Perfection

If your story has a sagging middle act right now, take a breath. You are not alone. You are also not failing.

Middle acts are where stories deepen emotionally, where characters begin transforming, and where the real weight of the narrative starts pressing down on everyone involved. That is difficult work.

But difficult does not mean broken. Sometimes your story does not need a complete overhaul. Sometimes it simply needs a stronger lantern post somewhere in the fog.

Free Writing Resources

If your writing brain enjoys gentle structure, emotional storytelling, and cozy plotting *thingys, you can explore my growing collection of free writing resources here:

29 Free Writing Resources

You can download resources individually whenever inspiration strikes, or join my mailing list to get the complete guide and updates whenever new writing *thingys appear.

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If you want to explore traditional pacing and structure approaches, the Reedsy guide to story structure offers a helpful overview of classic narrative frameworks.

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There are some series that begin with a strong premise and gradually deepen over time. Christine Pope’s Here Be Dragons is one of those books. What started as a paranormal romance has evolved into a layered story about sacrifice, connection, mythology, and the invisible threads that bind worlds together.

If you missed my review of the previous book, you can check out my thoughts on Trial by Fire.

A Bigger, Deeper Silver Hollow Story

In Here Be Dragons, Sidney and Ben are finally building a life together when strange weather patterns begin rolling over Silver Hollow. Oppressive clouds, unnatural lightning, and growing instability all point toward something ancient awakening beneath the earth. Soon, references found in Sidney’s grandmother’s journals reveal the terrifying truth: a dragon is stirring beneath the ley line network connected to the portals.

What follows is easily the biggest and most emotionally charged installment in the series so far.

Dragons, Ley Lines, and Real Consequences

One of the things I loved most about this book was how much larger the mythology became without losing the emotional heart of the story. The ley lines and portals no longer feel like background fantasy elements. They become the lifeblood of an entire magical ecosystem.

As corruption spreads through the network because of a drilling company masquerading as legitimate developers, guardians around the world begin to weaken, portals begin to collapse, and magical creatures risk becoming stranded forever.

The dragon itself was one of the strongest elements of the novel for me because the conflict was never simply good versus evil. The dragon’s desire to destroy Silver Hollow is horrifying, but it also makes terrible sense. The infected area threatens the entire magical network, and the dragon sees destruction as containment.

That moral complexity gave the story real emotional weight.

Faith, Sacrifice, and Love

Christine Pope also does an excellent job balancing large-scale magical stakes with deeply personal moments. Ben and Sidney continue to shine as a couple because their relationship is built on trust, loyalty, and sacrifice rather than drama for drama’s sake.

Several scenes near the climax genuinely had me worried for these characters.

The emotional core of the story ultimately becomes faith, sacrifice, and love. Again and again, characters choose one another over fear. Those choices become the very thing capable of healing the world.

A Bittersweet and Hopeful Ending

I also appreciated that the story allowed consequences to matter. Sidney’s choices come with loss, and the ending feels bittersweet before finally becoming hopeful again. The Winter Solstice scenes at the end were beautifully done and served as a perfect emotional counterpoint to the darkness hanging over the story since Halloween.

And yes, the unicorn appearance at the end absolutely worked for me.

Final Thoughts on Here Be Dragons

If you enjoy paranormal romance mixed with mythology, ancient guardians, dragons, portal magic, emotional stakes, and relationships that actually feel earned, Here Be Dragons absolutely delivers.

Christine Pope continues to expand this world in ways that feel both larger and more intimate at the same time, and I’m already looking forward to seeing where the series goes next.

A Few More Insights

I will be the first to admit that I am a complete and total fan girl when it comes to most of the books written by Pope. That is because it is totally deserved. I haven’t yet read something that this author that I have not liked, and that says a lot. If you are looking for an author who consistently delivers, then look no further that Pope. If you want to start small, start with the Legendary series. It is a 4 book arc and a great way to get your feet wet. But don’t blame me when you are haunting Amazon and your to be read pile is full of books by Christine Pope.

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One of the biggest reasons writers get overwhelmed by outlining is because it feels like we are being asked to know absolutely everything before we are emotionally ready to know anything. The entire plot. Every scene. Every chapter. Every twist. Every emotional beat.

And for a lot of intuitive writers, discovery writers, and “please stop handing me spreadsheets” writers, that kind of pressure immediately turns storytelling into stress.

But what if your story did not need an entire blueprint? What if it only needed a few strong landmarks? That is where the five anchors story structure method comes in.

If you missed the earlier posts in this series, you can start here with Plotting Without Losing Your Mind and continue with The Breadcrumb Method for Writing.

What Are Story Anchors?

Story anchors are major emotional and structural landmarks that hold your story in place while you discover everything in between.

They are not rigid instructions. They are stability points. Think of them like lantern posts along a dark road. You do not need to see the entire journey all at once. You just need enough light to keep moving forward.

The five anchors story structure method focuses on:

• The Opening Situation
• The Inciting Incident
• The Midpoint Shift
• The Dark Moment
• The Ending Vibe

That is it. Not fifty chapters. Not a twelve-tab plotting spreadsheet that makes your soul quietly leave your body. Just five meaningful landmarks.

Anchor #1 — The Opening Situation

This is where we meet the protagonist before the story truly changes them. What is missing in their life? What emotional tension is already simmering beneath the surface? What belief, fear, wound, or desire quietly shapes the way they move through the world? The opening situation is not just “what is happening.” It is “what is emotionally unresolved.”

Examples:

• A lonely character pretending they do not need anyone.
• A student desperate to prove themselves.
• A grieving protagonist stuck in emotional limbo.
• A character who feels safe only because they have never truly been challenged.

This anchor creates the emotional baseline for the entire story.

Anchor #2 — The Inciting Incident

This is the moment that knocks the story off its axis. The disruption. The interruption. The “well, everything is different now” moment. The inciting incident forces movement.

Examples:

• A portal opens.
• A secret is revealed.
• A mentor arrives.
• A betrayal occurs.
• A mysterious letter appears.
• Someone disappears.

The important thing is not scale. The important thing is change. Something shifts, and the protagonist can no longer remain emotionally or physically where they started.

Anchor #3 — The Midpoint Shift

The midpoint is one of the most misunderstood parts of story structure. A lot of struggling drafts wander because the midpoint does not actually change anything. But the midpoint should transform the meaning of the journey.

The midpoint changes the meaning of the story.

This can happen through:

• a revelation
• a reversal
• a major emotional realization
• a shift in power
• a point of no return
• a truth finally coming into focus

Before the midpoint, the character thinks the story is about one thing. After the midpoint, they begin realizing it is about something deeper, harder, or more personal. That shift creates momentum.

Anchor #4 — The Dark Moment

Ah yes. The emotional swamp. The “I cannot do this anymore” moment. The dark moment is where the character confronts failure, fear, grief, guilt, loss, or emotional collapse. It is the moment where the story asks:

Who are you when everything falls apart?

Examples:

• The protagonist loses someone important.
• A relationship fractures.
• A plan completely fails.
• The character realizes the cost of their choices.
• Hope disappears for a while.

The dark moment matters because it creates emotional transformation. The protagonist cannot become someone new without confronting what breaks them first.

Anchor #5 — The Ending Vibe

This is my favorite anchor because it gives writers direction without trapping them inside a rigid ending. You do not necessarily need to know every detail of your final chapter.

Sometimes you only need to know how the ending should feel.

Examples:

• quiet healing
• earned hope
• bittersweet peace
• triumphant freedom
• melancholy acceptance
• found family warmth

That emotional target helps guide the entire story. It becomes a kind of emotional compass. And honestly? Many intuitive writers naturally think in emotional tone long before they think in plot mechanics. That is not wrong.

That is storytelling.

Why the Five Anchors Method Works

The five anchors story structure method works because it creates shape without suffocation.

Instead of demanding complete certainty before you begin writing, it provides enough structure to keep your story emotionally grounded while still allowing room for discovery.

It helps:

• reduce overwhelm
• prevent wandering drafts
• maintain emotional momentum
• preserve spontaneity
• create stronger character arcs
• give discovery writers a flexible framework

In other words:

It creates structure without creative suffocation.

And honestly? A lot of writers need that reminder.

Try the Five Anchors Method Yourself

Open a notebook, document, or suspicious pile of sticky notes currently taking over your desk.

Then write down:

• What is emotionally unresolved in the opening?
• What changes everything?
• What shifts at the midpoint?
• What breaks the protagonist emotionally?
• How should the ending feel?

You do not need every chapter yet. You do not need every scene. You just need enough lantern posts to keep moving forward.

Free Writing Resources

I truly admire anyone and everyone who can outline their story and then follow that outline. My brain does not work that way. But I also need some structure, which is where this series came from. I figured I can’t be the only one. It’s also how my writing resources evolved. I made things for that worked for me, and wanted to share them with other people who may need them. If this gentle, intuitive approach to story structure sounds like your kind of chaos, you can explore my growing collection of free writing resources here:

29 Free Writing Resources

You can download resources individually whenever inspiration strikes, or join my mailing list to get the complete guide along with updates whenever new writing thingys appear. And yes, thingys is now my trademarked term for updates to my writing resources.

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You Do Not Need to See the Entire Road

Stories do not always need fences. Sometimes they just need lantern posts along the road. And sometimes five meaningful anchors are enough to guide an entire novel home. You do not need the entire map. You only need enough light to reach the next landmark.

If you are curious about traditional story structure frameworks, the Reedsy guide to story structure offers a useful overview of some classic approaches to plotting and narrative design.

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